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Reviewer: justginger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2016 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

you have me sqealing like a fan girl with each chapter that I read!!!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2016 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 21

Thanks!!

Reviewer: justginger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2016 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

I am really enjoying reading this story again - it has always been one of my favs.

 

Thanks for continuing with it, RHM.

 

Michele

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2016 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh good about the viagra

i had the same thought 

lit was weird

thanks

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2016 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 20

Hot damn...sore pussy is a happy one is soo true

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 20

Spanish Fly?????????
What other enhancement drugs are there?
Bella went out on a limb when she posed that question to her daddy. But, it was warranted.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

She makes a good point about trust. I'm glad he agreed with her and condeeded the point.  

Just after Carlisle's note to Edward,  you use the word "Charlie" where I believe you mean "Carlisle". Am I right?



Author's Response:

no sweets charlie is his doorman.....

 

Reviewer: Useablesub Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

Please update again soon! I love this story I'm so happy you reposted it.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 20

Oooh lala!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 20

good

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2016 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 20

d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;

Reviewer: mrsjasperhale88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loving the story and can't wait to see what happens next.

 

Reviewer: RoseE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2016 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 19

*gasp* naughty naughty, little miss. Someone's in trouble...

Can't wait to see what he does;)

Thank you. ~RoseE. x

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 19

I wouldnt want to wear it either.   LOL.  Great first blow job though

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

lol for her surprising him

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 17

Glad he is doing rules but not sure if I agree with her being punished for something in the past.  Ah well....if she doesn't care why should I.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 16

Well glad he got her away from James, but he should have told the salesperson to back off so B wouldn't have felt uncomfortable.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 15

Well at least they are letting him watch so she is protected.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2016 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

She needs a release before he puts it on her.

Reviewer: lmc123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 19

Have read the first version of this 50 times... that's not an exaggeration... love this story, so sweet, yet so hot. This new take is even better. Thank you x x

Reviewer: 1tinac Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 19

Really am enjoying the rewrite. Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 19

Thanks!

Reviewer: Kellans girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love this story so far. There is just something about these stories that makes my heart ache. I've felt the need for something like this for years now. Sadly I live in Denmark and my wish for it is in English since somehow that's what gives a kick. 

So sad.

but I can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

Someone is wanting a spanking.

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

I love that he sucks her milk right out of her. That's my favorite part, so far.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 19

I know daddy doesn't have to explain anything, but they are still relatively new to this lifestyle together. So I think Edward needs to be very succinct in his reasoning behind the chastity belt.
After all, his little girl responded very well to her lesson.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 19

😋😋😋😋

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 19

good

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 19

Oh boy that was hot now will she be good and do what daddy tells her or fight him and get a spanking

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 19

She did so good. I know Edward is proud.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 18

I like how he's considerate of her being inexperienced.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 18

Thanks!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 18

Glad you are bacK!  I love your stories.  

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 18

good

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 18

She is very attentive student. Learning very quickly what her daddy desires from her.

Reviewer: sjdavis84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 18

That was hot! I loved it! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 18

oh you tease! leaving us here just before she takes him in her mouth....bad girl! see you next time!

Reviewer: dpennell007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 18

Dang. That just made me shiver.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 18

LOVE IT... The waiting kills me but its so worth it when I see your post😛😛😛😛

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2016 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 17

Bella is one lucky girl. 

Reviewer: vernette Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 17

Thank you for the update! I was wondering if you still have the old version of this story

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 17

Thanks!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 17

oh, yes now it's getting good... Yes Daddy

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh boy, what's he got in store for her now?  Sir Daddy James, well it should go without saying, but what a Pig.... glad our girl never allowed him to touch her before meeting Edward. 

 

Really loving the rewrite, and the story in general.  Sorry I've had less time for reading and reviewing, but working on doing better.  Luv and support ya! 

Glad to see you moving foward, I understand moving forward can be challenging, you are inspiring to those around you too!  Just so you know!  Kathy

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 17

She isn't going to like what comes next....

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 17

good

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

So many infractions have been incurred by Isabella's actions already. But can he rightfully punish her when they had yet to discuss the their limits and ground rules of their arrangement?

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 17

Love your story. Can not wait for more.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh yes I think this will work out splendidly now what's next

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh wow lots of rules!

