Date: 12 May 2021 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
that was so sweet
Date: 03 May 2021 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
Sweet chapter. Welcome back





Date: 01 May 2021 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love seeing Bella being so tender and caring toward Edward when he's not too sure of himself or their relationship. Very sweet.
Sherry
Date: 28 Sep 2020 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 15
Glad they talked a bit. That he felt comfortable to share w her.





Date: 26 Sep 2020 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
A very emotional filled chapter. Edward's been through a lot as a young kid. Bella has more support to give him than he's had from anyone before. That's a good thing; so maybe one day he'll be able to talk about Garrett without breaking down.
Sherry





Date: 25 Sep 2020 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loving this story.
Date: 25 Sep 2020 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 15
That is a lot to learn
Date: 10 Sep 2020 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
Aww for everyone welcoming her. Tanya was sweet.
Date: 08 Sep 2020 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
That has gone good
Date: 08 Sep 2020 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
they have such amazing will power
Date: 08 Sep 2020 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 12
meeting the family omg
Date: 08 Sep 2020 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
they are just so darn cute
Date: 08 Sep 2020 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
they are cooking now
Date: 07 Sep 2020 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
love it they are so cute
Date: 07 Sep 2020 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella is ready to move right along
Date: 07 Sep 2020 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella showed he lol
Date: 07 Sep 2020 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
They think each other are perrfect it must be love lol
Date: 07 Sep 2020 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh no. What happened to Garrett





Date: 07 Sep 2020 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
Aww, she's met the wild and crazy family, love it.





Date: 07 Sep 2020 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 14
Happy to get an update, thank you. Bella seems to be mixing well with his family. I'm more curious now about Garrett. How's Edward going to cope meeting Charlie after the 'talk' E/B before arriving in Forks. It's going to be a long weekend knowing what is to come once they return home.
Sherry





Date: 12 Nov 2019 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
They should give into their desires. Looking forward to their trip home.
Sherry





Date: 11 Nov 2019 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
LOL, poor Bella is a nervous wreck.
Date: 11 Nov 2019 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
They are so cute, but I'm sure Charlie is going to question her to death about Edward. He is going to find out. It is Forks.
Date: 11 Nov 2019 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
those two are just so cute





Date: 22 Oct 2019 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm hoping Alice meets Jasper soon. She sounds like she needs her own Prince Charming. Bella's meeting Edward's parents; no big deal. No sense getting worked up or nervous about it. When it's right, it's right. It's the natural order of things. They're actually taking things a little slow for the majority of relationships.
Sherry
Date: 22 Oct 2019 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
I never understood the fear of meeting the family. I want to see the whole package. I love seeing how people act with their family, especially how they act and treat their mom.
Date: 22 Oct 2019 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
Glad B talked to Alice about opening herself up as well. Slow is ok but combustion is a biatch.





Date: 22 Oct 2019 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
LOL, she's going to meet the parents. Loving it.
Date: 21 Sep 2019 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter, thank you! I like the way they communicate with each other! Bella tells him about her insecurities and he takes her seriös and answers honestly. That's so good!





Date: 21 Sep 2019 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Such a sweet chapter. Love how this was a normal day for a couple getting to know each other.
Sherry





Date: 20 Sep 2019 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love these two so much, they're really getting to know one another. So, ewww, pepper in sauce.
Date: 20 Sep 2019 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
Nice talk between them. Wondering about his family.
Date: 20 Sep 2019 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
They just need to enjoy each other at this point. Talking is so important, so you don't waste time with someone who is not on the same track as you. I think they both want the same thing out of this relationship, a future.
Date: 19 Sep 2019 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
It is time to share more. They need it to grow the relationship.





Date: 14 Sep 2019 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
I flove these two together, no matter what they're doing. Jasper seems like an exceptional parent. I already don't like Mila. The friendship bond between Edward and Jasper is one to be admired.
Sherry





Date: 14 Sep 2019 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
LOL Jasper caught them making out. They are really getting to know one another which is nice.
Date: 13 Sep 2019 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm the exact same way about tomatoes.





Date: 08 Sep 2019 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
I really enjoy reading about these two together and how they are finding their way in getting to know each other. I especially like Edward's students ribbing him about Bella.
Sherry
Date: 07 Sep 2019 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
Jajaja I hope that was jasper who cut in
Date: 07 Sep 2019 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
Lol for getting caught Necking in the car. Wonder why she stiffened
Date: 03 Sep 2019 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
I can't wait to find out why he is living like a college student.





