Date: 09 Mar 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yikes. Well she might be in hs but she is 18 and if he's willing to leave his job then they aren't really doing anything wrong.
Author's Response:
I couldnt have said it better myself.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ack! She has to call him asap and tell him to stay put that she's coming home.
Author's Response:
mmm she wont though lol
Date: 09 Mar 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh for fucks sake! Why didn't E tell them about his coversation w Ben?! They're already in pretty fucking deep! At least then the police (though some of them are probably in D's pockets) might take it more seriously then her leaving w him willingly.
Author's Response:
Its a hot mess for sure...........poor bella.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
Crap! Poor B!
Author's Response:
I know :) That rotten scoundrel! :)
Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh Em needs to get the eff over it. B is 18! Ok, not that I'd be all cool w it if she were my friend or sis but seriously, E's only what 22? Nbd at this point.
Author's Response:
I agree, unfortuantely for Bella she is cursed with an overbearing brother
Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ha! I knew James would show his ugly face! But I like the twist w D. Very unexpected.
Author's Response:
Ha ha! Everyone says that- I like to mix it up lol
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
Crap! What was he thinking getting involved?! How could she ok that?
Author's Response:
Love makes us do the wacky lol- I like to think of this bit as Bella's last act of selfishness.
Thanks for your great reviews :)
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh yeah, R mentioned his name. I was just waiting for James to show up.
Author's Response:
James will not be the main 'bad guy' as it were.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
The thing is- what is she really giving up by not doing blow? But I can totally see that she just doesn't like the idea of an ultimatum. I wouldn't either.
Author's Response:
Nobody likes an ultiamtum.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
Gah! Two times and she's wanting a label? I hate that awkwardness! And I'm not a proponent of blatent drug use especially when she's only in hs but yeah, there's nothing that pushes an independent (albeit stupid) person in exactly the opposite direction when u tell them what to do.
Author's Response:
I could not agree more- with all of it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ooh Mr. Cullen, not so innocent yourself. He did just get out of college, duh. And so glad he told B he felt it too.
Author's Response:
I know right?
Glad you liked the chap- thanks for reviewing
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Its hard stuff to resist- especially when u start breaking your own little rules.
Author's Response:
Oh so true lol Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
Wonderful story. This had so many elements of real life struggles, romance, drama, suspense. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
Edward say what? Is he on the shit too? OMG!!! I want to read another chapter but it is 5:30am here and I need my beauty sleep if I am to appeal to Edward in my dreams!
Author's Response:
You wont find out how Edward know until chapter 25 *runs*
Date: 09 Mar 2010 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is fucked!
Author's Response:
He is, was and will be again.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh holy hell in a handbasket! That was fuckhot!
Author's Response:
Heres a towel and damp cloth for your forehead ;)
Date: 09 Mar 2010 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh I definitely enjoyed this. Can Mr. Cullen just bend me over the lab table? Please?
Author's Response:
get in line!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Good giggly wiggly! Bella is too hot! And I can't wait to see Edward's reaction!!!
Author's Response:
Everyone like his singular line at the end. Holy fuck. And Im hard! LOL
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
OOOO WEE!!!!! This is getting good! I am so gald that I finally decided to read this and you aren't disappointing!!! Well done lady!
Author's Response:
Why thank you!
Author's Response:
Why thank you!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love how this starts! I can't wait to see what is going to happen and I love the protectiveness of Emmett, the bitchiness of Bella (which is a breath of fresh air), and just everyone else! I also love that you changed Charlie's profession too!
Author's Response:
Wow- so glad your reading it!! Its not all lemons and sunshine- there will be drama!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
good story. thank you for sharing it with us!
Author's Response:
Your welcome-thank you for all your lovely reviews and for reading!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 25
well looks like it is HEA time. glad that they worked it out but it really was shitty of edward to not let bella know that he could relate.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
time for the big secret....
dun, dun, dun....
