Date: 04 Mar 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
Loved it!
Thanks a bunch!
Good Times, The Absolute Best!!
Can't wait for something else!
Author's Response:
Well I do have another story on here so check that out too!!
Thank you so much for your kind words and for reading
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
I loved this story!! Maybe we will see a sequal?
Author's Response:
I might do a few one shots in the future. Thanks for the review
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
loved it! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, im glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
loved it so sad its over maybe you will do an epi and give us a birth please thanks for sharing this story with us....
Author's Response:
I might do a couple of one shots in the future involving the baby.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
I like the framework that these friends were together to celebrate Alice and Jasper's engagement, so the gang could revel in how much life had changed over the years but they were all still friends. It was a fitting end for this story. I love the feeling that you experience their life over that period of years through Bella's memory. It was great that Edward and Bella got married and pregnant again after their first attempt ended in a miscarriage. I truly love Emmett and Rosalie's odyssey and how they made it through it with the help of their family and friends to find their happy ending. Thanks for sharing this story!
Author's Response:
Your so welcome and thank you for reading and reviewing x
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
the epilogue was awesome. im sad that this is the end of the story. it woulde be awesome if you did future one-shots of it or did a sequel. i can see that this has more left to do.
Author's Response:
Future one shots are a definite possibility. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing
Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
*wipes tears* It's over. I happy but sad. Their having a baby, so sweet. Thanks for letting me boss you around and pushing you into completing this. You know you had fun, how can you not with these two. Thanks to you too.
Glad to have you in my life, I couldn't imagine it any other way. It's so odd how close we are even though we are separated by the Atlantic. Just crazy.
From the words of one of my favorite of all time movies, I believe this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship.
Luv U Lots =0 J
Author's Response:
*sniff*
Aww thank you again for all your help, the pre-reads, the honesty when required, the virtual kicks up the ass when needed.
Ily 2 bits bb!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
Sweet sweet sweet and hot as hell. lol way to start the ending with a lemon. great great job. thanks so much. this story was great. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
*hiccup* You .... I mean .... What im trying to say .... *wails* whyy are you so good at writing! What are you doing to me! Im not a softie! Im not a marshmallow! (haha say that really slowly ... like in slow motion it's really amusing!) But you! I cant even describe it! Your skills are so good! God i swear i really wanted to eat rosalie like punch her in the face!! *glares* Lol!
Seriiously there are NO words to describe how amazing this is and you are ... Disagree and i will set Bernard on you ! Muwahahaha ;)!
Love *smooches*
Now off to read LEMONYGOODNESS:D
Zan xxx
Author's Response:
Okay I have to ask.
Who the hell is bernard, oh mother of fuck. have you named the ghost?? lol
Thank you, your stroking my ego nicely, its practically purring.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
love it! perfect ending! sad to see it end! but that means i have to read your other stories. love.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your support and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
AWWWWWWWWW I FORGIVE YOU ALL! :( Bella i want to *facepalm* sense into you so bad! But i can't because you make me feel so bad! You didn't realise what he was doing did ya! *pats on knee*
Little Rant because you know what? This isn't about the characters! This is about YOU the fantastical Author who is amazingly awesome and amazing at writing!!!! *hugs* Aww it's ending *sniffle* It'll be ok *rocks back and forth* ;)! *laughs manically* Lol! ... You are so good but i have to read more sooooo shhh :)
LOVE YOUR FUCKAWESOMETASTICALNESS!
Zan xx *smooches*
Author's Response:
You have no idea how much you just cheered me up bb!!
*huge smooches* !!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
NOnoNOnoNOnoNO! Charlie dude i mean i love you and everything!! But seriously you got it all wrong mmkkay pumpkin :) *pats on head* This is what you have to do LET THEM GET ON WITH THERE LIVES! I know these two *points at B and E* Are fucked up! Mentally and illegal and shit (ok sounding to start bad but shhh) Anyway they LOVE eachother LOVE you want me to spell that out for you!!?? L.O.V.E! And i know you made mistakes when you fell in love and yes these guys will BUT DON'T CONTROL THEM! You can *facepalm* Bella for the coke thing! That i get because *looks pointedly at Bella* that is fucked! Majorly fucked dude! So just say NO to drugs ok :D ... So Charlie we got an understanding?? ... Wait *points to edward* For fucksakes no PDA infront of the father ... what are you senile!! I get you just got back together but still don't flaunt it in his motherfucking face ok!!!
