Date: 03 Dec 2020 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter as always I love all of your guy's stories and don't worry about how long a wait can be real life happens and it's been a crazy year can't wait to read the next chapter and have a good holiday season and be safe out there
Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
It's so cool that everyone has come to help out with the event handing out free food and having music and entertainment. That's a great way to get your name out there. Word of mouth is the best advertising. And they can have a baby, when they're ready of course. I am loving this.
I'm keeping y'all and your families in my thoughts and prayers and sending positive energy your way. Thank you for still making the time to write and share your stories with us.
Date: 30 Oct 2020 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Iove it and can't wait to see them have kids. I really hope she calls Vicki and James dad soon. I hope to see how the opening goes...how they work being part owners in each restraunt and head chef/baker of one. Maybe a little.lemons throughout. I really want to read about the proposal and wedding/honeymoon. Do Vicki, james, jimmy, and Jake all stay in america cuz they have their own restraunt back home.
Date: 19 Oct 2020 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 24
LOVE Vicky!!!!!!!! I would love Charlie's POV at the end of story. I would love to know why he has done the things he has done. Also would like to know the pain he will/is going to endure while he is in prison.
Date: 16 Oct 2020 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for all your hard work with all the hard times you are going through right now. This chapter had a lot in it but damn it was so worth the wait. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Until next time,
Date: 16 Oct 2020 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
I've been reading y'all's stories for a while now and I must say they get better and better! Good job, I'm so proud of y'all! This Vicky, man she's got balls of steel! Love her! Can't wait for Charlie to get what's coming to him...in every way.
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
The new building changes, layouts, uniforms and mixers (lol) all seem to be a success with the staff and owners. :) Marcus approved of everything and I'm pleased that he warned them more about Charie.
Present shopping was very couple-y. ;) Sexy time was hot and passionate and made me jealous of fictional characters. hehehe,,,,
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 18 Sep 2020 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hopefully sweet Bella will get used to the praise and compliments from people about her work.
I'm pleased about the restraining order on Charlie the abusive douche canoe.
Bella and Edward's sexy time was jealousy inducing. ;) At least I can live vicariously.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 16 Sep 2020 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
I want to see Charlie get his just desserts. Extended prison time, huge monetary fines and the loss of all his businesses for a start. Then maybe he should get shanked in prison for being a child abuser. I'll probably think of more later...haha
Date: 27 Aug 2020 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh, I have no doubt Charlie will be back. He didn't get all the money he wanted last time. But Joe is not there to tell him when Bella is alone. I hope Edward and all the rest keep a close watch on her and never let her be alone. Good thing Jimmy and Vicky will be around to help out and keep a close eye on things.
Date: 27 Aug 2020 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
Seems there are a few working together to make the restaurant fail. But with Edward, Bella and her friends and family they are working hard to make itt succeed. I like the new theme, reflecting the Scottish heritage. I hope they catch Charlie soon because I would love to see his ass handed to him. Glad Edward finally had a chance to explain to Bella about his review of the restaurant as Anthony Masen and why he purchased the property next door.