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Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 44

I was wondering how this would wrap up.
Perfectly I might add!
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this fic.
Thank you.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 43

Has Charlie overlooked Emmett? Usually the property goes to the first born or is split equally amongst siblings.
No more Armoni for Edward or Bella.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 42

Two places gives them a bit of freedom.
Will Edward try to buy the place next to Emmett?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 41

Haha, so similar in tactics. Angela has definitely rubbed off.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 40

Their lives are falling in to place more quickly than originally thought out.
Rose in LA, double dating will be a regular thing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 39

Even if Bella doesn't like surprises, she going to love this one. Hopefully the time spent with Vic will not end up in the tabloids.
Emmett needs to get over his aversion to the family land owner and visit Bella.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 38

Their time apart will bring out a few hurdles for them to leap over.
Any chance Riley and Victoria are an item on the DL?

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Date: 26 Jul 2021 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 37

He handle the situation and the idea of a temporary assistant very well.
Maybe he and Seth will get along so well that Bella will b e able to t a key m I re time to write.

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Date: 26 Jul 2021 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 36

Smooze time with the auction of her book on the line.

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Date: 26 Jul 2021 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 35

I love Bella's internal monolog describing Marcus from his familial ancestry to all the manipulate ways his arrogance brought this downfall in her eyes.
Yay, Jasper and Edward are now thick as thieves.
Jasper lost what he thought was a friend as well.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 34

Might be easier said than done.
Angela may have been right about getting the two Dad's involved.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2021 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 33

Who knew Edward would be completely drawn in by a nerd barister? Well almost lawyer.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 32

Love the t-shirt idea.
Emmett was spot on in his projected outcome of this luncheon.
Will we see a renewed connection between Emmett and the Admiral?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 31

Marcus is a weasel. His pompous behavior needs to be cut down a few sizes.
Edward's sage advice to Bella was the best possible approach to her situation.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 30

Jasper and Alice will be the only two on the wrong side of the pond.
Emmett's going to be very excited about his girls relocation.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2021 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 28

Will Rosalie try to find a job in LA?
Emmett must be going crazy trying to figure out what to do to assist his fiancée.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2021 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 29

So the siblings found a way to take down Jacob. All hail the Hales. Lol
Now Marcus needs to go away.

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Date: 21 Jul 2021 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 27

Maturity has entered Edward's life.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2021 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 26

Confessions of a stalker, lol.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2021 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 25

The tug-o-war on Bella's heart and mind has to be wearing her out.
There must be some way to torpedo Jacob's arrival in LA.
Too bad the Admiral has no idea how to relate to his own children.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2021 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 24

Oh boy, somehow Dad's going to figure out the mess Jacob has created and try to smooth it over. But to whose benefit?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2021 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 23

That does not bode well for the brother/sister relationship.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2021 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 22

Between Jacob and Marcus, I can't figure out which one is worse. They both seem to believe that Bella is a wayward youth who needs to be lead around by the nose.
Why are we being pushed to believe Edward is a teen in man's body. Lost and unable to understand or think for himself?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2021 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 21

One of her ex-boyfriends was bound to show up.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2021 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 20

Angela reacted well to Edward's announcement.
Rose is right, stop over thinking.

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Date: 19 Jul 2021 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 19

Interlopers indeed.

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Date: 19 Jul 2021 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 18

All in, Edward seems to be there. Has Isabella arrived at the same place?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2021 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 17

Is the west coast ready for Alice?

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Date: 18 Jul 2021 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 16

Huh, Alice planned this all along. Did Bella know?

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Date: 18 Jul 2021 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 15

Good or bad timing, Emmett saved her either way.
Will Edward remember his latest awkward moment?
It will at least give th ed m both something to think about over the Christmas Holiday.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 14

Small world.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Might have to set some new ground rules.

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Date: 17 Jul 2021 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 13

Two steps forward, five steps back, the three steps forward. So far they are standing in the same place as before....

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

Edward is probably having a panic attack of epic proportion.
Will Alice calm him down?
Big girl panties Bella.
Talk it out, don't hold vack, explain everything to Edward.
Start over.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

I'll bet he suggested Bella's edits to the casting script and they loved it!
Hm, delayed departure to England. Maybe his family can all fly to him and spend a few weeks together?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

Edward's gotten to know Bella's surrounding family situation pretty well in short order.
Maybe Christmas plans will change if Edward leases Kate And Garrett's house?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Bella has her sixth sense on high alert where Alice is concerned. As she should be.
But,her sense of personal preservation is slowly diminishing around lonely frightened Edward.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 8

They are entering a very unique arrangement where there friends randomly know each other and they have to quickly figure out where they fit.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

Ah, There's the connection.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

Hopefully Em will become good friends with Edward.
James is lingering in the wings..... Wonder when he tries to garner Bella's attention?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 5

I'd say that Angela has failed Edward in one area;he has no sense of place, no roots. In order to establish himself, he needs to feel like he belongs in LA.
Brining a personal assistant on board just shines a floodlight on the subject.
Living together is going to complicate things quickly.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

Has she not taken notice, even once, during the time their paths crossed?

