Date: 18 Mar 2022 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
Thank you for acknowledging us. I have lost and continue to lose brothers and sisters to PTSD. We try to help each other the best we can. Thank you.
Author's Response:
I will work on it just for you!
Lol...
Thanks for your help and the reviews!
Date: 18 Mar 2022 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Lmao OMG We ragged on that Marine holding that damn umbrella so hard, and at the same time we were pissed. That was an embarrassment for the Corps. We are not umbrella holders. Eff Obummer. Lol thanks for a great story, but if you want it perfect, correct all that soldier BS woman!!!! Lol
Date: 18 Mar 2022 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 5 Attention!
Omg yes I am going to say this.... Change soldier to Marine in this entire story! Lol yes it is irritating me... We are cultish like that. Hahahaha
Date: 18 Mar 2022 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 2 Water Warrior
Ok being a female Marine, I have to tell you, we are anal about how people write about us. We never call ourselves soldier, we don't salute indoors or with no covers on. We don't say fatigues, they are cammies. Charlie being a Lt. Colonel we call them Colonel. Lt. is the butter bar O1 and the 02. Lol we are crazy I know but it irks us to the point of insanity lol
Date: 06 Mar 2022 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
a great story loved it
Date: 04 Jul 2018 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
I love rereading your story
Date: 21 Jan 2018 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 Shit Hot
Love it...
Date: 14 Jan 2018 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
I loved.great story
Date: 10 Sep 2017 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 Shit Hot
A Lt. Colonel would be referred to as Colonel, NOT Lieutenant. Just as a Major General would be called General, NOT Major. Coming from a military family, it strikes me as incredibly disrespectful. I actually hope that you will correct it, the error is bothersome.
Date: 01 Sep 2017 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
awasome story and awasome writer
Date: 31 Jul 2017 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
please please please post the outtake. this story is too good to let go of
Date: 28 Feb 2017 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
I tried to find my reviews of this story so I could review what I'd hadn't. I couldn't find them the I recalled you've reposted the entire story. I loved and enjoyed reading it the first time and this time around was just as wonderful!!!!
I'm so happy your Edward and Bella worked their way through their issues. I don't think Edward had much of choice since his feelings for Bella rendered him impotent. I was so happy to read she was going to seek Edward out to tell him she was moving to D.C. before he found her in the employ of the British PM. I loved how Edward managed the situation with Riley as he was 100% correct in calling in the Secret Service. Their reunion was amazing and it's so poetic Bella was the first woman he'd ever made love to in his life!!! I loved it!!!! Everything was so beautiful in the end. I'm so happy things worked out, he retired, bought a house married Bella and they had a beautiful little girl who's an adorable Tom Boy!!!1
I'm so happy and grateful you made it back to the world of Fan Fiction and you're healing and sound happy.
If you and LostinPA self publish this story, would you kindly send me a note on Fanfiction under the pen name Green Eyed Lana Lee as I would love to purchase it!!!
I look forward to reading any new or old stories you write, post or publish. I'm deeply grateful for having the opportunity to get to know you through you through your writing and comments. You're amazing!!!!
Date: 01 Oct 2016 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
I absolutely love this story. I can't stop reading it!!!! I really hope you decide to post the outtake
Date: 31 Jul 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
Wonderful, just wonderful, so glad you finished it. One of my favs.
Date: 08 Jul 2016 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
This was a heartwarming chapter.
Date: 29 Jun 2016 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 Shit Hot
Just finished reading it for the 4th time-- it just keeps getting better. Love your writing. I really hope you decide to post the outtake!
Date: 16 Jun 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Thank you!
Date: 28 May 2016 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
Love seeing Edward with his little girl. I love the teaser. Headed to your profile to find the outtake to read. Sounds like a lot of fun. Thank you for finishing this awesome story. Thank you for sharing with us. You are a great writer.
Author's Response:
awww thank you for reading!! I am so glad you enjoyed it....!!! I am hoping to wrap up wrapped around my pinky and finish that as well as start to finish taboo also! i want a the end to all my stories!!
Date: 28 May 2016 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Love love love this chapter!!!!!!!!!!! Perfect!!!! Thank you for finishing this story.
Date: 27 May 2016 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
Love love love this chapter!!!!!!!
Date: 27 May 2016 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 26 Sentry Duty
Wow, Edward just laid it all on the line for Bella. He is being completely honest with her. I hope she does not hurt him with her reaction.
Date: 27 May 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 25 Return to Camp Pendleton 2
I don't remember all of this chapter from the last time I read it. I wonder why Edward just let her go. I know she safe worded RED. But he could have contacted her later. I also don't remember him opening her limo door. I thought they saw each other at the formal event.
Date: 26 May 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton
OMGosh, who in the world is Bella talking to?
Date: 25 May 2016 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 23 Lock & Load
I can just imagine Edward's face when thee dr told him that. Lol
Date: 23 May 2016 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 22 Recruit Training
Glad Anthony liked his time with Bree.
