Date: 20 Feb 2023 10:18 PM Title: Epilogue
Good job. Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2022 9:46 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I had wanted so much more
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2022 7:57 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
after having sex doesn't it run down her leg? eeeew
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2022 1:24 PM Title: Chapter Nine
I gave always loved Esme
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2022 12:27 PM Title: Chapter Six
I read this before and it is one of the best BDSM lovr stories I have read
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2022 12:07 PM Title: Chapter Six
I read this before and it is one of the best BDSM lovr stories I have read
Date: 19 Jul 2022 12:33 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
The whole council knows "his" name, so I don't really understand the NDA issue
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2022 3:39 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Loving it. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2022 2:14 AM Title: Epilogue
Awesome awesome awesome. I love a good epilogue and this one was great.
Date: 09 Feb 2022 2:01 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Awesome story I really enjoyed it thanks for sharing your wonderful words with us
Date: 09 Feb 2022 12:43 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Damn awesome chapter
Date: 09 Feb 2022 12:34 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
So excited. Great chapter
Date: 09 Feb 2022 12:27 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Yes. He’s so pissed love it. Great chapter
Date: 09 Feb 2022 12:18 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
Great chapter
Date: 09 Feb 2022 12:12 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
Nice I definitely didn’t think of Peter. Awesome chapter
Date: 09 Feb 2022 12:04 AM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Awesome. Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 11:57 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 11:24 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Three
Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 11:18 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Yes. Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 11:12 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Awesome again loved the fact that billy was arrested so publicly. Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 11:04 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 9:40 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Yeah they getting married. Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 9:32 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 9:25 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Now that I was expecting snakes like to be together lol. Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 9:17 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Glad she said something. Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 9:12 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Oh another villain. Loving it. Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 9:04 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Damn that had me for a moment. Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 8:40 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
That was unexpected. Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 8:33 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Very yummy. Awesome chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 8:25 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
So good. Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 8:16 PM Title: Chapter Ten
Hot. Great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 8:11 PM Title: Chapter Nine
Yes I love me a good mama bear Esme great chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2022 8:02 PM Title: Chapter Eight
Can’t wait it’s getting so exciting
Date: 08 Feb 2022 7:55 PM Title: Chapter Seven
Loving the dynamic between these two
Date: 08 Feb 2022 7:47 PM Title: Chapter Six
It’s getting good loving this story
Date: 08 Feb 2022 6:19 PM Title: Chapter Four
Loving this story
Date: 07 Feb 2022 11:23 PM Title: Epilogue
Fin and fabulous! Thank you for finishing this story.
Date: 07 Feb 2022 10:43 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I love your stories. Justice gets served always.
Date: 07 Feb 2022 10:17 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Go Angela go!
Date: 07 Feb 2022 9:57 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Please say that Jane is the Mistress that will teach Peter a lesson? I'm sometimes a tradionalist but I guess Charlotte would work. Yay!!
Date: 07 Feb 2022 9:31 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
Yeah after what she went through he probably should have alerted her to the taking of photos. That shit is never secure. And I'm glad Felix and Sam are whip smart pun intended. 🤣
Date: 07 Feb 2022 9:06 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven
So the question is does Jasper know about what Peter has done if not Bella by name? And is Peter's father similar to Peter? I like this Aro.
Date: 07 Feb 2022 7:56 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-six
I'm disappointed in myself I'm usually so much more on the ball of deduction than this. Peter fucking Whitlock but of course. Jasper did complain about his brother so let's hope he isn't involved well one of his birth parents is anyway. Yuck.
Date: 07 Feb 2022 7:36 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Five
Okay let's do this! I wonder if James found out more information. I agreee with Edward 'he' must have done this before. This can't be new behavior. And his parents I hope Carlisle and Esme take care of them. Killing their 8mage is the worse punishment for the Uber wealthy right? Well I'll leave it to you sweets. ‘🏽
Date: 07 Feb 2022 7:00 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-Four
Okay, I love Esme and Carlisle to pieces. And it seems like 'he's' escalating big time. Let's set Mama Cullen on them all.
Date: 07 Feb 2022 5:49 PM Title: Chapter Twenty-One
You're good but we knew that. So not Mike, Eric or Phil either. I love Jacob and James together. So let's see what the family thinks of the newlyweds.
