[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2022 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 46 - Take Away (Emmett)
hate the short chapters but knew before starting but I am enjoying the story
Date: 25 May 2019 4:21 AM Title: Afterward
I really feel Bella is to hard on Edward. She has done a lot of stupid stuff herself so I don’t think she should judge other people.
Date: 23 May 2019 12:55 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for the afterward because I still have questions. I hope one day Edward and Bella trully get together and his daughter has his name. It is sick that both have Jacob's last name. Edward is doing so well. Bella needs to give him something to cherish.
Date: 22 May 2019 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 206 - Bomb (Emmett)
That little girl is so going to have Emmett wrapped aroung her little finger.
Date: 21 May 2019 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 205 - Bowling Ball (Rosalie)
Emmett is such an angel to put up with Rosalie.
Date: 21 May 2019 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 202 - Water Break (Rosalie)
He is not an ambulance.
Date: 20 May 2019 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 201 - Study (Edward)
Yeah to Edward. That is a big step saying it out loud to Carlisle. He needs to know that it is wrong and he is not the one who is wrong. He just handled it wroing with the drugs, just like Alice did with cutting. They both need to find a new way to deal with these wounds.
Date: 17 May 2019 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 193 - Petty Pilfering (Leah)
Maybe Leah can do something that is not cruel.
Date: 17 May 2019 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 192 - Dial (Emmett)
Be brave Emmett.
Date: 16 May 2019 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 190 - Limitations (Jacob)
Jacob needs to stay away from Bella. They need to buid independent lives.
Date: 15 May 2019 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 188 - Dishes (Bella)
Can we say breakthrough.
Date: 15 May 2019 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 188 - Dishes (Bella)
Can we say breakthrough.
Date: 08 May 2019 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 179 - Tempted (Jacob)
I can't believe Jacob said something intelligent.
Date: 07 May 2019 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 178 - Check (Edward)
Yes, Edward stay off drugs and go to the bank and build a life with Bella and the babies.
Date: 04 May 2019 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 175 - Choked Up (Bella)
These people in this story are all crazy.
Date: 01 May 2019 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 174 - In May (Rosalie)
But she loves him.
Date: 18 Apr 2019 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 169 - Volition (Jacob)
Leah will never face the truth about her toxic attitude.
Date: 15 Apr 2019 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 167 - Confused (Edward)
Just stay clean and call Carlisle and Esme for guidance.
Date: 09 Apr 2019 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 165 - Not Sure (Bella)
Edward better step up for Bella and the babies.
Date: 28 Mar 2019 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 157 - Stable (Jacob)
I understand why this is hard to write. It is also hard to read. I hope there is some happiness at the end.
Date: 04 Mar 2019 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 142 - Guilt (Bella)
Bella needs to stay strong and away from Jacob. She needs to concentrate on the babies and how she is going to support them. She needs to talk to Edward also.
Date: 04 Mar 2019 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 141 - Interrogation (Seth)
Always ask for a lawyer and don't answer questions without one. I thought everyone knew that fact. They will try to get you to admit to lies to get out of there.
Date: 03 Mar 2019 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 140 - He Chose You (Bella)
Yay!! Maybe now she can focus on her babies and helping Edward out of his misery!! XOXO
Date: 02 Mar 2019 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 140 - He Chose You (Bella)
I can't wait to find out for sure who's the father of the babies
Date: 27 Feb 2019 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 137 - The Wait (Bella)
Bella needs to stay strong and keep Jacob out of her life.
Date: 27 Feb 2019 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 135 - Brights Ahead (Jacob)
Darn.
Date: 20 Feb 2019 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 133 - Mentality (Seth)
Garrett is so good for Seth. Keep him away from the crazy people of Forks.
Date: 19 Feb 2019 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 132 - Intimate Gathering (Leah)
Leah is just evil.
Date: 19 Feb 2019 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 129 - Pre-Something (Jacob)
They are both crazy. I think the pastor is the only sane person in Forks.
Date: 13 Feb 2019 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 127 - Covers & Latches (Alice)
So true. It should be easier.
Date: 12 Feb 2019 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 126 - X (Leah)
Leah has serious issues and she will never be truly happy.
Date: 08 Feb 2019 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 122 - Issue (Bella)
I gotta be honest.... The babies being Edward's is one of the things i was really REALLY hoping for. I am a E/B lover all the w ay and really hope that those two end up together in the end of this. It is the part of the story i am most riveted on, honestly. Can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 08 Feb 2019 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 122 - Issue (Bella)
Bella needs to be honest with herself. She does not love Jacob. He is just the easy choice. He doesn't love anyone. but himself.
Date: 04 Feb 2019 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 120 - Fuzzy (Bella)
She is going to have to face facts soon.
Date: 28 Jan 2019 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 82 - Why Are You Here? (Edward)
If anyone can help Edward it is Carlisle. He knows the truth about how horrible Edward Sr. is.
Date: 28 Jan 2019 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 80 - Ten Years (Seth)
Jacob finally did a good thing.
Date: 28 Jan 2019 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 68 - Niche (Alice)
Alice needs to join Edward in therapy.
Date: 28 Jan 2019 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 57 - Fear (Seth)
Poor Seth
Date: 28 Jan 2019 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 55 - Bella Italia (Seth)
I'm happy Garrott is attracted to Seth as well.
Date: 28 Jan 2019 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Animals (Seth)
Seth needs to understand that his feelings are ok.
