Date: 24 Feb 2023 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Bravo
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2022 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
wanted more lookew for a sequel but sadly there was not one
Author's Response:
Thank you for your lovely reviews i have read each one. I am hoping to do a further outtake/epilogue/future take so please keep the story on your follow or favourite list so you get a notification when i do the update.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2022 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
shocker
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2022 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
it was awesome
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2022 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon
I would love to try it
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2022 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice
I hope you won
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2022 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way
wow
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2022 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence
do not know if I have ever liked a Jacob
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2022 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?
so sexy
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2022 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice
she been the perfect wife and business asset
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2022 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
wow what a start
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2020 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Good job
Date: 05 Feb 2020 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now
Loved it!
Date: 04 Feb 2020 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2019 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood
HAWT HAWT HAWT
Date: 18 Jun 2019 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Good story. Thanks for sharing! :)
Date: 07 Jun 2019 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I wish there was another final chapter, with findid out what the baby was and if Jasper got with Kate like a year or two later down the Rd. But a great story I could not stop reading it right to the last word. Thank you for being such a great writer and read more from you.:-)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind review. I am glad you enjoyed the story. I am hoping to do a further outtake/epilogue/future take so please keep the story on your follow or favourite list so you get a notification when i do the update.
Date: 21 May 2019 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I have truly enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing it with us .
Date: 28 Apr 2019 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Loved this story. Hoping for a future take!!
Date: 25 Apr 2019 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Loved!
Date: 22 Apr 2019 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I would liked to see her have their baby and future
Date: 18 Apr 2019 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I've loved this story, would love to know how they all faired after this, but it was a good ending!
Date: 12 Apr 2019 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I am so sad to see this story end. I loved it so much. It is my sincere hope that once you complete your other stories, you will revisit these wonderful cast of characters for maybe a sequel. I know I would love that immensely!!!
Date: 10 Apr 2019 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Loved it
Date: 09 Apr 2019 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Good story. You could make a sequel. Just saying.
Date: 09 Apr 2019 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Oh!! I will miss these folks! But excited the Busy Bee will be getting updated/completed.
Date: 09 Apr 2019 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I loved this story and this Edward and Bella. I'm sad it is over. I wanted to see them with many babies.
Date: 09 Apr 2019 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I love this story. Thank you for writing and sharing it.
Date: 08 Apr 2019 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I am so sad this is over I loved every chapter thanks so much.
Date: 08 Apr 2019 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I'm sad to see this come to an end but I can't wait till you finish your other work and start your new ones !!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2019 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Thank you for an amazing story. I loved every word of it, beginning to end.
Sherry
Date: 08 Apr 2019 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Holysmokers!! This is absolutely fantastic!!! I love it!! I am very sad that it is over! I would have read them forever! ;)
Date: 07 Apr 2019 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Really good
Sad to see it end
Date: 07 Apr 2019 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I'm sad to see this come to an end but I can't wait till you finish your other work and start your new ones !!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2019 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
:) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2019 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I was so shocked to see that this was complete. I thought we would have at least up to the baby being born. I truly loved this story. Loving both your Edward & Bella, but your whole plot. Thank you for sharing your story.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2019 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
I am so upset! I can’t believe the story is over. That was a great way to finish though. I’m glad Bella took Kate under her wing. Kate deserves to be happy. Thanks for the wonderful story. I will miss the Lion and his Kitten.
Maria
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2019 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
Wonderful chapter. Glad B stood up for Kate. Very classy
ty for writing and sharing
Date: 07 Apr 2019 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
:):)
Date: 16 Feb 2019 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Loved it! Hopefully we get an update soon!
Date: 09 Feb 2019 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Wow, I did not see that coming. It never crossed my mind that Carlisle or Alice would do the other one in. How sad.
Date: 06 Feb 2019 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 06 Feb 2019 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
This is a good story. Please update soon!
Date: 03 Feb 2019 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Love Esme she is so strong and will keep her grandson with her. I think Garett is getting just what he deserves.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2019 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
I love this story because you keep us on our toes.
I think Kate will be a great addition to Bella's team of girls.
I think Esme will take Laurie and go to London.
Date: 01 Feb 2019 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Well that baby is part Cullen so think even though he is black. You are giving away your grandson. Oh my.. talk about a Jerry Springer moment this was awful.
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2019 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
:)
Date: 01 Feb 2019 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Jasper will be a great head. I hate that Edward wants to take the baby away from Esme. She loves him. She needs him.
Date: 01 Feb 2019 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Lol, wonderful chapter..."Your rightful place is an unmarked
grave" ...priceless!
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2019 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
wow, so much treachery. Buh Bye Garrett you coward. Poor Laurie. I'm sure someone worthy will raise her.
Date: 01 Feb 2019 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
This is great!! I am always excited for more!! ;)
Date: 01 Feb 2019 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
Nice
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2019 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Omg love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 26 Jan 2019 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Great story
Date: 24 Jan 2019 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Wow!!!!!! I did not see that happening. Garret has some balls knocking off Carlisle. I hope Edward let's Esme have a little time with Garrett. I hope she at least gets one good hit on him.
Date: 21 Jan 2019 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
I thought it was strange that Garret survived with so little damage and Carlisle and Alice were both dead.
