Date: 26 Jul 2021 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 35
I love Bella's internal monolog describing Marcus from his familial ancestry to all the manipulate ways his arrogance brought this downfall in her eyes.
Yay, Jasper and Edward are now thick as thieves.
Jasper lost what he thought was a friend as well.
Date: 21 Jul 2021 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
Between Jacob and Marcus, I can't figure out which one is worse. They both seem to believe that Bella is a wayward youth who needs to be lead around by the nose.
Why are we being pushed to believe Edward is a teen in man's body. Lost and unable to understand or think for himself?
Date: 16 Jul 2021 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'd say that Angela has failed Edward in one area;he has no sense of place, no roots. In order to establish himself, he needs to feel like he belongs in LA.
Brining a personal assistant on board just shines a floodlight on the subject.
Living together is going to complicate things quickly.
Date: 22 Apr 2021 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 34
Interested to see how you will write B taking down Marcus. Will the readers see it as it happens or just get the retelling to Edward & Jasper? I'm greedy so I'd like to see both but I'm sure it will be great however you present it
Date: 15 Jan 2021 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
hey! i asked if you were going to update on ffnet. the story hasn't been updated since august? but the chapters are ahead on there too. im looking at user LaMomo. Is there a different account I should be looking for?
I replied last week (look below). The account and penname are correct!
The story will be (is being) updated on ffnet too, but because the first 22 chapters were already on there, they won't show up as new updates until I catch up on uploading the edited chapters.
For example, I update on Mondays, which means I'm about to post an update here (chapter 21), and on ffnet. But only the updates to Starslibrary show up as "new chapters" so far. Once I finish uploading edits to the "old" chapter (now posted up to chapter 22), there will be weekly new chapters uploaded to ffnet too.
The story is identical - totally up to you where you choose to read.
Thank you for sticking with the story.
Date: 07 Jan 2021 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
Hey will the story on fanfiction.net be updated as well?
HI! Yes - the story gets updated here at the same time I update on ffnet (on Mondays, as things stand). I'm actually about to upload updates both here and there!
Thanks for reading!