Rant over :D
I LOVE YOU THIS IS SO GOOD! I mean i have drooled so many times its not funny anymore!! I mean my keys are covered in slime ewww!
Haha ;) Love it can't wait to read more! *bounces* can't describe how good you are!! :D
Love Zan xxxx
Author's Response:
ROLF.
Your rant is a fic of its own lol
I'm not that good but thanks all the same bb!!
Luv ya! :)!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
Poor Edward. So he mentioned he was in jail. Was that because they thought he gave her the drugs? Just curious what the jail bit was all about.
I've thoroughly enjoyed this story and can't wait to see how you wrap it all up in the epi.
Author's Response:
Thank you for all your lovely reviews, sorry I haven't responded to every one but I was caught up with the epi which is up now by the way.
Chelle
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
I think you handled the trial beautifully. We really didn't need detailed accounts of everything. The scene with Rose and Bella making up was perfect for them.
Yay for a guilty on all counts verdict :) And honestly, if Laurent was still alive in prison the DA would've been a fool not to bring him in to testify and that would've helped back up Bella's testimony.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
I totally forgot about Edward's past. I think it will help Bella to not put him on such a high pedastal. So disappointed that Daddy Swan wasn't there for Bella's first night back home.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm so glad Bella was able to move past the shit Demitri did to her and reconnect with Edward intimately. So sweet and good.
I was ready to beat the shit out of Carlisle for his attitude.
I can't believe it's almost over.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
I sure hope Daddy Swan can eventually get over himself and see what Edward is doing to help Bella. I think without Edward she would try to hide her addiction and continue.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 20
I have a feeling the next chapter or two is going to be intense. At least Edward was finally able to tell her he loves her :) I should really be writing, but I have to know what happens next.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
Poor B has so much to work through. I hope Edward is strong enough to deal with all of it.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yay! Edward showed up just when Bella needed him. OMG, I died laughing when Charlie walked in. Good thing she's legally an adult.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
Urgh ... *points at Edward* ... *Edward looks around* 'Me?' .. Yeah im talking to you!! *facepalm* yourself right now! E: Um no! ... You better slap yourself or so help me i will do it myself! .... Right that's it! *hits over head with special pillow* WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO BELLA! Huh! Dickward *glares* You think you can fuck her and drop her! DO YOU!!! And you *turns to point at Bella* Flirting with Mike... have you really sunk that low!! And are you doing what i think you are doing! Because if you are doing what i think you are doing SLAP YOURSELF RIGHT NOW!!!
*And breathe* Lol! Ahahaha rant over
I LOVE YOU! HAve i told you that recently ??? I love your writing and your lemon *fans face* i mean gee girl! ;)!!
Love it
Love you
*smooch*
Zan xxx
YOU'RE AMAZZINGLY AMAZING IN EVERYWAY AAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIII LOVE IT!
Author's Response:
Oh how you flatter me.
Wait till you read the lemon I just wrote for the epi- hawwt damn bb! lol
I give you permission to use the *special cushion* for a while but Teacherward isnt all bad plus he keeps me warm at night.
Glad you like it so much!!
ILY2 you crazy monkey!! :) :)!! xx
Date: 03 Mar 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha *takes deep breath* gee girlie you crack me up!!! *slaps thighs* Can't wait to see what happens!! BooYa! It's gonna be FUCKAWESOME! Gotta Love It! :D Hmmmmmm *drools on your face* Woopsie ;) But i ain't apologizing this time! It's your fault for having such yummy writing skills! I love the plot, it's so good! Saucy *licks lips* Hahaha ;)! ... EPOV Holy fuck! And I'm hard classic! Complete classic! ROFLMAO amazing how do you come up with this!! :D Gonna read more so awfully sorry for the short review but I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! Muwahahaha :)
Loveee youuu and love this story and love your skills!
