[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2019 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 16: Time Passes
OMG. Still say Aro needs to die. But at least they are together. Ty for writing and sharing.
Date: 03 Nov 2019 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Truth
Wowsers you are killing me
Date: 03 Nov 2019 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 14:The End
Ugh B is a moron. Esp knowing what Esme is going to do
Date: 03 Nov 2019 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 13: Checkmate
Go bad ass Edward.
Date: 03 Nov 2019 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 12: Uninvited
Jeez Louise.... Could u give James any more powers? Ugh
Date: 03 Nov 2019 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 11: Family
Of course Esme is going to be petty and make a phone call
Date: 31 Oct 2019 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 10: Confession Part 2
oooh yummy yummy.....ah so we get the name of E's sperm donor.....I won't call him father. pfft
Date: 31 Oct 2019 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 9: Confession Part 1
ooh so we get to hear some of E's backstory. Why do I get the feeling that James is E's father??? Glad B&E are talking though
Date: 31 Oct 2019 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 8: Recollection
Wow Esme is def a jealous bitch. Ah so it was her fault James got turned. Hateful thing she is. Sounds like Esme has been poisoning his mind for a long time.
Guessing Esme called James so he could come back to try to ruin B's life?!?
Date: 31 Oct 2019 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Cullen's
hmm some interesting turns. Esme is such a bitch. ah so I take it Bella had the hots for James and Esme...killed or fucked and killed him?!?!
hmmm now with her James revalation...
what did Esme do...... ooh did she call James in?
Date: 31 Oct 2019 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 6: Mind Over Matter
hmmm these two are like oil and water it seems. But Dayum the heat between them....yummy.
Wow Esme is a bitch. James.....cant wait to hear that story.
Date: 31 Oct 2019 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations Part 2
oh my <waving fan in my face>
Date: 31 Oct 2019 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 4: Revelations Part 1
ooh is Edward maybe a half breed.....or a shifter? hmmm
Thanks for posting here so I can read. I don't do FFn.
Date: 31 Oct 2019 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 3: Phenomenon
ooooh dayum nice car.
Date: 31 Oct 2019 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 2: Open Book
lol for her going to Tanya for advice. Allergies indeed. B is a bit darker and mouthier than E seemed to be in the original. Interesting twist.
ah so he can still dazzle her.....
Date: 31 Oct 2019 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Sight
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Date: 31 Oct 2019 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Sight
Interesting start. Can't wait to see where you take it.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2016 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 16: Time Passes
Ok it was diferent and no baby yay!!!
Date: 22 Nov 2011 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 16: Time Passes
I'm so glad Edward came back for Bella, even though it took him four years. So, they are going to have their forever together. So, am I going to need a real strong drink to read Edward's POV? It sounds as if he went through the tortures of hell in Volterra, poor baby! Still I look forward to reading it. This was a really good story, even if parts were pretty angsty. See you later!
Date: 22 Nov 2011 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Truth
How could you do that to Bella and Edward? Shame, shame! Of course, what else could Edward do against Aro and Azreal? This is a great example of the evil one can expect from that ancient old bastard, Aro. The only good to come out of this whole thing was Esme losing her head. Served the bitch right!
Date: 22 Nov 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 14:The End
Pardon me while I go into the closet and scream! This part in New Moon always makes me crazy, and I don't like it a bit better when It's Bella being stupid, than I did when it was Edward. Makes me want to slap them both! I know what the motivations are but can't help wanting to see a more common sense outcome. Silly me!
Date: 22 Nov 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 13: Checkmate
That was cool as hell! Edward is one badass hybrid, saving his woman! I'll bet James got the surprise of his life, when Edward ripped off his head. He should have listened to Esme. This whole chapter was exciting and I love a good fight! Too bad Esme seems to have gotten away. I would dearly love to see Carlisle deal with her and her cheating, murderous little body!
Date: 22 Nov 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 12: Uninvited
What the hell does James think he's doing, putting on a show for the Cullens and dragging Bella off? Second uestion, why didn't Edward fight back, as he could have? This whole deal has me confused. Is there a reason Bella wouldn't be strong enough to protect herself from James? I must be missing something here!
