Date: 27 Apr 2016 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 36
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 27 Apr 2016 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 35
Oh please don't let James be dead he has to find his sister. I don't want Garrett dead either but James has to live. I don't review as often as I should and I apologize for that. Your stories are amazing and thought provoking and jump right off the page at me. This story is so different then anything else out right now. Thank you for sharing another one of your masterpieces with us .
Date: 27 Apr 2016 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 36
Tanya never had a chance and both brothers are monsters just different but they also care about Bella
Date: 27 Apr 2016 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 34
Dont mess with daddy wow
Date: 27 Apr 2016 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 36
OHSWEETBABYRAYS!!! This is so fantastic!! Edward is the psychotic one!?!WOW! ;)
Date: 27 Apr 2016 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 35
OMG!! Please let Bella be dreaming. I was liking James for the first time ever. It can't be Aro since he is in a wheelchair. Oh you are so good can't wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 35
Is it aro? I really want this to be a bad dream.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 34
Carlisle is a bit scary!
Date: 27 Apr 2016 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 35
OMG! What just happened? Love this so much. LOVE YA
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 35
OMG what just happen? Can't wait for the next chapter. You got me hooked on this story!! Love it t so much!
Date: 27 Apr 2016 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 35
Nooooo! I'm so upset you killed off James. One of the few stories that he is actually nice to Bella & you kill him off. Before he can meet Victoria. Oh well, I guess you have a good reason. Please update fast. Thanks, Maria
Date: 27 Apr 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 35
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 35
Holy hell Cristina!!!! You can't leave us hanging there.
I think Bella has mixed feelings toward Edward. She doesn't know how to feel about him. She's alive because of him, he is trying to protect her from his brother. He had to kill her name off, in order to give her life. I don't blame Edward wanting to keep Anthony away from her.
The thought of Victoria being James's sister never crossed my mind.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2016 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 34
Damn, I'm loving Daddy C.
Sherry
Date: 27 Apr 2016 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 35
OH HOLY SHIT!!! OMG!!! WHO THE FECK IS IT? OMG!!! Carlisle sent someone to take care of the issue? OMG!! I neeeeed to know!!!
I love this!! :)
Date: 27 Apr 2016 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 35
Great chapters.
Date: 27 Apr 2016 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 35
I hate cliff hangers, but, love this story
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 33
I'm glad Edward is trying to show Bella she has some freedoms by allowing her outside without guard. Spending time with Sofia should take her mind off things for a while. Anthony knows Bella isn't comfortable around him, yet he still pushes that issue. I liked Sofia telling him he couldn't kiss Bella because she was Edward's wife. 'Out of the mouth of babes.' I hope Rosalie can find the infomation she needs to prove Aro helped frame Carlisle. Interesting theory about Heidi. Can't blame Edward for having harsh feelings toward Anthony when he continues to bring Bella up like that. I agree with Rosalie, 'Let them kill each other.' lol
Sherry
Date: 26 Apr 2016 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 33
Good chapter.
Date: 26 Apr 2016 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 33
LOVE IT! THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Date: 26 Apr 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 33
So Aro set up Carlisle...but he is still guilty of a thousand other things...i am sure...hm..
Anthony...your anger has ruined your life...
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 33
Glad his giving her some privacy another great chapter
Date: 26 Apr 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 33
The freedom is helping Bella some now she is still comfused thou. I am so glad for Anthony maybe he wont be such a dick anymore
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 33
Edward was trying to prove to her that she does have some freedoms. I actually felt a little bad for anthony.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 33
Got to love Sofia....boys are stupid!
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 33
OMG!! LMAO!!! I LOVE THIS SO SO MUCH!!!! :) DYING FOR MORE!!! :D
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 33
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 32
What the hell is he thinking is he really that stupid? She should just stand up and walk out and keep walking!! I don't like Edward....this is a first for me....I don't know how to handle this....Edward what the hell?your breaking my heart....
Date: 25 Apr 2016 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 32
Edward is hearing what is true. I love this story. THANK YOU
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 32
I feel bad for them both, no matter what she'll always be a prisoner, but at least Edward tried to show her some freedom. Though she's right, it was a slap in the face. She'll never be able to go about freely and being in public only cemented it for her.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 32
Everyday when i see an update i have to smile! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 32
Another great chapter. Hope Bella and Edaward find an understanding so they can be together he is trying his best.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 32
She is so damaged
Date: 25 Apr 2016 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 32
I have no idea how this will every turn around so that any of them can be happy.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 32
Oh my. She will never be happy. This makes me so sad. :(
I love this story!! I can't wait for the next update!! :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 31
Well....it appears both brothers love her...this would make a kick ass poly fiction if you went that way....I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 24 Apr 2016 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 31
Esme is right ! A whole family of idiots !
