Date: 24 Aug 2021 2:22 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
i hope Emmett and Edward get ti beat shit out of "hm".I hope they get to him befor he gets to Bella..
Date: 23 Aug 2021 5:10 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
What a mwss this entire week is going to be! At least three people plotting and scheming and not one got intenetion from any of them.
Date: 23 Aug 2021 2:52 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 22 Aug 2021 8:27 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Don't you dare let any harm come to Edward or Bella. The rest are up for grabs.
Date: 22 Aug 2021 2:27 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Not only this Jason character is a bad dominant, but also a murderer, a psychopath !
Date: 22 Aug 2021 4:33 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Some of us bet that Bella and Edward wouldn't be going to Yacht day since Bella has scars on her body!!!
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ’❤️’”‘
Date: 22 Aug 2021 3:53 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Oh hells no
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2021 3:34 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Oh hell no!! He better stay far away from them. Loved the update
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2021 3:09 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
He's definitely too close.
Will Tia and Leah end up like the unsuspecting employee?
How will Edward be lured away from Bella?
Date: 22 Aug 2021 2:20 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Edward and Bella already read each other so well even if they've only known each other a short time. Plus, laughter is necessary for a healthy relationship although Edward might have some bruises to show for it LOL!
The bitch squad have just become useful idiots to an evil bastard who should have his own trackin' device up his ass!
ps: Bella's gown is absolutely gorgeous!
Date: 21 Aug 2021 11:59 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Damn. No! Please update soon
Date: 21 Aug 2021 10:25 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Oh! It's getting angst-y! :-(
Leah and Tia shouldn't be able to wear a skimpy bikini, I suppose Esme won't allow them to look like whores and it won't work as Edward won't see them anyway
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2021 10:00 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Too closde for comfort.
Date: 21 Aug 2021 9:44 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Well crap. I think it's time Tia & Leah are banned permanently. "Jason" is going to need to drown like the rat he is
Date: 21 Aug 2021 9:02 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
So he's close and now has Rose's bridesmaids helping him. Bella is in trouble.
Date: 21 Aug 2021 8:22 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
U bustedxout laughing when Emmett throw Edward against the wall. I knew he had misunderstood and then would be embarrassed. I'm wondering if he will tell Rose what happened a d she will punish him. Lol. "HE" has definitely gotten to close. As always, you leave me wanting more and more.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2021 8:13 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
love it
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2021 7:29 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
No no no no!!! I am gonna hunt that bastard down and kill him myself! Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2021 5:26 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Have to say Emmett has a lot to learn lol
Date: 18 Aug 2021 2:37 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
Oh my!!!!!!!! I love seeing both of their relationships grow. Amazing chapter.
Date: 15 Aug 2021 10:53 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
I like that Edward is a Dominant who doesn't withhold pleasure, either his own or hers. Of course, this could be a direct result of fallin' in love with Bella. It probably wasn't like that with his previous subs.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2021 7:11 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Definately NSFW!!!!! But so so good.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2021 3:45 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
I love this chapter!
Thank you
Kisses
Date: 14 Aug 2021 12:18 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Loved it! Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2021 3:39 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
Wow oh wow hot damn and romantic
Date: 14 Aug 2021 3:11 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
Oohhhh child! That was good
Date: 14 Aug 2021 3:00 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2021 1:17 AM Title: Chapter Twelve
Indeed, he has fallen hard, and fast.
The forever part will have to wait until she catches up to him.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2021 10:54 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
That was hot
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2021 10:46 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Damn! I need a cold shower now!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2021 10:08 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Loved it
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2021 9:44 PM Title: Chapter Twelve
Hot and shower worthy.
Date: 11 Aug 2021 1:35 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Well, I am glad that they told Rose what happened. I can't wait for the PLAYROOM time!!!!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2021 3:10 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Oooh a little lemony tease.... Glad they told Rose about what the skanks said
Date: 08 Aug 2021 8:40 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
Absolutely love this story! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 08 Aug 2021 11:01 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
I love this! ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2021 2:14 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 07 Aug 2021 9:22 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
I look forward to reading the scene in the playroom!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2021 4:59 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
Thank you for this good chapter.
Kisses
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2021 10:41 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Lol, I love it. They are cute together and I love how you are writing this story.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2021 4:09 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Loved it can't wait to read about their time in the playroom.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2021 4:09 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
It's a good thing that Rose is now aware of the rude behavior Tia and Leah constantly displayed towards Bella.
