Date: 06 Aug 2016 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
very intelligent bella
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2016 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 28
So sad......
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thanks!
Date: 06 Aug 2016 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
so this infamous playboy beginning to feel something ..curiosity? fascination?.. good for you EC..
Date: 06 Aug 2016 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella ..you are playing with fire..
Date: 06 Aug 2016 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
haha..what is this?.. you played me I played you..
Date: 06 Aug 2016 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 9
smart little girl.. pretending to agree...nice job Bella
Date: 06 Aug 2016 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
so Bella turned down his offer.. smart move Bella..
Date: 06 Aug 2016 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
so she have a crush on him..a bd boys type..Bella Bella Bella..
Date: 06 Aug 2016 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
naive little girl..Bella..
Date: 06 Aug 2016 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
I wondering what she gonna do..
Date: 06 Aug 2016 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
love innocent Bella..yay!!
Date: 06 Aug 2016 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 28
like epov. hope everything is ok with your family
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words. They're back home and recovering now. :)
Date: 06 Aug 2016 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 27
can't wait to see what happens
Date: 04 Aug 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 26
I want to know what Charlie said to Bella.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2016 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 26
Jesus, I started this story today and I wasn't able to put it down the whole time and as soon as it started to get really really good.. there were no more updates!! Agh I quite literally screamed when I couldn't simply click 'Next'!!
Author's Response:
Yay, so glad you liked it! But don't worry, the next update will be out tomorrow. :) Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 26
Is Charlie going to go into protective "father" mode?
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You will find out soon! :) Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2016 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
:)
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Thanks!
Date: 31 Jul 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 26
can't wait
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! thanks :)
Date: 31 Jul 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMG omg omg!!!! Dun dun dun!!!
Author's Response:
LOL!!!! Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 31 Jul 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh Bella your in big trouble now :s
Author's Response:
She definitely is! ;)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2016 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
:)
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:D
Date: 31 Jul 2016 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 25
Wonder how Charlie will approach the subject with Bella...
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! :) You'll find out soon...
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2016 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 25
Look out Bella. I think Charlie's going to follow her to make sure that his suspicons are correct.
Author's Response:
Hahaha. You'll see what happens soon. Thanks!
Date: 30 Jul 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 25
wrong answer e
Author's Response:
yup, so wrong
Date: 29 Jul 2016 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella is going to be surprised.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2016 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
You got some splainin to do Bella.
Date: 29 Jul 2016 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 24
thinking charlie is going to piece this together very soon
Date: 29 Jul 2016 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loving it!
Date: 28 Jul 2016 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
can't wait to see how charlie reacts when he finds e at his door
Author's Response:
You will find out soon! Chapter 24 is up. :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
Things are going to catch up to her.
Author's Response:
Oh, I think you are so right! ;)
Date: 26 Jul 2016 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
I would always choose kissing Edward.
Date: 26 Jul 2016 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
lol
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 26 Jul 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
OMG !!!! Priceless!!!! 💋💋💋
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying it!! :)
Date: 26 Jul 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 22
Classic
Author's Response:
:D Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2016 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 22
:)
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:D
Date: 26 Jul 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 22
Ackward....
Author's Response:
It really is...
Date: 26 Jul 2016 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
Laughing my head of right now!
Author's Response:
So glad you're laughing! :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2016 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
Enjoy your break.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2016 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 20
She needs to tell him the truth
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
he checked his knees - lol. wondering if he is going to start following her
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed that bit. ;)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
:)
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2016 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
Interesting
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 21 Jul 2016 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well I want them together eventually .... I almost want him to figure out about her before but not necessarily her tell him... Make any sense?? 💋💋
Date: 21 Jul 2016 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
I think d is the correct choice,
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2016 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 20
I wonder if he'll be tempted to follow her home.
I think it's inevitable that they'll sleep together. It's the when that matters.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
C or d, I'll leave you to surprise us all...
Date: 20 Jul 2016 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter!
They should sleep together after they both know the truth
Date: 20 Jul 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
maybe never, unless he's willing to give her more ;)
Date: 20 Jul 2016 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
lol, b is getting carried away
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2016 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
Bella's living out some of her fantasies it seems.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2016 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hilarious, so gonna get busted! She's playing with fire right now, how on earth are you going to get her out of this one?!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
Lol had great knees
Date: 19 Jul 2016 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
Get her Edward! Make her squirm ...
Date: 18 Jul 2016 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
b . . . lol. think she is going to get way over her head soon
Author's Response:
Way over her head!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2016 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
:)
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thanks :D
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am starting to question whether I like her lying to him at this point.... I find her to be way too deceptive. Personally, if i were Edward and then found out she was stringing him along with her lies, it would cause me to become more jaded about women than he/I ... whatever already is. I think i wrote that wrong, but do you know what i mean??
