




Date: 27 May 2023 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 27
Charlie didn't just over step. He rudely yelled as he walked off the dam cliff. Renee is probably mortified and will tear into him next. Can he even learn better behavior?
Bella will probably apologize to Edward on her dad's behalf, but it isn't her responsibility. I hope Edward, as a good boyfriend, makes her feel better about the horrible dinner. And gets her something else to eat. :)
Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 23 May 2023 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
Good for Bella for drawing that line in a very non-argumentative way. Hopefully Charlie gets the message and starts seeing his daughter as the grown up that she is. Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 22 May 2023 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thank you for the update..well ok Bella, I quess she told Charlie. LOL Until you post again





Date: 13 May 2023 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
Jasper might be a calm buffer between sibling annoyance with Emmett and Edward. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 06 May 2023 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm glad that they all have each other to blow off steam with. :) I do wonder what is up Emmett's ass though. Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 30 Apr 2023 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 23
Best boyfriend and dinner chice ever! Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 23 Apr 2023 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 22
At least Bella has competant loyal co-workers, friends, bosses and a great boyfriend. :)
Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 15 Apr 2023 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
Go Edward... Run the hag out of town... Ugh... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 15 Apr 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank You for this chapter! Edward ist great!
Date: 15 Apr 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank You for this chapter! Edward ist great!
Date: 15 Apr 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank You for this chapter! Edward ist great!





Date: 15 Apr 2023 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for the update..Rebecca gotta go. Until you post again





Date: 09 Apr 2023 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 20
FFS.... Rebecca is a moron. How did she pass the bar and get hired by the executives? LOL Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 02 Apr 2023 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks for writing and sharing. :)





Date: 02 Apr 2023 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for the update..well done..I don't know Carlisle. She is going to cause trouble..until you post again





Date: 02 Apr 2023 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for the update..well done..I don't know Carlisle. She is going to cause trouble..until you post again





Date: 27 Mar 2023 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 18
New character in the story... possible villain? possible unexpected ally?
Bella and Edward have enough to work through in their new relationship without extra pressure. Hmmm.... I am glad that Edward and "new lawer" didn't date though.
Thannks for writing and sharing





Date: 23 Mar 2023 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
It sounds like one obstacle for Edward and Bella has been dealt with while another one was just hired? I wonder why Alistair and Rosalie are worried for Bella. Hmmm..... Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 22 Mar 2023 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
well thank you for the update..I see Alistar was trying to give Bella a heads up about new hire. I hope she doesn't make things bad for Edward & Bella. Maybe Edward has clout to not hire her. Hopefully Bella can handle this women. I'm sure Elliot has her back. Until you post again.





Date: 19 Mar 2023 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thank you for the update..what does this mean for the couple..until you post again





Date: 19 Mar 2023 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
Way to be ominous Alistair.... LOL Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 12 Mar 2023 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
What happened to Laurent? Great chapter by the way!
Date: 12 Mar 2023 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
What happened to Laurent? Great chapter by the way!





Date: 12 Mar 2023 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
Hopefully, speaking to Edward about Laurent will help Bella fully heal from his douche canoe tendicies. ;) Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 10 Mar 2023 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
Laurent sure was (is) a creepy asshole. Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 09 Mar 2023 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh my. we knew that. Thank you for the update..well done. I wonder will Edward go after him and make his life miserable. until you post again





Date: 06 Mar 2023 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Horrible place for a cliffy... grrr.... I was into her story as much as Edward. ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 05 Mar 2023 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thank you for the update..well done until you post again





Date: 05 Mar 2023 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thank you for the update..well done until you post again





Date: 26 Feb 2023 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well after that perfect date night and sexy evening....it just got better. The ILY's came out. ;) Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 25 Feb 2023 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you for the update..well done..I'm happy they had a very nice night. I can't wait to see what happens next. Their conversation should be interesting ..until you post again





Date: 20 Feb 2023 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
hehehe.... They are both in a lust haze. Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 20 Feb 2023 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well that was a fun, sexy first time together. ;) Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 19 Feb 2023 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you for the update..They are on their way..well done..until you post again





Date: 12 Feb 2023 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
๐๐ awww thank you for the update....Bella said take me home....until you post again





Date: 12 Feb 2023 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
๐๐ awww thank you for the update....Bella said take me home....until you post again





Date: 12 Feb 2023 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
This date is getting better and better. Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 05 Feb 2023 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ooohhh.... The plans for date night just got a lot more interesting. ;) Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 31 Jan 2023 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Keep on writing faster





Date: 30 Jan 2023 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
What a fun relaxing date for Bella and Edward..... They are probably going to learn more about each other from this unique experience. Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 29 Jan 2023 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Aww they had a nice date..Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again





Date: 29 Jan 2023 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Aww they had a nice date..Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again





Date: 23 Jan 2023 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 6
Bella is getting some much needed perspective on her new relationship. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 21 Jan 2023 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
Thank you for the update..I guess dinner went well. Edward is already doing Cornell, can't wait to see what happens when he returns. Let's hope Bella gets to taste Edward & Edward Bella. Until you post again





Date: 15 Jan 2023 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you for the update..Well done..Things are progressing nicely. Bella needs to tell him about his friend That's not a friend at all. Until you post again





Date: 15 Jan 2023 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
I wonder if Bella is going to feel safe in Edward's guarantees. Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 08 Jan 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love how they are working together forging the new "them". :) Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 07 Jan 2023 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
:) Happy New Year to you





Date: 25 Dec 2022 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
Emmett is trying his best to keep Edward from screwing things up with Bella. ;) Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 15 Dec 2022 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Thank you for the sequel I love the first story. I'm happy they are on their first date..until you post again..I can't wait to see how it all unfolds





Date: 11 Dec 2022 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
They are communicating pretty good so far. Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 26 Nov 2022 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love nervous Edward and that he asked Emmett's advice about the date. Sweet.... He is definitely serious about her. Thanks for writing and sharing.





Date: 26 Nov 2022 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more