Date: 23 Apr 2020 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loving this story so much! I can't wait to find out Bella's backstory! Also... Bella's the cake lady, right?
Date: 23 Apr 2020 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
Things are not clear and I think Bella needs to loss her shit and make him lisen to her
Date: 23 Apr 2020 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hate Edward? No way lol
I really do feel that he is being quite patient with Bella.
She doesnt seem to really care about much at all and gets butt-hurt when its pointed out in any way.
She is seriously pissing me off with her snotty attitude towards Jasper.
It was her precious Daddy that got someone who wasnt HER mother pregnant, that's not Jaspers fault.
She needs to get over herself.
Ok, rant over lol.
Great chapter
Loved it
Date: 23 Apr 2020 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
I just wanted to hug Bella this people so call employees are shit and the pervy customers suck I still don’t like Edward he’s hot and cold he’s judging Bella before he gets all the facts
Date: 23 Apr 2020 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
Glad E is starting to see that B knows a few things. Ugh we need spme B POV. Need some back story ladies!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2020 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
Who's the cake Lady? I beta bella went to pastries school or something
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2020 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love this story. Reading it here because ffn has smut restrictions. Why doesn't Edward & Bella pull a Gordon Ramsey & shut down the place? Why doesn't Bella just fire Mike, Jessica, Taylor, etc? I don't understand why she lets her staff talk to her that way. There's a hierarchy & mike has no business superseding Bella's authority. She's HIS boss, not the other way around.
As for Jasper, I think there needs a come clean moment.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2020 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
I would start with firing Mike and wroking my way down the ladder!
Date: 22 Apr 2020 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
Did Taylor & Eric actually graduate from culinary school or did Mike just help them fake their credentials?
Date: 22 Apr 2020 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
Sounds like E has a big chip on his shoulder about Jasper and Bella's treatment. Does anyone else feel like Charlie was telling B and J some BS so they'd never meet? REally need to hear B's story.
Date: 22 Apr 2020 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
Glad Bella is starting to turn things around. Eric is a real arsehole.
Date: 22 Apr 2020 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yes Jess needs to go. But the other side of the story is going to be epic I'll bet.
Date: 20 Apr 2020 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm frustrated with Edward that he has preconceived notions about Bella. Alice makes it sound like Bella is working her ass off there. She was already there when Edward arrived. Since I have no Bella POV only Edward's I know nothing about Bella except what he sees. It seems like there is so much more backstory about Jasper. I hope he and Bella find a way to become at least friends.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2020 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm pretty sure scumbag Charlie lied to EVERYONE. Bella definitely doesn't even know who Jasper is. There is waaaaaayyy to much assuming going on. Bella needs to fire everyone except Alice too. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 18 Apr 2020 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
I wonder just what charlie told bella
Date: 16 Apr 2020 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
I think there is more to the story with Bella and don't trust Charlie's description of her feelngs. Edward is passing judegement without giving her a change just like he thinks she is doing with Jasper.
Date: 16 Apr 2020 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
Something is not right Bella doesnt know who Jasper is?
Date: 16 Apr 2020 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ok 1st I love your stories 2nd I really like how Bella stud up for herself don’t like how she apologizes to Edward but I guess that makes her the better man 3rd I really hate how edward has this vision of Bella as the bad guy I really hope when everything comes out to lite he regrets it sooo freakin much I really don’t think Bella knows jasper is her brother or that she ever got he’s letters
Date: 16 Apr 2020 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
I dont think Bella knows Jasper is her brother!! I think Charlie is an ass and told her something bad about him. Edward is going to feel really bad when the truth comes out!!! lol
Date: 16 Apr 2020 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yes, Jasper should confront Bella. Bella is working my nerves on so many levels...but also I dont care how she handle (or didnt handle) business- there is no way that I would accept the level of disrespect from her employees
Date: 16 Apr 2020 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am on pins and needles to learn about where and why Bella was gone. My guess someone died in Scotland and she was pissed off at Charlie, who expected to inherit something that went to her and he didn't get it. I Also think she doesn't know about Jasper that Charlie forged her response...or she doen't remember.
Charlie seems like an overall prick.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2020 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Im already in love with this story! As a chef, im always looking for food inspired fic and this one seems great already. Im a huge fan !
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2020 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
I don't think Bella wrote that letter but Charlie did I think he is the one who damaged everything
Date: 15 Apr 2020 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
Charlie lied. Bella does not know anything about Jasper, or Charlie lied to her too if she got the letter. Jasper comming to Charlie is the reason she was sent to Scotland, she did not run away like Jasper was told.
Date: 15 Apr 2020 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
I think there's more to this than meets the eye. Maybe Charlie is the one not being honest? I do think a sit down is in order. I also think everyone needs to be fired. The insubordination is ridiculous. Mike may be the manager but the ultimate boss is Bella. Eric & Jessica as well as mike need to remember that!