Sub and Dom are very much in sync.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2021 3:51 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
Need more please 🥰
Date: 07 Aug 2021 12:38 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
While Edward and Bella are still in a period of adjustment, it would appear that Edward is an expert in time management *wink!*
Also, glad Bella got to find out just how little those skanks meant to Rose!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2021 12:35 AM Title: Chapter Eleven
DAMN GIRL WAITING ALL WEEK FOR JUST A SNIPPET IS SO UNFAIR, IT IS LIKE WAITING TO ORGASM
Date: 06 Aug 2021 11:15 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
Edward had to be freaking out when Bella went for her run. Glad he ddn't overreact.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 11:03 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
Well, they did ask!
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 10:04 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
I love it with every chapter I love it more
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 9:29 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
Damn Bella! Way to bend the rules!
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 7:05 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
Love this chapter. Love how Bella is more confident and knows what she wants.
Date: 06 Aug 2021 7:05 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
Love this chapter. Love how Bella is more confident and knows what she wants.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 11:34 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Thank you for these good chapters!
Kisses
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 10:52 AM Title: Chapter Nine
I like Esme but the other two Yuck
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2021 10:28 AM Title: Chapter Eight
WHO is this "him"? Suspense
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2021 8:47 PM Title: Chapter Six
Yes, I can't wait!
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2021 8:26 PM Title: Chapter Five
Ha here are the other two!
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2021 7:52 PM Title: Chapter Four
Bella est une coquine ! :-)
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2021 7:09 PM Title: Chapter Three
I love this chapter!
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2021 6:06 PM Title: Chapter Two
Yes, they were immediately attracted to each other. I love !
Kisses
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2021 6:02 PM Title: Chapter One
I love this chapter!
Date: 03 Aug 2021 10:34 PM Title: Chapter Ten
I love reading lemons. The smack down was great too. I don't think we have seen the last of those girls
Date: 03 Aug 2021 10:34 PM Title: Chapter Ten
I love reading lemons. The smack down was great too. I don't think we have seen the last of those girls
Date: 03 Aug 2021 10:34 PM Title: Chapter Ten
I love reading lemons. The smack down was great too. I don't think we have seen the last of those girls
Date: 03 Aug 2021 10:33 PM Title: Chapter Ten
I love reading lemons. The smack down was great too. I don't think we have seen the last of those girls
Date: 02 Aug 2021 3:11 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 01 Aug 2021 4:58 PM Title: Chapter Ten
Three cheers for Esme!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2021 4:51 PM Title: Chapter Ten
Great chapter love Esme!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2021 6:48 AM Title: Chapter Ten
I love Esme heheheheh that was amazing
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Tia and Leah will be making a scene for sure. Hopefully Rose will send them packing.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Tia and Leah will be making a scene for sure. Hopefully Rose will send them packing.
Date: 01 Aug 2021 3:10 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Why do I get the feeling Tia & Leah are just getting started? I wish Rosalie had heard them but it would put a damper on her wedding.
Date: 31 Jul 2021 9:36 PM Title: Chapter Ten
Epic smackdown by Esme *high five!* If anyone's been mooching off of anybody, it's those two bitches mooching off their daddy LOL! Wonder if/when the scales are lifted from Rose's eyes about her so-called besties *snort!*
And who ever said the missionary position was boring never experienced it with Edward...dayum!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2021 8:53 PM Title: Chapter Two
Love how quickly they have become entwined with one another!
Date: 31 Jul 2021 8:50 PM Title: Chapter One
I wonder who her last Dom was 😩, i can't wait for Bella and Edward to meet!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2021 4:01 PM Title: Chapter Ten
Love Love your story, can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2021 5:50 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Loved it!! Esme is kickass put the skanks in their place. Then sweet hot sexy time so good is it next Friday yet?
Date: 31 Jul 2021 5:28 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Loved it. Now why do I get the feeling that Leah and/or Tia are going to help Bella's abuser get her again. <biting nails>
Date: 31 Jul 2021 3:27 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Betcha it's either Tia or Leah that will get Mike into the compound or maybe both????
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ’❤️‘”’
Date: 31 Jul 2021 2:48 AM Title: Chapter Ten
I LOVE THIS!! ;)
Date: 31 Jul 2021 12:22 AM Title: Chapter Ten
Yes! Loved it! Absolutely adore Esme to!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2021 11:53 PM Title: Chapter Ten
I always want more as I am sure your other readers do but I try to be patient
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2021 11:05 PM Title: Chapter Ten
I'm loving how their relationship is growing ’—
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2021 10:37 PM Title: Chapter Ten
I loved Esme's dressing down of Leah ad Tia, that was awesome.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2021 9:43 PM Title: Chapter Ten
Loved it