[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it very much and those were some pretty jewells can't wait for more and update when you can.....
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
blue diamonds;0
Date: 04 Mar 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
WOW EDWARD ASK HER TO MARRY HIM THATS GREAT I DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING
Date: 23 Feb 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Rose she needs to kick Emmetts ass. Wow Edward asked her to marry him .
Date: 16 Feb 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 16
LOVED IT! It was short (yeah... I did notice! ***winks***) but's ok!!
The ring it's perfect!!!
xoxo
marianne
PS I know it's so totally irrelevant but rose's phrase reminded me of this song... It's one of my favs!! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uxUATkpMQ8A
Date: 16 Feb 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter, loved the ring and necklace.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 16
awwwe what a great b day gift a new chappy yeah i am a valentines baby :)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
It is about time.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
excited to see what happens next
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
such a nice chapter. now all the soft stuff is done, let's get it on. ..........................i am sorry my minds always in the gutter, wait..........................................................i don't apoligize for that...............lol.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
aww he asked her to marry him!!!!wonder how emmett will take the news?update soon
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
awwww I'm sooo happy for them. I hope she will give into him soon now that they are getting married. Poor Rose, Emmett needs his ass kicked... Update again soon:)
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
YAY!!!! I loved it. Thanks for the update. Hope to get another soon.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
About time Rose did something to get her man back. How sweet Edward is, I am glad he ask her to marry him.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
Awesome chapter and love the jewelry! Great picks!
Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
awww aint he being sweet. poor rosie.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
loved it very much thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can thanks.....
Date: 12 Feb 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
omg i love it!!!!!!!! cant wait til u update!!!!!!
such a mystery
Date: 11 Feb 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
Awesome story so far!
Date: 08 Feb 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
Holly shit!!! Rose is pregnant and NOT FROM EMMET!!! I didn't see that coming!!! WOW!!!
Poor Rose...
Loved the other...!
xoxo
marianne
Date: 08 Feb 2011 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 15
Rose and Emmett better talk soon or it will be over. They are both acting like they don't care about each other. They should be clinging to each other in this tough time. Bella needs to be smarter, by staying near Edward and his men. She can't go places by herself while some one is after her.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love the words that you put in like Face stretcher all very interesting. I am confused I thought that the rape made Rose lose the baby she was carring?
Author's Response:
she did loose the baby which was emmetts. but now shes carrying one of the rapist baby inside her.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
WOW SHE SHOULD BE TELLING EMMETT NOT BELLA AND EMMETT LOVES ROSE EVEN IF HE IS AN ASS FOR CHEATING ON HER HE WILL STAND BY HER AND HELP HER.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
i really like your story but how could she be pregnant again if she was pregnant when she was raped
Author's Response:
when Rose lost the baby with Emmett one of the men who raped her has got her pregnant with their child. i know you knew that but i googled it cause i wasn't sure if THAT could happen, but apparently it can.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
I saw that coming and I am really mad @ emmett I hope he fixes this loved it update when you can......
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
I cant believe Rose is pregnant by one of those no good for nothings. i dont think Em is going to take it well.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
well this isnt good !
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow I didn't know it was possible since I thought that rose lost her baby in the aftermath of the attack.
Author's Response:
She did loose her child with Emmett, but one of them men who raped her has got her preganant with their child. i didn't think it was possible since she has just lost her and Emmett baby but i googled it.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
oOo she needs to tell emmett.but emmett did cheat on rose. wonder how all this ging to go down for the?update soon
Date: 23 Jan 2011 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wait whose her real father? I love the story and how it is written with the different era slang. Whats going to happen to Bella and Edward, he should have gotten rid of Johnny and there would be no problem. Please continue and update.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
loved it thanks for sharing and update when you can.....
Date: 06 Jan 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
OH SHIT SOMEONE PUT THERE HANDS ON BELLA EDWARD WILL BLOW IT. THEY JUST DROPED HER IN THE STREET AND LEFT HER THERE FOR ANY ONE TO COME ALONG TO DO WHAT EVER TO HER? IS SHE OK? CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. I JUST LOVE IT ONLY IT TAKES SO LONG TO GET UP DATES BECAUSE YOU HAVE A LIFE TO DON'T YOU, I GUESS WE HAVE TO UNDERSTAND, WE JUST LOVE THE STORY'S SO MUCH I HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND WE LOVE THEM SO MUCH.
Date: 06 Jan 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
I wonder what is going to happen to Bella now.
Date: 06 Jan 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter. I wonder what will happen with Edward. I didn't expect that.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
Why did Em do that? He messed up big time. Rose doesnt need that. Trouble she finds Bella.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 14
For fucks sake I am sooo close to torturing Renee until she screams bloody murder!!!
Urg!
Anyway I loved it as usual!
I can't wait to see the reaction Edward will have an dI see that there will be new names here won't they? That Vitorio and his bro!
Happy new Year
take care
Marianne
Date: 03 Jan 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Why was Bella alone? She should be watched.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 14
Glad for the update. Will Bella ever let her and Edward go all the way? What will he do when he finds her like that in the alley. Hope for another update soon:)
Date: 03 Jan 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well that was an awsome chapter and what a cliffy. I hope we see more from you soon. I hate waiting. This is really a good story. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter... Oh and thanks for the update.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
what? more!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Jan 2011 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
poor bella and rose
Date: 03 Jan 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well I am glad that Edward didn't get seriously hurt. Ok but I am confused are they sleeping together???? Because I have not read any lemons and you said she took her dress off so...... Anyway at the end it sounded like she was getting mugged until they recongnized her and got scared shitless. lol. Now she is passed out in an alley.
