Date: 13 Feb 2022 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 30 This Might Actually Work
AWWW sweet end to part 1. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 12 Feb 2022 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 29 Can't Fight This Feeling
Glad she finally talked to him. Men are complicated for sure.
Date: 12 Feb 2022 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 28 Space and Opportunity
Well at least he told her in the end. Lol
Date: 12 Feb 2022 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 27 Right in Front of You
Alec is a real piece of work. Although she just needs to threaten to go to media about it. At least mommy and daddy would through money at her to go away.
LOL for jealous Edward
Date: 09 Jan 2022 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 30 This Might Actually Work
New reader to your story ☺I thoroughly enjoyed your story!!Well done. I can't wait to see how it all unfolds. What will happen with the rest of the characters. BRAVO!! UNTIL YOU POST AGAIN😍😍
Date: 18 Dec 2021 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 26 He Got Game
Ack for Demetri causing Edward to have palpitations. Ugh for Colton,but maybe it'll spur Edward to actually talk to B
Date: 18 Dec 2021 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 25 If Only You Knew
Glad they Are spending time with each other again. Ugh Victoria is such a nasty piece of work. Glad Bella stood up to her.
Date: 18 Dec 2021 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 24 Definitely Unexpected
Nice that he has his parents to talk to. Lol for"friends"
Date: 18 Dec 2021 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 23 Thinkin Bout You
Nice Renee talk. Nice that she has someone that way to talk to. Poor Aiden.
Date: 18 Dec 2021 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 22 The Past Is Present
Alec is a pushy and Victoria needs to get run over by a bus. What a bitch. While I don't condone cheating, I feel sorry for Garrett
Date: 17 Dec 2021 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 21 Pending
Two confused people....b&e need to talk. Is there a reason we are hearing from Lucas again?
Date: 05 Dec 2021 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 30 This Might Actually Work
FINALLY!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see where you take them.
Date: 04 Dec 2021 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 29 Can't Fight This Feeling
Finally, they talked!!!!!!
Date: 04 Dec 2021 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 28 Space and Opportunity
He finally told her. But he walked off AGAIN!!!!!!!! He needs to stop doing that. He needs to stop and listen to her.
Date: 03 Dec 2021 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 27 Right in Front of You
In a way I feel sorry for Chelsea but in a way she did sleep with a married man and bust up a marriage. But Alec is also a jerk too.
Date: 03 Dec 2021 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 26 He Got Game
Maybe Coltan will help Edward move up his plan.
Date: 02 Dec 2021 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 25 If Only You Knew
Love Bella standing up to Big V. That is hilarious.
Date: 02 Dec 2021 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 24 Definitely Unexpected
Well, at least they talked but they didn't get everything out in the open.
Date: 02 Dec 2021 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 23 Thinkin Bout You
I can't believe the kids have let it go that long without seeing each other except at school.
Date: 01 Dec 2021 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 22 The Past Is Present
Wow, I don't know how Garrett stays with Victoria. I know he cheated but she is a piece a work. She went way to far with Chelsea. Alec is still a jerk. He should have said something....anything.
Date: 01 Dec 2021 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 21 Pending
Loved Edward and Eggroll's talk. Lol. Poor Lucas. Emmett is too funny.
Date: 30 Nov 2021 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 30 This Might Actually Work
:) loved this story. Looking forward to the sequel
Date: 29 Nov 2021 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 30 This Might Actually Work
OMG, so loved it, finally they're on the same page and kissed, yeah! Em was a hoot with his cowboy talk.
Date: 29 Nov 2021 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 29 Can't Fight This Feeling
Thank goodness they communicated.
Date: 29 Nov 2021 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 28 Space and Opportunity
Idiot stop running from conversations.
Date: 29 Nov 2021 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 27 Right in Front of You
Edward is a fool all the missed opportunities for him to say something to Bella to get Colton's unwanted attention off her.
Date: 29 Nov 2021 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 26 He Got Game
LOL, Edward you so need to stop with the planning and just go for it.
Date: 29 Nov 2021 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 25 If Only You Knew
LOL, loved that she got to Victoria and stopped her lies.
Date: 29 Nov 2021 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 24 Definitely Unexpected
Oh Edward, you're such an idiot.
