[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2021 11:29 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Great story!
Date: 10 Apr 2021 7:11 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining
I am curious...was the code word baru and what does it mean? I tried looking it up and couldn't find anything that seemed to fit.
I am loving the story so far and cant wait to get further in!
Author's Response:
Baru is a nut. Irina was definately a nut. Haha.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
All that you went thru during this story and you never quit on us. Another fabulous mobward. I loved the Irish mafia for a change. Very gruesome in parts but very well written as always Clo.
I pray 2021 finds your family strong and healthy.
Date: 09 Apr 2021 2:25 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Love it!! Would not mind some more of this family and more Daddy time!!
Date: 08 Apr 2021 7:51 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
LOVED IT!!! Great Story. Thank you for sharing it. You are one of my favorite authors and I love reading your E&B stories.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2021 7:48 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Thank you for a lovely story!! I enjoyed it so much!! well done BRAVO. Charlie got what he deserved along with the rest of them. Carlise & Esme will enjoy their reunion I'm sure. I like hoe Bella change the lullaby!! Yes their father & mother will be there to catch them.
Date: 08 Apr 2021 3:43 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Great story
Date: 08 Apr 2021 12:51 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Loved it. The last line was perfect
Date: 08 Apr 2021 4:49 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
What a great trip! You took me on a journey that I don't want to end. I really hate to let this Edward and Bella go. More, please.
Date: 08 Apr 2021 4:49 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
What a great trip! You took me on a journey that I don't want to end. I really hate to let this Edward and Bella go. More, please.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2021 2:07 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Awesome ending. Glad they took care of business. Wonder where Kate and Tanya are though.
Ty for writing and sharing
Date: 07 Apr 2021 7:42 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Lordamercy, Esme and Carlisle are freakin' awesome...very imaginative, as well *high five!*
Welcome to the world, Liam and Robbie! I bet they love Bella's new version of their lullaby! And don't be shy about postin' a future take or two or even a sequel featurin' those wild boys...well, with a father like Edward, I expect they will be LOL!
*HUGS!*
Date: 07 Apr 2021 6:46 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Loved it
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2021 3:29 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
:) loved this story
Date: 07 Apr 2021 2:06 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Loved it
Date: 07 Apr 2021 1:15 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
I am so sad that this is the end. I hope you do a future take on them. Also glad Carlisle got his revenge.
Date: 06 Apr 2021 10:58 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
I had forgotten that Charlie was a "religious " man. He definitely had marbles for brains. I can't believe that Renee helped him. It's a wonder that Bella is not crazy after being raised by the both of them. So happy that Carlisle is standing.
Date: 06 Apr 2021 10:34 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
I can not read the torture. Just can't stomach that. Loved the story otherwise.
Date: 06 Apr 2021 10:33 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
:):)
Date: 06 Apr 2021 10:32 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Really enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2021 10:01 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Wow, gruesome and sweet. Hell of a combination, but you pulled it off. Great story.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2021 8:32 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
:)
Date: 06 Apr 2021 8:06 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Grisly but fitting ending
Date: 06 Apr 2021 7:54 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
I really hate to see the sorry end.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2021 7:48 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
Loved this story, so going to miss it.
Date: 06 Apr 2021 7:41 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family
This story was Awesome!!! Thank you for sharing it with us!! What about Tanya and Kate?? Will there be a sequel????????????????
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2021 5:54 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
They had it coming!
Date: 05 Apr 2021 6:23 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
So glad they are gone
Date: 04 Apr 2021 10:34 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 04 Apr 2021 10:13 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Insanity was no excuse for what Charlie did and shame on Renee for helpin' him do it! Edward gave them better than they deserved *spit!*
Date: 04 Apr 2021 9:35 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Yikes.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2021 6:23 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
I hope the babies are okay!
Date: 03 Apr 2021 4:34 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Cra Cra parents gone!!
Time for the babies!!
