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Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2023 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 16, May 13th 1944 - August 20th 1948

I'm on the edge of my chair even tho; I know what is going to happen.

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Date: 26 Jan 2022 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 11, April 15th - May 11th 1920

There is such a huge treasure trove of ideas when writing about her past like this. I like how each chapter does something to explain this or that in the books. You are doing a faboo job!

Reviewer: phenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2022 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 10, October 15th 1920

I would love to see how Alice obtains money by herself. How she learns to talk to humans without attacking them. How Alice will blend in the cities that she will live in. What will be her living conditions before she does all of these things on her own? Will she rent an apartment or buy a house? Women of this era were not allowed nor was it acceptable to do such things as these alone like Alice is going to do. I am very curoius and excited about her journey to Jasper, Carlisle and Edward. :-)

Reviewer: phenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2022 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 9, October 12th 1920

Even as a new vampire with no memories, Alice was still thinking of fashion. ;-)

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2020 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 7, Feb 23rd - June 30th 1920

After I was born in 1949 my mother was in a hospital and received those type of treatments.  Her aunt worked there and discovered that the Dr. who delivered me did nto inspect the afterbirth correctly and missed part of it.  After she had a D&C tor correct the problem she was fine and came home.  She never spoke of it to me but my grandmother told me when I was an adult.  It is something I have wondered about sometimes but never asked her about it. 

Reviewer: kitty25478 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2020 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 5, February 15th 1920

I think that you should have Alice remember everything she currently know, don't make her forget, I know you might be trying to stay true to canon but I'm curious what it could mean if Alice remembers all of it. even after being bitten by her sire, give it some thought

Author's Response:

Even though that would be interesting, this is part of a series were I tell each Cullen member's canon origin story, and the other two completed ones include Alice's memory loss.

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2020 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 4, Jan 21st - Feb 14th 1920

He does not fine the letter and the hired killer kills jis new wife for revenge.


Reviewer: phenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 November 19th 1917

Still loving this! 😊

Reviewer: phenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 2:36 AM Title: Prologue 1905 - 1910

Loving this!😊

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Date: 11 Apr 2020 11:54 PM Title: Prologue 1905 - 1910

Congratulations on your 10th anniversary as a twi-ffn-author!
I'm looking forward to your interpretation of Alice's life before Jasper and the Cullens.

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