Date: 29 Nov 2021 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 23 Thinkin Bout You
Thank goodness Renee is the voice of some reason to Bella's over thinking and avoidance.
Date: 28 Nov 2021 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 22 The Past Is Present
I think someone needs to bring Victoria down, she is a witch.
Date: 28 Nov 2021 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 21 Pending
Loved it.
Date: 07 Nov 2021 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 20 A Turning Point
aww for thier firstish kiss. LOL for Carlisle catching them.
Chelsea really needs to reevaluate Alec's place in her life. She's just asking for more heartache. But she knew she was with a married man so I can't really have sympathy for her. Wondering if the dinner with his parents are introducing them to whomever he's cheating on her with. Cause if he did it to B, he'll do it to C.
Date: 07 Nov 2021 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 19 Just Friends Part 2
Poor E. Is going to second guess stuff now too. Wow I feel bad for thinking bad things about Lucas now.
Date: 07 Nov 2021 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 18 Just Friends?
Her friends need to be careful they don't make Bella mess up her friendship with all the pushing. Alex's mom is a real piece of work.
Date: 07 Nov 2021 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 18 Just Friends?
Her friends need to be careful they don't make Bella mess up her friendship with all the pushing. Alex's mom is a real piece of work.
Date: 07 Nov 2021 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 18 Just Friends?
Her friends need to be careful they don't make Bella mess up her friendship with all the pushing. Alex's mom is a real piece of work.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 20 A Turning Point
Loving all the different POVs. Can't wait to find out how Chelsea meeting the parents go.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 19 Just Friends Part 2
Thanks for giving us different POVs.
Date: 02 Nov 2021 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 18 Just Friends?
Loved all the flashbacks. I liked how you did this chapter. Boy, Victoria is a piece of work.
Date: 02 Nov 2021 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 20 A Turning Point
Loving it. Chelsa is just now going to figure out that Alec is stringing her along.
Date: 02 Nov 2021 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 16 Layers
Loving this story. So sad Aiden thinks his dad doesn't like him. Alec is a jerk.
Date: 02 Nov 2021 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 20 A Turning Point
:)
Date: 02 Nov 2021 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 19 Just Friends Part 2
:)
Date: 02 Nov 2021 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 18 Just Friends?
:)
Date: 02 Nov 2021 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 15 Acceptance
Loving this story. Still laughing about the dog's name.
Date: 02 Nov 2021 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 14 You Got A Friend In Me
LMAO over the dog and the dogs name.
Date: 01 Nov 2021 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 17 What You Asked I Would've Given
oooh I forgot about B meeting Lucas. Sounds like Lucas was kept in the dark as well so I can't blame him for now (until you reveal something else). Hope Renata will be ok
Author's Response:
LOL Don't feel bad, a lot of people forgot B met Lucas in the grocery store. It was brief but we wanted to see if some of the readers would catch it. Was he kept in the dark?? You'll find out soon... and about Renata too. BTW, chapters 18-20 was just posted... you may find out of the answers to your questions. Thank you for reading and reviewing our story, we appreciate it!
Date: 01 Nov 2021 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 16 Layers
Love that Aiden has an awesome set of grandparents. B & E both have some healing to do. Divorce sucks.
Author's Response:
Yep! With what he's been through at such a young age having awesome grandparents like that will definitely help to ease things a bit. Yes, divorce sucks...and not just for the adults. Kids have to find their way those that horrible maze as well. B & E do have some healing to do. Do you think they can help each other in the healing process?? Thank you for reading and reviewing our story, we appreciate your support!
Date: 01 Nov 2021 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 15 Acceptance
Yea I think Carmen needs to go. Women like her make it hard on other women because of how it makes many men/people to think about women. LOL for the dog. Nice to see Gianna's POV. She has some growing up to do as many do.
Author's Response:
I guess Carmen thought she was going to step right into Gianna's place....NOT!!! Yeah, we felt like our readers needed to get a peek inside of Gianna's head, get her POV, no matter how immature it was. Oh the dog... one of our favorites to write about. We appreciate your support with reading and reviewing our story.
Date: 01 Nov 2021 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 14 You Got A Friend In Me
Glad the kids are getting along. LOL for the dog. Wonder if Alec will really change or not. I hope so for Aiden's sake.
