Date: 25 Sep 2021 5:31 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 25 Sep 2021 4:46 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Billy really thinks he is smarter than Edward. And now that he has teamed up with HIM!!!! Karma can be a mean bitch.
Date: 25 Sep 2021 4:18 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
See Bella was right billy is working with him but 1st mistake he touch and treated Bella 2nd he’s dome enough to think she won’t talk to Edward 3rd he doesn’t know how smart Edward really is
Date: 25 Sep 2021 3:51 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Billy is not a very smart man. He should know his client will search the world over to find dirt on someone if there is a chance they might hurt a loved one.
Date: 25 Sep 2021 3:51 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Billy is not a very smart man. He should know his client will search the world over to find dirt on someone if there is a chance they might hurt a loved one.
Date: 25 Sep 2021 1:27 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
I can't wait to see Edward make both of them pay for EVERYTHING.
Date: 25 Sep 2021 1:23 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Holy snap this is getting dangerous
Date: 25 Sep 2021 12:37 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Maybe Bella's ex will off Billy
Date: 25 Sep 2021 12:37 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Maybe Bella's ex will off Billy
Date: 24 Sep 2021 11:58 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
And now the hole is even deeper. These two do not know who they are dealing with. Edward will eat them and spit them out.
Date: 24 Sep 2021 11:58 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
And now the hole is even deeper. These two do not know who they are dealing with. Edward will eat them and spit them out.
Date: 24 Sep 2021 11:31 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
OH SH*T!!! O.O
Date: 24 Sep 2021 11:20 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
1, 2 Edwards coming for you
3, 4 better lock your door
5, 6 no more dirty tricks
7, 8 You've met your fate
9, 10 You'll meet your End
Date: 24 Sep 2021 10:42 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Good reading! Love Esme and Maggie's reaction to Bella's and Edwards love.
Date: 24 Sep 2021 10:18 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Can't wait for more
Date: 24 Sep 2021 10:18 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Can't wait for more
Date: 14 Sep 2021 5:33 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Glad Bella confided in Edward. Billy is history. Interesting now that Edward will look into Billy and see if he has a connection to "him." Also, Edward could be right. There may be more women out there he has done this to. They've said the "I love you." So happy.
Date: 13 Sep 2021 1:35 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
I'm so glad she didn't keep it to herself. I can handle angst and drama, but not when the characters are being stupid!
Date: 12 Sep 2021 11:03 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
That was sweet that Bella can talk to Edward uuu billy is going down
Date: 12 Sep 2021 3:35 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Sorry being late but we had to get ready for 9/11 parades yesterday and then today we had those parades. Anyway some of us think maybe Edward isn't the only client to Billy maybe "him" is too????
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ’❤️”’‘
Date: 11 Sep 2021 3:44 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
I'm glad Bella came clean and informed Edward of Billy's actions. As you stated, communication is the number one rule .... for ANY relationship.
Date: 11 Sep 2021 12:50 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
I hope he makes Billy pay. Billy needs to be taken down. He needs to be stripped of all the comforts that he's come to know since being Edward's lawyer. Edward needs to ruin him financially and to where he can never practice law again and beat his ass like he stole something. If Edward can't handle the ass kicking, sick Emmett on him. He won't hesitate.
Date: 11 Sep 2021 11:21 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
are the chapters getting shorter or am I reading faster because they are so good
Date: 11 Sep 2021 4:19 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
I'm glad she told him.
Date: 11 Sep 2021 3:34 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 11 Sep 2021 2:40 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
I can't wait to see what Edward does to Billy! I hope whatever it is will be good!
Date: 11 Sep 2021 2:34 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Bella's on to something when she linked Billy to her former Dom.
What type of damage does Billy think he can inflict on Bella that Edward would believe?
Date: 11 Sep 2021 2:04 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
I LOVED THAT SHE TOLD HIM THE TRUTH and Edward will make Billy pay for it. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Thanks for the chapter.
Date: 10 Sep 2021 11:26 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
And the truth shall set you free! I am so lookin' forward to Billy's downfall LOL! And it would be criminal to let Bella go on her runs without someone with her until this is all sorted!
Date: 10 Sep 2021 9:16 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Thank goodness she told him would billy still try something
Date: 10 Sep 2021 9:15 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
I am so glad she told Edward about Billy. I just wonder if Billy has approached Edward's other submissive in the past? Has Billy been in contact with "him"?