Date: 23 May 2016 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 21 Reassigned
Glad Bree is with Bella already.
Date: 22 May 2016 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 20 Marine Blues
So glad they had a wonderful weekend. I hate the way it has ended.
Date: 22 May 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 19 Chain of Command
Edward is falling for her. Another hot chapter.
Date: 22 May 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 18 About Face
I wonder what Anthony thinks of dom/sub relationshipstories now.
Date: 21 May 2016 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
Can't wait for the outtake!!!!! :)
Date: 21 May 2016 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 17 Lean, Mean, Fighting Machine
Oh damn. That is so hot.
Date: 21 May 2016 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 11 Operation...Chains
I fear Anthony is going to be highly upset when he either finds out or guesses that Bella has chosen his brother over him. I figure he already knows since Edward showed up at her graduation and the same restaurant afterwards. I wonder how her dad will feel when he finds that she has chosen Edward over Anthony?
Date: 18 May 2016 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Perfect ending. Thank you for adding a few extra and appreciated chapters.
Date: 17 May 2016 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
Welcome back! I'm so happy you finished this story. It was worth the wait. Thanks!
Date: 14 May 2016 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 16 Crossing Enemy Lines
This chapter is so hot
Anthony is going to have a fun night.
Date: 14 May 2016 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 15 TARFU
Well, I wonder what Anthony is going to think now.
Date: 13 May 2016 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
I'm so happy to have found this story again!!!! It's and awesome story and I wish you all the best regarding self-publishing it!!!
This story is qa TEN from beginning to end!!!!
See you guys for the Outtake!!!!!!
Love to you and your Beta!!!!!
Date: 13 May 2016 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 14 Oscar Fox Sierra
Loving all these chapters with all these scenes.
Date: 13 May 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 13 Prisoner of Edward's
I am loving their time in the cave.
Date: 13 May 2016 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 7 Uncle Sam's Misguided Children
lol I swear that boy is pure evil...in such a luscious way!
Date: 13 May 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 6 Camouflage
Anthony is one smirky devil!
Date: 13 May 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 5 Attention!
Oh, no! Poor Anthony is going to be dumped by Bella so she can "play" with Edward. Now I wonder who will be awarded the position on the President's Guard, and how that will affect the relationship with her.
Date: 12 May 2016 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 12 FUBAR
Poor Anthony. I do feel sorry for him but he could never satisfy Bella. She needs a Dominant. Edward and Bella are so hot together.
Date: 12 May 2016 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 11 Operation...Chains
I don't know if she is ready but I know I am ready for some playing.
Date: 12 May 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 10 Begin Morning Nautical Twilight
Hot!!!! I had forgotten
Date: 11 May 2016 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9 Inspection
Where is Edward's phone? I have forgotten this part of the story.
Date: 11 May 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 8 Dog and Pony Show
Edward can be a gentleman and do the right thing. I am loving reading this story again. Thanks for reposting and finishing it.
Date: 11 May 2016 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 7 Uncle Sam's Misguided Children
OMGosh, that was so HOT and they did not even have sex.
Date: 11 May 2016 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 2 Water Warrior
She likes Anthony but Edward entices and is more intriging. This is going to be good and angsty! lol
Date: 11 May 2016 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 Shit Hot
Those two boys are going to be a handful for Bella!
Date: 10 May 2016 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 6 Camouflage
Oooo, Edward is so mean there at the end. Lol.
Date: 10 May 2016 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 5 Attention!
Glad Edward was honest with Anthony.
Date: 09 May 2016 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
fantastic story
loved it
well done
Date: 09 May 2016 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 4 Zero-Dark-Thirty
Loved this chapter. I am enjoying reading this story again. Can't wait to get tickets were I had last read and then find out what happened in the end.
Date: 09 May 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
Awesome outtake. I can't wait for the next chapter .
Date: 08 May 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3 Combat Zone
Love how she reacts to both of them.
Date: 07 May 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 2 Water Warrior
I am loving reading this story again.
Date: 07 May 2016 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 1 Shit Hot
OMGosh! I did not realize that you had reposted this story and finished it. So excited to read this again and find out what happens in the end. Thank you.
Date: 03 May 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
I absolutely love this!!! Such a cute way to end it!! :)
Date: 02 May 2016 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
THE END 5-2-16
Date: 02 May 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
Awww. I loved it
Date: 02 May 2016 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
good
Date: 02 May 2016 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
This is so mich more I dared to hope for them to achieve as a family - and I love it;)
Damn, the Cave can't come fast enough for my liking, even though I'm not a big fan of a punishment, even if it was deserved (which I don't really agree with here but I know I can trust you)
The outtake sure sounds like it's going to be just as awesome!
Date: 02 May 2016 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
This is such a cute chapter. Yes thank you to all the military families who have endured the time of their loved ones gone to protect us. I don't think they get told enough we appreciate them also. I know the families go through so much more than some of us know.
