Date: 04 Mar 2018 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 28
Okay I figured Bella’s anger was a summoning for Lucifer so that fits. Don’t hate me folks but I think everyone is overreacting slightly to Carsile. NOT Bella of course but her anger and saddness as Esme mentioned was necessary to break through he final wall and yes summon this war that must happen so she can be tested by Lucifer and then become an angel with Edward or live out life with many children on earth with him as human. Either way HEA. Also, Carsile didn’t display feelings he should have but he did not drop the ball just on her care his betters did. He just really sucks at delivering shitty news.
Date: 04 Mar 2018 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 27
Yes!! Yes! Freaking YES! Charles you naughty dominion you. Knowing Renee slept with him the arch angels should have kept an eye on her and perhaps protected her against drugs and Bella against every-freaking-thing. Also, if Heidi was such a slacker for so long how did she even get new charges. So many questions.
Date: 04 Mar 2018 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 26
So I can see the story weaving even though you say you’re blocked. Edward was a rising star angel then Lucifer used him, tricked him to kick off one of the worst times in our history. Bella born to a drug addicted whore and fatherless endures atrocities no one should as a child or as a woman but she still loves and gives to children. They are the perfect match to bring about a time of peace through their charges. Edward with the bruised and broken and Bella with children. No wonder Lucifer wants to destroy them both...fear. Also, I just know Bella’s father is important otherwise someone would have mentioned him...right?blah blah blah I leave hype storytelling to you ;-)
Date: 04 Mar 2018 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
I understand writers block but you always take on so much and you always get there too. Bella is going to make one kick ass angel for surviving this life of hers. I’m sure we’ll get a big battle towards the end will Gabriel be there? He’s my fav arch angel ;-)
Date: 04 Mar 2018 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
Sorry about Jasper but he was ripe for evil and the name Colton is hot for a cowboy. Yehaw Alice! Alice won’t have to wait too long. Rose evil, no surprise there or Emmett being along for the ride ;-) Also, that was a nice first date flying and all.
Date: 04 Mar 2018 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
Goodness give this poor girl a break. Please!! haven’t felt this bad for a Bella or Edward since Buying Love and that Edward broke me. I took an angst, drama break for a good while after that. So finally someone says the dreaded S word=Satan and I want to know why we have bitter jasper but zero dominion or arch angels? I know, I know... patience my child ;-) Okay but only because I believe.
Date: 03 Mar 2018 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
He really dropped the ball on sweet Bella. I mean foster care REALLY sucks on an average day but her experience even in fiction is god awful (pun intended). They owe her big time. Eternal life with sexy black winged Edward would do. *winks* BTW excellent choice giving him black wings. *le sigh*
Date: 03 Mar 2018 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
Non consensual? Raped! Thanks for the lack of detail because that was fucked with a capital UCK! So Renee was a crack whore? Hmm...but Charlie where the heck is he because his where abouts and lineage are key to why she is so important. No? Yes? Also, Heidi gets to be a newborn. Lucky bitch! JS
Date: 03 Mar 2018 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Okay Bella is important so says Alice. Edward a fallen angel is working hard to protect his mate against what we now know is Lucifer and he’s powerful. Riddle me this... where are the other angels. Him even? Technically Edward is a fallen and she, Bella that is, is the best of the good. This poor sweet long freaking suffering girl should have a kick ass guardian angel.
Date: 03 Mar 2018 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
So Riley is either a minion or Lucifer right? If Bella’s important Like Alice says why wouldnt he try to break her. I hate a broken Bella everyone wants to break her in fanfic but I jadore you and your fab stories. JS
So carry on I shall. Hopefully we won’t have to hear descriptions of her horrific experiences *bows head and prays*
Date: 26 Sep 2017 3:41 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for such a beautiful story!! Going from darkness into the loving light will always be relevant this day and age. Thank you for being such a creative writer so we that are not that talented can share in your gift of story telling. I wish you well in your life and in your next writing adventure. Take care!
Date: 24 Sep 2017 5:46 AM Title: Epilogue
A bit shocked that Esme decided to return to her all human state to live out her life with Thomas. Did Carlisle's memories become buried because of the extreme act of taking out the poison arrow from Bella?
This has been a very unique story, every step of the way.
Date: 24 Sep 2017 2:23 AM Title: Epilogue
I always get so excited when I see that you have writin something new. And I can't wait for each new chapter to be posted, yet grow sad as I get closer to the end of each great story. So yet again as this great story comes to its close, I look forward to the next adventure that awaits Edward and Bella.
Date: 10 Sep 2017 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 35
I freakin' love that you're sending them to Scotland. I wish I was going. I've always felt an afffinity for all things British, but when I went on a trip there years ago, it was Scotland that called to me. Thank you, you are wrapping this up very nicely after all the suffering.Thanks!