Date: 24 May 2016 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 69
Poor Edward. Charlie's little out burst probably just set back any progress that Edward had made.
Date: 24 May 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 69
Charlie needs to have a little of Esmes treatment for a while.
Date: 24 May 2016 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 69
I'm not liking Charlie very much right now. I guess he has a right to be pissed about his precious daughter, but he just attacked a man who suffered through torture from that very type of man. I hope someone makes Charlie feel bad about that. What happened to Esme??
Date: 22 May 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 68
Can't wait!
Date: 21 May 2016 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 68
GOOD! Just going to prison is too easy on bitchme. I don't normally like violence & torture but this time it's well & truly earned.
Date: 21 May 2016 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 68
I am glad Esme will get what is coming to her!! I am scared Eleazar will get past the cops and get Edward!!
Date: 21 May 2016 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 68
I doubt Charlie will be too happy, about Bella's condition at the moment. But he knows his daughter, so he'll know no one could've held her back from her "mission"...
Date: 21 May 2016 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 68
Charlie had better not go on the attack at Edward. He went away to play and left his daughter to run his corporation, as well as dealing with everything Edward was going through. He didn't interfere, but he did NOT help. His own flesh and blood. He and Elizabeth should fall in nicely. 😒
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2016 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 68
Good chapter.
Sherry
Date: 21 May 2016 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 68
He is going to make himself sicker it is a good thing he has people around him that care about him that is something new for him.
Date: 21 May 2016 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 68
Hope they catch Eleazar before he can hurt E and B.
Date: 21 May 2016 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 68
I hope they catch Eleazar before he can get to Edward..or Bella...or Edward's mom! What more could go wrong? I do hope Edward forgives his mother, in the end.
Date: 21 May 2016 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 68
Loving this story. Had to stop everything and read when I got the notice for this chapter
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2016 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 68
Charlie's been in his own little world. He really has nothing much to say about others taking care of his daughter. He hasn't made the effort to be around her much lately.
Will Eleazar make it into the U.S. undetected? How many other high powered politicians will be named this international scandal?
Date: 18 May 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 67
OMG!!! Big hug for them both! I love this! :)
Date: 18 May 2016 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 67
Glad Carlisle got Rose out of the room. Don't blame E for blowing up though.
Date: 18 May 2016 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 67
Esme needs to be put in a communal cell with about a dozen ladies she used to 'own.'
Date: 17 May 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 67
My heart is just breaking for him for all of them. Cant wait to find out what happens to Esme.
Date: 17 May 2016 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 66
I really don't think she comes back that quick from that long. I say that in the kindest way.
I get him being upset with her. His life was ruined by her in ablility to adjust to changes.
Date: 17 May 2016 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 67
This isnt news I didnt expect; )
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2016 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 67
Poor Edward, all the guilt and hate he must be feeling. I can't imagine getting a call like Rose had to make to Charlie. I can't fathom what a parent would feel about the situation.
Sherry
Date: 17 May 2016 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 67
This isn't the best case scenario for Bella, but it's by far not the worse either! She has a real chance to come all the way back from this, and I trust she will! As for Esme, it's been a long time coming and I hope you have something really special in store for her....
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 67
Rage in the cage....... Edward needed another release. His journalling may have delt with his mommy issues, but his trashing of the hospital conference room displayed his hatred of Esme.
Date: 17 May 2016 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 67
I an glad that Edward finally let out his anger. I hope they both can start healing now.
Date: 16 May 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 66
I'd be pissed at "mom" too. Ugh.
Date: 16 May 2016 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 66
I can't blame Edward for being pissed. He had WAY too much on his shoulders, and Elizabeth left him broken and vulnerable to the fate he suffered. Maybe it is her fault, per se, but it did happen on her watch.
*huggles*
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
Fantastic
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
Very nice
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wonderful
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 10:55 PM Title: Prologue
Interesting start
Date: 15 May 2016 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 66
This is another of your gripping stories that I can't get enough of. I'm glad Edward is letting out his anger that he feels toward his mom. How can he not? Writing will help, I think. It has always been a good tool for me. Bella has to be OK. I trust that she will....as for Esme, well let's say I wish her the worst possible outcome. I hope she dies, but oh so slowly...
I hope you had a good Mother's Day. Thanks for all you give us!
