[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2021 5:59 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
Love love it can't for more
Date: 21 Oct 2021 4:02 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
aww for Judge Aro. Wasn't thinking it was him. The Jacob/James twist was sweet. Hard to guess at this point, but since the thing with Billy and with Paul..... wondering if its another member of the pack..... just hope its not seth. He is too sweet.
Date: 21 Oct 2021 3:53 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Esme is going to be pissed at them for doing it that way but happy that its will bella. Hmmm Not James huh.....
LOVE the pics in the chapter.
Date: 20 Oct 2021 3:56 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
’🥰Love it and I’m happy that Bella & Edward are married ’🥰
Date: 19 Oct 2021 9:46 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
Who is he????!!! Riley?
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2021 12:13 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
Hmmm, well that was.....steamy!!!! Loved the wedding. They all should be like that. The cost of some of the extravagant weddings out there is obscene. For one fucking day, and then 50% end in divorce....ridiculous. Proud of Edward and Bella. Great chapter.
Date: 17 Oct 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
So that leaves Mike
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ’❤️‘’”🎃
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2021 6:11 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
I'm loving how their relationship is growing ’—. Please update soon
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2021 1:37 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
I would accept a different job
Date: 16 Oct 2021 10:26 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
It did. I thought "him" might be Jacob. It's not Mike nor Laurent. Hmmm, Eric or Eleazar maybe? The family will be so surprised when they get the news about Edward's and Bella's nuptials. Hopefully Rose won't think Bella is trying to upstage her. She only wants the best for her friend. And knowin that Bella has found her soulmate should make Rose veery happy.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2021 6:48 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
Yes that was awesome and amazing I love it
Date: 16 Oct 2021 6:24 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
No I still think it’s jaspers step brother
Date: 16 Oct 2021 4:00 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
Thanks for the update AND the pics... Esme has figured out that B & E got married.. Should be a fun dinner
Date: 16 Oct 2021 3:57 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
Gotta say I have a feeling that "him" is Mike.
Date: 16 Oct 2021 3:28 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
I still have one person left out of my originals and I thought of another. I don't think Riley has been mentioned yet. Th ask for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2021 2:21 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
Can't wait for the demise of Billy Black and then the Tormentor.
They will get some pushback for eloping.
Date: 16 Oct 2021 1:53 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
I doubt Esme and Maggie or anyone else, for that matter, will be mad for long that Edward and Bella got married without them. However, they WILL be miffed that Aro and Gina knew before them LOL!
The photo of Jacob threw me off before I read the chapter. He just looked to innocent to be such a heineous bastard LOL! Plus, I always enjoy gay Jacobs *wink!*
Date: 16 Oct 2021 1:11 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2021 12:43 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
I just love this story, it has to be one of m favorites that you've written! I am completely stumped now, I thought maybe it was Cause, but you ticked him off the list too, along with a few others!! I have a couple more that I'm leaning to now, can't wait to find out! Take care, and stay safe, Ciao!
Date: 15 Oct 2021 11:14 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
Ok so "he" isn't Jacob.... Mike?
Date: 15 Oct 2021 11:03 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
THEY ARE MARRIED!!!!!!! Oh, Esme is going to love that they are married but so sad/upset that she was not there. Can't wait to see everyone's reaction. Ok, so "him" is not James, Jacob, Aro or Caius. Can't wait to find out who it is. Oh, I can not wait to read about Billy and see his reaction.......priceless.
Date: 15 Oct 2021 11:01 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
I can't wait for Billy to be taken down!
Date: 15 Oct 2021 10:57 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
A wonderful wedding! Interesting that Bella still wants to work at EAC after learning who owns it.
Date: 15 Oct 2021 10:27 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
Dang you knocked out two of my guesses lol cant wait for next week to read the next one great chapter as always
Date: 15 Oct 2021 1:12 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Oh shit is right. I think him is either Jacob or Mike. This is getting good.
Date: 14 Oct 2021 1:41 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Very impulsive and yet so Edward. And that ring is beautiful. But when you know, why wait. If they can get married "he" will not have a chance to get Bella back. They need to get the ceremony out of the way and then take care of the problem. Now Edward knows Billy is working with "him." Could "him" be Jacob?
Date: 12 Oct 2021 11:41 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Wow, so Billy is stealing from Edward also. He is either really brave or really stupid. Loved the frisbee in the nose. Lol.
Date: 11 Oct 2021 2:51 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Oh sh*t! O.O
Date: 10 Oct 2021 10:49 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
I think the "him" is Jacob
Date: 09 Oct 2021 3:47 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Ok so we have some bets going on
14 say it's Mike
18 say it's Aro
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ’❤️‘’”
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2021 3:37 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Love it! So happy they are getting married.