Love Zan *smoochies* :D
Author's Response:
AWWWWWWWWWW *wipes tear* I have never felt such love lol
I have to warn you bb, its not all laughs, shit takes a serious turn.
I hope you still like it then *bites nails*
*mwah*
ILY2!! :)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
*HAPPY DANCE* Bella is coming home. Now if they can deal with all of the emotional trauma she's been through along with her addiction. I'm sure she won't take to kindly to Daddy Swan telling her no more Edward. Sadly, I have to stop and drive home. I will be back though :)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yay for Bella calling from a payphone!
I'm glad Edward got the balls to talk to Daddy Swan.
You do realize I'm totally hooked and avoiding working, right?
Author's Response:
I'm sorry sweetie, I amso flattered you like it though. It will get better soon I promise.................kind of
Date: 03 Mar 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
Well, damn. Daddy Swan wasn't all mobbed up. That totally blows. I'm not surprised that Daddy C was disappointed in Edward. I couldn't imagine living the life Bella has to day in and day out. That is horrible. Wonder what will happen if she ODs.
I think Daddy C from EP needs to emerge and take out Demitiri :) LOL, look at me wanting to crossover fanfics.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
Please tell me Charlie is all mobbed up and is going to deliver a world of hurt to Demitri. Drug lords don't have shit on the mob :) OMG, how did readers stand waiting for chapter updates. It's killing me when I have to pause to answer the damn phone.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh shit, again! Bella WTF are you thinking? This is getting bad. Please let Emmett have some sense and go to Big Daddy Swan.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh shit! I seem to be saying that quite a bit, huh? Please tell me Daddy Swan has some connections and get this douche Demitiri taken care of.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh shit! WTF happened at Cheney's. You've got me all worried now. You take me from cloud 9 because they are happy and together right back down to the pits of hell worrying about WTF happened to Edward. Thank god I have a break and can continue reading.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
LOL, does everyone just think Ben Cheney is the perfect little drug dealer? I swear if the Cullens aren't the ones dealing the shit then little Cheney is. It's freaking hilarious.
I knew Edward wouldn't be able to deal with the whole Friends with Benefits thing. I just wonder how their whole relationship is gonna work out.
I don't care if Kate has the tightest sweetest pussy Garrett's ever had, you don't do that shit to a friend. I would've hit him if I was Edward.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my damn! Friends with benefits never works. Both are already have too many feelings invested. They will go crazy seeing the othr with someone else. Of course they still will if they don't do the FwB.
Yay Edward for giving Bella the ultimatum about the drugs. Yeah, it's shitty to do that but she really needs to get away from that shit.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for that little bit of lemony goodness :) You've done a great job making me feel the attraction they have for each other. There's no way either of them will be able to resist much. I just wonder what is about to happen. Of course they won't be all sunshine and rainbows until she graduates. There's too much at stake.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad Jasper and Alice are all over Bella's case for doing the coke before school. She def didn't need to get away with that shit.
LOL, Bella of course he knew what you did. Hello, he was in your place 4 years ago doing what you and your friends do.
I breathed a little sigh of relief that they talked at the end. Thanks for that I was really irritated that they weren't talking.
Let's see how long it takes me to read the next chpater sneaking a peak here and there while no one's watching ;)
Author's Response:
I used to do that at my old job, of course it helped it that I had my own office, I'm pretty sure my productivity levels took a steep nose dive after I discovered the Twific world.
I'm so glad you like it.
