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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2023 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

Loved it 

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Date: 07 Jun 2023 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

Loved it 

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Date: 07 Jun 2023 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

Loved it 

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Date: 07 Jun 2023 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!

Loved it 

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Date: 07 Jun 2023 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 27 - a free man

Loved it! Poor Jasper!

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Date: 06 Jun 2023 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 26 a kitten's purr (part 2)

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Date: 06 Jun 2023 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 25 - a kitten's purr pt 1

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Date: 06 Jun 2023 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 24 - secrets

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Date: 06 Jun 2023 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 06 Jun 2023 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat

Loved it 

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Date: 06 Jun 2023 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 21 down to business

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Date: 06 Jun 2023 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 20 Russian Connections

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Date: 06 Jun 2023 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 19 chink in my armour

Loved it! Poor Bella!

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Date: 05 Jun 2023 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 18: a fool in love

Loved it 

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Date: 05 Jun 2023 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon

Loved it 

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Date: 05 Jun 2023 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice

Loved it 

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Date: 05 Jun 2023 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 15 - a little family drama

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Date: 05 Jun 2023 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga

 Loved it 

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Date: 05 Jun 2023 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way

Loved it 

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Date: 05 Jun 2023 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

Loved it 

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Date: 05 Jun 2023 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 11 - New York New York

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Date: 05 Jun 2023 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

Loved it 

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Date: 05 Jun 2023 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

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Date: 04 Jun 2023 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 8 - silly boy pants

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Date: 04 Jun 2023 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

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Date: 04 Jun 2023 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 6 - breathe, kitten

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Date: 04 Jun 2023 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 5 - About time

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Date: 04 Jun 2023 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2023 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2023 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2023 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Loved it 

Reviewer: Mata479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2023 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

Bravo

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2022 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

wanted more lookew for a sequel but sadly there was not one



Author's Response:

Thank you for your lovely reviews i have read each one. I am hoping to do a further outtake/epilogue/future take so please keep the story on your follow or favourite list so you get a notification when i do the update. 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2022 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bitter!

shocker

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2022 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 23

it was awesome

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2022 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon

I would love to try it

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2022 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Ah, Venice

I hope you won

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2022 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 13 - no trucking way

wow

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2022 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

do not know if I have ever liked a Jacob

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2022 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 9 - what else?

so sexy

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2022 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

she been the perfect wife and business asset

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2022 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 4

lovely

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2022 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

wow what a start

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2020 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

Good job

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2020 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Loved it! 

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2020 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Loved it!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2019 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

HAWT HAWT HAWT

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2019 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

Good story. Thanks for sharing! :)

Reviewer: susieq3210 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

I wish there was another final chapter, with findid out what the baby was and if Jasper got with Kate like a year or two later down the Rd.  But a great story I could not stop reading it right to the last word.  Thank you for being such a great writer and read more from you.:-)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind review. I am glad you enjoyed the story. I am hoping to do a further outtake/epilogue/future take so please keep the story on your follow or favourite list so you get a notification when i do the update. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2019 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

I have truly enjoyed reading this story.  Thank you for sharing it with us . 

Reviewer: Momma Z Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2019 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

Loved this story.  Hoping for a future take!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2019 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

Loved!

Reviewer: chritbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2019 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

I would liked to see her have their baby and future 

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2019 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

I've loved this story, would love to know how they all faired after this, but it was a good ending!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2019 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

I am so sad to see this story end.  I loved it so much.  It is my sincere hope that once you complete your other stories, you will revisit these wonderful cast of characters for maybe a sequel.  I know I would love that immensely!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2019 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

Loved it

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2019 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

Good story. You could make a sequel. Just saying.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2019 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

Oh!! I will miss these folks! But excited the Busy Bee will be getting updated/completed.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2019 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

I loved this story and this Edward and Bella. I'm sad it is over. I wanted to see them with many babies.

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2019 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

I love this story. Thank you for writing and sharing it. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2019 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

I am so sad this is over I loved every chapter thanks so much.

