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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2023 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 27

Charlie didn't just over step.   He rudely yelled as he walked off the dam cliff.    Renee is probably mortified and will tear into him next.   Can he even learn better behavior?   

Bella will probably apologize to Edward on her dad's behalf, but it isn't her responsibility.    I hope Edward, as a good boyfriend, makes her feel better about the horrible dinner.   And gets her something else to eat.   :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2023 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 27

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2023 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 26

Good for Bella for drawing that line in a very non-argumentative way.   Hopefully Charlie gets the message and starts seeing his daughter as the grown up that she is.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2023 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 26

Thank you for the update..well ok Bella, I quess she told Charlie.  LOL Until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2023 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2023 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 25

Jasper might be a calm buffer between sibling annoyance with Emmett and Edward.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2023 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 25

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2023 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 24

I'm glad that they all have each other to blow off steam with.   :)    I do wonder what is up Emmett's ass though.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2023 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2023 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2023 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 23

Best boyfriend and dinner chice ever!    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2023 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 22

At least Bella has competant loyal co-workers, friends, bosses and a great boyfriend.    :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2023 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 22

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 21

Go Edward...   Run the hag out of town...    Ugh...    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 21

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Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thank You for this chapter! Edward ist great! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thank You for this chapter! Edward ist great! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thank You for this chapter! Edward ist great! 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thank you for the update..Rebecca gotta go. Until you post again

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2023 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 20

FFS....    Rebecca is a moron.    How did she pass the bar and get hired by the executives?    LOL     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2023 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2023 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 19

Thanks for writing and sharing.  :)

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2023 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 19

Thank you for the update..well done..I don't  know Carlisle.  She is going to cause trouble..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2023 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 19

Thank you for the update..well done..I don't  know Carlisle.  She is going to cause trouble..until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2023 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 19

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2023 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 18

New character in the story...   possible villain?    possible unexpected ally?    

Bella and Edward have enough to work through in their new relationship without extra pressure.    Hmmm....    I am glad that Edward and "new lawer" didn't date though.

Thannks for writing and sharing

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2023 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2023 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 17

It sounds like one obstacle for Edward and Bella has been dealt with while another one was just hired?    I wonder why Alistair and Rosalie are worried for Bella.    Hmmm.....    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2023 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2023 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 17

well thank you for the update..I see Alistar was trying to give Bella a heads up about new hire.  I hope she doesn't make things bad for Edward & Bella.  Maybe Edward has clout to not hire her.  Hopefully Bella can handle this women.  I'm sure Elliot has her back.  Until you post again.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2023 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 16

Thank you for the update..what does this mean for the couple..until you post again

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2023 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 16

Way to be ominous Alistair....   LOL     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2023 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2023 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

What happened to Laurent? Great chapter by the way!

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2023 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

What happened to Laurent? Great chapter by the way!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2023 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 15

Hopefully, speaking to Edward about Laurent will help Bella fully heal from his douche canoe tendicies.   ;)     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2023 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2023 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 14

Laurent sure was (is) a creepy asshole.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2023 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2023 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh my. we knew that.  Thank you for the update..well done.  I wonder will Edward go after him and make his life miserable.  until you post again

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2023 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 13

Horrible place for a cliffy...   grrr....    I was into her story as much as Edward.   ;)   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2023 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 13

Thank you for the update..well done until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2023 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 13

Thank you for the update..well done until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2023 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2023 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 12

Well after that perfect date night and sexy evening....it just got better.    The ILY's came out.   ;)     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2023 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 12

Thank you for the  update..well done..I'm happy they had a very nice night. I can't wait to see what happens next. Their conversation  should be interesting ..until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2023 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2023 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 10

hehehe....    They are both in a lust haze.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2023 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2023 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 11

Well that was a fun, sexy first time together.    ;)     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2023 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thank you for the update..They are on their way..well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2023 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2023 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ awww thank you for the update....Bella said take me home....until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2023 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ awww thank you for the update....Bella said take me home....until you post again

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2023 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 9

This date is getting better and better.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2023 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2023 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 8

Ooohhh....   The plans for date night just got a lot more interesting.    ;)     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2023 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2023 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 7

Keep on writing faster 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2023 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 7

What a fun relaxing date for Bella and Edward.....    They are probably going to learn more about each other from this unique experience.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2023 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

Aww they had a nice date..Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2023 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

Aww they had a nice date..Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2023 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2023 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

Bella is getting some much needed perspective on her new relationship.   :)     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2023 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2023 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 6

Thank you for the update..I guess dinner went well. Edward  is already doing Cornell, can't wait to see what happens when he returns.  Let's hope Bella gets to taste Edward & Edward  Bella.   Until you post again 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2023 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 5

He is committed.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2023 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

Thank you for the update..Well done..Things are progressing  nicely. Bella needs to tell him about  his friend That's not a friend at all. Until you post again 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2023 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 5

I wonder if Bella is going to feel safe in Edward's guarantees.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2023 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love how they are working together forging the new "them".    :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2023 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) Happy New Year to you 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2022 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

Emmett is trying his best to keep Edward from screwing things up with Bella.   ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2022 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

Thank you for the sequel I love the first story.  I'm happy they are on their first  date..until you post again..I can't wait to see how it all unfolds

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2022 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

They are communicating pretty good so far.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2022 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2022 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love nervous Edward and that he asked Emmett's advice about the date.    Sweet....      He is definitely serious about her.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2022 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 

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