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Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

FANTASTIC!!! I love this!! :)

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2016 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

Nice

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2016 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

My favorite  is " Punk. Maybe I should of shot him." Can't  wait for more!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

This story miss good.  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2016 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

OMG I love your story!!! 😍 Now I'm impatiently waiting for your next update 😥😁

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Love  your story can not wait for more ! Great writing .

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

I really love this story. Sweet Temptations is one of my most favorite stories, but this one is quickly becoming a favorite too. It's definitly a little different. My favorite line in this chapter is the same as yours. ;)  Jacob Black is going to be a problem, isn't he? I can't wait for another update.  Thanks, Maria 

Reviewer: KarenT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2016 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

love love LOVE this story!! please continue!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Love this story 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

well thanks

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

That's a great line for a Great man....excellent Don!

Reviewer: Hina-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Love it. Update soon!;-)

Reviewer: Hina-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Love it. Update fast! ;-)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Damn... he's ruthless and loving. He's scary as fuck, yet gentle as a kitten with her. He's gonna have Bella even more a panting mess before he beds her at home.

I am relived he researched her and didn't make a rash decision to marry her; that he knew all along what he was doing. Good ridance Tanya.

Sherry

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon please!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Damn... I think Bella may be in trouble, in a good way, lol.

Sherry

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Love it so far

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

I loved this first chapter. Edward is a badass right out of hell.

Sherry

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

I love that line
My fave line was well you might not have wanted him but he wanted in your pussy bad, trust me. Punk. Maybe I should’ve shot him."
Great work

Reviewer: shortstuff628 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Can't wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Great chapter

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2016 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Yep best line in that chapter look forward to next update x

Reviewer: warsawbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Loved oh kitten I never missed!!!! Thanks for the update I am so ino this story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

:) 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

That's hot

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

I can't wait for more! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

This is fantastic!! I love it!!! I am dying for more!!! :)

Reviewer: chrisbraddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

I Love this Edward!  Wow he killed Tonya ha ha I'm happy does that make me a bad person LOL!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

He is open and honest with her .  He knows how to treat her right.  How could Jacob do that to Bella and Charlie I dont see him living much longer.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

OMG CANT WAIT

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Sounds like Jacob has a kick to the balls coming.  Jerk.   Glad E is answering questions for her.   Thought maybe his ex died by a rival or something.  Elizabeth seems ok though.  Glad E took good care of her.

Reviewer: clozano Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

Addicted to this story can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2016 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 3 powerful and dangerous

He is a deliciously naughty man isn't he? Lovin what you have going so far, can't wait for more

Reviewer: Terass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

I'm enjoying this new story, I hope Bella finds her feet soon, but I don't think Aro will just go away. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

No questions really the mother of Elizabeth answered. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Well marriage is better than killing her to settle the loss. Sigh. Where is his wonderful wife the mother of this child? I guess we find out later.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Glad that Elizabeth knows what's going on.  I'm assuming B is a virgin then and will remain until the wedding???  Of course he could do everything but that. LOL.  Hope he'll take the time to explain things to her more.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Loving it so far!

Reviewer: Hina-chan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Beautiful story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Really good story look forward to next update x

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

He moves fast. He knew what he wanted & he got it.

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Real good

Reviewer: warsawbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

its been a while since a fic knocked me off my feet and this one has. I love this Edward he is very hot!!! I cant wait to read more.     

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

     Seems Bella has hit the jackpot!  Edward is one sexy man and his little girl is adorable.  Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

He has been planing this for some time.  Bella hit the lotery love it

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

can't wait to read more of this

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

oh this is a great story can't wait to see what happens next.  soon I hope :)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

I can't wait for more! How often do you update? Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: chrisbraddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

I am so hooked on this story I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: Christofine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Wow - really well written and loving it already ! More, more, more !

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Came over from FFN to read this here since the other site is down. I enjoyed the chapter. Thank you.

Reviewer: brandofcullencrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Oh wow I love this story!!

Reviewer: SilverNova3082 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Keep going love the story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

:) 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

I can't wait for more!! ;)

Reviewer: kessafan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

We're no longer in Kansas, hey Toto?  hehehe 

I can't wait to see what Mr Boss Man has in store for meek little Bella.  I think it's going to be fun watching him bring out her stronger side... well, I hope she has a stronger side.  :-)

Till next chapter...

Sandy

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

I'm already looking forward to sharing this story with my hubby once it's complete.

Reviewer: SilverNova3082 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Love this story

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

He sure knows how to shock them all lol.  Love it and cant wait for more.

Reviewer: Kaylani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Promising start, as long as there is no cheating I'm sure I'm going to love it. :)

But I have two questions:
- How old is Edward?
- What happened to Elizabeth's mother?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Glad Jake is already off the table for Bella.  You had me worried about a triangle of sorts.

 

Cant wait to see where you go with this and Ms Buzy Bee

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Great opening chap. It was tense and exciting. Just great all around.

Can't wait til next chap.
E/k

Reviewer: clozano Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Loved it..... Can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

I love this and I am so excited for more!! :)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

I loved this first chapter and am extremely excited for more. 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

This is going to be a great story.  What's the age difference between Bella and Edward I hope there's a good age difference between them

Reviewer: brandofcullencrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Oh this is good love it can't wait to see what's to come

Reviewer: chrisbraddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Wow!!!!  Edward is not to be messed with! Can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Nice

Reviewer: sjdavis84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Love it!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

This is fab.  Can't wait to read more.  Very curious as to who his child's mother is and where she is.  Starting out to be a grat love story.  Bella seems polite but I do hope she has a backboard be.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

I love Mobward. I must say, I kind of thought he was going to shoot Aro. Well, it was only the 1st chapter... ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Looking forward to reading more 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Not baad at all!  I. Don't normally read mob stories, but this one sounds interesting.  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

I'm loving it. Keep it coming 

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