Date: 21 Nov 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 11: Family
I guess I'm n ot seeing something here. This is similar to Bella being discovered at the baseball game, but very different at the same time. Edward is no fragile human girl, he's a half-vampire rather able to defend himself, especially with some help from the Cullens and Tanya. This should be an interesting confrontation.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 10: Confession Part 2
I'm wondering how Tanya recognized Edward as the off-spring of Azreal. He must really resemble his sire. Whatever, he and Bella are well and truly mated now, so nobody better mess with that! I am having vague thoughts of where you're headed with this narrative. Since it will mean pain for them both, I hope I'm wrong. We will see!
Author's Response:
I can't thank you enough for all your amazing and thoughtful reviews. I'm so happy that you are still finding MD intriguing. I hope the remaining chapters don't disappoint. Thank you again so very much :))
Date: 21 Nov 2011 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 9: Confession Part 1
Bella is just going to have to develop some trust in Edward, and believe him when he says he'll stay and never hurt her. Of course, like humans, there's always the possiblity that hurt just happens, like life. Still, it will be interesting to see how Edward handles seeing James. I don't think either of them realize that James was never really Bella's mate.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 8: Recollection
No wonder Bella hates Esme, and vice versa. Your Carlisle has saddled himself with quite a bitch! How could she screw up Bella's life like that? Not to mention what she did to James. He must have really wanted to stay human, more than he loved Bella, to be that angry at how she tried to save him. A real case of no good deed goes unpunished.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Cullen's
Esme ruined things between James and Bella nearly sixty years ago. It would be interesting to find out how that happened. Bella and Edward seem to have a desperate need of each other, yet neither really trusts the other completely. Alice getting in the middle of things was weird also. Makes me think this is a very disfunctional family, vampires or not.
Date: 21 Nov 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 6: Mind Over Matter
If Bella and Edward can work out a way to deal with all this angst, it could be perfect. He would get as much out of it as she would, and no end in sight. Sex and food, all the best things in one person! What could be better?
Date: 21 Nov 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations Part 2
I thought that scene smacked of Anne Rice. Edward and Bella are made for each other, as always, just way different than usual! Your version of them mating is breathtaking and very well done. This story is fascinating, to say the least!
Date: 21 Nov 2011 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 4: Revelations Part 1
Yes, both Edward and his dad know something is going on with the Cullens and that Edward is something"other". I await your answers !
Date: 21 Nov 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 3: Phenomenon
Eeny, meeny, miney, moe! The choices are actually not many, at least in the supernatural vein. Superhero sure doesn't come to mind, but I'm not sure what to guess. If he was a wolf, he would smell bad to her. He's obviously indestructible, his heart beats and pumps blood. I throw up my hands in surrender, what is he?
Date: 21 Nov 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 2: Open Book
What is it about this guy? He has no fear of Bella or her siblings, yet is frightened of Jessica, or Skankley, as Bella prefers. Something is going on here and I can't quite figure what it is! Bella is stubborn and determined to win this go around and have what she wants!
Date: 21 Nov 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: First Sight
Bella has two things going on here, her mouth and her attitude. Both of which are pretty bad! It's kind of neat that Bella is the vampire and Edward is the unsuspecting human. Can't wait to see how these two interact!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! It amazes me that people are still finding my crazy ass fic, reading it, and liking it. So thanks again :)) I hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 16: Time Passes
Ohh I'm Soo sad to see this end. :( I'm glad he's back tho. Even if he is a vampire who drinks human blood at least he's alive. Thanks again.
Author's Response:
My thoughts exactly :) Thank you again for all your support! I am sad to see this end too but it is time...there will be an outtake so at least there is that to look forward to :)) THANK YOU XOXO
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 16: Time Passes
all I have to say is...WOW!
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you Raven! For EVERY review and all your love and support of this story. It really has meant so much. Thank you :)
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 16: Time Passes
You scared me for a moment - I though you might have decided to have Edward die or permanently serve Aro.
