Date: 22 Feb 2018 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
wow...can't wait to see what has caused his nightmares...
Date: 21 Feb 2018 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
He is screwed and he is going to ge his ass kicked if he bad mouths Rose again. He is a mess poor guy.
Date: 21 Feb 2018 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 15
OMFG he needs her and no one else will do. What happened in his past who or what is the monster???
Date: 21 Feb 2018 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
My heart is just braking for her. She is in so much pain
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2018 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
So what is the monster??
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2018 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMG Loved it can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2018 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 16
He needs a therapist so bad!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2018 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was a rough dream!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2018 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
I really wanted her to text him and just say it was more than sex to her. I hope edward will have pulled his head out of his butt by the time she gets back. Jake's back story was probably one of the sweetest i have read.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2018 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is awesome.
Date: 08 Feb 2018 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 13
So sad they both want each other but have to be tough about it.
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2018 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
OMG , Love it can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
They should be honest with each other
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow do they need to communicate
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thanks for the update so quickly!! I would like to knock their two heads together and tell them to stop being stupid!! :D
Date: 30 Jan 2018 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
I loved were this story was going when I first read it. I'm glad your starting it back up. It's really good so far. I can't wait for more updates.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
I truly love this story!!!!! I hope you are able to keep updating! These two are so addicting!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
I really want him to get first place! I'm also worried about his reaction to DC.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
He has felt so unwanted most of his life. It's very sad.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
There is still so much bad stuff to talk about. I'm worried!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
Goodness gracious! Could he be anymore dramatic! I'm not sure who is more damaged!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Come on Bella!! You can do it!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
They are so intense!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
Finally one of them stepped up!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
Goodness what ever cut her sounds really bad!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yes he should text bella and take the modeling contract with his own stipulations of no tanya!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2018 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
What happened to her? I think that has something to do with her fear.
Date: 29 Jan 2018 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh man...shes in deep
Date: 26 Jan 2018 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
great first chapter!
Date: 26 Jan 2018 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
Good to hear from you thanks. Edward is hooked he should stop fighting it He is Bella's and Bella is his.
Date: 04 Aug 2016 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
Can't wait for more please post soon you have me so hooked
Date: 03 Aug 2016 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
Emmett is just a shit starter lol he knows how to fire Edward up. Why is Edward fighting his feelings for Bella?
Date: 03 Aug 2016 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
They both have secerts
Date: 03 Aug 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
That was a perfect make up
Date: 03 Aug 2016 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
honestly, i was a little nervous about how things
started out in the beginning...the covert meetings
and sex with a stranger in the dark...but your writing made it
so endearing almost, so natural b/t these 2.
and i love how you made bella so smart and not
whiny or weak minded, so far without being obnoxiously
unreasonably stubborn.
can't wait for the update(s) :)
Date: 03 Aug 2016 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loving the story, motorcross, hot sexy, dominate , Edward. Can't wait for update. Thanks for sharing
Date: 02 Aug 2016 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
Just caught up on the whole story and I am loving it!
Date: 02 Aug 2016 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for updating. I hope they can me honest with each other!
Date: 16 Jun 2016 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
WOW he was being an ASS good thing he pulled his head out of his ASS. Poor Bella she is so clueless she thinks it is her he didnt want.
Date: 16 Jun 2016 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
I am so excited for them to meet.
Date: 15 Jun 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
Whoa...that was something! I can't wait to find out what happens next! :)
Date: 15 Jun 2016 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved the back story. I wish Bella would give this a chance! I was so sad to see that chapters 7 and 8 didn't exist!
Author's Response:
that was a mistake on my part. I have corrected it now and ch. 7 & 8 are up. Thanks for reading. :)
Date: 15 Jun 2016 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love this chapter but chapters 7&8 did not post.
Author's Response:
That was a mistake on my part. but it's fixed now and ch. 7 & 8 are up. Thanks for reading. :)
Date: 15 Jun 2016 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
Bella got the family that she need and they needed her to. Edward is missing her as much as she is missing him. Love Rose she is to cool.
Date: 11 May 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Edward he is in so much pain
Date: 26 Apr 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
So happy you posted
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2016 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story and can't wait for the next chapter....
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
Gawh I am hooked can't wait for more
Date: 23 Apr 2016 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Its funny when everything you thought you wanted happens and it is not what really matters anymore. Bella is so confused now.
Date: 23 Apr 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loving it yes he needs to text Bella. He needs to sign with to be a model and kick Tanya's ass lol. Cant wait for more
Date: 22 Apr 2016 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
So sad what is she so afraid of.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
So loving it and so happy you are going on with it thank you
Date: 18 Apr 2016 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
loving it so far, really would loveto see where this goes. Character development is fantastic... kept me on the edge of my seat ;)
Date: 15 Apr 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
I really enjoyed the one-shot in the contest, and am lookig forward to the expansion! I am a little bummed that it seems so angsty so far...keeping fingers crossed! :)
Date: 13 Apr 2016 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Really enjoying what you have so far I do hope you post again soon
Date: 13 Apr 2016 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
I have to read the next chapter I have to know more
Date: 13 Apr 2016 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is great you have me hooked so glad I have two. More chapters to read please keep going with it