Prepare yourself for upcoming heartfail lol
Date: 03 Mar 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
I totally understand what Edward is saying and why, but poor Bella only sees it as rejection. Bless her heart. I have a feeling Edward is going to feel so guilty and pissed when he finds out the real reason B was late and what J&A were talking to her about.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 25
Well now that the cats out of the bag, things can progress on to Happily Ever After. :) I loved this story and I can't wait till you post the epilogue. thanks again bye
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 25
good job!
cookie for you: (,',)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
I wasn't sure Edward would go through with it. Way to go, Eddie! Hell, I have a feeling both of them won't be able to stop. Rose is really worrying me with her problem.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Edward. Bella's winding him up so tight it won't take much for him to snap.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yes, Bella, what do you want? I have a feeling it's gonna be like Pringles...Once you pop, you can't stop! Rose and Alice are such great friends.
I'm glad I finally got the time to read this. I'm really enjoying it.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
That's gotta suck being that attracted just from looks. 4 years is acceptable age difference yet being her teacher makes it off limits. They are both truly fucked. Hmm, I wonder if Edward will use Tanya to try to distract himself from Bella.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, dear Bella, you are fucked. I love that she and Em are twins and he doesn't want his sister doing the screwed up things he does. Great start! I'm excited to have a lot of chapters already posted to read :)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ohhh is it your birthday?! *checks date* (not that i know when your birthday is ;)) Haha! Well i am just feeling lovely and kind and lovely *nods* so you get 2 reviews Woah! I mean can you deal with that?! I understand too much Zan can be a bit you know .. disturbing?! Lol! But i couldn't read and let it go un-reviewed could I!! *looks around* Exactly No i couldn't!! ;) Ooooo I cant wait to read more!:D ... Love it seriously love it! So good Gah I have to wait! Well actually i don't have to wait ... just read but still no spontaneous lemons! ;) Haha! ... Yay *bounces* Ed POV very nicely done *nods* Unfortunetely i can not read anymore today as the work i have *glares at work* Yeah i'm talking bout you, Is hefty (don't you just love that word) Lol! But two epic *cough* reviews in one day is good right!! RIGHT! *looks around* Tututut Edward Forbidden-Student-Fruit how will you resist! (or not resist:)) Lol!
OkOk enough of spoiling you ;) Haha!
Love you loads you amazingly skilled lovely person!
*mwah*
Zan xxxxxxx :D
Author's Response:
My brithday is June 5th, make a note of it, I expect to be worshipped appropriately!! lol
Damned work *glares at Zan's pile of work* How dare you keep her from readin my story!!
The lemons are coming my dear and they will be worth the wait.
Chelle xxx
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
OhOhOhOhOhOhOhOhOh .... GUESS WHO! Yeahh it's me (helpful;)) Lol! Yes i know took my time but i've done it! Read and Reviewed look *points at keyboard* This is me reviewing *nods* Haha... Now *slams hands down on table* Down to business, you're amazing mmkay! Don't let anyone tell you different! And i mean anyone! *points at random reader* You .... Yeah i'm talking to you, You tell her she's not amazing and i will ... *is pulled away from threatening reader* ... yeah you catch my drift ;) Lol! And if anyone tells you that you aren't (which in itself is complete and utter shite and ludicrous so the person is obviously 'not all there') be sure to tell me and i will ... You know *waggles eyebrows suggestively* Yeah *cough* ... *looks over at 'special pillow' Haha ;)! NoNoNo i am annoyed though ... You want to know why!!! Well i'll tell you why, you have officially got me hooked on another story... You think i can deal with all this amazingness! Well i cant ok ... I cannnntt! *breaks down in sobs* Lol J/K :) *cough* butnotreally *cough* ;) Lol! I LOOOOOVVEEEE YOU in a completely normal way of course ;)!
Haha So what have we established here today *goes back to business-like approach* A) You are amazing (duh *facepalm*)
B) We all love you and those who don't should fuck off and deal with their jealousy!
C) This story is going to be *sings* kick ass!
D) and you have skills so yeah
You know :D seriously so good like hmmmmmmmmmm *drools over story* Oh sorry *looks guilty* i'll just clean that up :D
Haha
lots of lovelyy smooocchhes!