Date: 09 Mar 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
yay almost at the happy ending!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
yay on the way back to normal
Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
well now that sure was the dam breaking! here's to hopeing that thingsare looking up for everyone
Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 20
nice to see that daddy dearest is putting b's needs above his need to kill e. wonder what the hell rose's problem is
Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
wonder if edward set her up there at the end with the shower thing? trying to catch her in the act.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
ooo.... daddy is gonna beat his ass! and she is so gonna be grounded! lol
Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 17
yay!! wonder how the welcome home will go?
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
yay they are comming to save her!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
no way edward is gonna leave it like that
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
well i guess the shit has truely hit the fan
Author's Response:
It really has.
Thanks for all your wonderful reviews so far x
Date: 08 Mar 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
shit is gonna hit the fan now! and poor edward is not even awake to see it comming!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh demitri! have not seen him as the main baddie before, i like it!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
oh my goodness! off to chapter 12 to hopefully see edward's pov and find out what the fuck happened.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
wonder if ben is an old friend or edward's old dealer? looks like thing are going to start getting interesting. why can the others not just give ben the cash to settle rose's debt? i mean they all have lots of it.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
glad to see that bella called rose out on being a bitch and letting bella take the fall.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
oooo.. what did edward do? and how are they going to hide this thing form em, rose, jas, and alice?
Date: 08 Mar 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
oooohhhh.... how did he find out??
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
it always gets tough when dealing with the forbidden fruit. and trying to play it off just makes it worse.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
well now thet are in it deep...
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh no poor edward i hope he's ok :'(
Author's Response:
mmmmmmm so do I lol
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh no what happened :( right that it im off to the next chapter
Author's Response:
I dont know. What happened ? LMAO
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
awww that was sweet but then the way you twisted around i wanna kick the shit outta Chemmey now lmao
Author's Response:
The drama is coming bb!! lol
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is actin like such a duche its so funny lol. im so glad this is the first story im reading on this. Did i mention that this story is fuck awesome? if not the this st6ory is FUCK AWEOSME :D
Author's Response:
Why thank you *takes a bow*
I aim to please.
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
that was mean leabing it like that. ¬¬ *quickly click so that i can read next chapter*
Author's Response:
It was wasn't it? At least you didnt have to wait for the update. lol
Date: 07 Mar 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
omg lmfao haha he knew! he fuckingknew! lol well i guess thats what you should expect when theres a young teacher lol
Author's Response:
There will be a reason he knows. Stay tuned to find out lol
Date: 07 Mar 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
edward such a douche now if i was bela i woulda kicked his ass lol
Author's Response:
You'll forgive him in a minute-trust me lol
x
Date: 07 Mar 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
dude that was a fucking amazing lemon. goon on ya
Author's Response:
Thank you my dear-glad you enjoyed it and thanks for all the other reviews
x
Date: 07 Mar 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
lol Edward sucks at trying to not think about Bella this is aweshum im off to read the next chapter
Date: 07 Mar 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
LMFAO i loved the way you ended it with edward p.o.v. and only one line line it was fucking hilarious
Date: 07 Mar 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
nice lol i cant stop laughing because of the way Edward refferef Bella as jailbait *clicks to read next chapter*
Date: 07 Mar 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
boys are so easy to mess with to get what you want
Author's Response:
They sure are lol
Thanks for reviewing
Date: 07 Mar 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
bitch! lol i hate how you left the end of the chapter anyways im away to read the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Ha! get used to the cliffies in this one!!
Anyway quit your moaning the bloody thing's completed LMAO
*mwah*
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
aww. they are having a baby. It was awesome. I loved it :D
Im gonna read revolving door next
xo
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it yay!!
Thanks for all your amazing reviews.
Enjoy rev D
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
another awesome chapter :D
xo
Author's Response:
Thanks just the epi now !! x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 24
That was awesome.
Onto the next chapter now :D
x
Author's Response:
That was the longest chapter I have ever written 6700 words *wipes brow*
Glad you liked it x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 23
Another awesome chapter.
It's nearly done now :(
xo
Author's Response:
Yeah, but you'll like how it ends.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
Another awesome chapter.
