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Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2021 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 19

Sweet 

thank you 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2021 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 19

Uuu really hope Charlie and her grandma will be panicking to know where Bella is uuu can you make sure Rosalie Alice and esme teach Bella to be stronger so that one’s she faces the swans they won’t bully her no more

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2021 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 19

I love how honest they are with each other. I can't wait to see what the Swans do. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2021 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 19

Very nice 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2021 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2021 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 18

Thank you for the update..I hope we can move these steps along so they can be together and the Duke & Duchess can get what's coming to them..I so love this story..well done ..BRAVO..Until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 18

Thank you for the update..I hope we can move these steps along so they can be together and the Duke & Duchess can get what's coming to them..I so love this story..well done ..BRAVO..Until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 18

Thank you for the update..I hope we can move these steps along so they can be together and the Duke & Duchess can get what's coming to them..I so love this story..well done ..BRAVO..Until you post again 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2021 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: sweetiedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2021 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 18

Yes!! Woohoo! 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2021 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 18

Yes Edward take Isabella run like the wind hide her talk to father Jacob hey if the Banns have been read then can Isabella marry Edward

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2021 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 18

So exciting 

Reviewer: crhunt123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 18

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 18

YES!!

Reviewer: Mamma White Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great chapters! Love them! Can't wait for the next chapter or chapters! Please keep going. I'll be waiting patiently, impatiently till the next chapter! Your doing a great job writing!😘🥰😍❤’–

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh my!!!!!!!! I was hoping that Renee and Phillip had been looking and found something.  Yes, why did Bella's father not speak up a d tell everyone that he married her mother. Why did he allow his family to treat she so harshly?

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 17

Write the next chapter  really soon p5

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2021 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh my heart 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2021 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2021 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh my!!!!!! Ok, Edward is off to save Isabella.  But what is he going to do?????? I would think he needed to talk with the priest first. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2021 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2021 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 17

Glad he found out

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2021 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 17

Glad he found out

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2021 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Mamma White Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2021 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter! Please keep going cant wait for the next chapter! 😘

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2021 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 16

WHAT?????? You need to update again real soon. Please don't leave us hanging. I knew her grandmother was up to something.  

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2021 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh those seagulls people. They r all disgusting. I hope Bella can find the papers she needs to prove that her mother was married to James before she died.the Grandmother is nothing but an old hag witch. She should drop dead.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2021 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Isabella 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2021 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh no!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2021 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2021 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh the plot thickens 

what is she up to

thank you 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2021 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2021 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love that Edward made a show in front of Isabella's sisters. I can't wait for them to find proof a d they both can tell the Duke a d his daughters how awful they are. Is Isabella's grandmother trying to help her in her own way????

Reviewer: Mamma White Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2021 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 14

Great story so far can't wait for the next chapter!  Keep going! 😘😁

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2021 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2021 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 14

Can Philip and renee snoop around and hopefully find the papers pleaseeee

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2021 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2021 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh my, what is the Dowager Duchess up to??????

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2021 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

Why doesn't she get Renee and Philip to search for the papers they need. They will be staying at the house.

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2021 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 14

I'm so glad I saw this update on fb. I missed my alert

interes development 

thank you

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2021 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 14

I'm so glad I saw this update on fb. I missed my alert

interes development 

thank you

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2021 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 14

Thank you for the update.. I hope it works out for edward & Bella...They need a happy ending..The father & horriable sisters need a wake up call.  I can't wait for ball.  lets hope Bella cn get a message to Edward or Rosalie.  until you post again

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2021 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 14

A Cinderella moment would be lovely.  Why on earth would the Duke

 Keep incriminating documents?

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2021 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 13

Thank you for the update..well done..I thought the Duke was going to be listening to her confession.  I hope Bella can get her hands on documents she needs to marry Edward.  Until you post again

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2021 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh dear

thank you 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2021 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2021 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 13

I think Father Jacob definitely confirmed there was a marriage.  But he did not admit it. How will she find the papers. Maybe Edward or the King can invite Charles for something and get him out of the house for a few days. Renee and Phil could help Bella search for the papers while he was away. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2021 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Strawberrywine Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2021 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 13

Yes I believe he did confirm the secret marriage that is the only way she would be buried in the famil plot. The duke wants control over Bella's lands she would have gotten over her mothers death. The will is the only thing that the duke can control now as long as Bella stays single.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2021 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 13

I really hope Bella finds the papers she needs so she can claim her inheritance and marry Edward. Really want Charles to have to pay for raping his sister in law.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2021 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

Looking forward to see how she finds the documents 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2021 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 12

I hope Edward is right  and they find out soon

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2021 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 12

Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2021 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 12

Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2021 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2021 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 12

Hustle! 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2021 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 12

These kids deserve a break

i hope it's soon

 

thank you

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2021 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2021 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 12

They shared their 1st kiss!!!!!❤❤❤

I hope Father Jacob will be honest with her. But something tells me that Father Jacob is not a honest man. 

Reviewer: crhunt123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2021 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 12

Love it, and thanks for the early post!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2021 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2021 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

I am glad that Bella has Phillip and Renee too. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2021 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2021 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh we were hoping for that

what is the next move then ?

 Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2021 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh we were hoping for that

what is the next move then ?

 Thank you 

Reviewer: crhunt123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2021 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 10

can wait, more Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: starlight 12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2021 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 10

Please update soon. Very good story  hope u finish it 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2021 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2021 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh Edward has to figure it out!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2021 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh.....the Duke is smart. Can't wait to see what Edward finds out.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2021 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2021 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thank you for the update..well done.. I hope Edward finds the answers he needs so him & Bell can be together.  Until you post again

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2021 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 10

I wish Edward success in his endeavour 

thank you 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2021 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thank you for the update..I was hoping the King would be on Edward 's side and help Bella..until you post again

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2021 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

All I want is to hug Bella and cry with her

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2021 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 9

I hope Edward will go to the priest that performed Bella's mom funeral and talk/bribe/threaten him to tell him the truth. I wish your chapters were longer. I truly enjoy reading your story.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2021 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 9

Poor Isabella 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2021 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it can't wait for more more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2021 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm glad Bella was not intimidated by the King. I am glad that she spoke with such confidence.  Glad Rosalie and Alice are befriending her.  Can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2021 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 8

I love this Rosalie straightforward but kind

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2021 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thank you for ther update..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2021 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thank you for ther update..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2021 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thank you for ther update..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2021 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2021 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thank you 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2021 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

I hope Edward is right.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2021 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 6

So glad I do not have to wait for an update.  I'm off to the next chapter.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2021 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 5

I hope Edward finds a way for them to be together.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2021 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad they are both honest with each other.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2021 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh Edward,  what will he do?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2021 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 2

I can't help but think of Cinderella when reading.  Can't wait to see how Edward and Bella start talking to each other.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2021 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love reading time stories.  Can't wait to read more.  

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2021 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2021 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

Thank you for the update..well done.  I hope Edward is correct and they can still get married and the King doesn't have to give any money to her so called father..until you post again

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2021 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

love it!  I hope that they discover Bella is not illegimate! I hope her father gets what is coming to him.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2021 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2021 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 7

Ok I really hope that is the case and James really did married Katherine in secret and Charlie probably kept it a secret probably he is using or use any inheritance Isabella might have gotten from her mom or James

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2021 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 7

Really hope so.

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