Date: 10 Sep 2017 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 Shit Hot
A Lt. Colonel would be referred to as Colonel, NOT Lieutenant. Just as a Major General would be called General, NOT Major. Coming from a military family, it strikes me as incredibly disrespectful. I actually hope that you will correct it, the error is bothersome.
Date: 28 Feb 2017 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
I tried to find my reviews of this story so I could review what I'd hadn't. I couldn't find them the I recalled you've reposted the entire story. I loved and enjoyed reading it the first time and this time around was just as wonderful!!!!
I'm so happy your Edward and Bella worked their way through their issues. I don't think Edward had much of choice since his feelings for Bella rendered him impotent. I was so happy to read she was going to seek Edward out to tell him she was moving to D.C. before he found her in the employ of the British PM. I loved how Edward managed the situation with Riley as he was 100% correct in calling in the Secret Service. Their reunion was amazing and it's so poetic Bella was the first woman he'd ever made love to in his life!!! I loved it!!!! Everything was so beautiful in the end. I'm so happy things worked out, he retired, bought a house married Bella and they had a beautiful little girl who's an adorable Tom Boy!!!1
I'm so happy and grateful you made it back to the world of Fan Fiction and you're healing and sound happy.
If you and LostinPA self publish this story, would you kindly send me a note on Fanfiction under the pen name Green Eyed Lana Lee as I would love to purchase it!!!
I look forward to reading any new or old stories you write, post or publish. I'm deeply grateful for having the opportunity to get to know you through you through your writing and comments. You're amazing!!!!
Date: 28 May 2016 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
Love seeing Edward with his little girl. I love the teaser. Headed to your profile to find the outtake to read. Sounds like a lot of fun. Thank you for finishing this awesome story. Thank you for sharing with us. You are a great writer.
awww thank you for reading!! I am so glad you enjoyed it....!!! I am hoping to wrap up wrapped around my pinky and finish that as well as start to finish taboo also! i want a the end to all my stories!!
Date: 27 May 2016 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 25 Return to Camp Pendleton 2
I don't remember all of this chapter from the last time I read it. I wonder why Edward just let her go. I know she safe worded RED. But he could have contacted her later. I also don't remember him opening her limo door. I thought they saw each other at the formal event.
Date: 21 May 2016 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 11 Operation...Chains
I fear Anthony is going to be highly upset when he either finds out or guesses that Bella has chosen his brother over him. I figure he already knows since Edward showed up at her graduation and the same restaurant afterwards. I wonder how her dad will feel when he finds that she has chosen Edward over Anthony?
Date: 13 May 2016 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
I'm so happy to have found this story again!!!! It's and awesome story and I wish you all the best regarding self-publishing it!!!
This story is qa TEN from beginning to end!!!!
See you guys for the Outtake!!!!!!
Love to you and your Beta!!!!!
Date: 13 May 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 5 Attention!
Oh, no! Poor Anthony is going to be dumped by Bella so she can "play" with Edward. Now I wonder who will be awarded the position on the President's Guard, and how that will affect the relationship with her.
Date: 02 May 2016 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
This is so mich more I dared to hope for them to achieve as a family - and I love it;)
Damn, the Cave can't come fast enough for my liking, even though I'm not a big fan of a punishment, even if it was deserved (which I don't really agree with here but I know I can trust you)
The outtake sure sounds like it's going to be just as awesome!
Date: 02 May 2016 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
This is such a cute chapter. Yes thank you to all the military families who have endured the time of their loved ones gone to protect us. I don't think they get told enough we appreciate them also. I know the families go through so much more than some of us know.
Date: 01 May 2016 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
I love this story. The epi was mild, but cute! Is there only one outtake? Please let me know when it is completely done and ready to be saved. Thanks, I love that your creativity has returned and if going full out!
Date: 29 Apr 2016 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Thank you so very much for all the new chapters on 3 different stories you have posted over the last few weeks! When I kid you about leaving a cliffie, not here but in another story, it is only because I care so much! I know you are working hard to finish all these stories! I appreciate this so much! It's good to see you creating again. You have had a difficult couple of years and seem to be on the upswing now. Don't feel badly if you have setbacks, emotionally, this is only a normal human reaction. I truly appreciate everything you give us, your faithful readers! I will be overjoyed to buy anything you publish!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Loved, loved, loved it! Your pictures/gifs in this chapter, their first real moments together, where they're going to live - PERFECT! Thank you giving us closure on these two! Anything else you decide to add will be a total bonus!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
I'm so happy with this ending! After their "break up" I really didn't see any chance for them to get back together, especially with the way their careers were planned out...
So I can only thank you for proving to me, how much is possible in fiction once again;)
I'm really curious about the Epi and the outtake
grins....anything can happen in fiction! laughs...and thank you!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
I cried during the entire chapter happy they were getting a happy ending but sad it was over. Thank you so much for finishing this story it was one of my favorites. If you publish it I would happily display a copy on my book shelf. You are so talented Andrea .. Thanks for sharing
awww you made me cry! thank you so much ! I am glad you enjoyed it and had the patience!
Date: 28 Apr 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Oh I loved it that was perfect every word thank you
and I say yes to publishing this story it too good not to
awww thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it!! we still got an epi and a outtake !
Date: 28 Apr 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 28 Dog Tags
Awww! That was just perfect. So sweet I'm glad, though, we'll get back to the cave as well. I missed that a bit. I'm also very curious what Edward's going to do with his life now that he's retire.
Thanks you so much for this wonderful story. It was worth the wait.
play with chains all day? laughs.....
Thank you!!! hearts and hugs!
Date: 08 Mar 2016 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
I'm over the moon happy at this moment - thank you for not giving up on these two, because I sure lost hope a time or two throughout this journey...
And the thought that Anthony and Bree found their way is so good, too:)
Date: 08 Mar 2016 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
I have to admit I wouldn't have minded Edward leaving the military. I couldn't handle all the separations and fear of my beloved one never coming back. I also understand that it's part of Edward's life and am glad Bella decided she could handle it. Her moving close is a great turn of events.
I'm happy for Anthony and Bree as well, and think it's great he finally connected with his own sexuality.
I'm so thrilled you're going to wrap this story soon, although that means I'll have less updated to look forward to and I'll really miss these four :(.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 27 Call to Arms...
oorah! I love this story! In this chapter, we get to see both brothers' POV plus Bella's. We get to see Anthony submit, finally! I love that these two brothers are two sides of the same coin! I may love this story almost as much as Shhhhh...and that is really saying something! I have really missed your particular brand of storytelling and am ecstatic to have you back!!
Oh and one final parting thought....every time I write a review/comment and press that button at the bottom of the page, I am reminded of your stories. That button says "submit".