Really a good and original story. There are so few these days. Loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words and NO I could never kill Edward...I am too TEAM Edward to ever do that! LOL!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 16: Time Passes
Thought I would come say hi over here too, since this is where I started reading this! Thanks again for a great fic! Loved it all! *hugs*
Author's Response:
*sniffles* THANK YOU sooooooo much :)
Date: 17 Apr 2011 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 16: Time Passes
F-I-N-A-L-L-Y!! You know, I half want to strangle you, half want to pat you on the back!! So, because I'm in two minds, you get two grades for this one. B+ for the Ch., D- for making us wait SOOOOO LONG!! :-(
Author's Response:
Thank you, thank you...I have decided that any and all future fics I write will be completed prior to posting. I felt and do feel horrible when I cant get them to you guys as quickly as I'd like...why does real life always have to interfere!?!? LOL
Date: 17 Apr 2011 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 16: Time Passes
:)
Author's Response:
THANK YOU :))))))
Date: 17 Apr 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 16: Time Passes
I'm on pins and needles to see what happened with Eward. But I'm so glad he found her again and got away. Great job, sweetie!
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Thank you Balti for hanging in there and also thank you for your consistent support. You have been amazing ;)
Date: 17 Apr 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 16: Time Passes
I CAN'T FUCKING BELIEVE IT!! I was sooo going to get you killed after what happened in last chapter but I guess waiting did get me something good!!
I loved it! So much!
Thank you!
xoxo
marianne
Author's Response:
LOL, your review made me laugh and cringe. I wasnt sure if I should be happy or scared. But I LOVE it so thank you. I am so happy that you got the HEA you wanted. I know it was a crazy way to get it, but we got it nonetheless. THANK YOU for all your reviews and kindness. I will always appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 16: Time Passes
well, I am glad that he is back. I guess I need to read the out take to fully understand. hehe Congratulations on finishing. :)
Author's Response:
I know there was a lot of cryptic behavior going on there, but all will be answered and questions put to rest. I felt like it was good to end Bella's POV on this note and the next will fill in those missing pieces. I do hope you enjoy that one. Thank you again for your support!!! :)
Date: 06 Mar 2011 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Truth
Wow. That was a definite twist! Very unexpected that Aro would be in cahoots with Asrael and actively looking for Edward. Eek. Now what's in store for these two?
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
So glad you liked that spin on this crazy story. Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing. The last and final chapter will be up in the next few weeks. Thanks for sticking around :)) it means so much!!!
Date: 27 Feb 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Truth
:)
Author's Response:
:)) thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Truth
Dam! That was sad. :(
Author's Response:
It was :( But not to worry...its not over yet ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 18 Feb 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Truth
WHAT? well this isn't looking like a HEA at all. :( that was sad. very heartbreaking. I don't know if I want to read the last chapter (next chapter) or not. I hope you make it up to us. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
I will tell you now that I am a firm believer in HEA...but it may be a little weird getting there :) thank you for reading and reviewing! I promise you will be happy with the end :))
Date: 17 Feb 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Truth
That was AMAZING
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for sticking around and reading, Lisa. So glad you liked it :))
Date: 24 Oct 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 14:The End
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you ;)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 14:The End
AAAGGHH!! DAMN YOU BELLA!!
E/k
Author's Response:
I feel your frustration!!! thanks for reading ;)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 14:The End
Serously? I did expect it but read it? It's much more final and it hurts a bit... Oh I'm dying to see what Carlisle knows!!!
Love it as always!
xx
Marianne
Author's Response:
Thanks Marianne for the review...this chapter has gotten mixed reviews, lol. It was necessary for the story, plus there was no way I could leave it out. I hope I did it some justice...I think so far it was the hardest chapter to write. I officially hate Bella, just saying ;) Thanks again ;)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 14:The End
I love this story, but I feel like their "breaking up" was forced. She really didn't even need to come to that conclusion. But, hey, it's your story and I just read it!
Author's Response:
Sorry about the "break up" but this was something that had to occur eventually. My goal from the beginning was to cover all major events throughout the saga...just twist them around. Bella is delusional and blind...just like Edward was in canon. As always I cant thank you enough for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it :)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 14:The End
of course it had to happen, New Moon right? lol I'm so happy you updated. I love where this is going and to get to the good stuff we have to get past the heart ache. :( keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
You are absolutely right! And thank you so much for your support. This was a tough chapter to write but was essential in where the story needs to go. Thanks for not wanting to kill me, lol. Thanks again and see you soon ;)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 14:The End
Oh, so happy to see an update on this! YAY!!