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2019 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

I'm sad to see this come to an end but I can't wait till you finish your other work and start your new ones !!!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2019 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

Thank you for an amazing story. I loved every word of it, beginning to end.

Sherry

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2019 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

Holysmokers!! This is absolutely fantastic!!! I love it!! I am very sad that it is over! I would have read them forever! ;)

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

Really good
Sad to see it end

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

I'm sad to see this come to an end but I can't wait till you finish your other work and start your new ones !!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

I was so shocked to see that this was complete. I thought we would have at least up to the baby being born.  I truly loved this story. Loving both your Edward & Bella, but your whole plot. Thank you for sharing your story.

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

I am so upset! I can’t believe the story is over. That was a great way to finish though. I’m glad Bella took Kate under her wing. Kate deserves to be happy. Thanks for the wonderful story. I will miss the Lion and his Kitten.

Maria

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

Wonderful chapter.  Glad B stood up for Kate.  Very classy 

ty for writing and sharing

ty

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 31 Business Completed

:):)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2019 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

Loved it! Hopefully we get an update soon! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2019 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

Wow, I did not see that coming.  It never crossed my mind that Carlisle or Alice would do the other one in. How sad. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2019 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: Bellnedward0 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2019 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

This is a good story. Please update soon!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2019 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

Love Esme she is so strong and will keep her grandson with her.  I think Garett is getting just what he deserves.  

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2019 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

I love this story because you keep us on our toes.

I think Kate will be a great addition to Bella's team of girls.

I think Esme will take Laurie and go to London.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2019 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

Well that baby is part Cullen so think even though he is black. You are giving away your grandson.  Oh my.. talk about a Jerry Springer moment this was awful.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2019 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2019 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

Jasper will be a great head. I hate that Edward wants to take the baby away from Esme. She loves him. She needs him.

Reviewer: born joyfull Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2019 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

Lol, wonderful chapter..."Your rightful place is an unmarked 

grave" ...priceless!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2019 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

wow, so much treachery.  Buh Bye Garrett you coward.  Poor Laurie.  I'm sure someone worthy will raise her.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2019 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

This is great!! I am always excited for more!! ;)

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2019 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 30: pride & folly

Nice

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2019 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

Omg love your story can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: jmullinax Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2019 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

Great story 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2019 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

Wow!!!!!! I did not see that happening.  Garret has some balls knocking off Carlisle.  I hope Edward let's Esme have a little time with Garrett.  I hope she at least gets one good hit on him. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2019 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

I thought it was strange that Garret survived with so little damage and Carlisle and Alice were both dead.

Reviewer: Crazyxreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2019 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

Thank you for the update! I absolutely love this story, especially all the twists 😁❤️

Reviewer: noway Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

Well that makes since. Kill Carlise and Alice and blame Jasper. That way he gets what was rightfully his. Or so he thought. After what went down with Aro, William, Jacob and especially Charlie, you would think Garrett would remember that you can not fool Edward. He always knows the answer before he askes the question. Now I think Edward should let Esme claim the right for vengeance and let her eliminate Garrett. And I think Jasper and Kate would make a great couple. She proved her loyalty by telling the truth about the money. Love this story and can't wait for the next update. Thanks, Maria

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

Wow I can’t wait to hear why?  Love this story so much.

Reviewer: chritbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

Please update soon. I want to know the reason why he killed them 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

So Garrett is going to die.  I think Edward has a great idea about the baby I think Esme will go where ever the baby goes.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

I think it was kinda obvious that Garrett was behind Carlisle and Alice's murders. 

Sherry

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

Thank you for the update..Well done..Edward  is a very smart man..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

Thank you for the update..Well done..Edward  is a very smart man..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

Thank you for the update..Well done..Edward  is a very smart man..until you post again

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

; )

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2019 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 29 pride goeth before the fall

see there that was quick. Jasper was the first one to be thought of but the wrong person to carry out the murder. So next the body guard.. sad..

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