Date: 14 Jun 2023 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it so far
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2023 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you for your hard work. I appriciate that you are still trying to finish this story. Best of luck to you.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2023 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
Maybe Tanya IS wanting to join Edward. Hmmm.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 18 Feb 2023 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 19 Example
More chapters please more
Date: 06 Nov 2022 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 19 Example
Great update. Good thoughts to you and your family.
Date: 05 Nov 2022 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 19 Example
Glad Bella is taking her learning seriously. She made a great point about the wives needing self defense lessons.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2022 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 19 Example
I will wait patently for updates. Hoping your crisis ends soon in a good way.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2022 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 18 Karma
Renee was awful and the drugs made her worse I guess. I wonder who the dumb ass, soon to be dead vampire is. Hmmm.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 20 Oct 2022 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 18 Karma
Renee got a slap on the wrist. I hope you torture the prick before killing him at least.
Date: 20 Oct 2022 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 18 Karma
Ugh Well at least Renee got what she deserved. Hmm Esme's secret..... Lol for player Emmett
Date: 18 Oct 2022 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 17 Soundproofing
Lol love th Caius/Bella Banter.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2022 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 17 Soundproofing
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Date: 10 Oct 2022 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 16 Addictions
Poor Charlie and Phil. Both with a skanky witch. Sue is so sweet.
Woo hoo for the lemony action
Date: 09 Oct 2022 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 16 Addictions
Lol poor Caius
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2022 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 16 Addictions
Renee needs to be in rehab, therapy or lock up. Probably all three are needed for her. Ugh....
Charlie will wash his hands of her soon too.
Caius can be protective, but he should be that way for the right reasons. Jasper and Bella deserve to have alone time.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2022 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 15 Confessions
Ugh.... Renee..... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 30 Sep 2022 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 15 Confessions
Stupid twat.
Date: 29 Sep 2022 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 15 Confessions
woo hoo for first kiss!!! Ugh Renee. Such a skank
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2022 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 14 Enlightened
Emmett and Bella picked up their bond again very quickly after Bella got out her feelings about everything. They are too funny. Maybe they are actually related. Hmm...
Jasper wasn't disappointed at all about finding out the mate news about belli. Hopefully he tells her immediately and that he just learned about it as well. I have a feeling that Bella would be pissed about information being withheld from her.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 24 Sep 2022 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 14 Enlightened
Omg love Bella and Em bickering. Renee is Def a skanky biatch.
Date: 24 Sep 2022 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 14 Enlightened
Oh I hope Renee gets eaten after being tortured.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2022 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 13 Trials and Tribulations
More please!!
Date: 17 Sep 2022 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 13 Trials and Tribulations
Omg loved Charlie getting some fun as well as Esme getting revenge. Hmm is Esme Marcus" reincarnated mate maybe?
Date: 17 Sep 2022 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 12 Trying Times
"Clearasil showed no real emotion but"....should be "Carlisle showed no real emotion but..."
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2022 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 13 Trials and Tribulations
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Date: 16 Sep 2022 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 13 Trials and Tribulations
Abrupt ending. Bela and Jasper are mates. We never guessed from their behavior. Good or bad. Good; surprise at the end. Bad: we don't see them together.
Finally end of Edward, Alice and Rosalie are toast. Aro had his mating broken with Carlisle so he can go on with his life. Bella and Jasper can "meet" each other afresh.
Very good story. Thank you.
Date: 16 Sep 2022 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 13 Trials and Tribulations
Ooh snap. I still think Carlisle got off easy they should have burned his dick he shouldn't have got that back.
Date: 16 Sep 2022 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 12 Trying Times
Great! Please keep going on with the trial. I can't wait until the Cullins are all ash.
Date: 15 Sep 2022 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 12 Trying Times
Poor Esme. Glad she got at least 1 punch in. Surprised Aro didn't try covering up Carlisle's knowledge.
Date: 15 Sep 2022 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 12 Trying Times
Can't wait until update. The story is great and I am hooked.
Date: 15 Sep 2022 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 12 Trying Times
Great update
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2022 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 11 Secrets Revealed
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Date: 14 Sep 2022 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 11 Secrets Revealed
Ooh love the pool. Esme is Def going to blow her top over this.