Author's Response:
Hi
NJo they haven't slept together yet but they do 'fool around' . :) hope that helped
Date: 03 Jan 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
Please tell me she is ok. What the hell is Emmett thinking???
Date: 02 Jan 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
Good to see Bella wasn't injured badly.
Date: 24 Nov 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh no.. :( someone shot him.. please uppdate soon, i cant wait for more. :)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
How can I like it when Edward is shot by an idiot?
Date: 22 Nov 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
OH SHIT THAT ASSHOLE SHOT HIM WHERE THE HELL IS JASPER AND EMMETT WERNT THEY THERE TO GAURD HIM AND BELLA FROM SHIT LIKE THAT? PLEASE TELL ME THAT JOHNNY GUY ISN'T GOING TO TAKE BELLA AWAY AND HIDE HER FROM EDWARD. I THINK EMMETT AND JASPER SHOULD KILL THAT BASTARD SO BELLA AND EDWARD CAN BE HAPPY BUT WAIT A SHOT IN THE BACK CAN MAKE IT SO EDWARD CAN'T WALK AGAIN THAT WOULD BE REALLY FUCKED UP IF YOU ASK ME. ANYWAYS I NEED MORE LIKE ALWAYS I LOVE IT JUST NO LOVE FOR JOHNNY
Date: 22 Nov 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
Seriously! No way. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 13
I guess its hitting the fan now. Poor Bella and Edward.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
well i hope in the end that edward will be ok! cant wait till the next chatper
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
OMG did Johnny just shoot Edward???? Please tell me that someone killed that bastard and that Edward will be OK. So who is Bella's really dad and mom???
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh no.....hurry up and update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh no! I hope Edward will be ok.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
so edward has beens hot and bella got soe money from her dad
but johnny knows charlie wasn't her old man and i am curious as to who her old man was
hmmm seems like he had money and power
Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
Tha shithead Marazano!! I am soo going to gut him like a bloody fish!!! What a fucking coward!
Bella's Dad I wonder who he is.... Carlisle Cullen? Aro Volturi? Caius (that would be intresting!!)? Oh the possibilities!!!
Can't wait to find out!!
xx
marianne
PS Good luck with job hunting hun!
Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
poor eddie. Hmmm so charlie not her dad huh
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
loved it but don't kill edward please.....
Date: 17 Nov 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for the update.
Date: 12 Nov 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'M SO GLAD MY DAUGHTER TOLD ME ABOUT YOUR STORY IT'S SO GOOD SOME OF THE WORDS FROM BACK IN THE DAY I KNOW ALREADY BUT THERE ARE SOME I NEVER HEARD BEFORE. PLEASE SEND ME UP DATES SO I CAN KEEP UP WITH THE NEW CHAPTERS
Date: 11 Nov 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
EDWARD IS VERY SURE OF HIMSELF ISN'T HE? SO BELLA AND JAKE ARE A THING THEN? I WANT TO READ MORE TO SEE IF I REALLY LIKE THIS BUT I THING I WILL
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
So I guess Bella has more money that she thinks because she doesnt know about the will.
Date: 09 Nov 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved this chapter, can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 07 Nov 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
awwww I loved that chapter. It was so good. I am ready for Edward and Johnny to finally fight. Will Edward and bella ever take the next step? Good Story
Date: 07 Nov 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved the paper!!
That bitch is behind the dick Marazano?? You're joking!!! Can I have her and torture the hellouta her??? It won't be painfull!! For me!!! ****dark chuckle****
xx
Marianne
Date: 07 Nov 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella's bar is going to be better than ever. It will be busier with the publicity.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
i love the banner at the end! renee is fucking jonny, nasty nasty whore. lol i love this. you are tres tres creative!
Date: 06 Nov 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
So Bella doesnt know she is rich???? When is she going to find out??? Thanks for not killing Micheal
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it very much and I loved the paper that I have never seen before update when you can thanks....
Date: 01 Nov 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 11
i love this sweets i absolutely love this! update soon!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
what does that bitch want. lmao great chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
i really love this story it's so good!
Date: 25 Oct 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Johnny is going to go crazy er than he already is. Dont let him kill Michel.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
awww poor michel at thhe end
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it!! The new songs are great and sway is actually one of my favs!!
xx
Marianne
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
The war has started, I have a feeling it will be bloody.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Edward better protect Bella because it is going to get bloody.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
uhhh oohh it looks like Johnny is going to kill Michel. Bella will be upset.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it and Mike is dead update when you can thanks....
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
this is good!
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
Good thing Bella and Edward were on their date when Johnny showed up.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it when she told him he taste like candy then she sings that song.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
I hope Edward is watching out for Johnny. Bella is not safe when he is not around. Edward is so cute when he is jealous of the whole audience.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, how I love a snarky Bella. Give him a hella hard time. ;)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
Thanks for the update.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
hope they take care of Johnny soon before someone importatnt dies.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good to see Edward is top dog again.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
Lollygagger indeed!! What's the name of the song??
Loved it!
xx
marianne
Author's Response:
Its candyman by Christina Agulara
Thanks for the review :)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
What is Edward going to do now that he knows what Johnny did.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow that was interesting. I loved it. LMAO I loved the song, at least he knew it was for him. I was worried that something bad happened to him and I am glad that was not the case. I was hoping for some lemons but I understand that in this time frame that women didn't give their self so freely but dam Bella wants it so why not? lol. I would love to read those. Edward seems to really get affected by her singing for him. lol.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
it's getting toasty for bella and edward, hopefully edward will keep that johnny away from his bella.