Date: 15 May 2016 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 66
I hoped that Elizabeth would be better after her time at that "hospital"... That she's been magically cured though is quite the surprise, and I can only explain it that the shock of being taken hostage by Esme was the reason for it. Still it leaves a bitter aftertaste, that shes all better as soon as they're away from the scene in La Push:(
Edward being angry at her for being so mothery now seems quite natural to me though, as well as his want for Bella. Not only because he starts to realize his love his "for real" but because she was his rock so far, too...
Date: 15 May 2016 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 66
Wow! Edward has every right to feel abandoned and furious! He's showing his maturity and his strength and his love with restraining himself from exploding at his mom! I'm proud of him. He did the right thing by walking away. Things that we say in anger can't be taken back!
Date: 15 May 2016 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 66
Poor Edward. He has so much to over emotional and physical.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 66
I kinda feel bad for Edward's mom, but she really did bail on him when he needed her the most. Though, I think Esme had something to do with her illness dragging out for so long. So I don't think it all was his mother's fault.
Sherry
Date: 15 May 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 66
I really can't blame Edward for being angry at his mother. He was hurting just as bad as she was and he was just 14 years old.
Date: 15 May 2016 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 66
Edward has every right to be pissed at his mom she checked out on him but he will get over it and forgive but it will take time and Bella.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 66
Edward is experiencing a unique form of repeat abandonment. His mind has learned that his mother mentality checked out. Leaving him to become the most responsible member of the family. Now reliving the pain of his choices and how it cost his girlfriend her well-being.
He has righteous anger.
Date: 15 May 2016 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 66
I LOVE THIS!!! :)
Date: 12 May 2016 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 65
I think Elizabeth couldn't deal with her life without Ed Sr., so she withdrew and chose to live inside her memories. Catetonia is more preferable than pain, right? Reality done slapped her in the face! I do wonder if there will be a connection with Carlisle...
Hopefully, Bellas paralysis is merely temporary and Edward will be able to help her through her road to recovery. He will find strength for her.
Date: 12 May 2016 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 65
This is suçh a great story! Keep up the wonderful work!
Date: 11 May 2016 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 65
My guess is that Emerson was paying Nurse Cratchett to drug his mother so she could control him. Being away from the drugs for so long it is out of her system and ready to fight.
Date: 11 May 2016 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 65
Glad they let E have news of B at the hospital.
Date: 11 May 2016 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 64
Ugh the biatch sooo needs to pay
Date: 11 May 2016 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 63
Well at least Bitchme didnt get an easy out with them killing her. Poor B
Date: 11 May 2016 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 62
now why is it not a surprise when E and R don't stay in car.
Date: 11 May 2016 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 61
Sadly the criminals get off with cushy prison compared to what they do to their victims.
Date: 11 May 2016 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 59
Ugh B is going in alone??? So not a good idea. Who knows how many degenerates are helping her.
Date: 10 May 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 65
Personally I think a quick death like this would be too kind, but at least that way she couldn't hurt anyone ever again...
Date: 10 May 2016 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 58
Poor E. You are killing me here you know.
Date: 10 May 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 57
Sue the living SHIT out of that stupid facility
Date: 10 May 2016 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 56
Sucks that he is going to have to tell his story so many more times with all the court appearance and lawyer visits during all the charges pressings.
Date: 10 May 2016 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 55
Glad they all wrote in his journal.
Date: 10 May 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 54
Poor E. Hope she'll be able to help him
Date: 10 May 2016 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 53
Hope Trask comes through
Date: 10 May 2016 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 52
Ugh. SHould have had a cop in the room at all times... Stupid cops.
Date: 10 May 2016 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 51
I agree Bitchme and minons need to pay
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2016 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 65
Esme doesn't deserve any treatment
Date: 10 May 2016 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 65
Please something evil needs to happen to Esme. I am so happy Edward's mom is coming back to him. Bella has to be OK she just has to.
Date: 10 May 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 65
Maybe Elizabeth was being drugged to simulate Alzheimers? That would be good news! I hope Esme gets what she gave to others...before she dies. In a way, if anyone had to be shot, I'm glad it wasn't Edward. He's endured enough! Not that i wish it on Bella, not at all,but I'm glad you went this way instead of your original plans....
Date: 10 May 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 65
I am thinking that Esme has been having Edward's mom drugged to make it look like she had alzheeimer. I hope Bella is not paralyzed. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2016 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 65
I'm guessing Elizabeth was suffering from depression and when Esme got her hands on Edward and his mother, she was getting drugs into Elizabeth to cause her to be the way she was. Poor Edward, he needs to start letting go some grief and having a little faith. He has his mother back because of Bella's actions.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2016 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 65
Elizabeth was kept sedated through what ever means Esme could manipulate. Her cognitive abilities masked. When it came to her baby boy needing her, she pulled it together.