Date: 09 Oct 2021 10:31 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
I have 3 possibles for "him". Jacob, Aro or Caius. I thought maybe Royce, but I don't think so. Im not sold on Jacob either. I'm going with Aro. Loving this story and can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 09 Oct 2021 7:54 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
I am really enjoying this story; I enjoy all your stories. Is "him" Jacob?
Thank you for including your pictures in the actual story.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2021 3:54 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Thank you for the updates..I can't wait for next chapter—can we get it tomorrow? Well done..BRAVO I can't wait for Edward to whip that ass..until you post again..The fresbee wasn't enough Edward needs to put a whopping on both of them Billy & the ass hole that attacked Bella
Date: 09 Oct 2021 3:38 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Loved this chapter. Don't laugh... but one of the things I loved the most was that James isn't a bad guy. I always like it when James and Tanya are good people in the story. ;}
Date: 09 Oct 2021 3:34 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
I really like the idea of James Hunter being the PI that is working for Edward.
Riley Biers is Bella's tormentor.
Billy assets need to be frozen immediately. No, just find a way to drain his account of the funds he embezzled.
Or just have him arrested before he can follow through with the plan to kidnap Bella.
Date: 09 Oct 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter One
I'm thinking "him" is Mike Newton. He seems like the type that would need his mommy and daddy to bail him out after he messes up. Plus Mike does not know when to stop and when he is not wanted. Hope I'm on to something. :-)
Date: 09 Oct 2021 1:31 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Oh come on! Please let them marry before the drama
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2021 1:06 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
I can't wait to see them get married and to see billy get his punishment. Please update soon. LOVED ’ HER RING!
Date: 09 Oct 2021 12:06 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
I about had a fit. Why did you leave it there? Do you know how addicting you're making this story? I'm going to lose my mind waiting for the next chapter.
I can't decide who it would be. My guesses are Royce King, Jasper (but only because we haven't heard from him or Alice), or Jacob. Those are my top 3 in that order.
Date: 08 Oct 2021 9:40 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
I hope they get married before dealing with Billy.
Date: 08 Oct 2021 9:03 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
I'm so confused. I was so sure you'd said explicitly it was James... Anyway, especially since Billy is working with him, I'm thinking "him" has gotta be Jacob (and they're not father-son here).
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2021 7:48 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
I love it now is this the information they needed to end Billy will they still get married
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2021 7:48 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
I love it now is this the information they needed to end Billy will they still get married
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2021 5:30 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Aro, Demetrie or Alec?
Date: 08 Oct 2021 5:02 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
James is Good!!! Fast work. I hope they still get married first before dealing with Billy!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2021 4:40 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Well now that we know James works for Edward, 'him' is definitely not James. Guessing is driving me crazy. Maybe Riley? Or perhaps Tyler? Or perhaps, Aro? Just thought I would throw out some names. If I'm right, I will expect a prize. ;)
Date: 08 Oct 2021 3:54 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
I can't wait until next week!!!!! I thinks it's Jacob!
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2021 2:33 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Loved it yay they are eloping. Janes isn't bad always throws me lol
I kinda think it could be Jasper or maybe even Mike. How your week was better
Date: 08 Oct 2021 2:31 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
They are on their way to get married!!!!!!!! Oh Esme and Maggie will be happy but will also be sad. I had a feeling that James was not "Him". Wow, Billy is stealing from Edward too. Billy is brave and stupid.
Date: 08 Oct 2021 1:20 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Thanks for the update. I love the visuall along with it as well.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2021 1:19 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
wow whirlwind proposal and marriage, I am not complaining but can't wait wait for Edward to get even with Billy and James
Date: 08 Oct 2021 1:15 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Gorgeous ring!!! And why wait when you know it's right...can I get an Amen LOL! So, the bad guy isn't James? No clue who it might be, at this stage. Wait, I don't recall Jasper and Alice bein' in the story, so far, so it could be Jasper!?!
Date: 08 Oct 2021 12:42 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Nice to see James as a good guy for a change
Date: 08 Oct 2021 12:28 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
As always left dying for more! Thanks for the update!
Date: 08 Oct 2021 12:23 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Loves it can't wait for more
Date: 08 Oct 2021 12:17 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Great chapter as always and im thinking the "Him" may be Aro, Jacob, or Mike since James was eliminated from the list of usual suspects
Date: 08 Oct 2021 12:16 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Billy is going down. Edward's and Bella's wedding will be perfect.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2021 11:47 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
Dude has a death wish!
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2021 12:26 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen
short, but I always want more
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2021 9:24 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Oh Rosalie....you and Emmett have loads to learn. Great update. Especially when you broke the fucker's nose.
Date: 05 Oct 2021 3:17 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Great shot with the frisbee..lol Slowly, Emmett and Rose are gravitating more to the dark side..