Man, Bella is just way to masochistic. Stupid ass.
We knew it was going to happen, but that doesn't make it better. She's a fool.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Thanks for understanding that this had to occur. And as always thank you for reviewing!!! Bella is definitely an ass...I'm thinking Edward shouldnt be so willing to take her back;)
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 14:The End
I hate that Bella is being such a dumb ass! hehehe Fix it soon please. :)
Author's Response:
You and me both!!! I will fix it, I promise. But I think Edward needs to play a little hard to get this time around...what do you think??? ;)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 14:The End
Sheesh so little faith in him. he killed James on his own. He was not a weak vampire.
though I am a total B/E I would love to see him tell her no - you can;t have another chance you hurt me too much just to see her reaction. Of course he would take her back.
Author's Response:
Lisa, thank you for your review...I will tell you that Bella will not get off as easily as Edward does in canon...dont get me wrong, there will be an HEA but its not going to be easy getting there. Thanks again!!!
Date: 14 Oct 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 4: Revelations Part 1
hot effin' banner for chapter 4!!!! very intriguing story as well.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! Glad you like the visual aides as well :))
Date: 14 Oct 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 13: Checkmate
:)
Author's Response:
Thank You :))
Date: 26 Sep 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 13: Checkmate
that's right, just like him but BETTER!! I am in love with this story. it is fantastic and I just got caught up. I can't wait till you update again. I got a little weepy when he said Baby you have to get up. that was heartbreaking. keep up the amazing work. the whole biting and sucking from each other thing is hotter than hell. :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your awesome review!!! It really means so much to me that people are enjoying this story. I still get nervous and ask myself what the hell am I doing every time I post! lol. Also, I too love Edward's mooshy side, which we dont see often...maybe next chapter we will see more??? As always thanks for your support, its reviews like yours that make me want to write ;)
Date: 22 Sep 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 13: Checkmate
So worth the wait! Edward was amazing... Where is the bitch?
xox
Marianne
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for sticking around :) This was a tough chapter to write, but I am very happy with the way it turned out. So glad you liked it as well. Esme and her devious ways are just beginning, she will def be making another appearance, and soon. Thanks again for your support ;)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 13: Checkmate
Yay. You're back!
Great chapter, glad it all worked out, though I imagine that there's still business to take care of (*cough Esme cough*. Can't wait to see Edward take care of that bitch. Also to see him rip Bella a new one for not trusting him.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
There is definitely business that still needs to be taken care of, lol. But Esme is not yet done wreaking havoc. Her little trip is about to bring uneeded attention to one of our lovable characters ;) So glad that you liked the chapter and thank you so much for your support!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 13: Checkmate
Wow he is very vampiric. Bella lacked faith in him.
Author's Response:
Yes, Edward is not as innocent as he may appear. And Bella's lack of faith will cause future trouble for our love birds :( Thank you for reading and reviewing! I appreciate your support :))
Date: 21 Sep 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 13: Checkmate
Freaking LOVE that Esme is the bad guy... seriously... I think it adds a great dimension to the story, as well as Carlisle basically being a pussy and being so naive. He's usually so thoughtful and wise... not so much in this story. LOVE it.
Author's Response:
I am so happy that you are liking the twist on the characters. I didnt want the story to be like most other fanfics, so everyone is bascially someone else, lol. Thanks for taking the time to read and review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 13: Checkmate
OUCH!! Personally, I wouldn't like to have to feed a sick vampire, dhampir or not.... Too much risk of them drinking too much.... :-( Are you going to make us wait A-G-E-S for the next update AGAIN?! :-(
Author's Response:
I know, I know!!! I was an epic FAIL with updating! I apologize :(( I am trying to get my writing mojo back, I lost it for a while. I wont make any promises but I intend to update within a week or two. As always thank you for your support of my crazy ass story. It means alot!
