Date: 30 May 2016 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
well atleast he doesn't have to marry tanya
Date: 29 May 2016 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
Not surprised really! I hate it for her especially.
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2016 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
I can't believe his father led up like that what happened to him what is he hiding because that is what is going on he is hiding something big
Date: 29 May 2016 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow shit has hit the fan. Why is Carlisle so set on Edward marrying that bitch Tanya?
Date: 29 May 2016 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
What does Tanya's family have over His Lordship, I wonder?
Date: 29 May 2016 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
do you think Tanya is Carlisles mistress?
Date: 29 May 2016 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loving it as ever...quite a few typo's this time.... I'd be happy to pre read if that would be useful for you...but it doesn't detract from a great story so don't worry about it
Thank you! T
Author's Response:
Hi I know. I seem to constantly be turning my letters around in words. Right letters, wrong order. It's because I write a lot of the time in the evening. Sometimes I check the clock and begin rushing, as I really need to be in bed for work. I get carried away with chapters, that's my problem. I'm going to write one chapter now, then I might struggle the next few days, longer working hours. So, I might just have time to check over my errors instead of write any chapters. Thanks for the offer. If the offer still stands and I'm still struggling after this week, I may take you up on it. Glad it didn't spoil it too much.
Date: 29 May 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
I have a feeling this talk with Father will not go well.
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
Will things go as they hope or will something or someone happen update soon
Date: 28 May 2016 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for update :)
Date: 28 May 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
I cant wait for shit to hit the fan when they talk to Carlisle about what is going on and then about Edward wanting to marry Bella. Love the updates thanks so much
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2016 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I had fallen behind on reading and read the last 4 chapters. This story is getting better and better. I will not fall behind again!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your rating. Glad your still enjoying my story.
Date: 28 May 2016 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
Crying here for bella...used again
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2016 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks good chapters
Date: 28 May 2016 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
I feel much better now that Edward knows what Carlisle is up to . Not cool Carlisle
Date: 28 May 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bad Carlisle is right.
Date: 28 May 2016 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
Carlisle's true colours is showing.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow I now see where Rose gets her nastiness from now is Edward right and what will happen to Bella if things get out of hand
Date: 27 May 2016 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I suspect they won't have plain sailing but hope it is not too difficult for them! Thanks for update :)
Date: 27 May 2016 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
So happy he cleared that up. Bella is good at her job she is getting to the bottom of things Aro is a creep.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2016 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow Aro is really taking advantage of everything now what will happen when Bella tell Master Cullen and Edward redeem himself and was sweet about it too
Date: 27 May 2016 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
So theft, deception, larceny...go detective Bella!
Date: 27 May 2016 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
good job... If you don't chance to read these how will you ever know?
Author's Response:
Hi MaryMary
Glad your still with me. I normally do read them, but with my hit and miss posting I thought I might get some not so happy readers. I know I should be able to read, good, bad and ugly, but too many bad ones make me question the story. I need to let it just go over my head. I am getting better, my first couple of stories I was gutted at bad reviews. Saying that, looking at them now I need to repost if only for poor grammer.
Date: 27 May 2016 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter. How come you do not have this story published also in fanfiction?
Author's Response:
Hi, never had anything on there, although I read stories on there myself. Sorry to say I'm not sure how to transfer chapters on there. Sad I know.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2016 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
aaaw - they have finally found each other.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2016 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
you tell her, Bella!
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2016 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
We all know how the 'if only' game goes!
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2016 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
yes, Edward, what are you saying???
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2016 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
so he isn't as bad as he makes out and Tanya is as bad
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2016 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 7
I knew it! What a bitch!
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2016 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm curious to see who the American family is! The Denali's? Great chapter again
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2016 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
omw - what a bunch of people - great chapter. I am enjoying this story!
Date: 27 May 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
Tanya is a piece of work!
Date: 26 May 2016 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
Edward and Bella need to talk. Bella needs some one who will support her with these crazy men. I worry about her safety.