Date: 04 Oct 2021 9:08 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2021 5:20 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
thank you for the update..well done..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2021 9:48 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Billy has a plastic surgeon on speed dial, lol. Nice use of a Frisbee.
Rose and Emmett becoming part of the community will be a good thing for Bella.
Date: 03 Oct 2021 2:26 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
I liked the way Felix handled Billy. And that is just the beginning. I wonder what else Edward has planned. I also liked how Edward spoke to Bella about her scars. He was so supportive, even suggesting that if it really bothered her that much they would get in touch with a plastic surgeon. She is a survivor.
Date: 03 Oct 2021 4:40 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen
LOVE the need for the nose job. Glad Em and Rose are getting a taste in safety with E&B by thier sides.
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2021 3:15 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Wow billy is already messing up but how will their night go
Date: 03 Oct 2021 12:24 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen
The frisbee whacking Billy in the nose is friggin awesome. And the fact that he'd just had a facelift makes it even better. I am guessing thart was behind Edward having them throw the frisbee at him.
I'm a bit worried though that with all these "mishaps" that keep getting in the way of James getting Bella, James is going to get desparate and reckless and he is going to try and snatch Bella himself, I sure hope if that happens either Edward or one of his bodyguards are there to stop it. Maybe Edward will get wind of what Billy is up to before either Billy or James gets the chance to get anywhere near taking Bella.
Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2021 10:53 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
I can't wait to see what happens to Billy! Great chapter! Hope work slows down. I hate death
Date: 02 Oct 2021 10:47 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Thanks!!
Date: 02 Oct 2021 10:11 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Billy needs to be taken care of asap.
Date: 02 Oct 2021 9:59 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Step 1 of Billy's comeuppance...busted nose LOL! Clearly, if Bella's scars were so hideous, she'd get zero attention from every man who crosses her path. As it is, not a one of them can keep their eyes to themselves, includin' married men with children LOL!
Date: 02 Oct 2021 9:53 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Billy is going to get his ass in to trouble. Rose is liking Bella's ways.
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2021 9:40 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
Loved it
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2021 9:18 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
I can't eait to see what else he has planned for Billy Black the Bastard.
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2021 9:18 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen
I can't eait to see what else he has planned for Billy Black the Bastard.
Date: 01 Oct 2021 3:23 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
OMG what a greedy SOB Billy is. Of course he is working for him. So afraid B is going to get kidnapped and hurt.
Date: 01 Oct 2021 3:15 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Glad she finally went to talk to him. Aww for the ILY's
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2021 4:04 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Ugh now I am nervous for what happens next. Loved it.
Sorry rl is hectic hopefully it even outs soon for you.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2021 10:05 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh no! I can't wait until Billy gets what he deserves. Great story!
Date: 27 Sep 2021 10:05 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh no! I can't wait until Billy gets what he deserves. Great story!
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2021 11:53 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Thank you for the update..I'm not sure how this is going to end..these 2 are crazy😲 they need to be stopped before they harm any one else..until you post again.
Date: 26 Sep 2021 11:12 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Esme and Maggie are on cloud nine!!!!!
Can't wait to see how Emmett and Rose react to the Open House.
So Billy has contacted some of Edward's ex-subs. Plus was not a good Dom to them. Edward finds that out, he will be even more pissed.
So Billy is working for/with HIM. I'm assuming that is how he got the pictures. If HIM is in the same town/city that Edward and Bella are it seems Edward may need some new investigators.
Al always, you leave me wanting more and more.
Date: 26 Sep 2021 4:50 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Sorry it's late but Bridge Day is October 16th and the Governor just announced it yesterday although this year they are not having any base jumpers which means we're not having the sling-shot jumpers but we are still having jumpers jumping off the New River Gorge so I'm doing training for the next 2 weeks with new Covid guidelines. Pain in the butt!!
Ok so is Emmett going to freak out when he goes to the open house??? Hmmmmmm!!!!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ ’❤️’”‘
Date: 25 Sep 2021 9:54 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
I hope Edward's security is worth it. Billy has some "ins" others don't.
Date: 25 Sep 2021 7:46 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Dammit!! Edward needs to act fast. Maybe put a tail on Billy as well.
Date: 25 Sep 2021 5:25 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh I love your stories!! I can't wait until next Friday!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2021 2:34 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
missed you last week
Date: 25 Sep 2021 1:29 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh, no. Edward has no idea what Billy hasa been up to. Good thing Bella told Edward what Billy said to her. Edward is very vigilant. But "he" is determined to get her back.
Date: 25 Sep 2021 7:08 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Wow! On the bright side, Maggie and Esme are in 7th heaven LOL! However, Billy has no idea who he's dealin' with and I don't mean his new client! They shall both reap what they sow 10 times over!