Date: 07 Jun 2021 6:43 AM Title: Chapter One
AMAZING start I'm hooked!!!
Date: 06 Jun 2021 1:35 PM Title: Chapter Two
Wow,, they sure had instant attraction. Their souls merged the second he assisted her out of the car.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2021 6:52 AM Title: Chapter Two
New reader to your story..I can't wait to see hpow it all unfolds..Well done, looking forward to next update..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2021 6:52 AM Title: Chapter Two
New reader to your story..I can't wait to see hpow it all unfolds..Well done, looking forward to next update..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2021 5:55 PM Title: Chapter Two
But will she let herself submit to him now that he knows everything?
Date: 05 Jun 2021 6:28 AM Title: Chapter Two
Loving this and wishing I didn't have to wait a week for her reaction!!!ππππ
Date: 05 Jun 2021 3:15 AM Title: Chapter Two
OH MY!! I love this! ;)
Date: 05 Jun 2021 2:31 AM Title: Chapter Two
Very good so far. I want to thank you for the pictures that you put in. It adds so much to the story to visualize what you're talking about. It makes your stories even more enjoyable. It really is appreciated.
Date: 05 Jun 2021 2:03 AM Title: Chapter Two
Wow!! I'm loving how loving he is!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2021 1:50 AM Title: Chapter Two
Omg the chemistry between these too so hot. I can't wait to read more love this so much
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2021 1:14 AM Title: Chapter Two
Holy shit....I've been very bad too!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2021 12:59 AM Title: Chapter Two
Wow, π² that was so hot π”₯! I hope Bella gives Edward a chance. Please update soon.
Date: 05 Jun 2021 12:31 AM Title: Chapter Two
This is going to be intense. I think it moved a little fast for them to have already kissed.
Date: 05 Jun 2021 12:29 AM Title: Chapter Two
So very good!
Date: 04 Jun 2021 11:49 PM Title: Chapter Two
Oh is he going to tell her that he blacked balled the jerk that did that to her??? Hope all is well!!! KEEP WRITING βοΈ β€οΈπ’π‘π”₯π’
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2021 11:47 PM Title: Chapter Two
Thank for making our Lifestyle look so beautiful.
Date: 04 Jun 2021 11:09 PM Title: Chapter Two
Oh my. Can you instant attraction!!!!!!!! Oh my gosh, I can't wait for you to update again. Loving this story.
Date: 04 Jun 2021 10:32 PM Title: Chapter Two
Great chapter love their chemistry.
Date: 04 Jun 2021 10:16 PM Title: Chapter Two
Such an intense reaction and amazing attraction they have for each other. Edward's place looks amazing and I want the room Bella is staying in. Its gorgeous and I am a nut for shiplap. LOL
I am hoping she doesn't pull away from him, embarassed because he knows what happened to her. However, if she does, I have a feeling he has a way of reeling her back in. Perhaps they will have time for a litle bit of "fun" before Em and Rose get back.
Looking forward to more!!!
Date: 04 Jun 2021 10:14 PM Title: Chapter Two
outstandin, can't wait for more
Date: 04 Jun 2021 9:27 PM Title: Chapter Two
Every time I read a new story from you, I get to the end of the chapter and I’m wishing it was already completed so I can keep reading. Love it! Update soon please π
Date: 04 Jun 2021 9:25 PM Title: Chapter Two
Just when you think there's no such thing as guardian angels, one shows up to keep you safe *le sigh!* I adore this Edward already! Oh, and I'd love a veeeery long vacation in his gorgeous home!
Date: 02 Jun 2021 7:53 AM Title: Chapter One
Is she going to know who he is?
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2021 10:53 PM Title: Chapter One
Ahhh! I love it. Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2021 11:14 PM Title: Chapter One
Love first chapter can't wait to read more
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Date: 30 May 2021 10:39 PM Title: Chapter One
So excited for this story!
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Date: 30 May 2021 9:49 PM Title: Chapter One
Love it! Can't wait to more, thanks!
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Date: 30 May 2021 9:13 PM Title: Chapter One
Can't wait to read more.
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Date: 30 May 2021 5:39 PM Title: Chapter One
Such a wonderful starting chapter! I look forward to reading more!
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[Report This]Date: 30 May 2021 4:01 PM Title: Chapter One
I like the start of this.
For a time I was consumed with reading BDSM stories, but it got to be too much and lost their appeal.
I'm hoping that with your writing reputation, that I admire, this will be my chance to dip my toes back in.
Thank you.
