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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2022 2:16 PM Title: What's Going On Here

Omg. LOVED this little short. 

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2022 2:24 AM Title: What's Going On Here

Gah! I will always drop whatever else I'm reading and read your work immediately when I see something new! I absolutely love how you write the Cullens. You have a gift for capturing what they'd be like in real life!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2022 4:30 PM Title: What's Going On Here

I love how all of this worked out.   

Bella gets to keep her dad in her life as a knowledgeable participant.   Bella and Garrett were strict with their punishments, but caring.

Even Jake and Edward learned something...and Jake, at least, was making amends.

Great short story girl...   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2022 12:02 AM Title: What The Ever-Loving Heck

Awesome short you have going there.  Should break Jake's legs and not let him shift to fix.  Arsehole him and Billy both.  Cool gift. Never heard of her having that skill.  Only 1 other story ever reading that as a matter of fact and she couldn't do human but could do hair and eyes to make someone older looking That's was a fiber kitty story. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2022 5:35 PM Title: What The Ever-Loving Heck

Good chapter

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2022 12:15 PM Title: What The Ever-Loving Heck

Love it!  I'm actually sad it's only two chapters.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2022 11:40 AM Title: What The Ever-Loving Heck

Bella is discovering a lot just by listening and watching.    Now she has to think up some really good punishments.

I can't believe she actually had to make threats to get her dad brought to an actual hospital.   shakes head....

When he wakes up, I hope Charlie is involved in the punishment choice for the two supernatural idiots.    He could use his new knowledge.   ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing.    It's really nice to read something else of yours.   :)

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