Date: 07 Feb 2022 5:15 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
So many of the possibilities for 'him' are gone. Love how you tossed us good Caius at the end there. So, Alec or Marcus maybe Liam? Anyway, I kept wanting to ask about her job offers but I got distracted by the good shit. What did she study?
Date: 07 Feb 2022 1:35 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Well I have to say when James isnt the bad guy it's usually a pleasant surprise. Cheers to you doll. I understand eloping and all these parties are a bit much but I'm sure the family will feel left out. However, given Edward's status it would have been out of control to plan a wedding.
Date: 07 Feb 2022 1:11 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Oh my jeebus! Did Billy say he just had a face lift two months ago? Fabulous.🤣🤣🤣
Date: 07 Feb 2022 12:46 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
So Billy and he who shall not be named are both coo coo for coco pops. At least Edward is taking safety precautions. So Billy has abused all of Edwards pasts subs how did that sneak by him? I thought Edward was going to confide in Carlisle about Billy. Oh well.
Date: 07 Feb 2022 12:25 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Excellent Edward! He gave Bella time and she came clean. Now it seems that Edward needs to get Medieval on a few asses. You don't become that wealthy without doing some unpleasant things even if all you do is order staff to do it. Let's see we have "Jason" whoever that is, his parents, the slut sisters and Billy. Billy was oddly aggressive with Bella. I wonder what the end game is. Clearly he doesn't understand BDSM and the Commuication Rule.
Date: 07 Feb 2022 11:39 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Wow, Billy just went there. Hi I know you're with Edward but I want in. Wow. She better tell Edwrad and he better believe her too.
Date: 07 Feb 2022 11:27 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
You had me yelling at the beginning.I know you're going to make us work for it :-D but I thought to soon babes. Phew...I hope you don't let her get captured or hurt by him anymore. I also hope instinct's kick in and Edward beefs up security and show his staff this guys picture he must have it in the clubs records.
Date: 07 Feb 2022 10:53 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Wow Emmett must not have ever trusted his brother to go from zero to 60 on him like that or he's not that bright. I can't believe Rose hasn't sent those porcupines home after hearing what they did. And so not only is "Jason" a sadist he's now a murderer? I hope Edward is one step ahead. So where are Alice and Jasper? Wouldn't they be invited?
Date: 07 Feb 2022 4:58 AM Title: Chapter Nine
Um Rose your friends are skanks.
Date: 07 Feb 2022 4:11 AM Title: Chapter Eight
So who else wants Jasper and Alice to be in the community too? At least maybe now Emmett more than Rose will be more respectful. And this assholr is in Boston already? Definitely Jasper's step brother. So he's a sadist and an obsessed psycho!
Date: 07 Feb 2022 2:09 AM Title: Chapter Six
So is Jasper's step-brother Bella's sadist ex Dom? And Emmett is immature he needs to grow up. Read a book or google some shit meat head. JS. Rose is calmer than Emmett pay attention sweetie.
Date: 07 Feb 2022 12:11 AM Title: Chapter Five
I hope Edwards plan takes this family out! Who is the Sadist? Caius, Aro, James, Felix? I hope Edward protects her because these assholes always come back especially when the paps take pictures of them together. So good so far.
Date: 05 Feb 2022 10:47 PM Title: Chapter Two
You always give us a sexy commanding Edward. Thanks for that! ;-D
Date: 05 Feb 2022 10:31 PM Title: Chapter One
I was beyond happy to see you finished this. Here we go,,,
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2022 11:56 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved the story!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2022 5:01 AM Title: Epilogue
I loved every word of this...brava!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2022 4:09 PM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful Ending. Love your story, hope you write more stories.
Date: 25 Jan 2022 1:38 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved the story it was amazing love all your stories.I love to read them I get transported to a different world we I read them thank you for sharing your amazing writing skills.