Date: 02 Aug 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: First Sight
Umm..HI Lilith617! I just wanted to comment on the "review" by the previous reader. I took a glimpse at the supposed story she claims you have a similar plot-line. The only similiarity you both have is that both of your Bella's are vampires. Her Bella is a curse spewing bad ass, hers isnt. Your Edward is also a halfling, half vampire, half human- hers isnt. Perhaps she should read your story BEFORE making such grave accusations. BTW, LOVED your new chappie. It was intense! Keep it coming you cliffie-whore!
Author's Response:
Thank you...unfortunately I cannot delete her childish review...but I am certain that I made myself clear. I can report her if she continues...but I doubt she will....Btw...I want my stalkward missy ;)
Date: 02 Aug 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 1: First Sight
Umm excuse me but this is pretty much the same plot I wrote a year ago on my fanfiction profile.
Author's Response:
Ummm no offense but I came up with this on my own. I am merely twisting the original. I am sure there are many fics out there that have similiar plot lines...we are all working off the same saga. But this I assure you is ALL me.
Date: 01 Aug 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 12: Uninvited
Awesome chapter. I love Edward's ability to play it cool and play human.
Author's Response:
Edward had a plan...but so did James, lol. Yeah, Edward has alot up his sleeves that we have yet to see. I am certain, however, that we will get a nice glimpse of just how vampiric he can be next chapter...hee hee hee... Thanks for the review and your support of MD =)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 3: Phenomenon
I am loving the pictures to go with the story in your author notes lol. loving the story too what is that gorgeous man??
Author's Response:
Thanks dizzy for taking the time to read and review. I am glad you are enjoying the pics, I will tell you that the next few chapters should give you the answer you are looking for. Hope you like it =)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 12: Uninvited
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 12: Uninvited
I loved it!! You know how I like a good fight so I can't wait!!!
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Marianne, I promise you will get alot more fight next chapter. This needed to take place to prep us for next chapter. As always thank you for your review and for your support =)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 12: Uninvited
What?! I wanted Edward to completly fuck him up! Well I still can't wait! Update soon
Author's Response:
I promise you will get what you want next chapter :) Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 01 Aug 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 12: Uninvited
Well Hello! Welcome back, it's been a while. Great chapter, but I can't understand why no one else attacked James. Especially once he let go of Edward. You made it seem that the other two were not interested in fighting, so 7 on 1 should have been easy. Oh well. Can't wait to see where you're taking this.
Cheers,
Balti K
Author's Response:
ThanK you so much for your review, I believe you are my 100th :)) My beta asked the same question you asked, lol. My answer is that unless Bella gave the word, her family would not attack. She is too concerned that Edward would still be the victim and she cant risk that. She is not aware of his strength, or that he would have attacked if not for the broken leg thing. Bella also did not fight back because she still harbors guilt for James' transformation, she feels she deserves punishment, even with the knowledge that Esme actually changed him, Bella will not let it go. The Cullens could have definitely taken on James and his coven, but we needed it to happen this way so that other events can still take place. Dont worry James is going to get his...just like canon. That is one thing I will not change, lol. Thanks again and I hoped I answered your question.
Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 12: Uninvited
Can they decapitate Esme too? That would be awesome.
Author's Response:
I promise esme will get hers in due time :)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 12: Uninvited
OH MY GOD! You COMPLETELY surprised me with the Esme being the one that changed James thing, and the Esme having sex with him thing too! (that was what you were implying, right?) Just .... wow. Carlisle finally realizing his "mate" is a cheating whore. Loved it! Not too much of Laurant or Victoria but just enough of a taste that I really want to see how they will play out. The little nuggret from Victoria's mind about having a home makes me wonder if she will want to abandon James and his nomadic lifestyle and stay with the Cullen's. Who knows, she could be Carlisle's actual mate if given the chance to meet when not preparing for a fight. That would be a fun twist! Kinda mean tho, since there would still be the slight lingering scent of Esme there as a reminder of the chain of events. Sorry, I'm rambling.... I want to comment on the song choice for this chapter too. I love Trent Reznor and NIN but had never heard this song. I went out and found it and really listened to it. The words are perfect for this chapter (great choice to set the tone) and the song itself, with their typical raw sound, and the lyrics? A truly exceptional choice. I liked it so much I downloaded it too!
