Date: 08 Feb 2018 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
Do you still have this story I want to read it but it says it’s temporary off line
Author's Response:
Thanks for your interest in my story. I'm sorry... I haven't had the time (RL has been crazy) to repost it here. I promise I'll try to get it back up as soon as possible!
In the meantime, you can read it on fanfiction.net at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11507600 (same author name, same story title).
Date: 23 Dec 2017 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Shocking start!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 20 Jun 2016 1:35 AM Title: Epilogue
Really, really enjoyed this story. Very interesting storyline with even more interesting characters. It was fun trying tp keep up with all the twists, turns, and surprises. Very definitely worth a second read in the future.
Date: 18 Jun 2016 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 25
Very interesting and intense.
Date: 02 Jun 2016 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying it, and thanks for taking the time to leave reviews. )
Date: 02 Jun 2016 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well I ma interested
Date: 01 Jun 2016 10:08 PM Title: Epilogue
It was great!
Author's Response:
Thanks! XD
Date: 01 Jun 2016 10:46 AM Title: Epilogue
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and the rating! :) Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 31 May 2016 6:19 PM Title: Epilogue
Nice interlude. Thank you.
Author's Response:
You are most welcome and thanks for the review.
Date: 31 May 2016 6:07 PM Title: Epilogue
sweet ending. TY for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
You are most welcome and thanks for the review. :)
Date: 27 May 2016 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 64
will there be another?
Date: 26 May 2016 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
a bit far fetched for high school
Date: 24 May 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 64
Just binge read the last ten chapters after falling behind with this story.
How you have managed to keep such a large cast of characters and different POV's in place I will never know.
The plot was pacy, the romance convincing and there were enough funny moments to break the tension. I really enjoyed the whole thing.
Bravo! Looking forward to the hinted at new story...
Author's Response:
Awww, thank you so much for the very kind words and I'm delighted you enjoyed the story and are looking forward to a sequel. ;) Your review made me happy. :D
Date: 21 May 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
I haven't been on TWCS in ages. Not sure why I popped in, but I'm glad I found this fic. I'm loving the storyline so far and appreciate that it's so well written.
Rondell
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words, Rondell, and I hope you continue to enjoy this story.
Date: 13 May 2016 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yay!!! I'm so excited! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words!
Date: 09 May 2016 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 64
Thanks for writing and sharing
Author's Response:
Awww, thank YOU for all the lovely reviews. <3
Date: 09 May 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 63
Glad B was able to help him figure it out.
Date: 09 May 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 62
awww for the 's
Date: 09 May 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 61
FINALLY James is dead. LOl for Alice shutting Marcus down
Date: 09 May 2016 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 60
ugh Someone take James out already. Jeez
Date: 09 May 2016 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 59
ack you are wratching up the suspense.
Date: 09 May 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 58
Hope E or B find a way to reverse the oxygen isue onto Aro. Poor Em
Date: 09 May 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 57
oh no. Poor Em.
Date: 09 May 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 56
Go Bella. Smart girl
Date: 09 May 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 64
I really hope you write a sequel. I so didn't want their story to end! Looking forward to your next story!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much and we are working on it now! :)
Date: 08 May 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 64
Awesome! Love that you've left it open for more.
Author's Response:
glad you liked it!
Date: 06 May 2016 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 64
good
Author's Response:
thanks
Date: 04 May 2016 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 64
Happy ending! Yeah!
Author's Response:
thanks :)
Date: 04 May 2016 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 64
:) loved this story. I hope there will be a sequel
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for all your awesome reviews and ratings! <3
Date: 04 May 2016 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 64
Does thsi mean there will be a sequel? Loved it.
Author's Response:
Thanks and we are working on epilogues and possibly a sequel. :)
Date: 04 May 2016 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 64
Do we get that 'story for another time'? I think this story was a nice ride! Thanks for writing and sharing (:
Author's Response:
Thanks and we are working on epilogues and possibly a sequel. :)
Date: 04 May 2016 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 64
Aww I want more of them being happy and stupid and in love 😞 So you're posting an epilogue??