Your description of Bella's injuries is not consistent with one bullet entry. Was she hit twice and I missed that notation?
Date: 10 May 2016 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 65
Sweet nurse!
Date: 08 May 2016 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 64
What???? Please post again soon.
Date: 08 May 2016 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 64
OMG ! Please update soon.
Date: 07 May 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 64
HOLYSHIT!!!! OMG!!!! :(
Date: 07 May 2016 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 64
yikes you did not tell us enough for questions. Bella passed out, we don't know if that is for good or for moments. I tend to believe you don't kill her off or Edward. So I bet if anyone dies here it will Nastyme.
Date: 07 May 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 64
Esme was holding her arm from Edward's POV, so I don't think Esme is dead. I don't think Bella is dead either. I think she passed out, but not dead. I hope Elizabeth is ok and not too terribly traumatized. I'm sure she is traumatized buy hopefully not too scarred from all of this.
Date: 07 May 2016 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 64
OMFG I want Esme dead but that would be to kind to kill her quick I want it slow and very painful.
Date: 07 May 2016 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 64
I doubt at this point anyone would feel sorry if Esme was shot in this "meeting", because she was obviously crazy.... Seeing she was armed and shooting without care I'd say if she got shot it's only the matter which officer to congratulate for not allowing her another chance to run away;)
I'm more sad that Elizabeth is in such a bad shape, I hoped that maybe getting off those medications she might have a chance to recover a bit of her old self :(
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2016 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 64
Esme has lost it!!!!
Date: 07 May 2016 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 64
Why didn't Bella take a gun or something to protect herself with? She knew how Esme was. I though she would be tougher than that. I wanted Bella to hurt Esme like Esme hurt Edward.
I really hope Bella is alright. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 07 May 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 64
Why in the hell did bella not pull her own gun out? Why was she all "badass bella" a few chapters ago and now, has become a little pansy weaklinf against Esme?
I know Esme is a crazy bitch, but she needs to be tortured! She needs to hurt! There is no death slow enough for people like her!
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2016 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 64
What a cliffy!? I'm looking forward to more.
Sherry
Date: 07 May 2016 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 64
Nothing new here to reply about. The images are the same. Provoking the same thoughts from the initial POV.
Date: 07 May 2016 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 64
I hope Esme is not dead. That would be to easy for her. She needs to suffer.
Date: 07 May 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 64
oh no! you left us with the same cliffie last time! I'm going crazy not knowing what's happening! You didn't bring us all this way just to kill Bella now!!! I sure hope Esme isn't dead yet. She hasn't suffered enough....
Date: 04 May 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 63
At least her reign of terror is over! I trust Bella will survive. You wouldn't do that to us now!
Date: 04 May 2016 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 63
Well that was shitty. Nobody tortured the bitch, then Bella had to go all hero and then wimp out.
Torture the bitch!
Date: 04 May 2016 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 63
After all they had to endure already you're hurting them even more? That's really evil; )
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2016 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 63
I hope Bella will be alright
Date: 04 May 2016 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 63
OMG!! You are horrible leaving us with such a devastating cliffy!!!! I. AM. FREAKING. OUT! I love this! ;)
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2016 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 63
I thought for sure Esme was gonna shoot Edward. The thought of Bella jumping in front of him to take a bullet for him didn't cross my mind. Damn what a cliffy. I'm looking forward to more.
Sherry
Date: 04 May 2016 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 63
Horrible, mean, nasty, perverted person! How can you do that to us😠??
Date: 04 May 2016 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 63
Why would you do that to me? Also I'm hoping that basic anatomy and physics is putting me on the correct path and that the bullet was caught on the ribs, or at the most barely grazed a lung. These are wounds can be recovered from, hard to say how fast they'd get her to the hospital though... yet there is a helicopter so maybe... just don't do anything to hurt these characters anymore, well except Esme. She can get it.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2016 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 63
Bullet entry, right or left side of Bella's chest?
Punctured lung, fractured ribs........
The paramedics, EMT, and ambulance were standing by.......should be able to stabalize her enough to rush her to the nearest hospital.
Carlisle only winged Esme. Bummer, I was hoping for a maiming. Something that alters her physical state for life. Painful yet able to experience the anguish everyday.
What is Charlie going to do when he finds out his daughter has been shot?