Edward is going to be so pissed off once they gert him back to the house. This will not be pretty. I really wonder now at what you will have James do to Bella? Will he be able to overpower her and take her against her will? This brings up a basic mythology question for your vamps. Do they get strongrer over time, or does diet factor in more? Bella is much older than James, so if time means strength they she should be able to take him easily, but if diet factors then I'm not sure what that would mean. Yes, Bella is a veggie, but of late she has been feediing off of Edward, so there is that half human, venom enhanced, super blood to be considered. This could be a wild card you can really play with. Also, since Bella and Edward have embraced their fate as mates and marked each other as such, can that link be used to help the family locate Bella, rather than relying on Alice?
As you can see I am full of questions. I really got a lot out of this chapter, even without the big action sequence. It really was not needed here, as you have suspence building towards it. Really good stuff.
Author's Response:
You spoil me with your AWESOME reviews and support of this story. I think I already answered the majority of your questions, lol, if not let me know. NIN!!! OMG I was first introduced to Trent Reznor and his beauty when I was 14...that was in 1994, lmao. I have been a fan ever since. I've always been a huge fan of the angst, lol. I was goth throughout high school, lol, you'd laugh if you saw some pics. So glad you liked this song and downloaded it too. Its a good one ;)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 11: Family
Kill Him! Kill Him! I can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response:
I couldnt agree with you more =) I am currently working on the next chapter and it should be up within the week. RL had to take precedence this past month but my updates should be getting back to normal. Thanks for the support!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 11: Family
I really wished you could update sooner. Damn this is a great story..
Can't wait for more.. My heart is pounding
ek
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I am beyond happy that you are enjoying my little story. I have every intention of updating by next week. As long as RL plays along we should be back on my once weekly schedule. Thanks again and hope to hear from you again soon =)
Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 11: Family
Happy Birthday!!! I can't wait to see them meet. I bet Edward can kick James ass, and i hope he does!
Author's Response:
Thanks fanette for the review and the bday wishes. I am completely Team Edward so there is no way that I can allow his beloved character to get killed. He may get hurt, but hes not going to die, lol. James deserves whats coming to him. Thanks for supporting MD =)
Date: 15 Jun 2010 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 11: Family
How do you change the color of their eyes like that? It's so cool. Can't wait for your next update! I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you Haley for your reviews. I am so happy that you are enjoying my story =) I use a program called Paint.net to alter and create the banners for each chapter. Its like photoshop but the only difference is that it is FREE, lol, and you can download it off google. Thanks again for the support =)
Date: 15 Jun 2010 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Cullen's
i think the fuckers cheated on Carlisle and Bella with each other.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 11: Family
Please keep goin with this story. I really like it!!!! My question 2 u is: Is Edward a sort of vampire or a incubus that likes venom? I'm a little lost. I've read tha story 4rm tha beginning but I'm a little confused. Help me understand.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review and I have absolutely no problem clearing up our dear old Edward. He is a halfling, or a half-blood. Basically he is just like Renesmee. He is half vampire, half human. He can eat human food, if he chooses, BUT he prefers blood. He like Bella's venom, especially after Bella has drank from him. He gets to drink from her and taste blood at the same time. When they drink from eachother it is meant to be extremely intimate. I took the idea from Anne Rice's fictional characters, always liking the intensity of that type of bond. So, its not that he can live off the venom, its just a sensual bond between them. Though he does get a little high from her venom, as does she with his blood.
Edward is an incubus in the fact that he is male. Though he may not be 100% vampire, that part of him i still very much dominant. We see that with his possessiveness of Bella. As an incubus he can compel others to do as he pleases, and this is how he has basically survived throughout the years. Bella cannot hear is thoughts because he can sheild them, unknowingly, from her. He basically has the same power that canon Bella had. I hope this helps and if you have anymore questions dont hesitate to ask. Thanks again =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 11: Family
awesome chapter and Happy Birthday!
