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Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 76

Aww too cute

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2016 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 75

Yay! She's home. Hopefully,  Charlie will come around.

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2016 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 75

Glad things were on the up and up here ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 75

I still want to just kick Charlie between the legs.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 75

These 2 needed the happy news.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2016 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 75

WOW! I can't wait!! :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 75

can't wait

Reviewer: Jlynn W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 75

Great chapter, positive note worked, thanks! :) Can hardly wait for your next chapter and to hear from Jasper and the others. Take care, have a great weekend!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 75

I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop. ANOTHER shoe. I hope there isn't one. Good news for Edward! ...and they're "home".  short but sweet. thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 75

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 75

Like that you are showing how hard her rehab is and not just jumping immediately to "she miraculously better"

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 75

Slowly but surely their lives are coming back to a balance. A few more hurdles to overcome and the rest will fall into place.
What kind of tattoo will Edward get?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 75

I'm proud of Edward pasting his GED. Edward sounds a little more confident in this chapter. 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 75

Bella needs to stop beating herself up every time her legs spasm or give out. This is a long road to recovery. And Edward needs to stop thinking so little of himself! Plus, if Bella pays for his college, that gets him into a career earlier, and if his pride needs to pay her back, then he can. Simple as. 

*huggles*

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 75

I loved it she is home and they seem happy now what is next for them 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 75

good

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 75

Great chapter. Edward's life is changing for the better every day. Looking forward to seeing Alice and Jasper and Jared coming back. 

Sherry

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 73

good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 73

They both seem to healing well. Hopefully the healing is on the inside as well.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 73

Glad B's got so many people in her corner. Rehab does suck

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 73

MOVING ALONG

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 73

I just love them .

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 73

I hope that Charlies hotel chain stagnates and struggles without Bella behind the wheel. Her new, upscale chain of bistro hotels should be a hit!!!

*huggles*

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 73

Charlie really did need his ass beat. Rose had a great ideal for Bella to open her own Bed & Breakfast. Good to see her and Edward getting stronger everyday.

Sherry

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 73

I LOVE THIS!!! :)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 73

Things are moving right along here. I sure hope Esme doesn't wriggle out of any of these charges. Sounds like her brother would not be a credible witness either for or against her! Hopefully they can tie some of his business to her for another charge against her.  I really hate the way Charlie treated his daughter. He doesn't deserve her and I hope he changes. Love the cuddling between Edward and Bella. The rest will come with time.  Now it's time to nail Esme! Good work here!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 73

So glad they are there for each other.  Can't believe that her father just left.  What a jerk. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 73

I'm happy that Bella's rehab is going so well. I'm really glad that Edward is taking self defense and regaining his strength. Hopefully the self defense will give a little bit of comfort to know that he will be able to protect himself. I can't wait for Bella to testify for the grand jury. I hope seeing Esme doesn't undo all of Edward's progress. I like the idea of Bella branching out on her own out from under her father's rule. I can't wait for the next chapter. Til next time...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 73

:) 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 73

I'm glad it appears as thngs are getting better for both of them ;)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 73

I hope Charlie can come  to his senses and sees he is losing his daughter for good and Edward is so sweet with her I love it and go Jacob I would have done the same

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 73

Progress has its own timetable depending on the severity of the injury. But they are moving forward.
Any setbacks on the horizon for Edward during the trial? Or will he rise to the occasion and find his inner mountain lion?
Charlie is very shallow in his perspective of Bella and her responsibility towards the Swan name in business.
She will find her own way though. As long as Rose and Edward are by her side.
Maybe she can collaborate with Jake.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 72

Charlie needed a reality check and Bella gave it to him.  Edward is giving Bella a reality check of her own love it

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 72

They are so cute

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 72

I'm glad Bella gave Charlie a piece of her mind, because even if I understand where hes coming from as a mother, its still no way to behave! 

Yes, being stuck in a hospital bed is troubling, its natural that Bella gets annoyed and feels ugly and useless... But I loved how Edward took care of the situation; )

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 72

Yeah Bella.  Charles got what he deserved.  Edward is so sweet. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 72

:) 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 72

=A+

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 72

good

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 72

Charlie needs to place his anger where it's due. His anger, though...it is misplaced out of love and loyalty to his daughter, or could it be misplaced guilt, because he knew about Esmes company? Had he used her services in the past, and is battling an overwhelming feeling of guilt after learning that Esmes employees were simply modern day sex slaves? THAT would make more sense to me than any other 'reason' for his behavior.

*huggles*

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 72

Great chapter. Loved seeing Bella making progress with her recovery, and giving Charlie a piece of her mind. I liked seeing Edward so determined with her.

Sherry

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 72

The bitch still got off too easy! I still say fuck her up with a butter knife!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 72

Awe Rose is a great friend and Edward such a beautiful heart but Charlie is hurting too but he needs to take a step back and really look at everything again 

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 72

I am glad Bella went off on Charlie, he is an ASS!!! I am also glad Edward made her get up and move around!! I cant wait to see what happenes next!!!