Author's Response:
Thanks and we are working on epilogues and possibly a sequel. :)
Date: 03 May 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 64
Well done!
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 03 May 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 64
Good ending.
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 26 Apr 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have really enjoyed reading this story, and I can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 24 Apr 2016 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
I just found your story today and so far I'm impressed. All through Edward's opinion spiel about teen gangs and adults reactions I heard My Chemical Romance's song Teenagers ringing in my ears. Hope if you don't know it you can youtube it. I Love that Song! (and I am 50)
Date: 24 Apr 2016 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 63
Damn...excellent line lady!
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 61
I am so glad that Edward has been able to redeem himself. I am sad that Emmett had to die though.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 60
I hope the code worked!
Date: 08 Apr 2016 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 60
Is it the lack of oxygen or was James always that insane!
Date: 03 Apr 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 59
I hope he can do it
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 59
Really good chapter.
Date: 01 Apr 2016 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 58
OH MY GOD! I LOOOOVE YOUR STORY!!!! WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATE????
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your comment!! :) The next chapter is a long and intense one from Edward's POV. It's important and we've been working very hard on it, but it's taking longer than we expected because it's quite difficult. We are very much hoping to post the new chapter tomorrow.
Date: 27 Mar 2016 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 58
Well someone better blow those doors. Someone that understands chemistry enough to make a bomb and blow that loading dock door.
Date: 26 Mar 2016 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 58
Nice set up. Great story.
Date: 26 Mar 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 58
So sad. Poor Emmett
Date: 22 Mar 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 57
They have to get the police to save these people and to put Marcus, James and cause in jail.
Date: 21 Mar 2016 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 57
That's not what i was thinking was going to happen!
Date: 21 Mar 2016 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 56
I hope it's edward!
Date: 21 Mar 2016 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 55
They have hit the mother load & not in a good way.
Date: 20 Mar 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 57
Awwww, emmettttttt!
Date: 20 Mar 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 57
He finally finds Rosalie and then that. *sighs* Poor Emmett. :( Here's hoping Edward finds Bella soon and maybe an HEA? Thanks for the update!
Date: 20 Mar 2016 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 57
Poor Emmett. I hope he will be alright
Date: 20 Mar 2016 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 57
Nooo! After all of that, Emmett can't be dead. Alice and calvary need to hurry the hell up and get there! Thanks, Maria
Date: 19 Mar 2016 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 56
Ok plz update a new chapter... Bella is free from the plastic ties and she needs to get out of there. Please update soon!! 😀
Date: 16 Mar 2016 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 56
I hope it's Edward
Date: 16 Mar 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 56
So glad Bella is active in her own rescue!
Date: 16 Mar 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 56
Unique means of escape.
Date: 14 Mar 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 55
They are sick.Edward and Emmett have to get them out.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 55
Oh wow, I didn;t see that coming. I hope Edward can do some good for all his bad deeds
Date: 08 Mar 2016 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 55
hurry Bella is in big trouble.
Date: 07 Mar 2016 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 55
I hope he can trust Emmett
Date: 07 Mar 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 55
Poor B. Hope they can get to B and R before they get drugged up
Date: 07 Mar 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 55
Building very nicely. A great story.
Date: 05 Mar 2016 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 54
I hope emmett is watching!
Date: 04 Mar 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 54
good chapter. Qucik change in the plots.
Date: 04 Mar 2016 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 54
Christ where's her protection ?
Date: 03 Mar 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 54
I hope Edward can get to her in time. Happy belated birthday
Date: 03 Mar 2016 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 54
Poor Bella. Hope James pays for knocking her out. Caius needs to pay too
Date: 28 Feb 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 53
Poor Edward. He will win her back.
Date: 27 Feb 2016 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 53
So now a new & improved edward will Come ro life bc for the first time Love will be his challenge to conquer
Date: 26 Feb 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 53
hmm wonder how long he'll stay away.....or how long till emmett or james comes a calling.
Date: 25 Feb 2016 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 53
Stong move by Edward.
Date: 22 Feb 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 52
Sad but true about the education BS and EFC.
Date: 22 Feb 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 52
Talk to him Bella. He loves you.