Date: 17 Jan 2019 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Thank you for the update! I absolutely love this story, especially all the twists 😁❤️
Date: 15 Jan 2019 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Well that makes since. Kill Carlise and Alice and blame Jasper. That way he gets what was rightfully his. Or so he thought. After what went down with Aro, William, Jacob and especially Charlie, you would think Garrett would remember that you can not fool Edward. He always knows the answer before he askes the question. Now I think Edward should let Esme claim the right for vengeance and let her eliminate Garrett. And I think Jasper and Kate would make a great couple. She proved her loyalty by telling the truth about the money. Love this story and can't wait for the next update. Thanks, Maria
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2019 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Wow I can’t wait to hear why? Love this story so much.
Date: 15 Jan 2019 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Please update soon. I want to know the reason why he killed them
Date: 14 Jan 2019 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
So Garrett is going to die. I think Edward has a great idea about the baby I think Esme will go where ever the baby goes.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2019 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
I think it was kinda obvious that Garrett was behind Carlisle and Alice's murders.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2019 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Thank you for the update..Well done..Edward is a very smart man..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2019 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Thank you for the update..Well done..Edward is a very smart man..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2019 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Thank you for the update..Well done..Edward is a very smart man..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2019 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
; )
Date: 14 Jan 2019 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 13 Jan 2019 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
see there that was quick. Jasper was the first one to be thought of but the wrong person to carry out the murder. So next the body guard.. sad..
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2019 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Poor Esme
Date: 13 Jan 2019 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
i love the twists and turns in your story.
Date: 13 Jan 2019 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
i love the twists and turns in your story.
Date: 13 Jan 2019 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
I would have NEVER guessed Garrett. I know it makes perfect sense bc he was meant to take over, but goodness!
Date: 13 Jan 2019 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Wow
Date: 13 Jan 2019 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
OMG! Such a twist. Please update soon 🙏
Date: 13 Jan 2019 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Wow another cliffy ending.... Ack. Was not expecting it to be Garrett. Poor Esme & Kate
Date: 13 Jan 2019 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
OMG!!! That's all I've got!! WOW! I really started to think it could have been Jasper! This is really great!! I am excited for more! ;)
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2018 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Hi - just finished my fourth read of your story to date. Absolutely love it. I am not going to tell you how I think the story should go, I personally love to wait until I read what you think and how it will go. I know you like people to tell you how they want it to go etc, but that does 'nt suit me. I love the imagination of writers. Have been reading fan fiction stories for years, ever since Twilight came out and this is by far the best story I have read and love. Maybe its the Edward personality I love so much, but I also like your Bella. She is strong and knows her Edward so well, love love love them both. He is so strong and so "in charge" of everyone and everything he touches.
Please keep writing this story and a follow-up would be lovely also. I wish you lots of happiness and good health and please, keep writing. Regards Pamela
pamhanley7@optusnet.com.au
Date: 11 Dec 2018 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Who cares about Alice, but Carlisle, that is sad.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2018 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Gah! I must wait for updates!!! I’ve been binge-reading all day!!! Love this story!
Date: 24 Nov 2018 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Amazing, I am sad to see Carllisle dead but I know how it goes with written can never force it lol.
Date: 21 Nov 2018 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
I’m so happy to see an update I love this story . Can’t wait to find out what happened to Alice and her dad. But what about the baby
Date: 18 Nov 2018 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
is this an honor and suicide killings? hate to say
#1 did Carlisle kill his daughter then himself...or
#2 did Alice kill Carlisle as he tried to kill her...or
#3 did someone else kill both Carlisle and Alice
are they going to make it look like #1 or frame Jasper or
since it is a mafia world, it was someone, an assassin?
intriguing...
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2018 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Wow, I kept waiting for something to happen at the wedding. Then when Edward got a phone call I thought something happened to Lizzie. Didn't see something happening to Carlisle & Alice. I love this story can't wait to see what happenes.
Date: 08 Nov 2018 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
You ate so naughty to throw on the twists on this chapter. But I loved them.
Date: 06 Nov 2018 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants
That was sweet
Date: 05 Nov 2018 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Wow Hell of a cliffy there at the end. ACK
Date: 05 Nov 2018 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
I absolutely love this story, this chapter, these characters!!! I am excited for more of this!!
I hope life brings you sunshine and rainbows very soon. :)
Date: 05 Nov 2018 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
What a wedding OMG. What happened at home who killed them??? I was so happy to see your update thanks so much
Date: 05 Nov 2018 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 04 Nov 2018 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
I understand you take it where it goes. No need to worry anyone that thinks Mafia can not believe there is never any life and death drama.
Date: 04 Nov 2018 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Wow, I did not see that coming!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2018 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Wow!!! I knew something was going to happen but didn't expect that.
Sherry
Date: 04 Nov 2018 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
again love this story but I was noticing that you mentioned Five Families I thought it was now Four. Just wondering.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2018 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
awesome thank you for updating I have ready this a couple of times now Can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2018 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Loved the wedding, but poor Carlisle
Date: 04 Nov 2018 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Love it
Date: 04 Nov 2018 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Yowza....dead.....
Loved the update
Date: 04 Nov 2018 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Was a fun and interesting chapter. Were the wedding details real? I would love to attend a wedding like that. Oh but what a cliffhanger!hopefully your writers blocknis gone. It is a mafia story and these things happen. Lol 😂