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 72

Le sigh...I hope someday he realizes how strong he truly is. He is essentially a POW. He should be proud of his survival. Not really rushing you but...please hurry. I think I'm actually salivating for the next update.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 72

Glad Bella got to tell off Charlie.  Yey for spa day 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 72

They are quite the pair. Well suited, stubborn, and determined to make a life together after the disaster they endured at the hands of Esme.
Rose is a blessing to both.
Charlie better thank his daughter's boyfriend for keeping his relationship with his daughter viable.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 72

glad to see Charlie being told off.....  Hopefully Edward and Bella will work out their physical and emotional problems together and come out stronger.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 72

I'm glad she ousted Charlie. He was hindering Edward's recovery. These two are quite a pair now, all thanks to Esme!  I hope you're giving her a fitting punishment in this story! How generous is Edward to encourage Bella to forgive her dad. I think at least part of that is fueled by his self-hatred and I hate to see that. It will take a long time for his inner scars to heal. Far longer, I'm afraid, than the outer ones. At least they both vocallized the ILYs to each other. Thanks for this riveting story!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 72

So glad that Bella went off on her dad. Hopefully Charlie will come around and realize he was wrong. Love Edward and Bella together. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 71

Can't wait until the next chapter.  Bella needs to tear her dad a new one. She better drink some water to get the throat ready.

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 71

Yay Bella has movement! Just to give you a little background on my experience with this type injury, you may have your own experience but if you don't and you'd like to use mine as reference that's perfectly fine or don't that's fine too lol.  My husband received a similar spinal injury when he was swimming through a shallow dive one evening at a friends pool. As he swam through he bumped into the pool wall and sustained a C4 fracture paralyzingly him from the nipple line down.  We luckily realized what happened and got him to the surface before he drowned.  When we got him stabilized and called 911 I asked if he could move his legs. He thought I was being silly and said "of course I can move my legs"...... I looked down and there was no movement and told him so. He proceeded to curse.  I had a suspicion and was going on pure hope and prayer so I asked him To close his eyes and tell me which toe Ed, who was holding his feet, was touching and he was able to tell me everywhere Ed touched him. I was relieved that at least I knew something was there.  After a night in the hospital ER he was put in ICU where I had to demand they put SCD hose on him, I'm an ICU nurse myself and was not about to add blood clots to the mix.  CT and MRI's showed a fracture but due to swelling we weren't sure how much if any actuall damage was done to the spinal column. We would have to wait for swelling to go down and movement to return gradually. They didn't do surgery at this point but ended up doing it later on anyway. He just had to wear a C-collar.  To my surprise and utter fear they stood him up the very next day. Of course the physical therapist did all the work but that was the beginning of his recovery. Day by day he started getting a little more movement back by the end of the week he was in a rehab facility.  He had to relearn how to do everything as swelling went down things came back quickly but they came back weak. He had to learn how to sit up, dress and feed himself, push a wheelchair, stand and eventually walk. Through all this he was also doing strength exercises.  One thing that was a biggy was learning how to get in and out of a vehicle. They actually had half a car set up in the therapy room for people to learn this. You have to be able to get in and out of a car to leave the facility they said.  I'll never forget watching him walk on his own for the first time with a walker, feet bumping together, terrified he'd fall but he didn't and after a month he was able to come home on a walker and continue therapy through outpatient. 4 months later he was back to work. He is about 98%. He has weakness on one side of his body and cold/hot sensitivity on the other, walks with a limp that's worse in cold weather and has limited use of his left hand. He's a verY lucky man.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2016 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 71

Oh wow I was so far behind I am kicking my self I was so into reading I didn't realize that is 2 am I loved it and need more I can't believe so much has happened update soon please 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 71

Oooh! Charlie is in T-rouble!!! LOL Responsive feet and feeling are GOOD signs. Somehow, I suspect she will recover more quickly than they are anticipating. She has some great reasons to be motivated.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 71

I love Edward's new found determination to be there for Bella despite how Charlie feels about him. I'm glad he was was there when Bella woke.

Sherry

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 71

Glad E's got good people in his corner.

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 71

Yay!!!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 71

Dr. Benson has been an immense aid to Edward's mental awareness and recovery. She bolsters his spirit.
Rose and Bella are a formidable force when steamrolling someone. Charlie will be in the hot seat soon.
Peter is another great asset in Edward's corner.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 71

good

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 71

yay sshe will rip Charlei a new one

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 71

Love the story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 71

:)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 71

Yay!  I'll  be  glad  when  she  gives  Charlie  an earful !   

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 71

I loved it!!! Charlie can kiss my lily white ass. You go Edward. I am so glad he was with Bella when she woke up. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 71

I kind of suspected that Edward might have the same tendency to retreat into his mind as his mother did. I also suspect that was what kept him from insanity while being tortured by Esme. I'm very happy that Bella woke up and sure she will have a few things to say to her dad once she learns how he is treating Edward. Let the healing begin!!