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Thank you for considering reading my story. I really do try to write a storyline that is not only enjoyable to read but does have some facts to base it off on.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2021 3:22 PM Title: Chapter One
Looking forward to more
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[Report This]Date: 30 May 2021 1:27 PM Title: Chapter One
Awesome start. Do you have a plan for regular posting?
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I hope to post every Friday unless RL gets in my way.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2021 7:51 AM Title: Chapter One
I'm so excited to read more!
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[Report This]Date: 30 May 2021 5:06 AM Title: Chapter One
I am very interested in see how this goes .
Great writing!
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Date: 30 May 2021 12:01 AM Title: Chapter One
This story is Awesome already and I can't wait for more!!!!
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Date: 29 May 2021 9:31 PM Title: Chapter One
This is sounding like its going to be amazing. I can't wait. What will be the posting schedule?
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I hope to post every Friday unless RL gets in the way.
Date: 29 May 2021 7:27 PM Title: Chapter One
Looking forward to see where you take this story and to see if Bella can learn to trust again and if Edward will really leave that up to a different Dom or take it up himself.
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[Report This]Date: 29 May 2021 7:12 PM Title: Chapter One
love it, I can't wait to read more!!
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[Report This]Date: 29 May 2021 7:02 PM Title: Chapter One
Forget all those other Doms Edward. You will be the one for her...eventually.
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[Report This]Date: 29 May 2021 6:01 PM Title: Chapter One
I'm loving this so far. I can't wait to see more soon.
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[Report This]Date: 29 May 2021 5:32 PM Title: Chapter One
great story
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Date: 29 May 2021 5:22 PM Title: Chapter One
I'm in! Can't wait to see where this story goes.
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Date: 29 May 2021 4:56 PM Title: Chapter One
Oh yeah so damn excited for this story!
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Date: 29 May 2021 3:56 PM Title: Chapter One
KEEP WRITING βοΈ β€οΈπ’π‘π”₯π’
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[Report This]Date: 29 May 2021 4:27 AM Title: Chapter One
I love this β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ Can't wait to read more. You always do an amazing job bringing your characters to life.
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Date: 29 May 2021 2:53 AM Title: Chapter One
Someone should take a knife and cut up that horrible man. See how he likes it.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
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Date: 29 May 2021 2:45 AM Title: Chapter One
Ih my gosh. I can't wait to read more. How will Edward approach her and let her know that she is a submissive?
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Date: 29 May 2021 2:25 AM Title: Chapter One
Loved it can't wait for more
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Date: 29 May 2021 2:15 AM Title: Chapter One
Loved it
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Date: 29 May 2021 2:10 AM Title: Chapter One
*Gasp!* What a rotten thing for that so-called Dom to have done to Bella! Boy, is she gonna be surprised when she finds out about Edward...hopefully in a good way *woo hoo!*
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Thank you sweetie. This is going to be one hot story with of course a storyline that will leave you wondering what is going to happen next.
Date: 29 May 2021 1:07 AM Title: Chapter One
OH MY!! I think I am going to enjoy this story!! I am so excited for more! ;)
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Date: 29 May 2021 12:49 AM Title: Chapter One
Amazing start!!
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Date: 29 May 2021 12:41 AM Title: Chapter One
Loved it. I have a feeling Edward is going to do a whole lot more than get Bella to trust in a Dom again. I am also curious since he knows of who she is, if she will know who he is. Looking forward to more!!
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[Report This]Date: 29 May 2021 12:21 AM Title: Chapter One
Yeah, I need more. It's going to be great
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[Report This]Date: 29 May 2021 12:12 AM Title: Chapter One
Sounds fantastic. Can't wait for more.
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[Report This]Date: 28 May 2021 11:58 PM Title: Chapter One
Open Honest communication will be the first step to gaining Trust.
Hopefully Edward will do that with Bella.
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I will strive to write it that way. I appreciate you reading my story and will welcome any advice you would be willing to give.
Date: 28 May 2021 11:48 PM Title: Chapter One
Off to be a great start. Thank you!
Date: 28 May 2021 11:41 PM Title: Chapter One
ohhhhh i need more please
Date: 28 May 2021 11:32 PM Title: Chapter One
I'm looking forward to more.
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[Report This]Date: 28 May 2021 11:25 PM Title: Chapter One
Cannot wait for more
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Date: 28 May 2021 11:22 PM Title: Chapter One
Great first chapter looking forward to reading more.
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Date: 28 May 2021 11:11 PM Title: Chapter One
:):)
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Date: 28 May 2021 11:05 PM Title: Chapter One
Oh girl I am loving it
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