Date: 13 May 2016 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
lol so good.
Date: 13 May 2016 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far I flove it.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is going to be sooooo good!
Date: 12 May 2016 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hahaha...evil chuckle at what's surly to come
Date: 12 May 2016 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
Really like this so far
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2016 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved the meeting and the surprise Edward had that Bella was Charilie's underboss. second, and his daughter. Looking forward to more.
Sherry
Date: 12 May 2016 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love this chica!!!! girl you have a gift!!! i really cant wait to read more....
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
He is definately going to need all his wits about him where she is concerned. she sure is a temptress, dressed to distract and lethal enough to finish everybody off. Carlilse must be pissing himself laughing, she is certainly a match for Edward. Debbie
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
Maybe her hands are her "weapons"?
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2016 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loe it, love them and oh I can see trouble with a capital T ahead.
Date: 11 May 2016 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
wondering if their fathers are plannng a union of the families
Date: 11 May 2016 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
excellent, edward trop confiant, une bella effrontée halala, coktail explosif..
Date: 11 May 2016 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loving the story.
Date: 11 May 2016 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
Dashed over here for visuals...I FLUV that you give us visuals *THUD!*
Date: 11 May 2016 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
That was a nice shock for him. I think Charlie was telling him he better not mess with his little girl lol
Date: 11 May 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ok, this chapter was really good. Edward is just a bit too confident. Nowhere to go but down. I have a feeling Bella will knock him down a peg or two. Thanks for the update! Loved it.
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2016 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Mais il faut que je dise que le texte est plus facile a traduire... avec beta!
Date: 11 May 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oooh, I am fan-girling all over you right now!! This was an awesome chapter! You gave us a wonderful kick-ass Bella, and a shirtless Edward with a brand!! I am loving how Edward has no idea how to handle this woman!! Don't be too hard on him though, because you know we all already love him. Thank you for making me smile all the way through this chapter. xoxo
Date: 11 May 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG, I am kissing you all over your sweet face!! The only thing I love more than Purrward is a MOBWARD STORY!! I can already tell that I'm going to love this one! This is just what I needed right now. Thank you, thank you! Can't wait to read the next chapter. xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh boy they through Masen off his game but he recovered quickly now how will the private meeting go
Date: 11 May 2016 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love her! I love you wrote a Bella who can stand with anyone! Can't wait for more!
Date: 11 May 2016 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
I think she won that contest.
Date: 11 May 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
bad a...Bella....
Date: 11 May 2016 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ohhhhhh. This is reallllllly good. Bring it!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2016 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this seems like it is going to be scorching, the chemistry on the dance floor is something else. Debbie
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2016 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Talk about steam rolling off the page...
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2016 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to find out what Bella's story is.
Date: 09 May 2016 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds good to me cant wait for more let him talk and talk ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2016 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh me likey I can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2016 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
I haven't been to a Real Club in too many years. Thanks for the trip to dancing and wearing pretty clothes, and and enjoying looking at the sharp, dressed men who know how to dance! My drinks are the Black Russian and Ginger Ale with Bitters and Lime.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm of the mindset that you should just turn the reigns over to Masen and let him write his story. 😎 He's cool like that.
I'm here for the entertainment. When evere you can provide it, that's good enough for me.
Is Bella part of a rival mob?
A hitman of sorts?
The attraction is definitely there.
Can't wait to read how this plays out.
Date: 09 May 2016 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
You've done it again leaving me wanting more
Date: 08 May 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. I can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm a fan! What an opener!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to reading more :)
Date: 08 May 2016 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am in. Nice to hear from you again. Hope all is well.
Date: 08 May 2016 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great way to start the day! Looking forward to this one. Update soon.
Date: 08 May 2016 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is really something else from you, but I don't mind trying your hand in something new, let's see where it'll take us; )
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
You have me at chapter one. Can not wait for your update.
Date: 08 May 2016 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's pretty awesome!
Date: 08 May 2016 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
bon début, je suis impatiente de lire la suite...
Date: 08 May 2016 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm already in even though I so don't like WIP's
More! More! More!
I wann read more please
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, you described one of my favorite Edwards... button down shirt, sleeves rolked halfway up his arms, exposing his muscled forearms... YUM! the only thing missing a celtic tat of somekind-! Cannot wait for the rest of the story!!!
She was worried that he knew who she was, but from his question about her name, I would say maybe not... or he could be testing her to see if she would be honest and tell her real name or not. He sure put on a pretty show to get her attention- but she was trying to keep a low profile for who she is supposed to be.
Sufficiently intrigued, and enthralled...
Date: 08 May 2016 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow , amazing start. all your stories are amazing. can't wait to read the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm hooked on this bad boy!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm excited to join on this ride. You done an excellent job on this chapter. I can hardly wait to see where you take Masen and Bella.
Sherry
Date: 08 May 2016 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I would be happy to beta for you if you would like. I also love the beginning, it's sucking me in. You can send me a message at kitty25478@yahoo.com, if you choose to have me beta for you. also I was an English major in college if that helps
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I reserve the rights to have Masen in my bed tonight
Date: 08 May 2016 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
I fluv the intro. Bella's story seems a bit in the dark. Masen... As always... Owns that shit! He's a bad boy right out the gate.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
That's a hell of first chapter. I'm on the edge of my seat wanting more. Thank you so much sharing.
Date: 08 May 2016 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was fast! He really must be filling all your senses for you to put this down on virtal paper so quickly! Yes! I'm so interested to see where you go with this, how dark you get. Should be fun!
Date: 08 May 2016 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG! This is awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2016 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, if you can't beat him then join him.
I've been waiting for this since your teaser.
Thanks for the Mothers Day present.
Is Bella a "Princess"?