Date: 17 Aug 2021 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 21
Yes! I hope Edward can successfully avoid Maria
Date: 17 Aug 2021 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
So glad Father Jacob talked to Edward. I have a feeling something bad is going to happen at the party. Can't wait as always.
Date: 12 Aug 2021 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm still nervous
thank youn
Date: 12 Aug 2021 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm still nervous
thank youn
Date: 11 Aug 2021 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
I think it's a mistake to wait to inform the king. I understand Edward wants all the information in place, but the longer he waits the greater the risk is the king will hear it from someone else
Date: 11 Aug 2021 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 11 Aug 2021 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 20
So excited for this update. I love that Bella is growing in her confidence. She will be a great lady of the manor. I can not believe that the Swans have not been looking for Bella. Can't wait to see what they are up to. As always, you leave me wanting more and more.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2021 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for the update..Well done..They are finally together😎😁😍— I really don't want any drama Bella was robbed of her title shed deserves to be happy..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2021 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh I hope they find the wills
Date: 04 Aug 2021 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 19
Uuu really hope Charlie and her grandma will be panicking to know where Bella is uuu can you make sure Rosalie Alice and esme teach Bella to be stronger so that one’s she faces the swans they won’t bully her no more
Date: 04 Aug 2021 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 19
I love how honest they are with each other. I can't wait to see what the Swans do.
Date: 04 Aug 2021 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you for the update..I hope we can move these steps along so they can be together and the Duke & Duchess can get what's coming to them..I so love this story..well done ..BRAVO..Until you post again
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you for the update..I hope we can move these steps along so they can be together and the Duke & Duchess can get what's coming to them..I so love this story..well done ..BRAVO..Until you post again
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2021 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you for the update..I hope we can move these steps along so they can be together and the Duke & Duchess can get what's coming to them..I so love this story..well done ..BRAVO..Until you post again
Date: 29 Jul 2021 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 28 Jul 2021 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yes!! Woohoo!
Date: 28 Jul 2021 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yes Edward take Isabella run like the wind hide her talk to father Jacob hey if the Banns have been read then can Isabella marry Edward
Date: 27 Jul 2021 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait for more.
Date: 27 Jul 2021 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapters! Love them! Can't wait for the next chapter or chapters! Please keep going. I'll be waiting patiently, impatiently till the next chapter! Your doing a great job writing!😘🥰😍❤’–
Date: 27 Jul 2021 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh my!!!!!!!! I was hoping that Renee and Phillip had been looking and found something. Yes, why did Bella's father not speak up a d tell everyone that he married her mother. Why did he allow his family to treat she so harshly?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2021 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
Write the next chapter really soon p5
Date: 21 Jul 2021 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 21 Jul 2021 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh my!!!!!! Ok, Edward is off to save Isabella. But what is he going to do?????? I would think he needed to talk with the priest first.
Date: 14 Jul 2021 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 14 Jul 2021 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter! Please keep going cant wait for the next chapter! 😘
Date: 13 Jul 2021 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
WHAT?????? You need to update again real soon. Please don't leave us hanging. I knew her grandmother was up to something.
Date: 13 Jul 2021 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh those seagulls people. They r all disgusting. I hope Bella can find the papers she needs to prove that her mother was married to James before she died.the Grandmother is nothing but an old hag witch. She should drop dead.
Date: 07 Jul 2021 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh the plot thickens
what is she up to
thank you
Date: 07 Jul 2021 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 07 Jul 2021 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love that Edward made a show in front of Isabella's sisters. I can't wait for them to find proof a d they both can tell the Duke a d his daughters how awful they are. Is Isabella's grandmother trying to help her in her own way????
Date: 02 Jul 2021 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great story so far can't wait for the next chapter! Keep going! 😘😁
Date: 30 Jun 2021 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
Can Philip and renee snoop around and hopefully find the papers pleaseeee
Date: 30 Jun 2021 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 30 Jun 2021 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh my, what is the Dowager Duchess up to??????
