Date: 09 Jun 2019 4:06 PM Title: Dreaded Author Note
Please finish story. Thanks
Date: 21 Mar 2019 5:43 AM Title: Dreaded Author Note
I am sad but thank you so much for telling me this I will be happy when I see a post.
Date: 21 Mar 2019 5:39 AM Title: Business Life
Things are changing. Bella is going to be pissed finding someone else in her house
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2019 7:26 AM Title: Dreaded Author Note
I thought this story was pretty good and I've read ALOT of Twilight fanfics. Sorry you've lost your muse. :'(
Date: 27 Feb 2019 8:04 PM Title: Dreaded Author Note
Thanks for letting us know; i gotta be honest i perfer EPOV on most stories myself, and i will read this until you let it go no matter how infrequent... cause it was a very interesting story. GOod luck in all you do!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2019 8:02 PM Title: Dreaded Author Note
Thank you.
Date: 19 Feb 2019 3:18 AM Title: Business Life
Loved reading in Edward's POV. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2019 6:00 PM Title: Business Life
You have more trouble than your grandfather dieing. Bella is going to ream you for the cleaning lady. And how is jasper going to explain this to alice?
Date: 11 Feb 2019 2:41 PM Title: Business Life
Love this story. Can't wait for more. I love this Edward. He is edgy. Bella is a bitch. They go together, so maybe they will calm each other down.
Date: 11 Feb 2019 1:34 PM Title: Business Life
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 11 Feb 2019 2:24 AM Title: Business Life
Carlisle and Edward are moving on up. But who took out Marcus?
Date: 10 Feb 2019 8:30 PM Title: Business Life
You don't have to explain yourself or yout version of Edward, this is your story. I know I am enjoying it. Keep doing your thing! It's good stuff. ;-)
Date: 09 Feb 2019 11:22 AM Title: Business Life
Loved it and can't wait for more.
Date: 09 Feb 2019 4:02 AM Title: Business Life
Sounds like you might have a mole.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2019 4:45 AM Title: Life of Bella
Disgusting with the siblings thing
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2019 3:27 AM Title: B/E meet
I want to see how the characters developed
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2019 1:54 AM Title: Bella
Stupid Lauren always trouble maker
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2019 11:15 PM Title: Edward
I think it’s going to be a good story
Date: 27 Jan 2019 3:11 PM Title: Life of Bella
Please update soon.
Date: 25 Jan 2019 7:41 AM Title: Life of Bella
He is getting under her skin.
Date: 24 Jan 2019 9:56 AM Title: B/E meet
Things are heating up love it
Date: 24 Jan 2019 8:45 AM Title: Edward
That is all it took he is hooked
Date: 24 Jan 2019 7:46 AM Title: Bella
Lauran in a bitch. I cant blame Bella for taking the tip she is working payday to pay day.
Date: 24 Jan 2019 4:10 AM Title: Edward
I dont think he likes his life
Date: 23 Jan 2019 7:35 PM Title: Life of Bella
A cleaning lady can come to my house anytime and clean. Bella has a huge chip on her shoulder.
Date: 22 Jan 2019 11:20 PM Title: Life of Bella
Well it is good she has bounderies. Too bad Alice has a rather juvenile way of handling her business. No keys go out until you tell your room mate. LOL
Date: 22 Jan 2019 11:20 PM Title: Life of Bella
Well it is good she has bounderies. Too bad Alice has a rather juvenile way of handling her business. No keys go out until you tell your room mate. LOL
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2019 1:45 AM Title: Life of Bella
Hello I found this little Gem on Facebook I love it I need more please
Date: 21 Jan 2019 2:28 PM Title: Life of Bella
Bella is getting some answers but also more questions. Wow, I cant believe that Edward sent someone over to clean their house without saying anything. Lol.
Date: 12 Dec 2018 7:04 PM Title: B/E meet
Bella is so judgemental. He hasn't done anything to her to make her have a reason to hate him. She just has a big chip on her shoulder.
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2018 1:40 AM Title: B/E meet
Looking forward to reading more of this
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2018 3:18 AM Title: B/E meet
New reader to your story..very interesting..This Bella is not to be play wirh..This Edward is a hot mess..Esme is definitely playing the part..I love it..can't wait for next installment..until you post again
Date: 10 Nov 2018 4:31 AM Title: B/E meet
Loved reading both POVs
Date: 10 Nov 2018 3:49 AM Title: B/E meet
Lol. I a kn really enjoying this story.
