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Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2022 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 19 Example

Great update. Good thoughts to you and your family.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2022 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 19 Example

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2022 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 19 Example

Glad Bella is taking her learning seriously. She made a great point about the wives needing self defense lessons. 

Reviewer: zanath Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2022 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 19 Example

I will wait patently for updates. Hoping your crisis ends soon in a good way.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2022 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 18 Karma

Renee was awful and the drugs made her worse I guess.   I wonder who the dumb ass, soon to be dead vampire is.    Hmmm....     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2022 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 18 Karma

Renee got a slap on the wrist. I hope you torture the prick before killing him at least.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2022 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 18 Karma

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2022 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 18 Karma

Ugh Well at least Renee got what she deserved. Hmm Esme's secret.....  Lol for player Emmett 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2022 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 17 Soundproofing

Lol love th Caius/Bella Banter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2022 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 17 Soundproofing

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2022 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 16 Addictions

Poor Charlie and Phil. Both with a skanky witch.  Sue is so sweet. 

 

Woo hoo for the lemony action

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2022 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 16 Addictions

Lol poor Caius

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2022 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 16 Addictions

Renee needs to be in rehab, therapy or lock up.    Probably all three are needed for her.    Ugh....

Charlie will wash his hands of her soon too.

Caius can be protective, but he should be that way for the right reasons.    Jasper and Bella deserve to have alone time.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2022 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 16 Addictions

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2022 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 15 Confessions

Ugh....   Renee.....   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2022 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 15 Confessions

Stupid twat.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2022 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 15 Confessions

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2022 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 15 Confessions

woo hoo for first kiss!!!  Ugh Renee.  Such a skank

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2022 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 14 Enlightened

Emmett and Bella picked up their bond again very quickly after Bella got out her feelings about everything.   They are too funny.     Maybe they are actually related.  Hmm...

Jasper wasn't disappointed at all about finding out the mate news about belli.   Hopefully he tells her immediately and that he just learned about it as well.    I have a feeling that Bella would be pissed about information being withheld from her.

Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2022 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 14 Enlightened

Omg love Bella and Em bickering.  Renee is Def a skanky biatch. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2022 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 14 Enlightened

:) 

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2022 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 14 Enlightened

Oh I hope Renee gets eaten after being tortured.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2022 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 13 Trials and Tribulations

More please!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2022 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 13 Trials and Tribulations

Omg loved Charlie getting some fun as well as Esme getting revenge. Hmm is Esme Marcus" reincarnated mate maybe? 

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2022 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 12 Trying Times

"Clearasil showed no real emotion but"....should be "Carlisle showed no real emotion but..."

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2022 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 13 Trials and Tribulations

:) 

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2022 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 13 Trials and Tribulations

Abrupt ending. Bela and Jasper are mates. We never guessed from their behavior. Good or bad. Good; surprise at the end. Bad: we don't see them together.

Finally end of Edward, Alice and Rosalie are toast. Aro had his mating broken with Carlisle so he can go on with his life. Bella and Jasper can "meet" each other afresh.

Very good story. Thank you.

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2022 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 13 Trials and Tribulations

Ooh snap. I still think Carlisle got off easy they should have burned his dick he shouldn't have got that back.

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2022 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 12 Trying Times

Great! Please keep going on with the trial. I can't wait until the Cullins are all ash.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2022 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 12 Trying Times

Poor Esme.  Glad she got at least 1 punch in.  Surprised Aro didn't try covering up Carlisle's knowledge.

Reviewer: LLLOWDER Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2022 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 12 Trying Times

Can't wait until update.  The story is great and I am hooked.  

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2022 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 12 Trying Times

Great update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2022 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 12 Trying Times

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2022 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 11 Secrets Revealed

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2022 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 11 Secrets Revealed

Ooh love the pool.  Esme is Def going to blow her top over this. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2022 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 11 Secrets Revealed

that is funny

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2022 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 11 Secrets Revealed

Awe I was looking forward to venom being shed. Oh Carlisle really needs to be hurt. 