Date: 03 Apr 2021 7:20 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Glad part of the scum are gone. Woo hoo for Carlisle standing again!
Date: 03 Apr 2021 5:20 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Yessss he is going to be there for the birth of heโs boys
Date: 03 Apr 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Thank goodness he got her back!!! Now the boys are coming!!! lol
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2021 4:22 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
:)
Date: 03 Apr 2021 3:53 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Wow, her parents were looney tunes and they got what they deserved.
Date: 03 Apr 2021 3:53 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Wow, her parents were looney tunes and they got what they deserved.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2021 3:49 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Yay, he has Bella back and her mother and father are disposed of for good. Loving this story.
Glad you're feeling better.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2021 1:40 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Thank you for the update..well done..Edward has his family back and the boys will be born soon..Let's hope they get to the hospital before the boys are born. Charlie & Renee got what they deserved. Until you post again
Date: 03 Apr 2021 12:11 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Loved it
Date: 02 Apr 2021 11:29 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Ok so we maybe morbid but we're wondering what Charlie and Renee did to her while she was there???? HAPPY EASTER!!! ๐๐ฃ๐ฐ
KEEP WRITING โ๏ธ ๐’โค๏ธ๐’๐”ฅ๐‘
Date: 02 Apr 2021 11:10 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Glad they got her out of there
Date: 02 Apr 2021 11:06 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
:):)
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2021 10:07 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River
Perfect justice. Well done.
Date: 16 Mar 2021 5:09 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Good riddance, Royce! I wonder what is in store for Charlie when they get to forks?! I think a little torture would do him some good! Hang on, Bella, The Family is coming!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2021 8:04 PM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Noooo! Don't do this to me. You can't stop here, please.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2021 4:46 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal
Oh Shit! Is absolutely correct. I totally forgot about that holy roller asshole, Bella's nightmare dad.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2021 4:44 PM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions
I'll bet you anything that Royce is the "mole".
I do believe that there may be someone else involved. I just can't figure it out yet.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2021 7:49 PM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
I hope they get Bella on time before the birth of the babies. Please update soon.
Date: 07 Mar 2021 5:15 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Goodridnce to To Royce
Date: 06 Mar 2021 11:42 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
I hate to see what they are going to do to Eleazar
Date: 06 Mar 2021 11:34 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2021 5:34 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Good rittance Royce is dead and they now know where Bella is being held. I hope Irina dies in pain too and everyone else involved.
Date: 06 Mar 2021 5:25 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Glad Royce is dead. Jeez Irina is suck a skank.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2021 4:54 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Omg! I can't wait til Edward gets hold of Charlie. Curious what will be done with Renee'.
Date: 06 Mar 2021 4:34 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Uuuuu run the skipper is on the prawll eleazar u dummm asss and irana pleaseeee let the women of the house deal with that skank
Date: 06 Mar 2021 4:28 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 06 Mar 2021 2:46 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Ugh! Hurry Charlie is no Christian
Date: 06 Mar 2021 2:36 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Oh Carlisle will make Elnezar pay for putting him in a wheelchair.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2021 2:32 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Suit up, lock and load. Off to Forks we go.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2021 2:30 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Thank you for the update.,well done..Royce deserved more..I can't wait for them to take care of Elezar and Charlie..until you post again
Date: 06 Mar 2021 2:08 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Traitors like Royce always seem surprised to find themselves caught out and payin' for their treason with pain and death, a quick one if they are lucky...they really shouldn't be!
Irina and Eleazar can wait for their just desserts once Edward has dealt with Charlie and retrieved Bella and the babies!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2021 1:45 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Very bloody
Write the next chapter soon
Date: 06 Mar 2021 1:23 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
oh boy, that was grusome!! However, he deserved what he got. If I were Edward I'd have taken Irina too. I'd have told him you help me get Bella and my babies back or I keep your daughter and she'll suffer the same fate as Bella. Unless that would be frowned upon by the other families. Can't wait to see how Edward gets Bella back and what he does to Charlie and Eleazar!!! Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2021 1:14 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
:)
Date: 06 Mar 2021 12:46 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Very very good
Date: 06 Mar 2021 12:07 AM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
I cant wait to see what happens to Irina Charlie and Eleazar!!! Go get em Edward!!!
