Date: 26 Mar 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
Cool! I really like your story so far, I wonder a bit about the swearing of E but ok ok... sometimes I get the impression that in every story I read E swears, but I just can´t get it: why the hell???? :-) I would find it nicer and more interesting if there would be more difference in language, thoughts and behaviour between B and E. But as you already noticed: I am not a native speaker, so maybe my opinion in this case is not really extremly relevant.
Liked the ending!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
really nice so far, sorry can´t write more at this point, I can not stop reading ;-)
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
I was very, very, very happy with the ending! I'm a sucker for Pregella in any form. Edward was so sweet, They deserve their happiness. I loved the Jasper getting nervous part. Can you imagine tiny little Alice's waking you up at 4am to play? Yikes! Anyway, I'm sad to see it end, but glad that it was an HEA. Oh and I know not to come between a pregnant woman and her food. It's very dangerous for anyone. Glad Edward learned his lesson. Amazing writing, great characters, and an interesting storyline. Was it any wonder that this fic was a success. With a lot of blubbering, I'm done.
Author's Response:
Thanks bb! Im gald you liked, coming from someone of your talents that means the world.
I miss you ridiculously and hope your okay- will PM or mail you soon.
Chelle xx0x0x0
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 25
Awesome job bb! I am so happy that Edward was honest with B. Now they can move on. I'm also glad Demetri got what he deserved. Your Bella and Edward were very sweet. Even thought they had lots of problems and were separated, their love never died. That's why I love SOS. I have tears so I need to stop now. Teddy is making fun of me for crying over all these fanfics, but I hate when my faves end. Thankfully, you have RD up for me to enjoy. You're a great writer and an even better friend.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 24
I've been dreading the ending because I love it so much. It's like that last piece of Toblerone that you just have to savor, but you keep putting it off to prolong your pleasure. Great job, chelle! I really fell in love with the characters and rooted for them. This is one of my favorite B&E's ever.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
Wow that was a roller coaster and a half. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you glad you liked it :)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
Loved this story thank you for sharing it!
Author's Response:
Your very welcome, glad you enjoyed it.:)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
this story is good and I'm enjoying it. One thing though-You had Edward call Charlie Chief Swan--I thought he was an atty in this fic...??? anyhow-great job so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks for pointing that out, I hadnt even realized I did that, force of habit lol- I will go back and fix it.
:)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
Rose is lucky it wasn't me she wrongly spoke against - there would have been more than cuss words being thrown around
Author's Response:
LOL- the girl was a bitch for sure.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 20
and the crap keeps getting flung - nice job
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
Damn, just when you think that everything is goona get better
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
Nice - feeling nervous about the blow up - will these two get any time to enjoy each other??
Author's Response:
In a few chapters, there are a few issues to work out first :)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
Nice - still digging the story
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 15
Feel sorry for the Swan
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
I like that the story is always moving. I don't get bored half way through
Author's Response:
Thank you, thats really kind :)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
I like being kept on my toes
Date: 14 Mar 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
Juicy story
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
That hit the spot
Author's Response:
lol- glad you liked it :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm glad B's out of rehab and that the lemons are back. Awesome chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 22
Awww, great job on the lemon. I'm glad B is back. Can you bottle Teacherward and sell him? If you can, I will totes buy. I'm not sure whether to love or hate Carlisle, LOL.
Author's Response:
Carlisle's a dick lol- Iff I coculdd bottle him Id make a freaking fortune. Maybe we can work some kind fo arrangement or time share for mobward and teacherward lol
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
Edward is so great in this fic. I wish I could wrte one that had so few flaws. I love that he's there for Bella and taking care of her. I also love all of her friends. People that are drug/alcohol abusers need their friends and family to stick by them or they won't get through it. You did an amazing job writing this. I felt like I was in the room with everyone.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much sweetie- coming from you that means a lot xx
Date: 13 Mar 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
Great story I couldn't stop reading it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much- glad you enjoyed it :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
Crying again.
♥
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
Jenkies!
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
I just screamed 'motherfucker' (it's 3am) and scared Hamlet away. Now I have to coax him out of the closet. This chapter was that good. OMG! I want Bella back.
Author's Response:
Poor Hamlet!! lol
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
I feel so bad for B. That must be a very crappy life. I never got the fascination with coke. The only time I tried it I got fucked up and dog sick so I've stayed away every since. I know that it and other drugs can be used to dull the pain of life, and I get it. Demetri is a bastard, but honestly, I feared worse. I'm sad for Alice, Em, and Charlie because they loved B so much. I'm on my second shot of Stoli after this.
Author's Response:
Oh lord what am i doing to ya! lol.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Sneaking 0ut my Stoli. This shit is giving me gray hair.