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2020 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
I don't think Charlie was honet with Bella about Jasper and that is the reason she left for so long. What we have here is a failure to communicate. And now Edward is stuck in the middle.
Date: 15 Apr 2020 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
So, she doesn't know J is her brother 😱
Date: 15 Apr 2020 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hell yes, he should confront Bells. I have a feeling that Bells has no idea who he is. I want more of Bella's back story. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 15 Apr 2020 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm going to guess that Bella's anger towards Jasper is more about Bella's anger towards her dad for having an affair.
I think we'd need to know about Bella's mother and Jasper's mother. Also need to know more about Bella's relationship with Charlie
I'm 99% sure Bella baked the cakes herself. If she did, I have no idea why she thinks keeping it a secret is to her advantage.
The meeting has potential to go well if Bella is brutally honest about the restaurant's current situation
Date: 12 Apr 2020 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved this chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2020 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward and Bella seem to be finding their way with the restaurant. A whole lot of the employees need to be given the booth though. ugh....
Their are so many mysteries to solve surrounding Bella. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 09 Apr 2020 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
86 the entire staff, shut down & then reopen after all the rats have jumped ship with a new & better crew.
Date: 09 Apr 2020 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
She is growing on Edward lol. I think she stayed away because of Charlie
Date: 09 Apr 2020 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love the story so far. Wasn’t sure I was going to like Bella—still not sure. I loved Undeniable and love anything written by Assilem33.
Date: 08 Apr 2020 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love this so far! Cannot wait for Bella's back story!
Date: 08 Apr 2020 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am really enjoying this story. Can't wait to find out more about why Bella has been gone for so long.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2020 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow she is working so hard but I wish I knew why she was gone
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2020 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Does Bella know that Jasper is her brother? Did she leave the states because of a rift in the famSo many questions!!!!
Eric and Taylor need to go. Period. And Mike should be on the way out with them. I have a feeling mike has been skimming off the top and a good accountant will be able to spot that right away.
Date: 04 Apr 2020 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my what a mess, keep on writing
Date: 03 Apr 2020 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Edward need to give her a break as she is trying.
Date: 02 Apr 2020 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait to find out what Bella's story is and why she has stayed away.
Date: 02 Apr 2020 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
I feel like Bella was thrown into the deep end and doesn't know how to swim! I fell bad for her. I think her reason for being gone is a good one and one that I hope we will find out soon. Edward is very hard on Bella and not knowing all the facts. The employees have no respect for Bella and need to be taken down a peg or two. Bella is trying and is working on little to no sleep. Edward should see that if Alice is taking up for Bella then there is a good reason. Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2020 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella should fire everyone but Alice and start from scratch. You're right about that. Hopefully Edward will help with hires and quit being an assuming douche canoe. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 02 Apr 2020 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
Fire them all, close down the restaurant & start all over. New menu, new staff, new cooks.
Date: 02 Apr 2020 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Fire them all, close down the restaurant & start all over. New menu, new staff, new cooks.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2020 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
Damn she needs a complete new staff only keeping Alice
Date: 02 Apr 2020 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
Fire them all, close down the restaurant & start all over. New menu, new staff, new cooks.
Date: 01 Apr 2020 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think Edward is going to feel really bad about how he is treating Bella when the truth comes out about everyting.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2020 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait for Edwards first conversation with Charlie about how he was run ning the place.
Date: 01 Apr 2020 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella obviously doesn't know how to run a restaurant. That's why she has asked for Edward's help. I wish he wouldn't be so impatient with her. She has not been running the restaurant like Edward seems to think, Charlie has. I also think Bella is tired. She has not made a good impression on him. The restarant needs to close for the evening, Bella and Alice and Edward need to sit down and make a plan of how to run the restaurant. Then they all need to go home and get some rest.
Date: 01 Apr 2020 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
yikes, that was painful
Date: 01 Apr 2020 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
I know Edward thinks Isabella was on a vacation trip. But I have a feeling it is a lot more than that. I feel like she has been in some kind of rehab or care facility, perhaps from an accident or something else. Sounds like Charlie cares for his daughter and that's why he spent 6 months with her. It's too bad that Charlie doesn't acknowledge Jasper. Perhaps he didn't know about Jasper, like maybe he was a result of an affair Charlie wasn't aware produced a child? So many thoughts going through my head. It is obvious that Edward doesn't care for Isabella even though he hasn't met her before. Edward reminds me of Gordon Ramsey.
Date: 30 Mar 2020 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hopefully there is a very good reason why Bella was away for so long. Is there a family member that has been ill or is it Bella? I hope that she isn't a spoiled girl and doesn't care about her grandmothers resturant, but I get the feeling she is far from spoiled. I hope that she will give Jasper a chance and give him the family he needs. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 30 Mar 2020 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great update! I feel so sorry for Jasper! Hopefully, he'll get good karma!!
