[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2016 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
Can Edward be trusted?
Date: 09 Apr 2016 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
What is Anthony planning? Jasper is in trouble
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
Jasper is going to get berated tonight. The doghouse has his name on it!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 13
He is so messed up.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2016 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
Isabella has to realize this world is so different then the world she lives in. These people have to listen to orders or pay the concequenses.
Date: 09 Apr 2016 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
I really hope Edward can keep her safe from Anthony. I think Alice is a bit mad a Jasper. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 09 Apr 2016 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 09 Apr 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 14
OH SHIT!!! Right under the bus!! Poor Alice seemed so shocked! I am so hooked on this! :)
Date: 08 Apr 2016 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
Anthony has me totally baffled. I think he may have a very small amount of goodness in him, but it is so out-weighed by the bad, that it can't break though. You have created a very interesting character in him. Loved this chapter.
Date: 08 Apr 2016 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 12
Uh oh, I think Isabella is in big trouble with Anythony! I hope Edward will protect her. Thanks for another great chapter. You never let the action slow down. :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2016 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
So what plans does he have for Bella. So both brothers are starting to have feelings for Bella, but Bella can't stand either one of them (can't blame her).
This is getting more and more interesting.
Date: 08 Apr 2016 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 13
I don't like Anthony what is he planning for Bella?
Date: 08 Apr 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
Anthony's a creep!! I want to kick his teeth in!! >:(
I can't wait for more of this!! :)
Date: 08 Apr 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm curious what he's going to do with Bella
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2016 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
They have cameras throughout the building. They own the building. I wonder if edward is going to be mad at how anthony beat her up?
Date: 07 Apr 2016 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
Does he have her chipped?
Date: 07 Apr 2016 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
To almost feel freedom
Date: 07 Apr 2016 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward is really pissing me off... He is calling Isabella all these adorable nicknames and then the next minute he is just so damn passive.
I like Anthony - you know what to expect from him.
Date: 07 Apr 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG! I am dying for more!! I am so impatient!! ;)
Date: 07 Apr 2016 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
This is hard to read. I know this is fiction,but you write so well that I almost feel her pain! I know this will be a great story. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. LOVE YA! P.S. When will Bella and Edward get together? I WANT A LEMON!
Date: 07 Apr 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
They had to know she would try is Edward going to be pissed that she got hurt?
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am glad we got to see this from his POV. I REALLY WANT EDWARD's & Anthony's now. I think for them to be disturbed means bella is really affecting them!
Date: 06 Apr 2016 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow, Anthony is really confusing me. ;) He seems to be showing a little feeling for Isabella, but then he says something really cruel. You have me on pins and needles!! Thanks for such a great chapter!
Date: 06 Apr 2016 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thank goodness Edward saved Isabella from Anthony's advances, at least this time. Poor girl has to be scared to death. Loved this chapter. Thank you.
Date: 06 Apr 2016 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Isabella is caught between the no-nonsense brother and the bad brother. It doesn't look like either one will give her any kindness. Hopefully she will get Edward on her side soon. I love your story.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2016 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
Charlie should have realised he was playing with fire and now his daughter is suffering for it
Date: 06 Apr 2016 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
So freaking good, so excited to read more!!!!!
Date: 06 Apr 2016 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
So intense. Does this story have HEA?
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2016 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh Anthony does have a heart.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2016 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 11
How heart breaking.
Date: 06 Apr 2016 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Charlie poor Bella omg
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2016 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
Even Anthony is getting soft.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2016 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thank goodness it was Edward!
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2016 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
Powerful chapter... wasn't easy to read...
Date: 05 Apr 2016 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
How much more can and take
Date: 05 Apr 2016 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
James is worried about her he likes her
Date: 05 Apr 2016 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
Anthony is freaking me out
Date: 05 Apr 2016 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Omg her just can't catch a break other than her hand
Date: 05 Apr 2016 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
They mean to take no shit. Edward better go with him
Date: 05 Apr 2016 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
Anthony is getting what he wants out of Charlie
Date: 05 Apr 2016 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
James is a good bad guy. Where is Edward
Date: 05 Apr 2016 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
He is an ass not right wanting to hurt her
Date: 05 Apr 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
Poor girl her life is on track and now so messed up
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2016 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
Awesome chapter
Date: 05 Apr 2016 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
Makes me wonder how far Anthony & Edward will go or if they'll keep her for their own.
