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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2022 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 19

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 18

Yes Emmett is one you have to take in measures.   Sometime he's too much.  Well at least Aro has his proof.  Wonder how long til they show up again. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 17

L for Edward needing to figure himself out.    Poor B.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 16

I kinda wanna see B's talk with R.  Lol for throwing him through a door. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love her beating Em.  Glad Rose is going to talk things out with B.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 14

Glad he was ae to stop her in time.  Interesting twist to her change.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 13

Well she got her final human moment and Edward got the greatest gift. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 12

Edward has soooo much to learn.  Her and Rose against E.  That will bring funny.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 11

Glad Jake gave her a proper goodbye. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 10

Glad she got to say goodbye to Jake. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 9

Edward really needs to listen to others instead his own stupid brain

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 8

Glad Alice and Co. Got there in time.  Caius is such a prick.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 7

Ugh. Of course Demetri came back. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

Glad she is not just rolling over for him.   Gotta love Alice. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh no. Poor Charlie.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 4

Uh oh the v are involved now. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 3

Glad Bella told him off 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2022 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 2

Hopeshe is a little smarter this time. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2022 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 18

Thanks for writing and sharing.  :)

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2022 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 18

Thank you for this chapter.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2022 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2022 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

Lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2022 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 17 Mar 2022 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 16

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Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2022 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 16

Awesome chapter!  Thank you.  

 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2022 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

Thank you for the update..

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2022 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 15

Poor Edward is just so miserable.    He just doesn't know how to be grateful much less happy.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2022 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2022 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thank you for the update..until you post

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2022 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2022 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 14

Bella see.s to ve doing ok for a new vamp.  ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2022 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 13

I think Emo Edward did pretty well changing Bella.   He didn't drink too much and he stopped himself with plenty of time being careful with Bella the whole time.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2022 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

7 min... well how about 3 days.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2022 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 17 Feb 2022 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2022 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

tHANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE..WELL DONE..UNTIL YOU POST AGAIN

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2022 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 11

I'm relieved Jacob made up for being an ass, that vampy Bella won't have virgin sex pain, and that their happy ever after might start soon.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2022 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2022 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Bella....   Having to deal with such moronic males....   ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2022 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2022 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2022 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 8

At least Marcus pressed Edward and the Cullens to set a date for changing Bella.    Edward and maybe Bella will be wary or unexcited about doing it, but the other Cullens should enforce it...  Hopefully....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2022 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well she is going to change! Now Edward act with love so she thinks she might have a future

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2022 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well she is going to change! Now Edward act with love so she thinks she might have a future

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2022 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2022 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

Demetri must have been watching the house to be able to come for Bella at just the right moment like that.    Hmmm ...     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2022 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

Jacob has always been an ass. Bella doesn't want him he needs to get on with his life and leave her alone.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2022 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2022 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 6

Neither Edward or Bella can see or understand the other's POV.    It's so sad.     (Edward is wrong though.   LOL)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2022 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2021 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 5

Is Edward going to dash off again?    Dam!    He really would be a rat bastard then.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2021 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2021 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 4

So Bella saves Edward and then a stranger in a car saves them both.   That is some good luck.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2021 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 4

:) Happy Holidays to you 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2021 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

This chapter brought out so many feelings and questions about what Bella has been through.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2021 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2021 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hopefully Bella is old enough and mature enough to demand open honest communication and give it in return now with Edward.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2021 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 2

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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2021 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well at least him having red eyes is him doing good in the world of the scum who get away with too much

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2021 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2021 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Poor dumb Edward is so self loathing....    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: farsidelady Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2021 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds intriguing 

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