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 71

Charlie's gonna be in so much TROUBLE! Bella's gonna ream the old old one til he needs a new one then ream it. Serves him right. I get he's concerned but that was overboard. He better come around or he could end up losing a daughter. Edward will be there thru every step of her recovery, I'm sure.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 71

So glad Bella is awake. Bella's situation hits close to home right now. On Memorial day a friend was at the river and he went under the water and hit his head. Right now he can not feel his legs. They are headed to the Shepherds Center in Georgia to help with his recovery.  We are hoping and praying  he will walk again. Thank you for sharing with us.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2016 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 71

Charlie is going to get his ass kicked when Bella finds out what he has done to Edward.

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 71

Guess Charlie is in for a good kick in the nuts not too far from now;)

 

I knew Esme played a role in the state Elizabeth was in!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 70

I hate this Charlie.  He ignores Bella most of the time. Now he tries to act like a concerned father and hurts Edward,  which will hurt Bella.  She snuck off to get Esme.  She is the only one  who put her in that situation and Esme is the only one at fault.  Edward will get there if he has time to heal and to deal with all the changes. He has had no time to do either before each attack. Charlies's was so unecessary. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 70

Charlie smack, yes.  Edward, no.  He's got alot to work through and I don't blame him for his crappy self-esteem

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 70

I'm so glad Rose is taking charge for Bella. I hope Edward listens to what Rose said and thinks long and hard about what she said. Edward and Bella both have a long recovery ahead for them both, but together they can make it down that long bumpy road!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 70

Rosalie is a great friend to both Edward and Bella. Her words were nice but until Edward decides his future with Bella is worth the fight, he will not have the strength to follow through.
Charlie needs a few cold shoulder treatments from his daughter to provide incentive for his attitude adjustment.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 70

Glad Rose was there for Edward. 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 70

The PTSD that Edward suffers from is real, yo! He needs time and therapy before he can truly move forward. You can't just decide to be better. It is a slow, day-by-day process that basically rehabilitates your mind to gentility and love. Edward needs patience, not a Gibbs smack!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2016 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 70

OMG!! I hope that everyone can heel!! I can't wait to hear from Bella! :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 70

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2016 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 70

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 70

Charile really did a number on Edward's physche. Bella will be grateful that Rose was there for him, and with him.

Sherry

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 70

read your own words. Edward did nothing wrong!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2016 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 70

Edward is stronger than he thinks he will make it through the fog.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 70

I want to smack Charlie, for sure, but I'm cutting Edward some slack. He has PTSD. He needs to be guided back to a place where he no longer blames himself for this stuff. He needs Bella. She would NEVER blame him. These two need a chance to heal so they can love each other again. I trust you to give them that!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 70

If anyone other than Bella (or Carlisle) can make him see the truth about him I'm sure its Rose;)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 69

I completely understand where Charlie is coming from.

Sherry

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 69

Charlie is also a horrible parent. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 66

I don't blame him for being pissed. Moms take care of their children.  They toughen up and get through bad times. We don't fold in on ourselves. She is such a weak woman and doesn't deserve to be called a mom. Mom's are tough.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2016 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 69

I just read this whole story today. 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 69

poor Edward

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 69

OMG! I'm crying. :( That was horrible of him! Bella is going to be pissed! I love this story!;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 69

As a father I think it was natural for Charlie to explode, and a bit of that worry and anger was rightly directed at Edward BUT that's not about Bella's condition but fear to loose his daughter in general... 

Edward being brave enough to go with Charlie in the first place though shows he's neither weak nor a coward! And after all he was through already the reaction to Charlie getting innhis face like that - who could blame him?!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 69

Poor Edward

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 69

poor e

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 69

I understand Charlie being upset but he is taking it out on Edward not cool.

Reviewer: eboyd5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 69

Ok, what Charlie said was way over the line.  That sounded like something one of Edward's abusers would have said to him.  There was more there than just Charlie being worried about his daughter.  I hope somehow Bella heard what Charlie said and is as disgusted as I am.  Please update soon!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 69

Poor E.  Yea Charlie is a real douche.  Yell at him fine but putting his hands on E was totally uncalled for.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 69

Too much too soon. Edward's PTSD kicks into physical and emotional shutdown mode when confronted with an aggressor.
Chuck needs to be restrained. Maybe even shown just a portion of the tortures Edward has endured. That might change Chuck's perspective.
Someone better call Carlisle.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 69

Charlie is acting like the abusing douches in Edward's life.  Dam!  Bella is going to hate her father for that.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 69

Charlie hasn't been there for Bella in forever.  Edward was in an impossible situation. What the hell gives Charlie the right to attack him?! Reopening his stitches will cause more scarring and higher risk of infection. 

That. Was. Assault!  He is no better than the bitch that put Edward AND Bella into the hospital. It was BITCHME, not Edward, who caused ALL of it!!! 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 69

Charlie is an asshole!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2016 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 69

yea Charlie is a dick!!! Bella will take care of him as soon as she wakes up!!

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