Date: 05 Apr 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
HE IS THE BAD GUY!!!!!!! James didn't really rape her did he? I wonder if Bella will ever be comfortable around Edward now?
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 05 Apr 2016 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
Poor Bella and Charlie!! I hope for the best for the poor girl. Is this going to turn into a Edward/Bella/Anthony fic?
Date: 05 Apr 2016 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2016 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
Poor Bella. Both brothers are like Jekyll and Hyde
Date: 04 Apr 2016 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm loving this Mobward story! Thank you, thank you!!
Date: 04 Apr 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Isabella! How horrible that would be to be so close to being saved, to hear her rescuers so close, and then to have her hopes dashed? This story is so exciting. Thanks for another great chapter.
Date: 04 Apr 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
This Anthony is going to be one bad dude, right? But I have a feeling Edward is going to help keep things from getting out of control for poor Isabelle. Loved this chapter!
Date: 04 Apr 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, you didn't waste any time making this story exciting! I think I'm going to like your Isabella, but I think she is in big time trouble. Thanks for a great chapter!
Date: 04 Apr 2016 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a great beginning to a story. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Date: 04 Apr 2016 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
Maybe I am sick in the head but am I the only one who would like to see a Bella/Anthony pairing?...yes?...
I'Il just go back into hiding...
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2016 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bon chapitre, sera Edward être kinder avec Bella?
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow great story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Definetly a page turner.
Date: 04 Apr 2016 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love it. Thanks for updating so soon.
Date: 04 Apr 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
OH MY!! I need more of this story!!! I am so hooked on this!!! :)
Date: 03 Apr 2016 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
Things just keep getting worse for Bella. At least it was Edward. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2016 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
Anthony sounds borderline insane
Date: 03 Apr 2016 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well this is going to be rough.
Date: 03 Apr 2016 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
OMG!! That poor girl! :(
Date: 03 Apr 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
HOLYSH*T!! I love this! ;)
Date: 02 Apr 2016 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward and Anthony are both assholes. Is there anyone nice in this story? Please update your other stories to please. You're one of the best most talented writer of fanfic ever! I know you are aware of this. Thank you for sharing your talent with us, LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
I know I've said it already, but I really love this story.
Date: 02 Apr 2016 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMG! Anthony's plan is really working! This is so fantastic! :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2016 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
I have to say that both fathers are up there on the dumb-ass scale. Carlisle for trusting Charlie and Charlie for being so stupid as to think there would not be some serious payback. This is one of the best stories out there and I can't wait for more.
Thanks, Maria
Date: 02 Apr 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
Amazing chapter!
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2016 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Il est dommage pour Bella, mais Charle Swan est un idiot, comment il a pu penser que de trahir la Mafia était une chose à faire lorsque nous avons une famille.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2016 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
Je ne vais pas à la pitié Aro, il lui sert à droite.
J'espère que Antony ne va pas torturer Bella, il est sadique ce gars là.
Date: 01 Apr 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 01 Apr 2016 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
He might rape Bella just because.
Date: 01 Apr 2016 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
how terrible to feel that way.
Date: 01 Apr 2016 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love your story and the quick updates
Date: 01 Apr 2016 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter.
Date: 31 Mar 2016 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow....lots of emotion. I can't wait for more. Great job...thanks!!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh my....that sucks! I was just starting to like James! What's next for poor Bella?
Date: 31 Mar 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like this!👏
Date: 31 Mar 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh so close.... I feel for her. She is so confuseed. Who wouldn't be. What a mess! Can't wait to see what is next!
Date: 31 Mar 2016 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
OMG! I AM DYING NOW!! I NEED MORE!!! I NEED TO KNOW MORE!!
I love this story!! :)
Date: 31 Mar 2016 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapters.
Date: 31 Mar 2016 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
OMG! OMG! I don't think I like Anthony very much! :(
Date: 31 Mar 2016 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
OHSWEETBABYJESUS! They took her! She knows what her father does! She should have known to be more cautious. She knew enough to remember all the details but she didn't tell her father and now they have her! OMG! *wipes tear* I am so happy I can read the next chapter or I would be freaking out...a lot more than I am now! :P