Date: 01 Nov 2021 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 13 Uncertainly, Certain
Glad the kids got to talk things out. Game was cool. Only characters on TWD I care about is Daryl and Mischonne. Rick and Carl can get eaten for all i care.
Wonder how long until Alec screws up his relationship with Aiden again.
Date: 29 Oct 2021 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 17 What You Asked I Would've Given
Great story can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
We're glad you're enjoying the story. Chapters 18-20 have just posted. Thank you for reading and reviewing our story!
Date: 09 Oct 2021 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 17 What You Asked I Would've Given
:) :)
Date: 09 Oct 2021 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 17 What You Asked I Would've Given
Poor Edward. I can definitely say Edward had he feet knocked out from beneath him.
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, I'm sure when he woke up that morning he was not expecting that one! Thank you for reading and reviewing our story, we appreciate it!
Date: 08 Oct 2021 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 16 Layers
I am glad that Aiden has Charlie to talk to. I am loving all the updates!!!!!
Author's Response:
Having a grandfather you can talk to, about anything is awesome. Especially with the changes in Aiden's life, he definitely needs someone like Charlie. We glad you're enjoying the updates, it makes us happy! BTW, chapters 18-20 have posted!
Date: 08 Oct 2021 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 15 Acceptance
Thanks for the insight on Gianna through her POV.
Author's Response:
You're welcome! We felt like our readers needed to get a glimpse inside of Gianna's head... get her side of the story. We appreciate your support by reading and reviewing our story!
Date: 08 Oct 2021 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 14 You Got A Friend In Me
Love the different POVs. Thanks for sharing everyone's pov. Loved the kids with the dog.
Date: 07 Oct 2021 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 13 Uncertainly, Certain
Thank you for sharing Chelsea's pov. Love Ren and Den's conversation. I see Aiden standing up for Ren at school now.
Date: 23 Sep 2021 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 12 Coincidence, I Think Not
Wow Alec is a moron. Chelsea is a twit. Glad the kids seem to be getting along now
Date: 23 Sep 2021 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 11 It's A Small World After All
Glad he didn't have to go with Pepto Pink. Dun dun dun for the end.
Date: 23 Sep 2021 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 11 It's A Small World After All
Glad he didn't have to go with Pepto Pink. Dun dun dun for the end.
Date: 23 Sep 2021 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 10 I Love You x 1000
Alec is such an arse. Aiden is such a sweetie. Sadly boy and girls have been having the cootie argument for decades.
Date: 23 Sep 2021 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 9 Foot Meet Mouth
The dining thing sounds kinda cool. Uh oh for the fight.
Date: 23 Sep 2021 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 8 What Do I Like?
Glad E has his parents to help out. Lists are good things.
Date: 23 Sep 2021 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 7 The Tree and The Apple
Poor aixen Alec is such a dick. But with a mother like V, ya kinda know why he is the way he is.
Date: 23 Sep 2021 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 7 The Tree and The Apple
Poor aixen Alec is such a dick. But with a mother like V, ya kinda know why he is the way he is.
Date: 22 Sep 2021 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 12 Coincidence, I Think Not
Alec is a complete self-centered jerk. Chelsea is a total idiot airhead.
Date: 22 Sep 2021 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 11 It's A Small World After All
LOL, loving it.
Date: 22 Sep 2021 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 10 I Love You x 1000
Thank goodness Bella has her mom to help her through these trying moments.
Date: 22 Sep 2021 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 9 Foot Meet Mouth
Loving it. I could live without Dark Dining, I want to see my food, lol.
Date: 22 Sep 2021 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 8 What Do I Like?
LOL, does Em even have something called Best Behavior?
Date: 22 Sep 2021 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 7 The Tree and The Apple
Loving it.
Date: 21 Sep 2021 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 6: Adjustments
LOL, the cooties conversation was the best.
Date: 21 Sep 2021 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 12 Coincidence, I Think Not
So glad that Aiden and Renata seem to be getting along now. So Demetri was the man who approached Edward at the hardware store. LOL.
Date: 21 Sep 2021 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 5 Girl Cooties
Demetri is a riot, and they both ignored him. Loving Rose and Alice. Alec is a jerk who only thinks of himself, him and his mother need to get theirs and hurt.
