Date: 06 Aug 2021 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am utterly speechless with the ending and very desperate for the next chapters. I am dying to know what will happen in the story now. The last chapter is full of emotions and mysteries. Bella and Tanya are half sisters, Edward was the one who helped Sarah for her immediate surgery when bella left the voicemail in his office.
Date: 02 Apr 2021 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely adore this story and can't believe the cliffhanger it has ended on. Would love to see an update but thinking after this long it is unlikely.
I hope you are okay and that whatever has taken you away from updating this and Twitter isn't something awful. Take care x
Date: 02 Nov 2020 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
This is my favourite story of all time! I've been reading it and rereading for the last 10 years. Really hoping we'll see a chapter 16 soon? I'm not quite sure what beta required for ch 16 means, so I'll keep hoping we'll find out soon.
You are so talented.
Date: 15 Dec 2018 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
Nooo!!! I need more!! I fell in love with this story and couldn’t stop! I know RL happens but I just hope you haven’t abandoned it. I wait patiently (some what ππ) for an update!! I love this Edward, reminds me of my husband.
Date: 03 Aug 2017 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
I was so excited to get the email notice from fanfiction.net that this story had updated after such a long time! After reading from the beginning again, I have finally caught up with all of the chapters. Such a cliffhanger! I really do hope you continue to update. I've always loved this story - i've thought about it often. Even if it means another long hiatus, I will always be excited to get an update! I wish I had the skills of a beta - I would gladly help you continue! And honestly, I would continue reading the story regardless. Don't give up, you've created a great storyline with wonderful characters!
Date: 03 Aug 2017 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
This story has consumed me day and night for the last few days. I love all the characters, I have a huge fascination with a bad boy Edward, and you're Edward especially appeals to me. He's beautifully flawed and fiercely loyal. I like Bella''s relationship with Jake and the Grey Wolves and in was concerned for Bella being in the Middle of the 2 gangs and how it would impact her. Edward and Bella''s relationship is so intense, i was totally capitvated and theri lemons are seriously hot!!! I love how you've tackled the issue of Mental Health and how you've shown that despite having a seemingly perfect life, underneath a person may be suffering, but we can portray a brave face. I cannot wait for the next chapter xxx
Date: 25 May 2017 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh. My. God. Oh my fucking God. Please, please, just please update. I need the next chapter so badly I can't fucking breathe. Oh my God. I first this story years ago, years! But then only 14 chapters had been updated and although I knew wasn't going to get complete satisfaction from this book because it wasn't finished, and I didn't belive you were going to update again, I still re-read this book over and over and over again, every few months. Imagine my surprise when I come onto the story again to see a chapter 15. And my God, you didn't dissapoint. My heart is pounding, I need the next chapter so bad. Thanks so much for updating again! Like I can literally jump in joy... except not er cos Charlie just died... but talk about a cliffhanger!
I live for this story, please keep updating!
Date: 04 Apr 2017 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
OmG cliffhanger of doom and despair. I hope you are writing away the next chapter! I'm going to be thinking about this one, which, with the number of WIPs I read, that's a huge compliment to your writing. Update when you can. Brett I've read in a very long while!
Date: 03 Apr 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
i would have loved alternating Edward POV's. i would be interested in
what and how he feels about everything...he is such an important and
interesting character who made the biggest impact in this fic...
he is so patient with bella who is still very irritatingly immature both in age and
in behavior, i really don't know how he does it. yes, he calls her "soulmate"
and seems so much more mature and worldly...opposites attract?
i want to know everything about him since he is such an essential
part to this story. this is such a gripping story, hope to read more soon.
Date: 02 Apr 2017 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh WoW! This story is better than I remember. Now who is after the chief? Is Seth and the other wolves on their way because they still care? and Is Edward coming to help her, because she is definietly hitting rock bottom...
Date: 31 Mar 2017 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
This is literally one of the best stories I've ever read on fanfiction twcs etc but his chapter really fucked my whole life up like you really got me thanks. But can't wait til you update I don't wanna be an asshole and be like update soon but update soon π€—
Date: 30 Mar 2017 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
Omg, seeing the fanfiction.net update email for this brightened my whole week. So happy to get back into this, the chapter took me on a fricken rollercoaster ride of emotions and I'm so excited to see what you have in store for the next one!
Date: 30 Mar 2017 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 15
You knocked the breath right out of me with this chapter. I will be haunting this site for chapter 16.
You are an extraordinary writer. You so fully develope your characters, I love their dialogues. Your storytelling is so suspenseful, emotional,loving, sensual...at times I don't even realize I am holding my breath. I am an avid reader and find all of these characteristics in a story rare.
I am so thoroughly enjoying this journey you are taking me on.
Date: 29 Mar 2017 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
I checked my email and saw the most exciting thing-an update on this story!!! I love the story and am happy to read the new chapter! This story is so well written and thought out. You are an insanely good writer and I've enjoyed reading this over and over. I can't wait to see what happens next and where you take this.
Date: 29 Mar 2017 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
My God this is so good! I've read this story for the past 4 days. Girl you can write! And boy does this have some serious twists and turns. First and foremost, I love the intense connection between Bella and Edward. Truly magnetic. Second, the drama is off the charts! Really, really good! Love it so much!!!