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Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2018 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

I hooked on this!!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2018 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 2

Poor Edward, he's so hard on himself.

Sherry

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2018 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 2

Sadly I can see his recovery taking quite awhile.  

Reviewer: trojangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

This story is awesome! I cannot wait to see what happens. Poor Edward.  Are we guessing that Ben Cheney beat his own wife?  Did she live? Did I miss that part? Thanks for another story.  You guys are the best!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

Well he is creating his own mess. She might have been Bella and a very sweet gal

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

poor e

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

sad for e

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 2

Poor Edward..... He expects the absolute worst from everyone and doesn;t expect anything from himself.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 2

I like how your writing Edward. Your making him vary real..

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: Mounds01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

This is very interesting can't wait for more.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2018 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Okay here we go. Stage is set we have met Esme ,carlisle, charlie and Edward. Thank you

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2018 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

SAD BEGINNING BUT I HAVE FAITH IN YOUR MAD WRITING SKILLS.  SO.... I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE WITH ONE EYE OPEN. (lol) 

     READ YOU SOON

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2018 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm along for the ride. Poor Edward; he's had it rough. Looking forward to reading his story. Although I'm hoping he gets his name cleared.

Sherry

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2018 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

I feel so bad for Edward.  You would think that Mrs. Cheney would have named who really beat her up since it wasn't Edward.   I suspect the husband.   ugh.....

Reviewer: Vtiedemann Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2018 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm intrigued and looking forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2018 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome start.  Can't wait to see where you take it.  I'm thinking that Ben Cheney is going to become a thorn in his side even more than now.    

 

Swan's Dance:  I've seen that video.  Too cute.

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2018 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

I saw the father video.  It made me feel so good for his daughter.  Cool way to get a story Idea.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2018 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 

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