I don't  know about the choosing friends one. Lol

and that belt! 

 

Thank yiu 

 

Reviewer: jagbatty Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 17

loved it

Author's Response:

aww thanks!!

 

Reviewer: robin5589 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love all of your fics and think I've read all of them. I read this the first time it was posted and couldn't resist reading it again after you stated there will be some changes. One of my all time favotite fics is Shhhh. I have read it several times and have your blog bookmarked. I'm wondering if you will delete it after you publish the new version?? Please don't or if you do will you let us know or possibly let us download it in pdf form. As I said it is one of my faves and a go to story when I can't find anything new. I will buy the publshed version as well. You are extremely talented and I wish you the best of luck with it being published.



Author's Response:

awww thank you so much!!!

I have no intention of deleting shhh.... from my blog because the new Shhh....is so different because there are too many twilight references in there that I cannot use for the published version. I promise you though it will still be the same characters and the love they have for each other will still be the same! That I am not going to lose...but if you read the three chapters I have posted here you will see the huge difference in the two stories... If you are on facebook look me up under andrea bunting I have a group on there that has all my stories available to download off the files in my private group...add me and I will add you to the group...or i need an email addy to send you a copy of the pdf version of shhh....I encourage everyone to share it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 17

:D  LOVE!



Author's Response:

muah!!!!!

 thank u!

 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 17

Love this story

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 17

Is this what Daddys usually do? Put their little in a chastity belt? It looks like she is agreeable with all his requirements. Good for them...



Author's Response:

He will be explaining that soon enough! lol

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

:)

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 17

Edward... Daddy, is catching on fast.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

:)!!!!!

Reviewer: Lavender_Lillly Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 17

I'm loving the story so far and I really can't wait to read more!! 

Reviewer: LoveShaSha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 16

Whew...are you back yet. Lol. I'm feeling like Bella here lol



Author's Response:

I am back! i am working on it!! lol....

 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved this story the first time and this new version is even better. Thank you XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: Tayjj44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2016 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 16

It's be awhile since I've read your first version but In this version of your story Edward seems  more eager to be angry and punish Bella in the name of teaching her. Doesn't some fun or nurturing experience for her.  It's seem more D/s relationship. Curious to see if he levels out or just get more harsh.  Thanks for the update. 



Author's Response:

I disagree he hadn't punished her at all. He hasn't established any thing yet.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2016 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

Good update

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2016 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 16

Inlike these revisions cant wait to see what he buys

Reviewer: BlackDragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 11

I love it when a vampire purrs. I bet it would sound SEXY



Author's Response:

OMG I know i totally agree just gah!!!

 

 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 16

ugh I felt scummy even reading the words about what James did and how he was!  I love that Edward pulled Bella out of there and think most of the girls in the class felt the same way.  OOOH is Bella going to get it for speaking up to the sales girl and not waiting for Edward to do it....

Have a GREAT time at Kink Fest and report back to the group how it was! I can't wait to hear!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 16

Thank goodness he pulled her away from that demonstration. That didn't even sound like acceptable newbie sub training.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved this newest chapter to see Edward embracing his roll as a daddy is great . So happy that your reposting your writing looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 16

I loved it wow I am so happy Edward pulled Bella out of there that guy was crazy now they did a little dress shopping but what will Edward buy at the toy shop hmmmmm

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

Pushing Daddy's authority buttons will get you in trouble Isabella.
Garrett better get a handle on Sir Daddy James. Now Edward has to watch his back. James is going to want retribution for the interruption of his class. The other Daddy's need to be informed as well. Especially those that sent collard Littles.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 16

good

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 16

Thanks!

Reviewer: jagbatty Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 16

Love this story thank you for reposting your stories

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 16

Ummm... Possessive Edward. Come boss me around, baby. Monkey, I want you to have the best time at kinkfest & take lots of pictures for us to see.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 15

I don't like the sound of the instructor, Edward.

Reviewer: RoseE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

Cute outfits!

Ugh, that James was horrid and creepy. Gross! Garrett should've known better. Hope James doesn't cause problems. 

I can't believe Bella was being so naughty, talking back and giving attitude! Shocked! Daddy Edward will be saying something about that, I'll bet;)

Love it! Thank you. ~RoseE. x

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

This class is creepy, especially since it is lead by James. 

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