[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2021 4:26 PM Title: Chapter Two
Well done! Looking forward to future chapters!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2021 4:26 PM Title: Chapter Two
Well done! Looking forward to future chapters!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2021 3:42 PM Title: Chapter One
Oh I'm really enjoying this story. Great first chapter! Thank you.
Date: 09 Nov 2021 8:10 AM Title: Chapter Two
that dude needs to die
Date: 09 Nov 2021 3:15 AM Title: Chapter Two
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 09 Nov 2021 1:19 AM Title: Chapter Two
Can't wait to read more.
Date: 08 Nov 2021 11:30 PM Title: Chapter Two
Very interesting!!!!! I would love to read more. I love how this is coming so far, keep it up
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2021 4:54 PM Title: Chapter Two
Thank you for the update..well done..I can' wait to see what happens next. until you post again
Date: 08 Nov 2021 9:52 AM Title: Chapter Two
Well, hell! Demetri not only cost Bella her father but her boomin' business, as well! Still, she outsmarted the bastard and got away *phew!*
Date: 08 Nov 2021 8:16 AM Title: Chapter Two
Everyon thinks it's either Alice or Rose, which most likely would be, but Im gonna throw in Emmett. Demetri's a dick, but he won't give up so easily.
Date: 08 Nov 2021 4:53 AM Title: Chapter Two
Omg demetri fell for that I really love this smart Bella I hope she call Rosalie I hope that her friend
Date: 08 Nov 2021 12:50 AM Title: Chapter Two
Betcha her friend was Alice??? But some of the guys and gals here think it's Rose???
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ’❤️”’‘
Date: 08 Nov 2021 12:25 AM Title: Chapter Two
i need more please please please :D
Date: 07 Nov 2021 9:48 PM Title: Chapter Two
This story is amazing! I can't wait for Edward to see her again.
Date: 07 Nov 2021 8:17 PM Title: Chapter Two
Oooh! Amazing so far!
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2021 7:58 PM Title: Chapter One
Can't wait to see what is next!! Great start!
Date: 07 Nov 2021 6:57 PM Title: Chapter Two
I wonder who she called?
I can't wait for more. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2021 6:13 PM Title: Chapter Two
Oh man. I am so ready for more!!
Date: 07 Nov 2021 5:53 PM Title: Chapter Two
Glad you did Bellas side of the story - I want more please now xxx
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2021 4:56 PM Title: Chapter Two
Great update. Interesting seeing things from her side. Also...loved the ploy she used on Demetri. Thank god Carmen called.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2021 2:57 AM Title: Chapter One
OMG! Where have you been my whole life? Exceptional start. I'm excited to get into the meat of the story.
Date: 06 Nov 2021 11:05 PM Title: Chapter One
Oh yes, I follow you on this wagon, nice start.
Date: 05 Nov 2021 11:31 PM Title: Chapter One
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 05 Nov 2021 11:31 PM Title: Chapter One
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 05 Nov 2021 2:48 AM Title: Chapter One
ooh, I like, please keep going. I wonder when "Viper" is going to find "Isa" again?????
Date: 04 Nov 2021 6:27 PM Title: Chapter One
That seems to be an interesting story and I look forward to reading about Edward's reaction when he sees Isa again!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2021 3:34 PM Title: Chapter One
Love the start of this story! I'm excited to see them come together again, can't wait! And really excited to see where you take all our favorite characters. I think this one is going to be one of my favorites of yours!!! Take care and stay safe and healthy! Ciao
Date: 04 Nov 2021 3:10 PM Title: Chapter One
Well is a where are you
Date: 04 Nov 2021 1:42 PM Title: Chapter One
I want more!! I have always enjoyed reading your stories and was wondering if you had a schedule on your updates for this story.
Date: 04 Nov 2021 7:32 AM Title: Chapter One
Wow, what a great first chapter, can't wait to see where you leads us with this story - hooked already xxx
Date: 04 Nov 2021 5:26 AM Title: Chapter One
So good. Wonder if B is gonna come in as a friend of reds or as a temp or maybe a customer. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 04 Nov 2021 4:57 AM Title: Chapter One
Aww love it but my favorite is rose right now awesome
Date: 04 Nov 2021 3:25 AM Title: Chapter One
Loved it!
Date: 04 Nov 2021 3:00 AM Title: Chapter One
Interesting
thank you
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2021 2:34 AM Title: Chapter One
Looking forward to more
Date: 04 Nov 2021 2:19 AM Title: Chapter One
Fabulous introduction to this gnarly cast of characters, Clo darlin'! I'm already in love with them all, especially Viper, of course LOL!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2021 2:19 AM Title: Chapter One
Great start.
Is Caius a loose end?
Who is Doc,other than Rose's brother?
How large is this MC club?
Date: 04 Nov 2021 1:01 AM Title: Chapter One
love it and cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2021 11:52 PM Title: Chapter One
Damn! Tell Kevlar I'll take care of him since Red won't give him the time. Great start though, can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2021 10:23 PM Title: Chapter One
Great first chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2021 10:15 PM Title: Chapter One
Aw, hell. This is going to be good. And hot. And good. I'm in.
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2021 10:04 PM Title: Chapter One
Definitely can't wait to see where this one goes
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2021 10:04 PM Title: Chapter One
Definitely can't wait to see where this one goes