Date: 29 Mar 2020 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hmm thinking that Charlie has been lying or hiding how things really are. Charlie is a real piece of work. E Def thinks alot about himself.
Date: 29 Mar 2020 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonder what Charlie will do when E shows up to save the restaurant. Wonder why B has been away so long aside from the brother thing
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2020 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
Keep on writing
Date: 28 Mar 2020 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
The Isabella sitiation is very hush hush!! Hmmm I hope she will be sweet and not as Terrible as Edward thinks. I can't wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2020 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm guessing that there is some pretty big secrets that are being kept by everyone. But I think Charlie's might be the only evil secrets. I'm not a fan of his at all. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
Has she been in cooking school? I'm looking forward to the fireworks between edward & bella! It's going to be so good!
Date: 27 Mar 2020 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
I hope Edward bites his tongue with Isabella he doesn’t know what she’s been up to
Date: 26 Mar 2020 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
I think Edward is going to be surprised how dedicated Bella is going to be.
Date: 26 Mar 2020 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
can't wait to find out what is going on. thinking that maybe she stayed away because of charlie . . . thinking she is not as bad as e and the cullens might think
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2020 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
my oh my he has very little faith in the Swans now will Bella change that
I loved it
Date: 25 Mar 2020 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait to find out why Bella has been away for so long. I understand she was upset finding out about Jasper but not to even come back for her grandmother's funeral. I hope Jasper doesn't lose Alice when the truth comes out. Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 25 Mar 2020 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh, Edward is hard minded
I'll guess Isabella was in a kind of rehabilitation facility after an accident or illness
And B left the country angry at her father no Jasper...
mmmm I like the story
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2020 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
edward si going to be hard on Isabella but I have a feeling she will be able to stand up to him just fine. She may take his advice about the restaurant but nothing else.
Date: 25 Mar 2020 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well Charlie cooking gives me a stomach ache.
Date: 23 Mar 2020 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Somehow, I think Bella actually trusted her father to do right by her inheritance. And I think there's more to the finding out she had a sibling thing than we realize at this point.
l look forward to seeing where you take this!
*huggles*
Date: 23 Mar 2020 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
How is Edward going to work there when Charlie basically throw him out of the restaurant? I'm assuming Charlie was the cook. Can't wait to find out the deal with Bella and why she has stayed away for so long.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2020 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
i love it now will Isabella prove to be the oppisite of what he was told
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2020 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2020 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like this!! It was a mob vibe but it's not. Charlie seems like the biggest jerk!
Date: 22 Mar 2020 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Like it so far!
Date: 21 Mar 2020 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, stärkerer Anfang. Ich erwarte wie immer eine Super tolle Geschichte von euch. Ihr Schreiben sehr gut zusammen. Hoffe bald zu erfahren warum Bella ist ist. Kann das Update nicht erwartet.
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2020 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hello Ladies..thank you for a new story..I cab't wait to see how it all unfolds..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2020 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
What has Bella been doing while away?
Any chance she has been studying under a master chef?
She must be very angry with her father for his lying and cheating past.
Bumpy road ahead for this crew as they attempt to resurrect the once iconic restaurant.
Date: 20 Mar 2020 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can see why Edward wants to make a name for himself on his own. But why does he feel the need to date and sleep with cougars? And why did Isabella let her restaurant go downhill? Should be interesting story. He's already antagonistic toward Isabella.
Date: 20 Mar 2020 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
I already love it. Edward is full of himselve and needs to prove it. So glad he didnt go all the way with Tanya. LOL. Always excited to see you guys with a new story Thanks so much
Date: 20 Mar 2020 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was thinking about you two the other day and was hoping you were going to post another story. You are the best storytellers. I'm loving your first chapter and thankful you had Edward dump Tanya even before they got started.
Date: 20 Mar 2020 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
He carries of the sexy chef thing well,
Date: 20 Mar 2020 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
He carries of the sexy chef thing well,
Date: 19 Mar 2020 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hooked! Hooked, big time hooked. Y'all are the best. Can't wait for next update. I always know when I see y'alls name it's going to be am excellent story. Never been disappointed one time.
Date: 19 Mar 2020 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like a good start. :-)
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2020 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hopefully Edward matures some. He is kind of 'frat guy' douchey man whore. At least he drove and saw icky Tanya home. But maybe you are going for a Gordon Ramsey kind of feel for Edward. Hmmm....
Charlie is very annoying and kind of a prick. That is probably why Bella left. Her dad is an asshole.
I can't wait to read and discover more about her relationship or non relationship with her brother Jasper.
I'm hooked already. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 19 Mar 2020 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
This seems great! Excited for more!
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2020 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Will Isabella take kindly to his suggestions for improving the restaurant? Will Charlie even let him in the door? This is going to be an interesting ride!