Date: 18 Apr 2016 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
Aww, come on, when does Jane get her ass handed to her? Thay cannot leave yet!
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 23
I knew it. I just hope she agrees to it. Of course its not like she has much choice.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow! This is amazing story, you are an AWESOME writer!! I cannot wait to read more!!! So excited
Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
Finally Edward made it in time!
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2016 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thank goodness he made it in time!!
Date: 17 Apr 2016 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 22
Yessss, she is a fighter after all, I like that. Great chapter, thank you.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
Jane is going to die for that shit but so is the ass hole that is chasing her. I am so happy Edward is there
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 22
He's there just as she need him.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 21
So what does Edward have planned. I bet its to have people believe that Alice is Bella. I still think he's going to marry Bella.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2016 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
Damn, what a nightmare Bella was woken to.
Sherry
Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 22
FINALLY! WHAT TOOK HIM SO LONG? STILL LOVE YA
Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
Jane just sealed her fate..
Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
OMG I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE...
Date: 17 Apr 2016 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
Yea! Edward to the rescue!! I am obsessed with this story. LOVE IT!!!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
Talk about timing. I think the first part of guarding someone is to stay with them. And Jane should be getting hers soon. I've kind of lost track of the timeline here, but I don't really want to know how many weeks Edward left her there after he found out where she was.
Good chapter had me on the edge of my seat and snapping at my husband who interrupted me to ask about dinner...who wants to eat?
Date: 17 Apr 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 22
OHMYMOTHAEFFINFECKITYFECK!!! You had me freaking out!!! OMG! Edward is there to 'save' her!! I thing stimky breath man is about to die and I hope the same for Jane! Evil beast! >:( I can't wait for the next update!! :)
Date: 17 Apr 2016 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
Ohh, Jane is in deep shit with this one! I cannot wait to see (or read about) her face! Please update soon. You cannot leave me hanging on this! Dying, I am dying here!
Date: 17 Apr 2016 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
oh good Edward s back I hope he takes her from there and marries her instead of Hedi
Date: 16 Apr 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
Looking forward to reading what comes next!
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is one hell of a start. I'll reading on later.
Sherry
Date: 16 Apr 2016 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
Go get her Edward.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 21
Edward has finally pulled his head out of his ass, LOVE IT! His plan is brilliant. I hope he marries Bella and kills heidi. Love this so much, I can't wait for the next chapter. LOVE YA
Date: 16 Apr 2016 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
Looks like we r hearing wedding bells soon.
Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 21
I love this!!! I am really happy that Edward beat Anthony unconscious!! He had that sh*t coming for a long time! ;) lol
Date: 16 Apr 2016 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
I think Anthony needed his ass kicked so good but is he going to figure out why Edward did it?
Date: 16 Apr 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
Poor Alice. The feds should have protected her
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2016 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh my goodness are they going to use it to scare isabella into doing what they want?
Date: 15 Apr 2016 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 15 Apr 2016 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
He plans on making Bella disapear by using Alices body to cover it up. When is he going to get to Bella.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
I don't understand why Bella is there. I thoght the point of being ea a brothel was to be a prostitute? Why does she have Garrett guarding her as well? I'm confused, sorry. I LOVE all of your stories so much, you're such a talented writer that you bring such emotion to the reader. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 20
OMG!!! I LOVE THIS!! :D
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2016 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hmm explains so much of why Anthony is the way he is. Kate really broke him.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
This story is kind of... dark? But I absolutely love it!
Date: 14 Apr 2016 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 19
Good chapter, so Victoria is Irena...does James know?
Date: 14 Apr 2016 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
It is interesting the Anthony would leave her there but make Garrett stay with her
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
I wonder if Edward helped her or maybe carlisle? I'm so glad garrett is decent!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2016 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 18
At least garrett is staying with her so hopefully unless someone one likes to be watched she should be somewhat ok.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2016 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank goodness Bella was okay. My stomach was in knots thinking of how horrible that she was left in that place. I keep wondering how this might turn out...can it be a HEA?
Date: 14 Apr 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
I am so happy they are being good to her as good as they can be. When is Edward coming for her he has to
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2016 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 19
I think Carlisle was the one that helped Victoria. I still think Edward is going to come and get Bella out of this place.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 19
WOW! I love this story! :)
Date: 14 Apr 2016 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
I love this story so dam much.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2016 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
I drop everything for these updates, just saying!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
Good chapter.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
Everytime Bella says "please" Anthony gets really angry at her.. Is It some kind of trigger for him? Maybe his wife said it to him before he shot her?..
I still prefer a Bella/Anthony pairing. Edward is just a coward, Anthony is trying to be a robort and not feel a thing...