Date: 02 May 2016 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
Lol
Date: 02 May 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
Oh I loved it so sweet and so funny but that last picture was so beautiful I can't wait for that outtake heheheheheeh
Date: 02 May 2016 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
This story is excellent, I have loved every chapter.
Date: 02 May 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
I am going to miss these guys.
Date: 01 May 2016 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
I love this story. The epi was mild, but cute! Is there only one outtake? Please let me know when it is completely done and ready to be saved. Thanks, I love that your creativity has returned and if going full out!
Date: 01 May 2016 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
So sad for it to end but can't wait for the out take. Looks delightful.
Date: 01 May 2016 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
:)
Date: 01 May 2016 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
Squee! Fantastic epilogue. I'm looking forward to the outtake.
Date: 01 May 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
Perfect family time. I'd never have imagined this Edward to turn into a family man like that. But it's great. Can't wait for the outtake.
Date: 01 May 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
Cant wait for outtake
Date: 01 May 2016 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
So happy for you... This was such a great story to read so glad you finished it and that your writing again you have a gift for words...
Date: 30 Apr 2016 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
I love them and I am definitely going to miss them!! This is such a great story!! :)
Date: 30 Apr 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
AWWW! That was the perfect ending before the epi for these two! I cannot wait to see what happens in the cave! :D
Date: 30 Apr 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Love it thanks for sharing.
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Love it
Date: 29 Apr 2016 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
So I had to start from the beginning as it's been a while.
That wasn't a dig....
Ah what can I say except I'm soooooooooooo bloody chuffed you're back to writing Treacle.
Thank you. Xx
Date: 29 Apr 2016 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
It's been an amazing journey. Can't wait to see how you tie up Anthony's loose end. Hope to hear more frpm you in the future.
Date: 29 Apr 2016 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Fabulous, just Fabulous
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
Thank you so much for finishing this story. What a great ending and so nice to have you back. So enjoy your writing.
Date: 29 Apr 2016 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Sigh... I want a marine Edward!
Pardon me... A DOMINANT marine Edward!
sniff... Can't believe it's over. Loved it!
Date: 29 Apr 2016 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Thank you so very much for all the new chapters on 3 different stories you have posted over the last few weeks! When I kid you about leaving a cliffie, not here but in another story, it is only because I care so much! I know you are working hard to finish all these stories! I appreciate this so much! It's good to see you creating again. You have had a difficult couple of years and seem to be on the upswing now. Don't feel badly if you have setbacks, emotionally, this is only a normal human reaction. I truly appreciate everything you give us, your faithful readers! I will be overjoyed to buy anything you publish!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Loved, loved, loved it! Your pictures/gifs in this chapter, their first real moments together, where they're going to live - PERFECT! Thank you giving us closure on these two! Anything else you decide to add will be a total bonus!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Awesome story, thank you for finishing it. It was definately worth the wait. I'm glad to hear you're doing better too x
Date: 28 Apr 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
:) loved this story. Looking forward to reading the epilogue and outtake
Date: 28 Apr 2016 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
I'm so happy with this ending! After their "break up" I really didn't see any chance for them to get back together, especially with the way their careers were planned out...
So I can only thank you for proving to me, how much is possible in fiction once again;)
I'm really curious about the Epi and the outtake
Xoxo
Author's Response:
grins....anything can happen in fiction! laughs...and thank you!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
I cried during the entire chapter happy they were getting a happy ending but sad it was over. Thank you so much for finishing this story it was one of my favorites. If you publish it I would happily display a copy on my book shelf. You are so talented Andrea .. Thanks for sharing
Author's Response:
awww you made me cry! thank you so much ! I am glad you enjoyed it and had the patience!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Loved it!! He was so sweet! I'm ready for some more chainward
Author's Response:
me tooooooo!!!! thank you!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Oh I loved it that was perfect every word thank you
and I say yes to publishing this story it too good not to
Author's Response:
awww thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it!! we still got an epi and a outtake !
Date: 28 Apr 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Awww! That was just perfect. So sweet I'm glad, though, we'll get back to the cave as well. I missed that a bit. I'm also very curious what Edward's going to do with his life now that he's retire.
Thanks you so much for this wonderful story. It was worth the wait.
Author's Response:
play with chains all day? laughs.....
Thank you!!! hearts and hugs!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
damn this is great love from brandi neri-z
Date: 19 Apr 2016 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
Oh how I love a man in uniform.....too bad I was a Squid and married one!
Date: 13 Mar 2016 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
I can't stop smiling!!!! I can't expain to you how happy i am that you are able to write again!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2016 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
Update soon
Date: 08 Mar 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
:)
Date: 08 Mar 2016 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
I'm over the moon happy at this moment - thank you for not giving up on these two, because I sure lost hope a time or two throughout this journey...
And the thought that Anthony and Bree found their way is so good, too:)