Date: 10 Sep 2021 8:38 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS! ;)
Date: 10 Sep 2021 7:59 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
I'm so happy she told Edward. I knew he'd believe her. I'm scared of Billy today.
Date: 10 Sep 2021 6:56 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Loved it
Date: 10 Sep 2021 6:34 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Love it so glad they talked.
Date: 10 Sep 2021 6:16 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Communication is so important. Good thing Bella told Edward about Billy.
Date: 10 Sep 2021 6:16 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen
Communication is so important. Good thing Bella told Edward about Billy.
Date: 07 Sep 2021 11:18 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
I hope Bella tells Edward ASAP what Billy did and said and he makes Billy pay painfully for it. Please update soon.
Date: 07 Sep 2021 12:00 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
I've been on a boat (no, not a yacht) during a storm. It was a 63 foot sailboat and we were SCUBA diving. Came up from a dive and it was horrible lightening and wind. Once back on the boat we kept getting shocked when we'd touch the metal on zippered bags and things... I'm glad the wedding guests survived their strorm and I hope Emmett's yacht faired okay.. and i wish Billy Black had falled overboard..
Date: 05 Sep 2021 1:58 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Glad they made the decision to move all guest to Tied-Up. Can Bella not get a break??!! Please let Bella tell Edward about his low life lawyer
Date: 05 Sep 2021 5:17 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Billy Black is scum and needs to be dealt with.
Date: 05 Sep 2021 5:14 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Oh yes she needs to tell Edward everything asap. Poor em's boat.hope it's ok
Date: 05 Sep 2021 4:27 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Man I thought I was going to save some people and drown Leah and Tia. It has been busy here the past few weeks and all the rain we got from Hurricane Ida I will finish Fire For Your Soul I promise. I has been crazy here the whole crew hasn't been here. We haven't been whole!!! You know what I mean??? And this weekend is Fire of Lights and Labor Day parade so busy again. KEEP WRITING ✍️ ’❤️”’‘
Date: 04 Sep 2021 4:34 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Poor Bella has evil coming at her from all sides. From her former Dom, from Tia and Leah, and now from Paul. Now would be a good time to tell Edward about Paul. He promised to protect her.
Date: 04 Sep 2021 3:32 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
I wonder how long it will take for the nightmares to go away. With Edward's loving help hopefully not too long. What a sweet gesture for her to move into his room.
Date: 04 Sep 2021 3:00 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Oh, no. Emmett is too overbearing and over protective.
Date: 04 Sep 2021 1:25 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
She did good not calling him Sir or Edward. She should have left him a note telling him she was going running so he wouldn't worry. He was going to make love to her again that morning so she missed out on the orgasm he was plannng on giving her.
Date: 04 Sep 2021 1:00 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen
I love this but I do wish for more
Date: 04 Sep 2021 12:18 PM Title: Chapter Ten
Yay, Esme! Edward makingt love to Bella and picturing her in his bed every night wrapped around each other, what a change.
Date: 04 Sep 2021 11:55 AM Title: Chapter Nine
Gah, Tia and Leah are such sluts. Who shows up at their best friends wedding announcement party dressed like that. Edward put them in their plaaces. Can't wait to see what Esme does.
Date: 04 Sep 2021 11:37 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
It's good that she decided to tell Edward. Is the lawyer related to Tia & Leah?
Date: 04 Sep 2021 11:37 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
It's good that she decided to tell Edward. Is the lawyer related to Tia & Leah?
Date: 04 Sep 2021 5:21 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
I'm surprised that Billy would be so bold. He must know the lengths Edward goes to when protecting something as private as his business and therefore his personal relationships.
Bella's decision to trust her Dom is a significant move in their new relationship.
Date: 04 Sep 2021 5:02 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
She HAS to tell Edward about Billy ASAP!! That way Edward can figure out how to protect Bella & destroy Billy.
Date: 04 Sep 2021 4:59 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Yesss pleaseeee let Bella tell Edward what billy said pleaseeee
Date: 04 Sep 2021 4:53 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
That was very scary. And damn now she has Billy Black and stalker boy after her. I hope Edward kicks his ass. Great update
Date: 04 Sep 2021 1:43 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
It's not wise to underestimate Mother Nature but smart move to get everyone aboard Edward's more powerful yacht. Poor PrimaRose. Maybe she'll be found in fair shape!?