Date: 14 Sep 2022 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 11 Secrets Revealed
that is funny
Date: 14 Sep 2022 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 11 Secrets Revealed
Awe I was looking forward to venom being shed. Oh Carlisle really needs to be hurt.
Date: 14 Sep 2022 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 11 Secrets Revealed
I always thought that Carlisle was gay(and Aro), but had the hots for Edweird. Never thought about Aro being Carlisle's mate. All this hidden guilt and self-hatred. Do you think Carllisle is also a triad with Aro and Eddie? That would make Eddie uncontrolable because in his mind he'd be untouchable. Poor Esme. If the control is moved from her, maybe she'll find her mate, very close by. She should remove tiny dicks from all 3 of them.
Date: 13 Sep 2022 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 10 Payback is a Bitch
It's getting exciting soon. Can't wait
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2022 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 10 Payback is a Bitch
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Date: 12 Sep 2022 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 Payback is a Bitch
Love all the speculation around Aro and Carlisle. Can't wait for new. Chapter.
Date: 12 Sep 2022 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 Payback is a Bitch
Love all the speculation around Aro and Carlisle. Can't wait for new. Chapter.
Date: 12 Sep 2022 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 10 Payback is a Bitch
You go girl. " Either you kill them quick and relatively painless or I know a large pack of wolves that would love to us them as chew toys while I throw zippos at them or I know some vampires that if I ask nicely enough I'm sure I can talk them into ripping off their legs and arms so I can throw matches on them with their heads attached so I can hear the music of their screams". Lololol
Date: 07 Sep 2022 3:17 AM Title: Volterra Here I Come
Charlie was just too damn funny. Loved it.
Date: 04 Sep 2022 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 8 United and It Feels So Good
The goodguys caught up with the Cullens. Edward is such a dumbell. Thanks! Good chapter.
Date: 03 Sep 2022 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 United and It Feels So Good
Glad Charlie and Caius got to meet. He took the news fairly well I'd say. Rofl for Fuckward losing his tongue. Should have taken the girls as well. But maybe that will happen next.....
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2022 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 8 United and It Feels So Good
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Date: 03 Sep 2022 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 8 United and It Feels So Good
Oh I hope for a torturous good time lol. Good chapter thanks for the update.
Date: 29 Aug 2022 6:17 AM Title: Family Matters
This cliffhanger was so well placed, there was a sense that you might do it but also that it would come after a bomb drop of a reveal, a great showcase of push and pull. Excited to read more.
Date: 26 Aug 2022 8:23 PM Title: Family Matters
LOL for the drunk vamps. Glad B has a backbone and stands up for herself.
Date: 19 Aug 2022 11:08 PM Title: A Meeting of the Minds
Loved it and can't wait for more. Thanks for the awesome update.
Date: 19 Aug 2022 8:57 PM Title: A Meeting of the Minds
Glad Bella is cool with the guys. Blunder Twins....love it. Esme def deserves better. ROFL for Gramps coming in at the end.
Date: 14 Aug 2022 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
Her and Caius are too funny. Nice interaction with Jake. Hope Carlisle does the right thing.
Date: 14 Aug 2022 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
You beat that little punk back into place.
Date: 08 Aug 2022 10:56 PM Title: The Deception
Wowsers. Fuckward really needs to go down. Glad Jasper and Emmett are in her corner.
Glad u left too.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2022 1:40 PM Title: The Deception
Love where this story is going! Thanks for your hard work.
Date: 08 Aug 2022 11:57 AM Title: The Deception
I really dislike men that think so lowly of women. What they seem to not realize is just cause they was born with it doesn't mean that we can't easily remove it. How any self respecting woman can be with a man like that is beyond my comprehension. The thought of men thats like that makes me want to reach out and touch them in a not so gentle manner. Anywho I love it so far and can't wait for more.
Date: 31 Jul 2022 3:14 AM Title: Insight
I love it and can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 28 Jul 2022 7:23 PM Title: Insight
hope Em and Jas get thier HEAs. The Bitch and the Butthole Twins need to go down.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2022 3:10 PM Title: Insight
Great story. Can't wait for more
Date: 18 Jul 2022 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love that Jake is staying in the friend zone this time
Date: 18 Jul 2022 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. Glad she got help to get out of her funk without using Jake as well as tell off theCullens.