Zannnnnnnnnnn xxxx :D
Author's Response:
I kinda lovesssssss you, you know that right..............right?
Your reviews are crazy beautiful and from this moment on I live for them!
Hope you enjoy the rest bb!!
Chelle-belle xoxoxox :)!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
This is my first time reviewing. This is a story that has one of the best plots, the most developed characters, and the most dedicated author. I absolutly loved and I am so glad that I found this story as I am so tired of reading terrible stories with terrible plots. Thank you for writing something so wonderful and for going to the end with it, not abandoning it half way. I'd say the headache and the drooping eyelids were TOTALLY worth it!! :)
Author's Response:
OMG, you have no idea how much you just made my day like, ten times better, thank you so much and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
wow...that was some confession...Love your Edward and Bella <3
Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 25
You are quick! Nice work :)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 25
Wow, that was tough. I figured that Edward did drugs some time and that sometihing worst happened because of it, but Ben really is poor.spirited; didn´t see Angela coming there. I don´t know where he ended up, tough I´ve got my suspicions, surely and sadly he look foorward to it. I´ll be sure to be here on wenesday to see how this ends. Take care
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 24
I´m still in awe at Bella´s strenght. I´m glad Demetri was found gilty, but with all the drug charges I guess he had and murders and I don´t know what else being a Drug lord and all, I doubt he would have walked away unless the justice would have been that crappy. About the legal part and terms about the chapter, I can´t tell you anything cause I have no clue at all; Law has never been my fort. Anyway, as you say is fiction, we all know that, so, no worries there. All in all, tough I enjoyed SOS, I´m really looking forward to know how it ends; epilogues have always apealed to me. Tough I´ll need to find other stories to read. Take care
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 25
WOW! That was seriously heavy shit! I agree that he should have been up front with her way back when it could have helped her, but just the fact that he came clean with her says a lot for how important their relationship is to him! Sad to see this coming to an end!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 24
Yea! Aro finally got his comeupance! That was very brave of Bella and I'm glad that Edward and Emmett are finally seeing eye to eye!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 25
loved it very much and sad story update when you can thanks....
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 25
I LOVE IT!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE EPILOUGE!! but i'm sad the story's almost over! boohoo :(
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 25
i love the chapter. i just dont think this should be the end even if there is an epilogue. i can see more to the story than this.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 25
Aw, that was so sweet. Well, not the confession part, that was sad. But her speech was great. Wonderful job. Almost done. No headaches now!
=0 J
Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 24
excellent job on the court scene! Bravo!! Sorry I got my answer now when it came to Aro--duh me. Demetri Aro. I feel like an idiot lol
Date: 02 Mar 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
Well Edward is as ever LICKABLE!!!! YUMMMMMMM. You said Aro was on trail but wasn't it supposed to be Demetri. Maybe I'm mixed up.
Author's Response:
He's lickable indeed, His name is Demetri Aro, i as referring to him by his second name :)
Date: 01 Mar 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 24
need another chapter!
Author's Response:
Its coming lol!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
wow she's a selfish bitch. and she was the one that used him, what a hipocrite she is. lol love ur story
Author's Response:
she is, she will redeem herself-thanks for the review :)
Date: 01 Mar 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 24
awesome chapter. it was perfect. i cant wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
It wont be long, an hour tops :)
Date: 01 Mar 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
cant wait to see what has edward all emo
Author's Response:
Ha! you wont have to wait long, typing it up now, posting later.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
*Raises arm* BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Awwww bb!! I couldn't have done it without you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great job! You really put a lot of effort into this chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, you have no idea what that means to me :)
Date: 01 Mar 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
So happy she got better hope the trial doesnt have a bad effect on her
xxx
Author's Response:
Thank you, I just updated too!!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved the lemon. I'm want to know what Edward is hiding from Bella. I hope it's good!! I can't believe they ended up fucking again. lol But he likes it when she's mad so I guess it made sense that they would lose themselves again. Can't wait to keep finding out all the secrets! eep.