It was hot!!
x
Author's Response:
I thougt so :)
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 21
I thought I had been angry when I found out about the extent her drug use had come to while she was with that demon, but this, I didn’t even know I was capable of such anger and it scared me shitless.
“Edward! What did you do!?” Bella yelled at me, dragging me out of my haze of anger for a moment.
“I decided I blamed the wall” I joked
LMAO Another awesome chapter
x
Author's Response:
You liked that didnt you? Me too, I may have even chuckled to myself when I wrote it but lets keep that to ourselves lol
Chelle x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
Rosalie is a BITCH!!
Another awesome chapter :)
x
Author's Response:
Isn't she just?
Lets slap her! lol
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awesome Chapter :D
x
Author's Response:
Aww thanks for all your lovele reviews hun! They are making me feel less like a pile of crap lol.
There will be some juicy lemons soon
x
Author's Response:
Aww thanks for all your lovele reviews hun! They are making me feel less like a pile of crap lol.
There will be some juicy lemons soon
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
LMAO.
Charlie is MAD!!!
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yay !!!
She gets to go home to Eddie :)
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yay!!!! They found her :D
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
Aww. Poor Edward.
It's sad :(
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
Another awesome chapter.
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
OMG Poor Edward.
Something bad is going to happen to bella i can feel it :(
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh shit :(
Poor Edward
Awesome Chapter :)
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
WTF? I need to read the next chapter. Please dont let him be hurt :(
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 10
Awww poor Rosalie :'(
Awesome Chapter :D
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
Awesome Chapter :)
x
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
Another awesome chapter :D
x
Date: 07 Mar 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
love the last line!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
oh boy he is in trouble.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
and they meet....
Date: 06 Mar 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
That was such a good happy ending :) And, hello, who wouldn't try to seduce Mr. Cullen.
Author's Response:
Thanks sweetie, im glad you enjoyed it x
Date: 06 Mar 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *takes deep breath* this is ending!? I mean i know i was warned but still... i get to be distraught right!!! Im good at distraught ;)! *nods* You wanna see you wanna see? *looks around* Why am i even asking!! *facepalm* Of course you want to see :) *Cracks knuckles* ... *slears throught*
WHY GOD WHYYYY *wails* Why did you have to take this story away from me! *cries to the heavens* WHAT DID I DO TO YOU!! NNOOOOOOOO *thumps ground* This cannot be the end *shakes head in denial* No not the end! *rocks back and forth* .... YOU THINK I CAN DEAL WITH THIS!? I cant deal with this! hahahahahahahaHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *manic laughter*
So what you think, what you think? You likey likey huh! ... *tumbleweed rolls past* Oh ... ok then *sniffle* i see how it is, i'll show myself out! Lol! ... You .... This story... I mean .... SPEACHLESS i am speachless.... I want to cry! This can't be over! : *glares* Now me angry *points at self* ;) Lol!
You are so good! I have absolutely loved this stroy all the way through :) Shes pregnant *dances* Yayyyyyyy :) Awwwwww little tedella? You get that?! You see what i did... I was clever *nods* ;)!
Lol! You are really an amazing writer and i can't wait for the dirtycheekymonkey co-work ;)!
Sounds like it will be amazing! :)
Well done on this story hun! You did the most fantastic job and so did Chartwilightmom! On the betaing well done :) Bloodyfuckingamazing :)
*big smooches*
Zan and Bernard :) xxxxxxx
Author's Response:
There there bb *hugs you*
I have another story already posting and you know Soccerward's coming. it will be okay.
Im glad you liked it, did you like the monster peen?? tee hee hee I'm naughty!!
Luv ya
Chelle xxxxxxxxxxx
Yes and you too Bernard!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
Wow! im in loss for words... believe me when i say, i frickin loved this story!!! sweet, sexy and happy with a little drama, perfect!