Date: 24 Apr 2016 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 24 Apr 2016 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 31
OMG! Dying for more!! :)
Date: 24 Apr 2016 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 31
Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 31
I can't wait to see what Esme's plan is. Thank you for another great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2016 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 31
smacks anthony upside his big fat head!
ugh!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2016 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 31
I love that esme has no problem with slapping their faces!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2016 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 31
I really hate Anthony. He's one of those character that you love to hate. He's freaking crazy. One minute he's "What did I do?" then the next he's saying he accepts his part in what has been done. I think Anthony is more guilty than Edward. Anthony done a lot of things to Bella behind Edward's back only for him to find out later. So, I think Anthony's shoulders should bare more responsibility. But what's done is done, nothing much can change it.
Sherry
Date: 24 Apr 2016 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 31
Dont mess with Esme.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
Don't cross mama Cullen!
Great chapter!
Date: 23 Apr 2016 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 30
Glad to see that she has a support in Esme. I wonder what Rose think of all of that and if she will support Bella too. I totally understand the zombie state of Bella, how could she feel emotions after all of what happened to her. Excellent chapter, thank you.
Date: 23 Apr 2016 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 30
I'm happy that Esme is so nice, and is there for Bella. LOVE YA
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 30
Your my favorite author and have read all your stories. Your a great story teller and love all your stories. This one is one of your best work. Love love it so much. Thank you for sharing your stories.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 30
Can I just say I love Esme!
Date: 23 Apr 2016 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 30
I am so happy that she has Esme! I think she may just kick the shit out of her boys! :P I love this!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh boy.....Esme is about to open a bigger can of whoop-ass on her twins!!! Can't wait to see who is standing when the dust settles!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 30
I am so not one to review...I am sure you can see that...I usually reserve my reviews for the end...
but you are driving me mad..crazy mad...
my head is spinning around faster than linda blairs on that bed of hers...
ARGH!
Date: 23 Apr 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 30
Best chapter so far. I hate that Edward allows Anthony to touch and abuse Bella. Time after time. How is he even allowed around her if Edward is the so called "Boss" of the family, can he not control his own brother. In one chapter Esme has redeemed this family. This is why I kept reading. I am such a fan of your stories, I just knew you would pull threw with this one.
Date: 23 Apr 2016 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 30
Dont mess with Esme I love when she said she brought them into this world she will take them out go momma lol
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 30
Esme is going to be the one to help her through this crazy life she has now!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 30
I love Esme, but what can she do? What's done is done. Nothing can be undone.
Sherry
Date: 23 Apr 2016 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2016 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 30
go momma cullen you rock
Date: 23 Apr 2016 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 30
Good chapter.
Date: 23 Apr 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 30
Esme is small but mightly.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 29
Aro's days are numbered. I kinda thought he may have had something to do with Carlisle's downfall.
I wondered what happened after Anthony asked Bella not leave him alone in his room. I'd like to see how Edward reacted to that scene.
Poor Bella... she's so broken. Isabella is dead and gone, and now Marie has been born. I'm curious if she was upset from being forced to marry Edward or if someone had told her about Charlie, or if it was a combination of both.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2016 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oh Charile, you broke my heart. Poor Renee, how is she gonna deal with the guilt of knowing the last thing she said to him was she hated him.
Sherry
Date: 22 Apr 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 29
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 29
Poor Bella so sad.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 22 Apr 2016 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 29
Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 29
I wonder if anything will keep his distance now?
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 29
I have never read a more lost Bella in any story before. I can't see a HEA for this one. I really wanted to believe Edward was a good guy, but, he has proven otherwise. You have gotten quite a reaction to this story, especially the comments on Facebook?
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 28
That was a tough chapter. I was thinking he would end it but then i started thinking he wasn't going to but then BAM!
Date: 21 Apr 2016 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 27
I like the story but after this chapter, I think I'm going to wait until the story gets a little further along before coming back to it. I'm not feeling Bella fooling around with Anthony. I know Edward isn't entirely innocent in the scheme of things, but maybe he should distance himself from Bella for a little bit after what happened.
Date: 21 Apr 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 28
It's very sad. I don't know what to think of all of that anymore. It seems that death is the only solution for Charlie, as well as for Bella now. If only Edward and Anthony could die too. LOLLLLL ! Great fic, thank you.
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 28
Omg! I knew it he ahhh no poberino! :(
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 26
So was the three of them a dream of his or did it really happen?
Date: 21 Apr 2016 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 28
HOLY SH*T!! I believe I have said this before! WOW! :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
This chapter made me cry. Big fat tears
Date: 21 Apr 2016 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow makes me want to cry so sad
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 27
Cette fiction me rend triste!
Qu'est - ce que cela va finir?
Je pense que je vais arrêter de lire parce que la vie est pas drôle et je lis pour amuser de ne pas me ruiner le moral.
Il est tout de même une bonne fiction mais pas pour moi.
Bisous
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2016 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 27
ok you are an amazing talented writer, who has me hooked on this story I just want to keep reading more and have to wait each day after I get home from work to read an update. Thank you so much for being so creative and writing this amazing story
Date: 21 Apr 2016 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 27
What a mess she is so confused
Date: 21 Apr 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 27
OHFORTHELOVEOFCHEESENCRACKERS!!! They are giving me whiplash!! lol I love them but I am hoping she does choose one! ;)