Date: 29 Jun 2021 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
Why doesn't she get Renee and Philip to search for the papers they need. They will be staying at the house.
Date: 29 Jun 2021 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm so glad I saw this update on fb. I missed my alert
interes development
thank you
Date: 29 Jun 2021 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm so glad I saw this update on fb. I missed my alert
interes development
thank you
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2021 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you for the update.. I hope it works out for edward & Bella...They need a happy ending..The father & horriable sisters need a wake up call. I can't wait for ball. lets hope Bella cn get a message to Edward or Rosalie. until you post again
Date: 29 Jun 2021 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
A Cinderella moment would be lovely. Why on earth would the Duke
Keep incriminating documents?
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2021 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thank you for the update..well done..I thought the Duke was going to be listening to her confession. I hope Bella can get her hands on documents she needs to marry Edward. Until you post again
Date: 24 Jun 2021 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh dear
thank you
Date: 23 Jun 2021 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
I think Father Jacob definitely confirmed there was a marriage. But he did not admit it. How will she find the papers. Maybe Edward or the King can invite Charles for something and get him out of the house for a few days. Renee and Phil could help Bella search for the papers while he was away.
Date: 23 Jun 2021 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 23 Jun 2021 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yes I believe he did confirm the secret marriage that is the only way she would be buried in the famil plot. The duke wants control over Bella's lands she would have gotten over her mothers death. The will is the only thing that the duke can control now as long as Bella stays single.
Date: 23 Jun 2021 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
I really hope Bella finds the papers she needs so she can claim her inheritance and marry Edward. Really want Charles to have to pay for raping his sister in law.
Date: 22 Jun 2021 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
Looking forward to see how she finds the documents
Date: 19 Jun 2021 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hope Edward is right and they find out soon
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2021 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2021 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again
Date: 18 Jun 2021 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
These kids deserve a break
i hope it's soon
thank you
Date: 17 Jun 2021 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 17 Jun 2021 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
They shared their 1st kiss!!!!!❤❤❤
I hope Father Jacob will be honest with her. But something tells me that Father Jacob is not a honest man.
Date: 16 Jun 2021 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love it, and thanks for the early post!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Jun 2021 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am glad that Bella has Phillip and Renee too.
Date: 12 Jun 2021 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 12 Jun 2021 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh we were hoping for that
what is the next move then ?
Thank you
Date: 12 Jun 2021 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh we were hoping for that
what is the next move then ?
Thank you
Date: 11 Jun 2021 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
can wait, more Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2021 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Please update soon. Very good story hope u finish it
Date: 07 Jun 2021 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 05 Jun 2021 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh Edward has to figure it out!!!
Date: 04 Jun 2021 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh.....the Duke is smart. Can't wait to see what Edward finds out.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2021 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you for the update..well done.. I hope Edward finds the answers he needs so him & Bell can be together. Until you post again
Date: 03 Jun 2021 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
I wish Edward success in his endeavour
thank you
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2021 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you for the update..I was hoping the King would be on Edward 's side and help Bella..until you post again
Date: 23 May 2021 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
All I want is to hug Bella and cry with her
Date: 23 May 2021 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
I hope Edward will go to the priest that performed Bella's mom funeral and talk/bribe/threaten him to tell him the truth. I wish your chapters were longer. I truly enjoy reading your story.
Date: 13 May 2021 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more more
Date: 10 May 2021 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm glad Bella was not intimidated by the King. I am glad that she spoke with such confidence. Glad Rosalie and Alice are befriending her. Can't wait for more.
Date: 10 May 2021 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love this Rosalie straightforward but kind
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2021 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thank you for ther update..Well done..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2021 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thank you for ther update..Well done..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2021 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thank you for ther update..Well done..until you post again
Date: 03 May 2021 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
I hope Edward is right.
Date: 03 May 2021 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
So glad I do not have to wait for an update. I'm off to the next chapter.