[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2019 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love this story!! But ... i HATE the way Damon is to his mom.... i hope he wakes up and realized what a little shit he is being... poor Bella.
Date: 28 Aug 2019 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think Edward should get the security guard for Damian. He thinks he is so slick. A summer with a guard everywhere he goes might help him from being such a slut like his sperm donor. He has no business being with college girls. Bella doesn't want to be a gramma at 32.
Date: 26 Aug 2019 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
Damon needs a kick in the arse. Love his punishment though.
Date: 25 Aug 2019 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, Edward and Bella definitely have a house full.
Date: 25 Aug 2019 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
I was wondering if you could give us the ages of all the kid . If you have already I apologize, I must have missed it.
Date: 25 Aug 2019 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, things have changed on the kid front with Edward and Bella. They definitely have their hands full.
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2019 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
LOVE IT!
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[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2019 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hopefully Lucian will speak to his parents soon about his girl's homelessness. That is so sad. Damon better shape up. He probably does have kids out there with as 'active' as he has been.
Edward better be fully armed when he goes to battle with Bella. LOL It sounds like she won't rest easy.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
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Edward really does need to prepar lol Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 22 Aug 2019 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
Really good
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[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2019 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter keep writing
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Date: 16 Aug 2019 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
Sam seems like a really sweet girl. Aww for shy lucien. Gotta love technology to keep track of kids
Date: 16 Aug 2019 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Now that I've reread the original, off to the sequel
Wowsers Damon is going to get into real trouble I'm afraid. Hopefully won't make the mistakes his sperm donor did.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2019 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward and Bella seem to unconsciously be pitting Damon against Lucian. Damon obviously needs to talk to someone, but he is going to start hating on his brother and parents soon if things don't change. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 15 Aug 2019 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
looks like she is. Bless her heart. You would be surprised at the parents who kick teenagers out that are under the age of 18. They are still children even if they are as big as you.
Date: 12 Aug 2019 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Is this a continuation or are we suppose to feel like we came in the middle? Also never name your child, Damon or anything close to Demon or Damian. They will become one.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2019 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
My Goodness, is he taking after Jake? I hope he straightens up. Keep writing
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Possibly! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09 Aug 2019 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really good
I am so glad it is finally here
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[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2019 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Damon seems so lost among everyone and himself. Poor guy needs some help/direction and doesn't even know it. Thanks for writing and sharing.
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He really does! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2019 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Damon seems so lost among everyone and himself. Poor guy needs some help/direction and doesn't even know it. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2019 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Damon seems so lost among everyone and himself. Poor guy needs some help/direction and doesn't even know it. Thanks for writing and sharing.