Date: 30 Aug 2019 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward should've went ahead and invested in a real bed. Their next date should be interesting, considering he's already fantasizing about her in his kitchen and finding it sexy.
Sherry
Date: 30 Aug 2019 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Aww they are too cute together.
Date: 26 Aug 2019 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Aww they are too cute together.





Date: 24 Aug 2019 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
These two are so adorable together, loving this story.
Date: 24 Aug 2019 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
okay on to cooking.





Date: 24 Aug 2019 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
Perfect chapter.
Sherry





Date: 22 Aug 2019 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
I really enjoyed this chapter. Something tells me they aren't going to have the normal type of relationship; they'll do things to the beat of their own drum.
Sherry





Date: 22 Aug 2019 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
Good little chapter. I like reading about them enteracting on a day to day level, getting to know one another.
Sherry





Date: 19 Aug 2019 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loving this story and these two are so adorable with one another.
Date: 18 Aug 2019 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
good story Kyla.. thanks
Date: 18 Aug 2019 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Freshly Picked Date
TIme to change friends if they can not accept your choices.
Date: 17 Aug 2019 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
Yes! I liked the date - so much! Thank you!
Date: 17 Aug 2019 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 6
Aww such a sweet lunch date
Date: 17 Aug 2019 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Thanks for all the updates. I love the interaction between these two.
Date: 17 Aug 2019 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bella's question at the end is awesome! Good chapter, thank you!
Date: 17 Aug 2019 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
Eww for the nasty woman. Aww for her getting flustered





Date: 16 Aug 2019 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
So loving this story and these two.





Date: 13 Aug 2019 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Edward is so adorable. Jasper is a good friend and funny.
Date: 12 Aug 2019 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
Alice needs to keep quiet and let Bella enjoy Edward. They are so cute together stumbling along these first dates and calls.
Date: 12 Aug 2019 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
She is in love and picking out names love it
Date: 12 Aug 2019 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
he is hooked so cute
Date: 11 Aug 2019 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
Yea I often wonder how people I work with keep their jobs. Sweet chapter though. Thanks





Date: 10 Aug 2019 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
They are both head over heels for each other.
Sherry





Date: 10 Aug 2019 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
The feelings new relationships bring...
Sherry





Date: 10 Aug 2019 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Freshly Picked Date
I really enjoyed this chapter.
Sherry





Date: 10 Aug 2019 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
I actually like that both Edward and Bella want to move their relationship forward (that was cute; Bella trying on his last name), and that they’re both respectful and sweet despite how much they’re drawn to one another. It’s nice. I can’t wait for their date on Friday!
I feel bad for Alice:( I was wondering why she seemed somewhat hard and bitter. I’m hoping she doesn’t hurt or alienate Bella over Edward. Jasper seems way more supportive of Edward than Alice is to Bella but I’m sure that’s only because she’s worried for her friend being too hasty and winding up badly hurt.
Thanks again for sharing. Looking forward to the next chapter. ~RoseE. x
Date: 10 Aug 2019 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
Lol for his kids and Jasper.





Date: 05 Aug 2019 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Freshly Picked Date
I love Alice, she's the voice of reason at times I see.





Date: 05 Aug 2019 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Slightly Bruised Ego
OMG, loving this story already so much.
Date: 04 Aug 2019 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Freshly Picked Date
Love it
Date: 04 Aug 2019 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Freshly Picked Date
Love it
Date: 04 Aug 2019 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Freshly Picked Date
Loving this story! So glad you posted it. I was cracking up at the tampon scene. Priceless. I could totally see that happening.
Date: 03 Aug 2019 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Freshly Picked Date
Sweet first date. Glad they had a nice time.
Date: 03 Aug 2019 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Slightly Bruised Ego
Aww nice start.





Date: 02 Aug 2019 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Freshly Picked Date
:)
Date: 01 Aug 2019 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Slightly Bruised Ego
I iove it, please keep it up.




Date: 29 Jul 2019 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Slightly Bruised Ego
Loved it
Date: 29 Jul 2019 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Slightly Bruised Ego
sounds great will be waiting for more.





Date: 29 Jul 2019 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Slightly Bruised Ego
Looking forward to more





Date: 29 Jul 2019 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Slightly Bruised Ego
Love it can't wait to read more.Glad your back.





Date: 28 Jul 2019 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Slightly Bruised Ego
Ok, you better post soon. I'm hooked.
LOVE IT!
Date: 27 Jul 2019 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Slightly Bruised Ego
This was a really sweet meet-cute!!
*huggles*
Date: 27 Jul 2019 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ Slightly Bruised Ego
A great way to start! Very promising! I love the feisty way Bella acts. I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Thank you for posting!