Author's Response:
Thanks Raven for taking the time to review. Also, thanks for the bday wishes. So glad you're still enjoying my story =)
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 11: Family
Loved it sooo much!!
I want them to fight!!
I am out for blood actually!
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Thanks Marianne for your review. You and I seem to be thinking the same, lol. I have a feeling things are going to get a little nasty next chapter...well the next few maybe because something tells me that Esme has some shit up her sleeve too! As always, thank you for your support of this story, it means alot to me =)
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 11: Family
so we have two Edwards, sounds great, it could be crazy if Azreal ended up attracted to Bella as well as Edward. Bring the drama. I wanna see Edward tear James apart, this should be fun, so much going on in this chapter. Happy big 3-0 , mine will be here in September, I am not sure if I am ready to let loose on the twenties, lol! Great story and look forward to the next chapter and as always I love the pics you post, just makes the end that much sweeter
Author's Response:
Thanks desintx for the review. AND oh my did you bring up an interesting concept...hmmm...Azrael and Bella...ooooh, you got my wheels turning, lol. I dont outline my stories...ever, lol, I have an idea of what I want to do and stuff but alot of the ideas for the chapters come to me in the form of theories and questions from my reviewers...I think you have brought up a possible twist for the future, so thank you. Lets see what we can do with that now shall we...because of course there will be a confrontation with Azrael...and yeah there was alot going on in this chapter. It was a filler, but a much needed one. Thanks again for taking the time to read and review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 11: Family
wow what a cliffy
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I kind-of have a thing for cliffies...can you tell, lol.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 11: Family
Laurent is intrigued by 3 available females and goes with tanya.
when victoria realizes bella and james's history she decides to high tail with him. Vickie also realizes edward is bella's mate and that they would have easily 8-12 vampires to fight she persuades james to back down.
Bella also demonstrates that edward's blood is hers as is edward himself.
Vickie realizes she does not want to lose her mate or risk the volturi's wrath.
No blows are exchanged
Author's Response:
I absolutely love your theories. And you may be going somewhere with some of them. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and taking the time to read my crazy story.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 11: Family
Awe crap, I hope the others arive soon! They are too evenly matched! I don't have a great feeling about this...but if it follows Twilight's plot to a point, I think they will make it out ok, especially with Edward's gifts, and Jasper's if he can get there in time! Also...I'm a bit worried about Esme and the Volturi! Can't wait for more!
Sarah
Author's Response:
Thanks Sara for the review. I too am more concerned about Esme...can we say forshadowing??? I also think Edward is going to surprise us with his vampiric skills ;)
Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 11: Family
Happy Birthday!! ;-D Good new Ch. But you're saying Edward has actually killed full vampires?! W.T.F?! A-.
Author's Response:
LMAO! Yes, maybe thats what I am saying, lol...and THANK YOU as always for the review. You're one of my toughest critics. That little leak of info will eventually be revealed...not to worry. Remember, though Edward is half human he still has vampiric strength. The Cullens, especially Bella, have yet to really see all his abilities at work. Thanks again for your continued support.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 10: Confession Part 2
Well shit I did not expect that. Too cool. Can't wait for more. And more e&b claiming ea h other.
It will rock when Edward rips James head off please let thAt eventually happen. Meg
Author's Response:
Thanks Meg for your review! And I promise, James is def gonna get his. We should be seeing him next chapter. Lot'O'drama to come, lol. Glad you are still on board!!! Thanks again =)
Author's Response:
Thanks Meg for your review! And I promise, James is def gonna get his. We should be seeing him next chapter. Lot'O'drama to come, lol. Glad you are still on board!!! Thanks again =)
Date: 27 May 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 10: Confession Part 2
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 10: Confession Part 2
uh oh
Author's Response:
LMAO! You can say that again ;) Thanks for the review =)
Date: 27 May 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 10: Confession Part 2
I love it!! The twists are amazing!!
