Date: 14 Apr 2017 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 7 helpful advice
I have a feeling that attending school and putting up with 'teenage hormones' is gonna be a challenge for Edward, especially when he starts 'seeing' what the other young males visualize about his B.
Date: 07 Apr 2017 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 7 helpful advice
i do worry for edward since he is such
a gentleman how he will effectively
thwart all of those girls who will certainly
try to go after him no matter whether bella
is with him....i hope he is very successful and
is not so gentlemanly in getting rid of those girls
even rudely for some...ahh then we have jake...
please dont follow the book and make him such a good
friend of bella...i hate that in spite of the man she loves
having problems with it, she continues to be very close
with jake ...always wondered how she would feel if edward
had such a close friendship with a girl who loves him??
ty for writing...cant wait for more!
Date: 05 Apr 2017 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 6 Revelations
am so enjoying this story...
please, please don't allow the quileutes to force
the cullens/edward to agree not to change bella, esp
since she is edward's mate. that is such an unnecessary
conflict, imo...i never could understand why couldnt the cullens
simply leave with bella and change her elsewhere, ie. europe,
what was stopping them??
as a vampire, she could not appear to her father/family
anyways so i didnot feel this was much of an issue as
everyone seemed to think.
Date: 31 Mar 2017 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 6 Revelations
I love all the Cullen's so far. Bella could have told Edward differently about her eating habits. I felt like she was chastising him for being him. She knows the kind of man he is, he is concerned for his mate. Pretty sure the other males would have asked the same of their other halfs if they were human. She made it seem he was in he wrong. My husband does just like Edward if I don't eat much at a meal.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 2 - all creatures great and weird
I'm presuming Edward has been out of society since joining the USSS SPAM team. He only appears when an interrogation was scheduled. He seem locked into the early 1900's by way of dress, his mamners, and his choice in decor.
Tanya as a tiny flying fairy is hilarious, especially one that steals linens.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome to SPAM Ms Swan
I found this story on the STARS new story page. I'm glad I decided to give it a read.
The premise is unique, the characters are intriguing, and the energy level propels me to want more.
Well done with the first chapter.
Date: 08 May 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 3 - assimilate this
I think we all like this Edward so much because he's so sweetly old-fashioned! Bella will have her hands full bringing him into the twenty-first century! Tanya did help a little, after she and Bella decided to be friends!
Date: 06 May 2016 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 2 - all creatures great and weird
OMG! I love this so much! Please,please continue with this great story. I can't wait until the next update.I beg of you to post all the chapters and not abandon it please. Thank you so much. LOVE YA
Date: 30 Apr 2016 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 - all creatures great and weird
Bless his unbeating heart, why would he ever have been"modernized", if his existence and work have always been secret? The apartment sound as id they made him comfortable all these years by replicating what he grew up with! He almost slipped a couple of times but didn't give away the real reason for Bella's presence in his life!
Date: 30 Apr 2016 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 2 - all creatures great and weird
Cuteeeeeeeereee! It's going to be so much fun to see Edward adapt! :)
cant wait for the next chap! I'm loving this story, even tough I'm not usually interested in supernatural fics, I LOVE the plot! :)