Date: 10 Nov 2018 2:01 AM Title: B/E meet
Hurry with next chapter. Where are we going here?
Date: 09 Nov 2018 3:45 PM Title: Edward
I can't remember, why did Bella react to Edward that way? I may need to go back and read the back chapters again.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
Because he was being a presumptous ass and thinking that she would go home & sleep with him. She's not a floozy. :)
Date: 19 Oct 2018 2:06 PM Title: Edward
Edward needs someone and I think Bella can keep him in line.
Date: 19 Oct 2018 6:24 AM Title: Edward
Oh my gosh they are brother and sister they should not act like this poor Bella she doesn’t know Edward
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2018 5:03 AM Title: Edward
I'm confused. I know that Edward and Ana aren't blood related but are they or have they had a romantic relationship?
Date: 19 Oct 2018 3:27 AM Title: Edward
He and Anna are disturbing. Good for B.
Date: 19 Oct 2018 2:52 AM Title: Edward
Glad Bella and Edward bumped into each other again. It was getting creepy with Edwards inner dialogue about his sister even if their not blood. Thanks for the update.
Date: 12 Jul 2018 5:54 PM Title: Bella
She will find a better one
Date: 12 Jul 2018 8:32 AM Title: Bella
How did Lauren know that Mr. A. tipped her? I hope Lauren gets in trouble. Now what will Bella do? Who was the guy Bell bumped into in the hallway after leaving Mr. A's room? Wondering when Edward and Bella will get together.
Date: 02 Jul 2018 8:54 PM Title: Bella
Such a great beginning for this story. I hope that you will be able to update sooner rather than later since I am hooked on reading this story.
I hope to see (& read) a continuation of chapters soon.
Thank you.
Date: 21 Jun 2018 6:37 AM Title: Bella
well when you do things you are not supposed to then when you get caught don't cry. Sorry Mr. A. from now on you get to have Lauren. Oh thats right that was not MR A. Lauren set her up.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! Bella getting fired is a good thing. Eventually in Part 3 she will meet Edward once she has a new job in a nightclub that Ana owns. So it's all gonna work out. :)
Date: 21 Jun 2018 6:17 AM Title: Bella
Cant wait for the next one
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 28 May 2018 4:50 AM Title: Edward
Well, I did not expect Ana to be drunk and dancing in a cage. Is Edward still going to fund her night club? It sounds like she can't handle her liquor.
Author's Response:
Ana is still quite young compared to Edward---who is nearly 27. So, she does go out and still have fun. But yes, he has funded her nightclub and since she is a Cullen, she will be professional. :) Thank you for reading!
Date: 26 May 2018 2:44 PM Title: Edward
Can’t wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2018 5:10 PM Title: Edward
Love your story can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 24 May 2018 5:42 AM Title: Edward
Pretty interesting and twisted with Ana and Edward. I hope he’s not this controlling asshole when he meets Bella. Can’t wait for more.
Author's Response:
I figured trying something different up front between Ana and Edward would be fun. Neither of them love each other...She will actually have HEA with another in the story. Edward is still going to be a jerk until he realizes that he wants to love Bella. I can tell you this it won't be love at first sight. :)
Thank you for reading!
Date: 23 May 2018 3:22 PM Title: Edward
i love this very well written xant wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 22 May 2018 10:54 PM Title: Edward
Why hate? I will only get upset if you let too much time pass without updates
Author's Response:
Because I have had plenty of people send hate mail in the past for how I write or it doesn't fit their narrative. It's sad Cos that's a reason why so many people get discouraged and quit.
Hope you enjoyed!
Date: 22 May 2018 9:22 PM Title: Edward
Love it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 22 May 2018 10:54 AM Title: Edward
LOVE IT!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2018 10:28 AM Title: Edward
GREAT!!! Keep it Coming 😊
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 22 May 2018 8:57 AM Title: Edward
Great story, more please.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 22 May 2018 5:23 AM Title: Edward
I really like this story so far my only disappointment was that there was no mention of bella yet. But i can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Bella doesn't show up till Part 2. She's in Part 1 but not mentioned.
Thanks for reading.