Author's Response:
Im so gld your liking it but go to bed already!! lol :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 13
Mean cliffy. Ima bee up all night.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
I squeezed Teddy so hard that he woke up. This chapter really got to me. I knew men like Demitri during my hs years. They are NOT to be fucked with. Poor Edward. The worst fight I've ever been in was when someone punched me in the stomach and it hurt like a bitch. I can imagine having the crap beaten out of you. He was so brave to go there for B though. Love the story.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow! Not Edward. I'm scared.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm back BB! Just added you to my Profile page too. I hope it helps more people find your amazing ficts. It's like 2 am and I'm totes crying while reading this. I'm so emotional lately but bf says it's good to let it out instead of keeping the pain inside. I hope you and MD are well. I really miss you. I will continue to read this and also RD. I'm sure I'll need to invest in Kleenex, but I'll have J's LS to balance these fics out. Amazing writing.
Author's Response:
B!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh dear god I have missed you soooooooooooooooo much. Thanks for adding me to your profile page-so sweet. MD is great- I will email you later, dont want to personal shit on here obviously lol. Saw the blip last night to-gave ya props!!
Im so glad your back *major hugs*
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
This was a great story. You did a wonderful job writing it. Thanks for the entertainment. Kat ^_^
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your wonderful reviews and I am thrilled to bits that you liked my story.
Chelle x
Date: 13 Mar 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
Beautiful. kat
Date: 13 Mar 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 20
Whats the deal with Rose? I guess I'll get my answer in the next chapter. Kat
Date: 13 Mar 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
Ooops. Daddy arrived too soon. lol Kat
Date: 13 Mar 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 17
Nice way to work things out. Kat
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
What a mess. I'm sure you'll figure a way out for everyone. Great chapter. Kat
Date: 13 Mar 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow. It's getting intense. I love it. kat
Date: 13 Mar 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am really enjoying your story. You are doing a great job writing it. Kat
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is being sensible - or as sensible as he can be seeing that he is involved with a student. Bella needs to grow up. I am a little worried about so many people knowing. I can just see one of them getting pissed off and ratting her out. Great chapter. Kat
Date: 12 Mar 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow. She was found out. I didn't expect that. Kat
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! THAT CAN'T BE IT:'( i loved this story and im sad that its finished now but i still love it<3
Author's Response:
Thanks sweetie- I will be posting a series of outtakes soon
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats sweet but poor angela ):
Author's Response:
I know :(
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 24
omgomgomg ur a bitch lol for leaving it like that k.o. i <3 you really :)
Author's Response:
yes, yes I am.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
wow. yay charlie approves lol carlisle better stop acting like a pussy lol
Author's Response:
Charlie is okay, Carlisle is a damned fool. lol
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
“Don’t tease me Edward, I need to feel you…from the inside” She breathed, reminding me of that Nine inch nails song.
that was fucking scary because i was listening to that song when i read that part. scary or what? O.o LMAO
Author's Response:
OMG weird lol
Date: 11 Mar 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
wow.
“Edward! What did you do?” I cried.
“I decided I blame the wall” He said dryly, giving me a weak smile.
lmao i couldnt stop laughing after i read that. <3 this story :)
Author's Response:
LOl everyone loves that.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
WTF ROSALIE IS A FUCKING COW! bitch ¬¬ lol did i mention that i love this fucking story?
Author's Response:
Once or twice yes lol- She is a raging bitch yes.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
awwwwwwwwww poor bella loving this btw
Author's Response:
I know and thanks :)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
dude that was not fucking fair!! but it was soo fucking funny the way u left the cliffie YAAAAAAAAAAAAY THEY'RE BACK TOGETHER!!
Author's Response:
I do like a cliffie :)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay she's been rescued! lol haha in ur face demetri lmao
Author's Response:
Cal
m down woman the angst isnt done with lol
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
As much as I may want to fucking cut your dick off and throw it in the garbage LMFAO i laughed so hard when i read that loving this btw
Author's Response:
I love how I have forgotten what I write lmao
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 15
awww poor edward and bella:'( loving this story so much btw
Author's Response:
Thanks darlin (spoken Jasper style)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh no poor edward :( demetri is a fucking wanker lol loving this story btw :)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
omg omg omg i cant believe it!!! fuck awesome btw
Author's Response:
Just where in the hell have you been? lol
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
Author's Response:
I cant see this image.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
Why is it that bad things, can end up being the best things you ever do? I think this is the case for Bella and her premeditated seduction of Edward. It has been a great journey, and thankyou for sharing it with us. I can't believe we are already at the last chapter! And i am so happy you were able to squeeze in one more lemon!
Thankyou again. Goodluck with your future writing endeavours. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Author's Response:
Wow- thank you so much. Im really pleased you liked it :)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 25
I think Bella handled that conversation with dignity and maturity beyond her years. I was very impressed with the way she was able to express how she was feeling about Edward's past, without becoming irrational and unstable.
I look forward to seeing where you take this story now that all the dirty laundry has been aired.
Author's Response:
Thank you- its the epi next and that should wrap it all up nicely. :)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
All good news for Bella, Edward and her family. Hopefully that will be the last we see of Demetri Aro.