-QE
Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yay! So Edward did notice. Unless he heard it from someone. I can't believe he told her it was more than a fuck. I'm anxious to see where it goes from here. I'm so pissed at Rose for making it so easy for Bella to get addicted. *sigh* I hope Em doesn't find out.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 6
Aw shit, Rose gave her coke. So I guess Bella's the one that's going to have the drug problem. I hope it doesn't get too out of hand. I'm so pissed at Edward for what he did to Bella but I mean I can't blame the guy. He does have to protect both his job and his parents reputation. I just feel so bad for Bella especially cause she didn't know she was going to get so attached. *sigh* I'll just have to keep reading.
-QE
Date: 01 Mar 2010 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
bb you have nothing to worry about. Of course that wasn't bad. I won't be surprised if someone heard them. I mean they did it in his classroom. I'm surprised no one walked in on them! lol That was hot. I'm so worried about Rose though. Cocaine everyday is not a good thing. I hope she's not that one that has the problems later on. Bella wanting Edward is a bad thing. They can't keep it a secret forever it always comes back in the end. I can't wait to find out what happens! I want to know what Edward was thinking. Ahh! Next chapter please...I'm so glad I don't have to wait for updates! lol
-QE
Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
lol I like his internal banter. It cracks me up. I'm starting to get really worried about him losing his job. They seem to be focusing on that one thing. I know there is a lot of other drama that you are just building us up to and honestly I'm scared it's like the calm before the storm right? I'm biting my nails here. Bella is mean. I can't wait to see what she has planned for the afterschool session! whoo!!
-QE
Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
LMAO great ending! I'm surprised Bella hasn't been able to read him better. I love overprotective big brother Emmett. I always have. It's so cute. Except when he is trying to tell her what to do. lol other than that he's too awesome for words. I don't want either of them to get into trouble for this. I really hope you have some fuckawesome way to make that happen. I wouldn't want Edward to lose his job or for Bella to have this written all over her damn record. I can't wait for more bb!!
-QE
Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
hmm...interesting. Edward Fucking Cullen. ha!
18 years old might not be jailbait but she is still a student. I'm glad the age difference isn't larger. Now THAT would have been creepy. lol I like this I'm glad he noticed her from the beginning even when she was only 14 years old. Now THAT would have been wrong lol. I like it. I'd be a little scared of Charles though. Sounds like he could be trouble later on. I guess we'll see. I'm still here bb!
-QE
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is actually only the second story I read here on this website you can usually find me at ff.net but it has been total fail for the past couple of weeks. You know haters and all. *sigh* Anywho...I actually can't remember how I came to bookmark your story but I just started to read it. First chapter is interesting. I can't wait to see where you have taken this. The gang are all rich I'm glad Bella isn't overly conceited I don't like when she is. I hope Edward isn't THAT much older than Bella cause she'll probably be turning 18 and hopefully Edward is right out of college. I guess we'll see sooo...On with the next chapter!
-QE
PS: I tend to have rambling reviews that the authors over at ff.net can confirm for you. Sorry. lol
Date: 01 Mar 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really like the story so far. I can't wait to see where it goes. But, and I'm not trying to be rude, you really need a beta. You tend to use commas when you should use periods and start another sentence. And then, many times when you need commas, you don't use them.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 23
really enjoying ur story, please continue
Author's Response:
Thanks! Just updated
Date: 28 Feb 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 9
Damn, Edward is being such an insensitive prick! Saying in no uncertain terms that he doesn't want to be her boyfriend and he doesn't want to be exclusive. Way to make a girl feel special, jerk! Then to have the audacity to make demands about her life, uggh! I know he is worried about her, but he is basically saying that he just wants to fuck her and be able to tell her what to do and not be her boyfriend. Bella better make him wrap that shit up, pill or no pill, who knows if he's going to be sticking his peen in the likes of Victoria!
Author's Response:
I know, he seems like a complete prick right now, trust me as you read on you will see that he gets better. Thanks for your review.
