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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2021 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 22

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2021 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 20

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2021 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 20

They need to figure out who the mole is and take care of him or her. 



Author's Response:

Yes, they do!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2021 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 19

I trust you.  But my heart is hurting for both Edward and Bella.  



Author's Response:

I don't blame you.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2021 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 19

They should have locked Gianna up and kept her as a prisoner. She's probably in with Zion anyway. She told the info she knew wasn't any good. I wish Bella had beat her ass and then gave Edward a good slap or two. He's worried about her so he's trying to drive her away I believe. He really had no business letting that bitch put her hands on him. He's destroying his marriage and he doesn't seem to really care. I hope how soon they get to destroy Zion and all of the people who are with them.



Author's Response:

Yes, they probably should have locked her up.

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2021 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 19

Come on. Where is this headed

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2021 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 19

Come on. Where is this headed



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I can't tell you that without spoiling it.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2021 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 



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Thanks!

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2021 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'm still mad at him. Good chapter 



Author's Response:

That's okay! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2021 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 18

That was soooo intense!!!!!!! Wow!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2021 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 



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Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2021 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

I think Edward met with Seamus.  What does Gianna think she can do to help?



Author's Response:

That's an interesting guess!

Reviewer: britter18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2021 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 17

I just read all this in 2 days. I loved the first one! I'm betting jasper although I'm not sure. Maybe em? It's a wonderful story!



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Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2021 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 16

What is Bella's problem.  I understand there is alot at stake and under pressure.  But everyone is.  



Author's Response:

They all are, for sure.

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2021 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 17

Damn!  



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Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2021 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2021 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

My guess he was speaking with Jasper?



Author's Response:

We'll find out soon!



Author's Response:

We'll find out soon!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2021 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Thanks!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2021 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can't wait for more 



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Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2021 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2021 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

Edward and Bella are headed for troubled waters in their relationship.  



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Sadly

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2021 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can't wait for more 



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Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 14

Do they have a mole among them?????? 



Author's Response:

It sure seems like it!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2021 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

If Quinn dies Bella will kill every person that has anything to do with Zion.  



Author's Response:

That's exactly what would happen.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2021 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 12

They both are hard headed.  



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I would say that's true!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2021 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 



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Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2021 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Thanks!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2021 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 11

She should have known that Edward would not allow her to steal the bomb back. 



Author's Response:

I think she did, but she wants to do it anyway.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2021 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2021 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

Lol. Love Edward and Bella.  



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Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2021 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 



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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2021 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Still so many questions 



Author's Response:

I bet!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2021 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2021 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2021 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh wow.  Hopefully this is legit.  



Author's Response:

Hopefully!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2021 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

CIA.. Clowns in America.. bad bunch



Author's Response:

Lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2021 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2021 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh NO.. don't kill Bella.. Please



Author's Response:

Thank you for reaidng!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2021 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 7

Poor Bella.  I would be in a constant state of panic. 



Author's Response:

I definitely would too.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2021 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2021 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

Can't wait to see what the family comes up with. 



Author's Response:

It better be good!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2021 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 6

I love this just don't kill Bella



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2021 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2021 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love Sioban. I hope nothing happens to her during this war. I know there will be death but I hope it's not her. 



Author's Response:

She's staying put so she can be safe.

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2021 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 4

Where is Carlisle, Esmeralda and Alice?



Author's Response:

They all died in Fallen Angel.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2021 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 4

Is there a mole in Edward's family???? WHO is watching them? Can't wait for more.  



Author's Response:

There might be!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2021 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2021 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again 



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Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2021 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

Who has contacted Edward and Bella ??? 



Author's Response:

Good question!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

That was scary



Author's Response:

Yes it was!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2021 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2021 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm excited to see where you are taking them. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2021 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love it 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2021 5:22 AM Title: Prologue

What???????? Please tell me this is a dream/ nightmare.  



Author's Response:

It's not!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2021 4:55 AM Title: Prologue

cant be 



Author's Response:

It really is!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2021 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2021 7:24 AM Title: Prologue

Looking forward to more 



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Thank you!

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