And do we finally get to hear about Edward's past? Wonder how that will go down with Bella...until the next installment...
Author's Response:
Its already posted, the story is now completed. Thanks for your review.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
What a nice hea. I liked your use of the characters too.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your great reviews and reading my little story here. I really appreciate it. :)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 25
Not as bad as I expected. I was thinking he'd be more involved- doing w her when she od'd, not calling for help... He didn't go to rehab and he got clean. Now, when the eff is he going to propose.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 24
Can't believe he was found guilty on everything. Hopefully he'll get shanked in prison.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
That was the perfect ending to this fantastic story! I am so glad I read it and am now able to say that it is a truly wonderful story! Kudos to you my lady!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much and thank you for all your wonderful reviews. thrilled you liked it!! xx
Date: 10 Mar 2010 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 25
OMG!!! Not Angela!!! That is so horrible but I love that Bella still accepted him!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 24
OOOO! Guilty! Guilty! Guilty!!! Had to get a bit of A Time to Kill in there! I am so glad the bastard is getting what is owed to him!
Author's Response:
That chapter was a bitch to write
Date: 10 Mar 2010 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 23
Awwwww! I loved it! And the sex was just HOT!!!
Author's Response:
It was hot...........I blushed while writing it.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
OOO, sweet and perfect!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 21
The breakdown was needed but now they can grow!! I will finish this tonight!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
OOOOO, Bella is laying down the law to daddy and Emmett but Rosalie! God can I just kill her now?
Date: 10 Mar 2010 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
I almost cried! I know the feelings she had about everything and it was just rough but necessary for the story.
Author's Response:
It was necessary your right
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Is all I can say!!
Author's Response:
Okay then lol
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
OOOOOO! Daddy and Baby working together! Kisses and kudos to you woman! I retract the demon dogs I had sent out to you! lol!
Author's Response:
For now- dont expect it last lol
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 15
OMG!!! You are evil woman! But she got to call Edward and tell him she loved him! He will trace the number and will start searching in Chicago, I am sure of it!!!
Author's Response:
I am evil............I love it!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
"Well spank my ass and call me Judy." Even with the seriousness of this chapter, I laughed out loud at this line. Off to another chapter!
Author's Response:
I like to still keep a bit of humour in there.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
OMG!!! To say I am seriously hooked right now would be an understatement. I have been reading this while at work and I get off in an hour which means I will promptly head straight home, turn on my handy dandy laptop, and continue reading until my eyes cross from sleep deprivation or I finish the story. I hope the latter of the two! AWESOME STORY!
Author's Response:
Woman- did you sleep at all last night ?
Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
OOOOO, Woman! Pain! Pain! PAIN!!! I wish Jane's powers worked through a review lol, jk. You hurt my Edward! I have to read more and see what is going to happen!! Evil addicting story!
Author's Response:
I did...................I'm sorry :(
Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
Woman! You better not have done anything to my Edward or I will hunt you down and make you rewrite the story! lol! All kidding aside, I am loving this new twist and that you made Ben Cheney the freaking dealer!!! That is just fucking awesome!
Author's Response:
*Whistles* I wouldnt do that...................................................................
Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
AWWW! They're kind of official now! I want to be official! lol
Author's Response:
We all want to be official with Edward Cullen.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love Emmett! He is such a big brother! Can I have him as my step brother so it is still legal to fool around with him lol! JK!!! Well, maybe not...
Author's Response:
MMMMMMM Emmett/Kellan-yes please lol
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
*Sneaks over to Chelle's house and steals the chapter to this story to figure out some way to insert myself into it like in the Take On Me video*
THIS WAS HOT! I loved the fight and the make up sex was just hot as hell! I am glad I decided to sit on a roll of paper towels before reading!
Author's Response:
it was hot -there is no sex like make up sex.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
So glad she's getting better and E pretty much told his dad to go to hell. And good for them for getting back some form of normalcy.
Author's Response:
Exactly- It will only get better now!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
I can understand if those are some of the rumors going around school but I can't believe R would have the audacity to think she went willingly let alone say those things out loud.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
If B's dad cut her off I'm sure E would be happy to step right in. And ok, I get that he's her teacher, but would everyone be losing there shit if he was a 5th grade teacher and they met at the diner?
Also, about B's father telling her it was rape- hmm, not sure how I feel about it. I guess its best in the end for B to deal w it. But in all honesty, she did what she needed to to protect her psyche. And forcing her to see that's what it was may not have been the best approach.
Author's Response:
I had originally planned for the rape thing to be even harsher but decided against it. I thought this was a good way to show just how unaware Bella is.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
Poor B. Stokholm syndrome. E's gotta know that D was feeding her blow this whole time. She should have been a touch more discreet but I think it was one of those unconscious needs to get caught to get helped.
Author's Response:
I love it when people review and really get what I was trying to say. Thank you
Date: 09 Mar 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
nice story:)
Author's Response:
Thank you glad you liked it.