Author's Response:
Wow, now I am at a loss for words! ha ha. You've just made my day, thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2010 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
awesome chapter :)
x
Author's Response:
Thank you hon!
x
Date: 06 Mar 2010 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
Bu! I´m crying, it´s over, but happy. They deserve it, after all the crap. Thanks for your writing. Good luck!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you were happy with how their story ended.
Thansk you so much for reading and reviewing.
Chelle x
Date: 06 Mar 2010 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
What can i say?! What can i say!? ... you know i said i loved this story yeah!? Well i loved it then but now i LOVE it no i FUCKINGLOVE i.... I can't even describe to you how much i love it! It's unreal! I swear even when it's angsty it makes me smile because it is just so damn amazing! Your writing skills are wonderfullyfantasticalyyepicallydeliciouslymamazinglyawesomely uber-great! lol! im not even kidding girlie ;)! You are so damned good! Even bernard thinks so *pats bernard on head* and i mean it takes alot to make him think that ;)!!
I can't believe this is nearly ending! :o! Oh and the trial ... what a little twat! Sorry Lol! but i mean *Shakes head* I did not like that man!!!! :P *eats man* Lol! *looks guilty* Ohhhhhh now i'm bloated! ;)
I loooooovvvveeeeee you! You have really done an absolutely amazing job here! when i am done i shall start RevD :D
*smooches*
Zan x
Author's Response:
That chapter was a freaking killer to write as well!! lol
So glad you like it bb!!
*mwah*
P.S tell Bernard I'm glad he like it to and to leave the bloody chairs alone.
Date: 06 Mar 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
Another Awesome Chapter Babe
Loved it :D
x
Author's Response:
*Takes a bow*
Thank you bb!! x
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
WOW - That was HOT !!!!!
Loved IT.
Oh and Congrats. You have 300 reviews :D
x
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
HEHE
Awesome Chapter
I Loved It :)
x
Author's Response:
wait till you get to get to the next one.
Classroom walls are a lot of fun
x
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
Holy fuck! And I’m hard - Fave line so far lol
Another awesome Chapter :)
x
Author's Response:
Yeah, even I like that one lol
x
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hey
Another AWESOME Chapter !!!
Loved it
x
Author's Response:
*blushes* Why thank you!!
xx
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
That first chapter was awesome!
Im reading the next chapter right now :D
x
Author's Response:
Well fancy seeing you here! lol
Glad you liked it! *mwah*
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I Loved It! The end was so cute! ^^
I wish there could be a sequel, but I'm glad the story ended up like this.
This is one really good piece of work and I can't wait to read something else from you! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it and thank you so much for all your reviews and support.
Chelle x
Date: 05 Mar 2010 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
Great ending :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewin and of course the awesome banner.
Chelle :)
Date: 05 Mar 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. I few minor glitches in the chapter, but no biggie. Can't wait to see how you have things heat up between E and B. Kat
Author's Response:
OMG, I am chuffed your reading my story *bites nails*
The whole thing is not Beta'd- so I apologize for any minor errors, don't think there are too many because I always checked before posting.
Anyway I hope you enjoy!! :)
Chelle x
Date: 05 Mar 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
Glad Demetri was found guilty of all charges :)
Author's Response:
Me too the git lol
Thanks for reviewing. x
Date: 05 Mar 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
Awww, thats was such a good ending to the story. X
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
Yay! I just love a happy ending! :)
Author's Response:
Me too!! Thank you so much for reviewing
Date: 05 Mar 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
Ah what a great story with a happy ending. I'm glad Rose was able to end up having kids.
Author's Response:
I know, I couldn't let there be know little Emmetts. Thank you
Date: 05 Mar 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
Great story, been a follower all along! <3
Author's Response:
aww well thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
I love this story! I can't believe it's over...it was awesome!!! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
great ending thank you for sharing that story with us
Author's Response:
Your so welcome, thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
man i was reading this on ff.net. i was looking throught stories and found you on here and man i forgot all about this story and now your done. i think this was the last chapter i read on ff... but im goign to read the rest of it now lol
Author's Response:
LOL, thanks I hope you enjoy the rest of it.