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 23
Intense! Is there any chance of you continuing this fic? :D
Author's Response:
If you mean like a sequel then no, probably not, I have another story to complete and one I'm outlining which I'm really excited about.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much I hope to update later today.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm glad you liked the new banner, I haven't done graphics in years lol
Good to see Bella out of rehab with Edward :), looking forward to seeing how everthing plays out
Author's Response:
I did, Loved it. I think I will use it on the forum thread for SOS. Thanks again and thanks for the review :)
Date: 27 Feb 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow, Bella is really strong, I´m also in awe of her. Now the trial is the only ordeal left and I´m hoping to read it. And I got teary with the Sprite scene; I´m a sucker for cute animals. Take care
Author's Response:
She is, I hate the Simpering Bella you see in so many books, I try to make mine a little more tolerable lol. Thanks for the review.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 23
Everything seems to be going really well for Bella and Edward, and for a moment there i thought that this could be the end of the story, as everything was wrapping up so neatly. And then i remembered the other challenges:
- The trial
- Edward telling Bella about her past
- Meeting Edward's parents
So proud of how Bella has recovered, but can still foresee drama ahead. I am looking forward to your next installment...
Author's Response:
2 out of the 3 things will be covered in the very last chapter, which I hope to post later today, the other on will be answered in the Epi.
Thanks so much for your review.
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 23
It was a great chapter. I love that Charlie arranged so Bella would not have to be in court to testify against Demetri and that he gave his blessing about her and Edward being together. It was nice that the gang threw Bella a surprise welcome home party and Emmett got the chance to make his amends. I wished that Charlie could have been at the party. I like that Edward got to be with Bella on her first night back.
Author's Response:
Yeha, I needed to do those things, start tying the loose ends together as we approach the end. Thanks so much for the review and for reading my story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
You know what this fic does to me. I'm like a crackhead. Edward is so responsible, but B's a bad girl. I love Em being overprotective. Cannot wait for more.
Author's Response:
So glad your liking it!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 23
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
Lemons! This is so hot. I love the passion.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Did anyone not come to school high at least once senior year? I need another lemon. BF is actually encouraging me to read this because it benefits him, LOL. Off to the next.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
Motherfucking men! You just have to beat them into submission
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thank god Teddy is here. He's about to get lucky because of you and that fuckhawt lemon. Christ! Where was Mr. Cullen when I was in high school? The coke problem is getting out of hand. That stuff cannot be used every day. I feel sorry for Rose. I love this fic and I rarely read high school stories
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
Uh oh! Wow
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
LOL, she is going to get poor Edward arrested. The outfit sounds hot. I'm always down for a naughty school girl costume. All men have that fantasy. Cannot wait for EPOV on this.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well....they are both fucked. If I had a teacher that looked like Edward Cullen, I probably would have stayed back a few years. I also would have found reasons to stay after class for sexy time. I can already tell that these two are going to go at it hard. Loving the story. Great EPOV.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. I love them as rich kids. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
That was really good
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Updating later today.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
It's sweet how completely and utterly devoted Edward is, willing to give up anything and everything for her. I hope she beats her addiction
Author's Response:
Thank you for all yourr lovely reviews. Updating today
Date: 25 Feb 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 11
this is not good at all... poor edward
Date: 24 Feb 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
With all the screaming I'd be surprised if no one heard lol
Date: 24 Feb 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
18 is not jailbait... *wink* lol
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 22
loved it very much can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
Aww thank you. Updating today
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow! I am glad she is so strong, serously. I really got a crack of what Edward thinks, that he has always been far to easy when Bella was concern, so true. Now I just really wanna know what they are doing with that horrible Demetri;hope something that suits him. And... Good lemon :D
Take care
Author's Response:
He knows Bella has him by the short and curlies and he wouldnt have it any other way lol
Thank you so much for your review
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, that sucks. I mean, what happened to them. You just never know when your life can change for the better or the worst like you never imagined. All they´ve got is try and move on an get over it, be strong and live. Not everyone is strong enough for that; just hope they are.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 22
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 22
Nice lemonade ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much