Date: 24 Jan 2022 4:20 AM Title: Epilogue
Awesome as always, but just wondering what happened to that idiot billy. I hope he got his comeuppance too
Date: 23 Jan 2022 4:24 PM Title: Epilogue
What a fabulous ending to yet another fabulous story from yourself x
Date: 23 Jan 2022 12:20 PM Title: Epilogue
Perfect story thank you
Date: 22 Jan 2022 7:29 PM Title: Epilogue
Awwww. This was a great ending. Edward was her husband, and her Dom when he needed to be and everything turned out well.
Date: 22 Jan 2022 12:11 PM Title: Epilogue
Lordamercy, I was as shocked as Edward when he had to deliver baby Gracie in the back of his limo LOL! With Peter and his evil father no longer on this earth, life can only get better and better for Edward and Bella...I suspect they won't stop at 2 babies. Esme will be even more over the moon than she is now!
Hate to leave them but they'll do just fine without us, now LOL! Thanks for another fabulous story, Clo darlin'!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2022 4:00 AM Title: Epilogue
I loved it but I am sad to see it come to an end thank you
Date: 22 Jan 2022 3:33 AM Title: Epilogue
Perfect! I'm going to miss this story
Date: 22 Jan 2022 2:44 AM Title: Epilogue
I loved following along with you with this tale.. great job with it my friend.
Date: 22 Jan 2022 2:41 AM Title: Epilogue
Well we have never ready a story where Edward deliver his own children but hey it's 2022 I will eventually get to deliver 8,9 & 10. I mean some of the crew hasn't even deliver 1, so I got that. Ok so now it time for Bikerward and Bikerella!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ ’❤️‘”’
Date: 22 Jan 2022 1:58 AM Title: Epilogue
I really loved this story!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2022 1:54 AM Title: Epilogue
The demise of Peter and his father was fitting.
Yay babies!
Happily Ever After. .....
Date: 22 Jan 2022 12:34 AM Title: Epilogue
So flipping good! Thanks so much for writing this! Enjoyed reading this so much!
Date: 22 Jan 2022 12:31 AM Title: Epilogue
OH MY! I love this! I Love them! Thank you for sharing! ;)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2022 11:16 PM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this. Going to miss these two
Date: 21 Jan 2022 11:01 PM Title: Epilogue
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!! I have loved reading every word, every chapter. Thank you for sharing this amazing story with us. I am sad to see it end. But I am excited to see what you share with us next.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2022 10:37 PM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful end. Hate to see it end but I know you'll be starting something else I'm going to love again soon. Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2022 10:36 PM Title: Epilogue
Beautifully concluded. Loved it.
Date: 21 Jan 2022 10:30 PM Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed reading this story and sad to see it over. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 21 Jan 2022 9:46 PM Title: Epilogue
Such a sweet HEA for these two. Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2022 9:11 PM Title: Epilogue
Left my review on ffn but I just love all the pictures you added here! That nursery is gorgeous!
Date: 21 Jan 2022 9:04 PM Title: Epilogue
Tears! I am not ready for this to be over.
Thank you for another fantastic story.
Date: 21 Jan 2022 8:23 PM Title: Epilogue
What a beautiful ending, though I'm sorry to see the story end.
'wonderful writing
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2022 7:57 PM Title: Epilogue
I love it! Beautiful ending! I am so glad Peter was ass raped multiple times!
Date: 18 Jan 2022 2:47 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I loved the picture at the end, Edward snuggling up to Bella. Very satisfying ending. Mistress Angela gave Peter a taste of pain and he gave her a confession about himself and his father. They are both evil men and obviously the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. Plus implicazting Tia and Leah Green and exposing the sins of their father. All will get the punishment they so rightfully deserve. As for the newlyweds, they will get their HEA.
Date: 18 Jan 2022 9:05 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I have truly loved this story, and every week, I was eagerly anticipating the next instalment. I can't believe this ride is almost over. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Until next time, be safe and take care!
~ Helen xoxoxo
Date: 18 Jan 2022 3:36 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I love it thank ya
Date: 17 Jan 2022 1:32 PM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Great story
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2022 11:43 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
No no on no no no no no no nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmnmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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it can't be the end
I love it
Date: 17 Jan 2022 9:01 AM Title: Chapter Thirty-One
I've absolutely loved this story. Can't wait for the epilogue, hope Peter and Billy get a taste of their own medicine. So sorry to see this end though.