I love all the reviews, people are so hooked on this story!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 18
What are they going to do now? Take her out of the brothel and put her back in once that monster is clear of the charges? Maybe Edward can come to the rescue again. I would like to see more forward movement. Your writing is incredible and if your effect is to addict people it has worked. If your Edward is supposed to be in control, then why is he letting the number one missing person in the state go to ? Jame's sister was an unknown so the situation was different. HE can do whatever he wants. She can get plastic surgery and they can send her out of the country where she could be safe. Isn't he also a hypocrite saying Bella's father should want her dead when Edward himself refuses to kill her but willingly, with a calm, controlled reaction, gives her to that thing so she can train to become a prostitute? Does he enjoy joking with his niece and planning his wedding while an innocent victim is prepped and trained to be a whore? This family should all be proud of themselves.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
Where is Edward?
Date: 13 Apr 2016 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
In the beginning of this chapter, Edward said he knew what Anthony was going to do with Bella. Anthony was going to leave her with Victoria. Why so pale now? I don't understand, he said goodbye forever. Also has it not been a week now since Hiedi is now there?
Date: 13 Apr 2016 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
I HATE ANTHONY. I HATE EDWARD MORE FOR LEAVING HER. EDWARD SAID HE WOULD PROTECT HER. EDWARD IS A FUCKING ASSHOLE!!!! LOVE YA
Date: 13 Apr 2016 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 18
This story makes me cry. Can't edward the dom do something about her like take her as his mistress.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
How awful for Bella.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMG Edward needs to get to her before anything worse can happen to her please
Date: 13 Apr 2016 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 18
Every now and then I think she might be getting to Anthony but he can turn it off as quickly as it start to hit him. I am interested to learn more about Anthony's back story.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
OH-MY-MOTHA-EFFIN-EFFITY-EFF!!!!
I love this! ;)
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2016 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
This story is giving me anxiety, big time. Why does Bella have to suffer?? Her only sin is having Charlie as a father!! I thought I liked Edward until he took advantage of Bella too.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
This story is giving me so much anxiety. Like its so well written but I want there to be forward movement. I keep wondering why would Anthony or any of them even do this? I feel I need to take a couple days away from this story so I can come back and see multiple chapters. This one a day thing is killing me.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yeesh! Every chapter I'm hoping for some relief from the intensity but it only builds....this is an amazing story from an incredibly talented writer.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
How could he leave her
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
So victoria is not a good person i'm figuring from edward's reaction. I'm going out on limb and guessing she runs the whore house. Edward is so much more ruthless than i ever imagined him to be.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
Heidi sounds lovely!!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
Ok, I was cutting Edward some slack.....but not I think he is an incredible asshole for just leaving her like that. He shouldn't make promises as he obviously doesn't know how to keep them. He is wiling to let Bella die or worse knowing she is inncoent and should have never been involved in this mess so to hell with him!!
I love that your writing can make me feel such strong emotions and I can't wait for the update as this is like a train wreak you can't stop watching. (;
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
I still think Edward should marry Isabella, but what would Anthony do if he did that.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love this story! It is my most favorite addiction right now! Thank you for updating everyday! Are you posting the translations anywhere to what they are saying in italian i'm guessing?
Date: 11 Apr 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh, how sad but I'm totally glad that Bella wasn't raped and Edward saved the day. However, I do hope that him and Bella can be together and maybe because Edward and Anthony look alike Anthony can have Heidi instead.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward could keep her safe if he married her
Date: 11 Apr 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
Good chapter.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 16
Thank God he came to his sences He needs to marry her
Date: 11 Apr 2016 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
dont marry Heidi Marry Isabella. Anthony will hurt her or kill her in the end.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
I feel so bad for Bella. She was almost raped and Edward barely saved her. Update soon please. I always love your work. THANK YOU
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
Why doesn't he just marry her.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
Thank the lord the Edward has a heart when it comes to her as he was able to reel it back in and show some restraint.
Date: 11 Apr 2016 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is so intense. Its almost hard to continue. Im so scared for her and I have no idea where this is going. One suggestion would be to put the translations for when they're speaking italian at the end of the chapter. I feel like I'm losing a bit of story because of it.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
I can't believe how addicted i am to this story!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
What is Anthony up to?
Date: 10 Apr 2016 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh no, please please do not let Bella be raped that would be just too horrifying, I'm hoping Edward finds out and goes bat shit crazy on Anthony and at the same time he rescues her, maybe he will take Anthony's place instead?
Date: 10 Apr 2016 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow, I certainly hope Edward is around to step in. If he doesn't then his word really means nothing as what Anthony has planned is worse then hitting her. Love you writing and stories and I can't wait for the next update.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think Alice is Pissed? Love it thanks.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
I HATE ANTHONY,BUT I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10 Apr 2016 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
I feel bad for Bella. Can't edward step in and help her? I really like the story just wanna see Bella made into a whore.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
Where is Edward?
Date: 10 Apr 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope Edward saves her! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 10 Apr 2016 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope you don't make Edward a liar, if Anthony rapes her he will be. Please post soon so we can find out what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope Edward shows up.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
i thought edward said she wood not be hurt what he doing to her is hurting her
Date: 09 Apr 2016 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Will Alice help her now?