Date: 26 May 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
What a to-do! Knew that T's claws would come out sooner or later! Thanks for update :)
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2016 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh my thank goodness Jasper came when he did who knows how far Jacob would have gone now what is Tanya's problem Edward said he didn't want her way before she showed up
Date: 26 May 2016 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
Tanya is a bitch and what is going on with her and Carlisle? Jacob is in deep shit if Edward finds out what he did to Bella. I love her backbone she has brass balls lol
Date: 23 May 2016 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella and Edward need a long talk. Bella over reacted and Edward is clueless to what he did.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2016 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks good chapters
Date: 21 May 2016 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
you wrote it doesn't really matter where. Yes you have done this before.
Date: 21 May 2016 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh the intrigue of the Denali presence! Thanks for update :)
Date: 20 May 2016 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
I was so excited to see another update thanks. Tanya is a royal bitch poor Alice. I like being spoiled lol
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2016 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
I loved it wow I can't believe her father said that he took a guests side over his daughter and Rose every time she opens her mouth she becomes uglier
Date: 20 May 2016 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 11
I think edward genuinely likes her...he just sounded like an ass
Date: 20 May 2016 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
Happy your feeling better! And happy your back to writing! I love this story and was sad to think it was going to g I unfinished.
Date: 20 May 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2016 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
And why has edward not come to grovel? Is he embarrassed?
Date: 19 May 2016 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
I think she should have voiced her concern before jumping to conclusions.
Date: 19 May 2016 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
So happy you are back and feeling better. Bella shocked the shit out of Edward is he understanding why she reacted that way? James is an ass hole
Date: 19 May 2016 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
Apart from screeching like a shrew and flinging potatoes, Bella held tight to her class and principles.
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2016 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow Edward really screwed that one up and poor Bella she thinks a marriage is out for her will that change
Date: 19 May 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
this chapter answers it all. She can not and he can not so sad for her. He will find another and she may live alone until she perhaps marries a widower someone needing a woman to run his house and manage his children. Whoopie
Date: 19 May 2016 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
Some one will think they were sleeping together. Hopefully it will not be his parents.
Date: 18 May 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
good story so far. Hope you keep it going.
Date: 18 May 2016 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for update :)
Date: 17 May 2016 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm enjoying this story. Glad Edward has seen the light.
Date: 09 May 2016 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm crying for all she's lost...she could have died twice had he not found her.
Date: 04 May 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wasn't there supposed to be an update more than a week ago?
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh wow Edward loves her and I think he wants to marry her
Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ummm, will he be able to change so easily?? Thanks for update :)
Date: 26 Apr 2016 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
Has he decided already??
Can't wait for tomorrow....
Date: 26 Apr 2016 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh, is it Isabella that Edward wish to be married to? Will he tell Isabella his true feelings for her? Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 26 Apr 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
Edward loves her fire and he is telling her she is going to be his bride :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
That he wants u to be his bride.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
She is going to be mortified!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2016 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
It's good he couldn't go home.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter! Can't wait for more
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMG CANT WAIT ...LOL
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thanks good chapter
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hmmm... I'm am surprised Bella was left alone so long, as sick as she was, but I am glad it was Edward they came to check on her.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
So happy to see this story updated really liked this chapter, it moved the story on quite a bit
Date: 22 Apr 2016 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
Isabella is ill! Who'll take care of her?
I started reading this story just minutes ago and I found it interesting! I wanto know who's stealing from the Cullens tho I have some suspicions on Aro, Felix and Samuel. It might be dangerous for Isabella to continue finding the culprit alone. Maybe she needs to tell someone... maybe Edward.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2016 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks good chapter s
Date: 18 Apr 2016 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh nooooo!!! Thats embarrassing ! Good chapter cant wait for the next one!
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2016 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh no she is very sick what will happen to her
Date: 17 Apr 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
Poor thing is beyond sick. Edward didnt use Lauran like Bella thinks Lauran wants to be a keeped women
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
can't wait for more it's great
Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
ooh thats not good thanks for the extra update
Date: 17 Apr 2016 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad Edward found her. He will make sure she is taken care of
Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh dear! I hope it's nothing serious.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
Enjoying this very much....and yes few mistakes but nothing that detracts from the story....but the game is most definitely chess! ...but I suspect that was the auto correct.
Thank you! T
Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
So lucky Tanya is such a bitch and chaced Edward out of the manor to save Bella. I hope no one seen them together walking back.
Date: 17 Apr 2016 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
I really am enjoying this story and I like this side of Edward.