Date: 28 Jan 2019 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Threat (Edward)
Get him to rehab and therapy. It is the only way to save him.
Date: 28 Jan 2019 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 26 - The Calm Before (Bella)
What a tool! I can't wait until he gets his just desserts.
Date: 28 Jan 2019 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Dress (Seth)
Leah should shut up and leave Seth alone. He deserves to be happy and not with her.
Date: 28 Jan 2019 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Mocha Latte (Seth)
Yeah for him. He should not settle for Leah.
Date: 25 Jan 2019 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Lost (Bella)
Gross. He was just with Leah.
Date: 25 Jan 2019 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Up The Creek (Leah)
This is one sick town. I feel bad for Seth. He deserves better or is he cheating also.
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2018 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Waking Up (Jacob)
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2018 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 64 - Irina (Bella)
I'm not pregnant but just the thought of those scents together is enough to make me gag.
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks for all the reviews
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2018 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 63 - Texts (Seth)
I love persistent garrett! Squeaky wheel gets the lube! Haha
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2018 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 62 – Elvis (Emmett)
He already has her ring. He really is swoon worthy!
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2018 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 61 - Promise (Bella)
I hope she tells jake about this so when he decides to cheat again he can wrap it up!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 60 - To Hack (Alice)
Wow! I was not expecting her to have had the baby. That's awesome that she gave her up. Her being a hacker is bound to bring up something scary for jasper. I'm a little worried! Congrats on your baby coming in Jan!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 59 - Question (Rosalie)
Omgsh! He is even more smitten than i realized!! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 58 - Memory (Leah)
What the heck did she do!! Bella & jacob need to be worried about std's from her!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 57 - Fear (Seth)
He got a little kiss! Hooray!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 56 - A Start (Emmett)
I'm laughing out loud!! I love them together!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 55 - Bella Italia (Seth)
Let garrett wine & dine you & then relieve you of your clothes!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 54 - Journaling (Edward)
I just want to hug him!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 53 - Drop Trou (Rosalie)
Rose is such a boss! Love it!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 52 - History (Jasper)
Poor jasper! Him and alice have such bad histories.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 51 - Bad Service (Leah)
Worst server ever!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Renewal (Bella)
No no no no!! I know you warned us of this. I'm still just not ready.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 49 - Doubt (Rosalie)
She is so hooked on him!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 48 - White Lie (Emmett)
Naughty Emmett breaking the law.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 47 - Strange Conversation (Seth)
If I were seth I would be driving to Seattle.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 46 - Take Away (Emmett)
That middle name is hilarious!!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 45 - Checklist (Rosalie)
I think i would fire maggie she is super annoying! She must be goid at her job if rose is keeping her around.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 44 - Hell (Edward)
I can't wait to see what carlisle asks him next!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Seattle (Emmett)
He is so going to ny!! Maybe some good lovin from seth could make garrett feel better!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 42 - To Be A Fly (Seth)
Hello mr. Spider!! I can't stop smiling knowing that garrett has been chasing seth.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Recipe (Jacob)
She is so preggers!!! So sad the way she states the last "person" i was with.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Little Ears (Leah)
I wonder if claire will be repeating this conversation?
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Broken (Alice)
She is going to be all cut up. Not that it really bothers her.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Bruise (Bella)
I think she is pregnant but i really want it to br edwards baby.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Rehab Center (Rosalie)
Hello carlisle!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Animals (Seth)
I was hoping he had called garret but soon i can tell.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Baseline (Jacob)
I just can't stand jacob.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Threat (Edward)
Thanks for clearing edward & jacob of the kicking. Now i'm just wondering who did it?
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Anger (Rosalie)
Thank goodness rose saw her at the police station.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Faceless (Alice)
I hope alice doesn't cut herself after this.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Choices (Edward)
I hate how much they all hurt!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 30 - The Game (Jasper)
I love that she turned him down very matter of factly!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 - The Letter (Emmett)
I really hope he can go!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 28 - The Storm (Edward)
I really want to kill ed sr!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2018 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Coward (Rosalie)
So proud of her!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2018 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 26 - The Calm Before (Bella)
Oh no edward don't wake up yet!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews so far
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2018 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Dress (Seth)
I really wonder what happened in the last chapter with seth. It makes me winder how much day dreaming he did.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2018 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Declaration (Emmett)
Way to go emmett just lay it all on the line! I didn't think he would just give up his kid.
Date: 23 Nov 2018 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Mocha Latte (Seth)
I can't see mocha latte seth either.
Author's Response:
It should be there now. Not sure what's going on with that chapter
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2018 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Unexpected Demand (Rosalie)
Super proud of you emmett!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2018 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Forestry (Jacob)
I hope he's not planning to use her inheritance.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2018 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Pallid Decision (Bella)
Bella u could live with rose or even edward
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2018 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Tastes May Vary (Leah)
Rocky road!! Very funny!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2018 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Donor (Rosalie)
And there u have it emmett!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2018 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Bandages (Jasper)
Looks like alice & edward could be getting rooms side by side.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2018 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Extra Y (Emmett)
Cats out of the bag!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2018 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Waiting Game (Alice)
Shut the hell up emmett! There is no way that ahole has any rights.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2018 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Studies (Seth)
So garrett is the mystery man.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2018 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 13 - A Different Nut (Leah)
So leah is as much a freak in the sheets as emmett. And sue wuth emmett! Wow!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2018 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Possible Plans (Rosalie)
I'm loving rose right now!!