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Date: 16 Jul 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

Good luck girl.
Edward has religated himself to the ignore category. Hehehe

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2021 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

Their paths are already interwined, how soon will they finally be introduced?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2021 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great introduction of main characters.
Internal monolog is my favorite way to get the scoop on a characters vibe.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 44

Great story, how about a Sequel!,

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2021 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 44

:) loved this story.  Looking forward to reading the outtakes and your new story 

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2021 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 44

Thank you for a very strong cappable Bella, and a mixed up Edward.  It was great having her take the reigns for a change, not just muddling around.

Reviewer: annacaroll Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2021 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 44

Perfect!!! I loved this history!!! See you the next xoxo

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2021 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 44

Loved it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2021 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 43

:) 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2021 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 43

Very nice 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2021 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 42

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2021 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 41

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2021 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 40

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2021 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 39

:) 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2021 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 39

Looking forward to the surprise 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2021 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 38

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2021 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 37

:) 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2021 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 37

Happy for Bella. Glad they are supporting each other

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2021 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 36

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2021 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2021 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 35

Bye Marcus 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2021 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 35

Glad she told  Marcys off.  I knew it was his playlist

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2021 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 34

Interested to see how  you will write B taking down Marcus.   Will the readers see it as it happens or just get the retelling to Edward  & Jasper? I'm greedy so I'd like to see both  but I'm sure it will be great however you present it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2021 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

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Date: 12 Apr 2021 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 33

:) 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2021 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 32

Em was right!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 32

:) 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 32

Love the t shirt idea.  Of course he has to meet Renee yet as Bella's boyfriend 



Author's Response:

Because Renee wasn't Bella's mom at the time ;-) [aka, when he met her first]

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2021 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 31

:) 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2021 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it. Looking forward to meeting the admiral

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2021 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loving this story 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2021 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 29

😁

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2021 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 28

Glad Jacob is getting what he deserves. I hope whoever the "insider" was doesn't come to grief for it

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2021 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 27

I so glad he told her and her reaction 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2021 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 27

Love it!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2021 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 26

I hope she takes this well, otherwise it's going to be a very uncomfortable flight

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2021 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 25

I want to know more about that blind item Alice was talking  about. I'm  hoping the embattled rising star  on the way out means trouble for Jacob

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2021 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 24

Wow. Cant wait to heat what Dad has to say. I'm going to assume he's team Jake 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2021 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 23

Can't wait to find I out what Rose did.  I'm  guessing  she outed B & E to Jake

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2021 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 22

Nice.

Reviewer: JustGeorgia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2021 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 21

Love this story and how quick you update. Chapter 21 had some coding hug half way through....



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know, let me check and fix that real quick!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2021 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 21

Looking forward to seeing Bella handle Marcus

Reviewer: ohsugarhoneyicetea Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2021 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 20

hey! i asked if you were going to update on ffnet. the story hasn't been updated since august? but the chapters are ahead on there too. im looking at user LaMomo. Is there a different account I should be looking for?



Author's Response:

Hi!

I replied last week (look below). The account and penname are correct! 

The story will be (is being) updated on ffnet too, but because the first 22 chapters were already on there, they won't show up as new updates until I catch up on uploading the edited chapters. 

For example, I update on Mondays, which means I'm about to post an update here (chapter 21), and on ffnet. But only the updates to Starslibrary show up as "new chapters" so far. Once I finish uploading edits to the "old" chapter (now posted up to chapter 22), there will be weekly new chapters uploaded to ffnet too.

The story is identical - totally up to you where you choose to read.

Thank you for sticking with the story.

Reviewer: ohsugarhoneyicetea Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2021 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 19

Hey will the story on fanfiction.net be updated as well? 



Author's Response:

HI! Yes - the story gets updated here at the same time I update on ffnet (on Mondays, as things stand). I'm actually about to upload updates both here and there!

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2021 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 19

Yeah

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2020 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 18

Really  glad they talked. Did Alice know about  Renee's gift?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2020 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 11

All this touchy feeling is going to lead to a kiss.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2020 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 10

Maybe edward will come to the rescue!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2020 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

Nice. I can't wait for Alice & Jasper to meet

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2020 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 9

Using her first name softened her.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2020 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

She lit emmett up!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2020 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

Em is playing him.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2020 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 6

It’s good he already knows emmett.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2020 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 5

Monday can’t come fast enough for him.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2020 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 4

And so it begins.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2020 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

I hope she gets loud in the restaurant.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2020 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 2

Looks like renee and alice will be match making.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2020 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Edward is going to be very fun to read!

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