Date: 21 Sep 2021 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Walls Could Talk
Oh god, Em is the most unhelpful person when someone is hurting, he tries so hard, but doesn't realize his humor is not appreciated.
Date: 21 Sep 2021 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 11 It's A Small World After All
Oh my. I hope Adian and Renata get along at Alice's. Who is Mr. Menard?
Date: 21 Sep 2021 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 3 Happily Ever After My Ass
Poor Edward, lmao over Esme and him being naked.
Date: 21 Sep 2021 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 2: The View
Glad she's free of the cheating asshole.
Date: 21 Sep 2021 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Hardwood Floors
Loving this already, so glad I saw it posted on FB.
Date: 21 Sep 2021 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 10 I Love You x 1000
Glad Bella has family to help her. I can not believe that Alec hasn't seen or spoken to his son in 4 weeks. That is awful.
Date: 21 Sep 2021 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 9 Foot Meet Mouth
I can not believe that Chelsea approached Bella. Boy,Edward sure put his foot in his mouth. I was hoping they would get along better and maybe have the kids spend some more time together.
Date: 15 Sep 2021 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 8 What Do I Like?
Ok. You got Edward, Emmett, Jasper and Jacob. Then you have Bella, Alice and Rose. Whi do you have for Jacob?????? Love Carlisle and Esme being all lovey dovey.
Author's Response:
Jacob is with someone totally different than the norm. You may like her, we do. LOL We love this Carlisle because he's an older version of Emmett. Thank you for reading and reviewing our story, we appreciate your support!
We just posted chapters 9-12. See you next update!
Date: 14 Sep 2021 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 7 The Tree and The Apple
So Alec takes after his mother. Boy, she is a piece of work. Glad Bella stands up to her.
Author's Response:
Oh yes, the apple doesn't fall too far from the tree. Big V as she is affectionaly known as, is a serious trip, however, Bella can handle her. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing our story, we appreciate your support.
We just posted chapters 9-12. See you next update!
Date: 04 Sep 2021 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 6: Adjustments
Bless Renata heart. Divorce is hard on little ones.
Author's Response:
That's the thing... when we adults are doing whatever makes us happy, and we have kids... we forget about how they will respond to such abrupt changes. Some adults don't like change, much less a child, who doesn't understand everything that caused that change.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing our story, we appreciate your support.
We just posted chapters 9-12. See you next update!
Date: 03 Sep 2021 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 5 Girl Cooties
Aiden's is sooo cute. I am assuming that the little girl he is talking about is Edward's little girl.
Author's Response:
Aiden is too cute, and he's ours. LOL We love his bubbly personality. Ain't gonna tell you who the little girl is yet... keep reading ;) LOL
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing our story, we appreciate your support.
We just posted chapters 9-12. See you next update!
Date: 03 Sep 2021 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Walls Could Talk
Emmett is just being a brother in this chapter. Lol.
Author's Response:
Oh Emmett is a serious hoot. He is indeed being the usual "big brother." He has to give Edward a hard time every chance he gets. LOL
Thank you for reading and reviewing our story, we appreciate your support.
We just posted chapters 9-12. See you next update!
Date: 03 Sep 2021 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 3 Happily Ever After My Ass
Poor Edward. Sounds like Ginna didn't want to work it out.
Author's Response:
Poor Edward had one thing in mind and so did she. Smh
Thank you for reading and reviewing our story, we appreciate your support.
We just posted chapters 9-12. See you next update!
Date: 03 Sep 2021 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: The View
Alec is a piece of work. I'm glad Bella left him.
Date: 03 Sep 2021 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Hardwood Floors
Ok, I have read this before. Are you also posting on fanfiction? He is a jerk.
Author's Response:
Yes, this is on FFN, too. So you may have read it over there. We're just putting the story up on this site. And yes, Alec is a jerk among other things. LOL
Thank you for reading and reviewing, we appreicate your support!
Date: 02 Sep 2021 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 6: Adjustments
Divorce sucks for kids. Glad my ex and I were adults about it all.
Author's Response:
Divorce is hard on kids and one of the sad things about it is sometimes they get caught in the middle when the adults aren't adulting. How mature do you think Alec will be?
Thank you for reading and reviewing, we appreciate your support.
We just posted chapters 9-12. See you next update!