Date: 05 Mar 2021 11:53 PM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Hopefully they are getting closer to finding Bella... bye, bye Royce..
Date: 05 Mar 2021 11:16 PM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
What is he going to do about Irina???
KEEP WRITING โ๏ธ โค๏ธ๐’๐”ฅ๐‘๐’
Date: 05 Mar 2021 11:10 PM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Nicely done. What did they do with Irina?
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2021 10:29 PM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
Oh boy oh boy! Watch out Charlie the Skipper is coming for his Bella!
Date: 05 Mar 2021 10:21 PM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
I'm glad they know where Bella is. I was afraid that she would be pushed together with Jacob. Those twins are in more danger than Bella. Let's hope Charlie dies. I can't think why Renee wouldn't help Bella. It doesn't matter what abuse you go through you always protect your child.
Date: 05 Mar 2021 10:12 PM Title: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow
There will be hell to pay for all of those that crossed the Cullens! Charlie's fate will not be pretty.
I can't wait to see what happens to Irena and her Eleazer.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 02 Mar 2021 8:35 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 28 Feb 2021 8:39 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Glad Esme kept her cool. Time for Eleazar's when family to die along with Bella's father
Date: 28 Feb 2021 4:12 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
OMG NOOOOOOOO Some bitches are going to die
Date: 28 Feb 2021 3:40 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Yes pleaseeee irana call Royce so Edward can star dealing with your buts poor Bella I love smart esme
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2021 1:09 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
I cannot wait to see Edward torture them all! Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2021 11:42 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Poor Bella. I hope Edward finds her soon
Date: 27 Feb 2021 3:53 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Oh my goodness!!!!!!! Edward is going to have a coronary. I hope Royce and Elnezar suffer. Hope Bella and the babies will be ok.
Date: 26 Feb 2021 10:56 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Did Edward not ask Royce what happened that night??? KEEP WRITING โ๏ธ โค๏ธ๐’๐‘๐”ฅ๐’
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2021 10:48 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
I hope Edward makes them all pay dearly.
Date: 26 Feb 2021 9:34 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
That Carmen and Irina were stupid enough to discuss Bella's kidnappin' in public...the dumbasses! Now that Edward has found light at the end of the tunnel, thanks to his mother, that light is about to glow red and I can't wait for Royce and Irina to beg for mercy and get none!
Date: 26 Feb 2021 8:10 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Stuck in the care of her daddy dearest...not good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 26 Feb 2021 7:51 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Get to writing
Date: 26 Feb 2021 7:27 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
I surprised that Edward never thought about Eleazar and Irina. Irina has made such a fuss about wanting him. I'm hoping that Renee helps Bella. What mother would allow her child to be hurt by anyone. Even a family member. Hurry up Edward get your act together.
Date: 26 Feb 2021 5:43 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Please update soon. I hope Irina and Royce are in so much pain
Date: 26 Feb 2021 4:55 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Hurry and Charlie is going to hell. Pastor my ass.
Date: 26 Feb 2021 4:40 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception
ugh..
Date: 26 Feb 2021 4:18 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Oh I can't wait until Edward gets ahold of them! Loved it
Date: 26 Feb 2021 3:52 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Glad Esme overheard that conversation. She should also somehow get word to Eleazer about Carmen and the guards.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2021 3:27 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Please don't leave us hanging for long. I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2021 2:16 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
NO FUCKING MERCY. Gut them all. Flay the skin from their bones and submerge them in vats of acid!!!!!!!
Date: 26 Feb 2021 2:08 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody
Loved it