Date: 07 Jun 2019 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I wish there was another final chapter, with findid out what the baby was and if Jasper got with Kate like a year or two later down the Rd. But a great story I could not stop reading it right to the last word. Thank you for being such a great writer and read more from you.:-)
Date: 12 Apr 2019 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I am so sad to see this story end. I loved it so much. It is my sincere hope that once you complete your other stories, you will revisit these wonderful cast of characters for maybe a sequel. I know I would love that immensely!!!
Date: 07 Apr 2019 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed
I was so shocked to see that this was complete. I thought we would have at least up to the baby being born. I truly loved this story. Loving both your Edward & Bella, but your whole plot. Thank you for sharing your story.
Date: 07 Apr 2019 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly
I am so upset! I can’t believe the story is over. That was a great way to finish though. I’m glad Bella took Kate under her wing. Kate deserves to be happy. Thanks for the wonderful story. I will miss the Lion and his Kitten.
Date: 24 Jan 2019 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Wow!!!!!! I did not see that happening. Garret has some balls knocking off Carlisle. I hope Edward let's Esme have a little time with Garrett. I hope she at least gets one good hit on him.
Date: 15 Jan 2019 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall
Well that makes since. Kill Carlise and Alice and blame Jasper. That way he gets what was rightfully his. Or so he thought. After what went down with Aro, William, Jacob and especially Charlie, you would think Garrett would remember that you can not fool Edward. He always knows the answer before he askes the question. Now I think Edward should let Esme claim the right for vengeance and let her eliminate Garrett. And I think Jasper and Kate would make a great couple. She proved her loyalty by telling the truth about the money. Love this story and can't wait for the next update. Thanks, Maria
Date: 18 Dec 2018 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Hi - just finished my fourth read of your story to date. Absolutely love it. I am not going to tell you how I think the story should go, I personally love to wait until I read what you think and how it will go. I know you like people to tell you how they want it to go etc, but that does 'nt suit me. I love the imagination of writers. Have been reading fan fiction stories for years, ever since Twilight came out and this is by far the best story I have read and love. Maybe its the Edward personality I love so much, but I also like your Bella. She is strong and knows her Edward so well, love love love them both. He is so strong and so "in charge" of everyone and everything he touches.
Please keep writing this story and a follow-up would be lovely also. I wish you lots of happiness and good health and please, keep writing. Regards Pamela
Date: 18 Nov 2018 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
is this an honor and suicide killings? hate to say
#1 did Carlisle kill his daughter then himself...or
#2 did Alice kill Carlisle as he tried to kill her...or
#3 did someone else kill both Carlisle and Alice
are they going to make it look like #1 or frame Jasper or
since it is a mafia world, it was someone, an assassin?
Date: 11 Nov 2018 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Wow, I kept waiting for something to happen at the wedding. Then when Edward got a phone call I thought something happened to Lizzie. Didn't see something happening to Carlisle & Alice. I love this story can't wait to see what happenes.
Date: 04 Nov 2018 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!
Was a fun and interesting chapter. Were the wedding details real? I would love to attend a wedding like that. Oh but what a cliffhanger!hopefully your writers blocknis gone. It is a mafia story and these things happen. Lol 😂