Author's Response:
I can certainly see what you're saying... ;) and I know what you mean. :D
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2016 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 17
Are you sure that Bella's 18 years old?
Author's Response:
yup. :) But some 18-year-olds are both wise and foolish beyond their years. ;)
Date: 18 Jul 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 17
He has meet his match
Author's Response:
yes! ;)
Date: 17 Jul 2016 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
lol . . . i'm sure she left him spinning
Date: 17 Jul 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
Go Bella!
Author's Response:
Yes!!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2016 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
Interesting storyline, keep on writing
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2016 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
Definitely in over her head, definitely going to get burned then, after much drama, heartache and redemption Edward will realise that she's the one for him. Nutshell?! Love it! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) And wow, what an accurate summary! ;)
Date: 16 Jul 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
seems like she is starting to chip at some of his walls without his knowledge
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2016 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
I want to know what game is she playing.
I'm also curious about his eyes.
I'm unsure where this is leading.
Author's Response:
Ah yes, what game is she playing? And I hope you're still finding it interesting. Thanks for all the comments! :)
Date: 15 Jul 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
,🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻
Date: 15 Jul 2016 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
Sigh.... I can't believe I have to wait another 24 hours 😞 d84;a039;💋d84;a039;
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:)
Date: 15 Jul 2016 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
She gets him to sleep with her but at what cost to her?
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2016 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 15
This isn't the same Bella from the beginning. What game is she playing?
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2016 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
oooooh I LOVE IT!!!! Can yo uprint several chapters a day for me? snicker snicker.... And out of curiousity do you know where you are going in the story or "flying by the seat of your pants per se?" Either way i adore you.... but im a nosey bug
Author's Response:
Haha, glad you love it. :) This story is basically completely written, so yes, we know where we're going. Thanks for your kind comments! :D
Date: 14 Jul 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
hmmm . . . good question :)
Date: 14 Jul 2016 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh boy oh boy she might get burned
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2016 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yes i like the drabble ALOT! I'm guessing it's Aro. I wiponder if Edward is actually setting up for the pics to be taken?
Author's Response:
Thanks and hope you keep on enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
I can't picture Bella's behavior. I see her as a naive teenager.
Author's Response:
I know right? ;)
Date: 13 Jul 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
Your killing me
Author's Response:
haha
Date: 13 Jul 2016 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
:)
Author's Response:
thanks! :)
Date: 13 Jul 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm cringing and embarrassed at her behavior.
for an intelligent girl, she's being quite stupid.
what a foolish foolish girl.
Author's Response:
Ah yes, foolish... ;)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2016 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
:)
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 13 Jul 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
definitely curious as well :)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 13 Jul 2016 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
Luv Luv this !!! I have to tell you every day!
Author's Response:
Thank you SO MUCH!!! It means so much to me to hear it every day!! <3 (You probably know that all writers are insecure, so your comments have been making me especially happy!)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2016 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
I think that Bella's swimming in shark infested waters.
Author's Response:
You are so right! Thanks so much for your fun reviews! <3
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
He's full of himself?
Author's Response:
Oh, he definitely is!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
:)
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Thanks!
Date: 12 Jul 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
seems like he defintely has a system he goes by . . . very businesslike
Author's Response:
Oh yes, he has a complete system, LOL.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
It seams to me that Bella is playing the game very well... making him question himself!
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! She is definitely playing the game. ;)
Date: 12 Jul 2016 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
This is a young girls fantasy I hope she does not get hurt.
Author's Response:
Definitely a fantasy and you will see what happens! Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
I wait every day to see updates to this .... Love it!
Author's Response:
Awww, thank you so much for your very kind comment! This one made my day.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
He is a jigglo. Sorry if that offends you but he is nothing of great worth when he plays these game but then again he finds people who will play along with him. Sad this time it is Bella. She is weilding a smart hand so far.
Author's Response:
Hi MaryMary and no offense taken! I agree that he is definitely a douche but we will see what happens with Bella. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 12 Jul 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well all I can say is I am not in line with Bella's thinking one way or the other.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
have no idea I must say he deserves the problem coming to him so does his gf. But Bella needed to tell them and leave not help them.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love this Bella, nice to see her drawing him in this way I open she doesn't change he deserves the change in the game!! 💋
Author's Response:
So glad you love this Bella and I am loving your reviews!
Date: 11 Jul 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
saw the movie a long time ago and am thinking about revisiting it - lol
seems like b is doing ok for herself . . . hoping it contnues :)
Author's Response:
yes, it's an old-time movie classic, and I especially love Audrey Hepburn in it. :) Glad you're enjoying and thank you very much for reviewing.