Billy Black just made the stupidest move of his long...soon to be short life!
Date: 04 Sep 2021 1:24 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Oh thank goodness now will she tell Edward right away
Date: 04 Sep 2021 1:22 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
I am so glad Bella is going to tell Edward what Billy did and said. They can fight it together.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 04 Sep 2021 1:04 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
Billy Black is a jerk on this story. Bella needs to tell Edward what Billy said and did. Edward will tear Billy apart. As always, can't wait for more!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Sep 2021 12:30 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
I really need Bella to be tough and stand up to Billy. She needs tell Edward. She needs to be strong!
On a side note, please make the font bigger :)
Date: 04 Sep 2021 12:26 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
I sure hope this storm and having to go back to shore much sooner than planned, keeps James away from Bella. And now we have fucking Billy to deal with. I hope Edward fires his ass. I would think that Edward would have had him sign a no disclosure contract given the information that Billy seems to have. But I worry that Billy will team up with James and could be real trouble for them. Can't wait for more!!
Date: 04 Sep 2021 12:18 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen
I'm all for castrating Billy.
Date: 02 Sep 2021 8:26 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Omg you are evil. I thought it was true. Glad he's there to help her. She really needs a therapist though. Poor thing
Date: 02 Sep 2021 7:23 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Ack he is waaaaaay too close. Of course the skanks are going to help him get to
Date: 02 Sep 2021 7:14 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Ooh dayum that was hawt!!
Date: 30 Aug 2021 3:29 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Dream or preminition?
Date: 30 Aug 2021 3:29 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Dream or preminition?
Date: 29 Aug 2021 11:39 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
I thought we were going to have "words", my friend! Thanks for the update even if the first of it was a bit evil.
Date: 28 Aug 2021 2:58 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Well, I'm glad you didn't kill Edward or this would be a very short story. Haha
Date: 28 Aug 2021 2:09 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Omg I was literally screaming at you saying no, no,no lol glad it was just a dream look forward to next update x
Date: 28 Aug 2021 12:44 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 27 Aug 2021 11:00 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
WOW!! I love this! ;)
Date: 27 Aug 2021 10:53 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
OMG so evil!!! LOl. I totally bought the dream. I seriously hope Tia and Leah get pushed off the boat. Thanks for writing, I love it!
Date: 27 Aug 2021 7:52 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
When it said he slit Edward's throat I knew/hoped it was a nightmare. But you had me nervous there for a little while. As always, can't wait for more.
Date: 27 Aug 2021 4:31 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
I love them so much!!
HE has to be caught immediately! Or the evil sisters have to be banned!
Date: 27 Aug 2021 4:16 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
O. M. G.!!!!!!!!!!!
That nightmare almost gave me a heart attack!!!!!!
Date: 27 Aug 2021 3:48 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
You had me upset for a minute there. So glad it was a dream. I hope neither Edward or Bella get hurt in this story, and the asshole is caught fairly quickly and killed and those bitches get what's coming to them.
Date: 27 Aug 2021 3:21 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Wow you had me at the beginning damn that was scary
I loved it
Date: 27 Aug 2021 1:33 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Glad it was just a nightmare.
Date: 27 Aug 2021 1:30 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
So relieved it was only a nightmare, although I'm still worried it might be a portent *nail bite!*
Date: 27 Aug 2021 12:43 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
wow you certainly got my heart racing and not in a good way
Date: 27 Aug 2021 12:24 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
So relieved it was not real
Date: 27 Aug 2021 12:24 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
So relieved it was not real
Date: 27 Aug 2021 12:05 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Loved it
Date: 27 Aug 2021 11:52 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Omg you scared the crap out of me!! But such a great update I love that they are growing closer and she could open up about her nightmare.
Date: 27 Aug 2021 11:47 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Edward's words about Bella moving in to his bedroom are so similar to the words he said in her nightmare.
Date: 27 Aug 2021 11:45 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Hello mini stoke (and I've had a full one)! Still very much in love with these two! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 27 Aug 2021 11:33 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
You are an evil, evil woman.
Date: 26 Aug 2021 5:57 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
Loved it they are so perfect for each other