[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
Go Bella but I hope she brings up everything she saw today when she was out with Aro
Date: 15 Apr 2016 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yes she has more manners then all of them put together it seems. Why would Carlisle or Esme say something?
Date: 14 Apr 2016 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good chapter! I really like the way u are devolping the charActers.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella has balls love it. She needs to have a long talk with Mr. Cullen about Sam who is he.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
So many swirling dramas... I can wait for more!
Date: 12 Apr 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
the Denalis have come out the woodwork, everyone hide
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well Carlisle seems to think very highly of her and women but all others not so much now how soon will Bella catch the the one who is stealing
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love this story. So happy that your updating often.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella has a brain love her she is a smart one. I am looking forward to her meeting Tanya.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter - poor Bella!
Date: 11 Apr 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
Now she knows :) a little bit about Edward some she does not want to know. Edward wants to get to know Bella
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
I loved it Oh boy the Edward is a naughty boy but I don't think that is his true self and when will Bella find out who is stealing from the Cullen family
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
He was knocking them back because his little dickie has to be put away & tamed.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
He is definitely a scoundrel!
Date: 11 Apr 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
Very good start to your story. I like the "upstairs, downstairs" angle. Good writing overall , but please become familiar with "spellcheck" or some form of proofreading aid, as spelling errors and misused words are very distracting from a good story. Keep up the good work!
Date: 11 Apr 2016 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
He wants to know all about Bella? Love Mrs. C she is a fisty lady lol
Date: 11 Apr 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hmmmmm who is indeed and I love your Mrs Cope heheheheheheh
Date: 11 Apr 2016 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Good start! Keep going dying to know what happens next!
Date: 11 Apr 2016 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
So proud of her she needed to put him in his place
Date: 11 Apr 2016 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am so proud of her
Date: 11 Apr 2016 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
Serves Edward right :) First meeting and Isabella got what Edward really is. I'm loving your story! :)
Date: 11 Apr 2016 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love the meeting of Edward and Rose classic
Date: 11 Apr 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
Thanks for the story! I really like the added element of mystery, and I wish there was more!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2016 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
This story makes me laugh! Her reaction to him was priceless! I can't wait to see how he reacts to her!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hello I really like where this is going your story was recommended on Facebook I am looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2016 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love it. Update soon.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's clear that Edward hasn't heard the saying "you don't s**t where you eat." Good for Bella for telling James and Victoria to stuff it. I have a feeling that Charlie's death was probably no accident.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am loving this story so far, glad to see Isabella is no walk over and will put Edward in his place, for now any ways :D
Date: 10 Apr 2016 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
I like your story! How often will you update? I like the strong Isabella. Great story!
Date: 09 Apr 2016 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is off to a great start looking forward to what you post 😋😋😋