xoxo
M
Author's Response:
So glad you are enjoying!!! Thank you for reading and reviewing =)
Date: 27 May 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 10: Confession Part 2
Great chapter- glad to see Bella is taking her head out of her ass. You definitely have me anticipating what Tanya has to say... she will definitely tell Edward things that he probably wasn't aware of. Consider me intrigued.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked this chapter. And yes, Tanya's arrival will bring with it some unwanted truths, but truths none the less. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 27 May 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 10: Confession Part 2
The chapter was delicious! I love sweet emo Edward! Finally putting himself out there when she needed it most, opening up and admitting the depth of his feelings and needs for Bella. It was beautiful. And the dividends it paid off for him in the hot sexytimes was well worth I would think! I love that Tanya has now been thrown into the mix! I'm so excited to see how she will factor in to torturing Esme for being a bitch to her girl, and what kind of payback that might entail. The fact that she can guess at Edward's father sees the physical resemblance is astounding. And he is the same one that turned Tanya? That will be a super fun reveal! Is he someone she sees frequently? How does she know of him? Is he just powerful and elusive or powerful and a douche? I can't wait to see how this plays out. You have masterfully laid a trap here with this juicy cliffhanger. I want to know more! You said the change was small, but 2 words just made a HUGE impact on that last sentance. Damn girl.....
Author's Response:
Hee Hee Hee, thank you <3
Date: 27 May 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 10: Confession Part 2
Hmmmm, love the sexy banner!! Hmm, I guess Tanya can smell Azreal on Edward being his vampire progeny... I wonder... Will he become friend or foe?! A-.
Author's Response:
Lets just say Azrael could be a potential problem. Thanks for the review, as always. And glad you liked the banner. I felt it was fitting for the scene, lol. Thanks again =)
Date: 22 May 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 9: Confession Part 1
That is one of the best stories i've read ever. I love the way you mixed the original story. Bella as the vampire is great, But making Edward a halfling was brilliant! I love how she could fed from him and him from her, it's so animalistic and passionate. It makes the scenes more Dirrty and you know we all love a dirty Edward.
THANX FOR THAT!!
ek
Author's Response:
WOW! Thank you soooooo much for your wonderful reply. You have no idea just how much your words make me want to write more. It blows my mind how much support I am getting for this story. I never thought it would be so welcomed. Thank you so much!!!! Next chapter is under way, I will tell you this...expect some lemonade, lol.
Date: 17 May 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 9: Confession Part 1
OMG, I almost peed in my pants! Ownyourassward OWNS me. He is fuckhawt. This chapter is my favorite thus far. Wait...have I said that before? Perhaps because this fic just keeps getting better and better. It was a wonderful birthday gift. Thank you SO much. {I have been begging for a EPOV for a while people}. Sigh...it was lemony delicious. GREAT chapter.
Author's Response:
What Spicy wants...Spicy gets ;) Thanks, BB!
Date: 17 May 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 9: Confession Part 1
All I can say right now is wow. Edward's back story was not at all what I was expecting and it was fantastic! I love the legacy of passing his secret down thru the generations of his family. I love that the Chief is actually his nephew (a nod to Vampire Diaries perhaps?). The interaction with Jasper and Emmett was really fun that Emmett advised him to make Bella jelous with Skanley was awesome and totally Emmett. Edward's fury at how Esme caused all of these issues for Bella, both in the past and now, and how he's indignant thrilled me. I can't wait for the inevitable confrontation brewing there, it has the potential to be epic. And can I say how much I love that he's FINALLY manning up to tell her and show her he loves her? The conversation between Anthony and Edward about him being in love was sweet and funny. I'm glad to see the Chief has retained a bit of his natural snark. With this chapter you answered a lot of lingering questions (thank you!) and set the stage for the next story arch. Great job with that! Your pacing is still going along well, and it is clear that your plan for the story is well thought out. Very satisfying chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks A, your support has been tremendous! I am so glad you still want to be a part of this insane-ness, lol.
Date: 15 May 2010 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 9: Confession Part 1
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 14 May 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 9: Confession Part 1
Hmmm, I like the new Ch. But will Edward really be able to kill James?! Can a hybrid stand up to a full vampire in close combat? A-.
Author's Response:
Aaaahh...that is a very good question. Hmmm....Blade is a hybrid and he kicks ass, lol. I guess we will just have to wait and see. Thank you so much for your review =)