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2022 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 11 Secrets Revealed

I always thought that Carlisle was gay(and Aro), but had the hots for Edweird. Never thought about Aro being Carlisle's mate. All this hidden guilt and self-hatred. Do you think Carllisle is also a triad with Aro and Eddie? That would make Eddie uncontrolable because in his mind he'd be untouchable. Poor Esme. If the control is moved from her, maybe she'll find her mate, very close by. She should remove tiny dicks from all 3 of them.

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2022 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 10 Payback is a Bitch

It's getting exciting soon. Can't wait

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2022 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 10 Payback is a Bitch

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2022 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 Payback is a Bitch

Love all the speculation  around Aro and Carlisle.  Can't wait for new. Chapter. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2022 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 Payback is a Bitch

Love all the speculation  around Aro and Carlisle.  Can't wait for new. Chapter. 

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2022 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 10 Payback is a Bitch

You go girl. " Either you kill them quick and relatively painless or I know a large pack of wolves that would love to us them as chew toys while I throw zippos at them or I know some vampires that if I ask nicely enough I'm sure I can talk them into ripping off their legs and arms so I can throw matches on them with their heads attached so I can hear the music of their screams". Lololol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2022 10:47 AM Title: Volterra Here I Come

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2022 3:17 AM Title: Volterra Here I Come

Charlie was just too damn funny.  Loved it.

Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2022 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 8 United and It Feels So Good

The goodguys caught up with the Cullens. Edward is such a dumbell. Thanks! Good chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2022 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 United and It Feels So Good

Glad Charlie and Caius got to meet.   He took the news fairly well I'd say.   Rofl for Fuckward losing his tongue. Should have taken the girls as well.   But maybe that will happen next.....  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2022 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 8 United and It Feels So Good

:) 

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2022 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 8 United and It Feels So Good

Oh I hope for a torturous good time lol. Good chapter thanks for the update.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2022 6:17 AM Title: Family Matters

This cliffhanger was so well placed, there was a sense that you might do it but also that it would come after a bomb drop of a reveal, a great showcase of push and pull. Excited to read more. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2022 8:11 PM Title: Family Matters

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2022 8:23 PM Title: Family Matters

LOL for the drunk vamps.   Glad B has a backbone and stands up for herself. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2022 10:35 AM Title: A Meeting of the Minds

:) 

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2022 11:08 PM Title: A Meeting of the Minds

Loved it and can't wait for more. Thanks for the awesome update.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2022 8:57 PM Title: A Meeting of the Minds

Glad Bella is cool with the guys.  Blunder Twins....love it.  Esme def deserves better.  ROFL for Gramps coming in at the end.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2022 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

Her and Caius are too funny.   Nice interaction with Jake.  Hope Carlisle does the right thing. 

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2022 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 5

You beat that little punk back into place. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2022 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2022 10:56 PM Title: The Deception

Wowsers. Fuckward really needs to go down. Glad Jasper and Emmett are in her corner. 

Glad u left too. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2022 9:01 PM Title: The Deception

:) 

Reviewer: zanath Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2022 1:40 PM Title: The Deception

Love where this story is going! Thanks for your hard work.

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2022 11:57 AM Title: The Deception

I really dislike men that think so lowly of women. What they seem to not realize is just cause they was born with it doesn't mean that we can't easily remove it. How any self respecting woman can be with a man like that is beyond my comprehension. The thought of men thats like that makes me want to reach out and touch them in a not so gentle manner. Anywho I love it so far and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2022 3:14 AM Title: Insight

I love it and can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2022 7:23 PM Title: Insight

hope Em and Jas get thier HEAs.  The Bitch and the Butthole Twins need to go down.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2022 6:13 PM Title: Insight

:) 

Reviewer: LLLOWDER Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2022 3:10 PM Title: Insight

Great story.  Can't wait for more

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2022 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2022 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2022 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love that Jake is staying in the friend zone this time

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2022 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start. Glad she got help to get out of her funk without using Jake as well as tell off theCullens. 

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