[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2023 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh man, you weren't kidding when you issued a tissue warning. Such a heartbreaking chapter. So glad Charile and Renee know something is up with Caius.
"And the award for Best Actor goes to Caius Cullen for his performance of the bereaved brother."
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2023 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you for the update..well done..Cauis can not get away with this. I can't wait to see what happens next. until you post again
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2023 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
Thank you for the update..well done..sorry Edward had to see his father shot & killed. maybe if he wouldn't have called his father's name Carlisle could have focused on his suroundings.. so sad until you post again
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2023 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
horrifying..... poor Edward and poor Carlisle.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 23 Jan 2023 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
Can I fastforward to Wednesday? What a horrible incident for a child to witness. But I'm ready for Edward to toughen up and learn to harness his need for revenge.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2023 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2023 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you for thr update..well done..I hope they find out before it's to late. Renee is going to train Bella, I hope Carlisle trains Edward now also. Can't wait to see what happens next. Until you post again
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2023 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
First thing I would've asked is how the kids knew about the scrapyard. IDK if Edward would've given up his uncle since he promised he wouldn't. E/B are learning a hard lesson. You're right, this slow burn is killing my feels. I'm dying for more.
Sherry
Date: 18 Jan 2023 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
Good story.. keep it coming.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2023 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Thank you for the update..well done..I wanted Carlise to realize it was his brother. until you post again
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2023 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
The slow build up is making me anxious :) can't wait for weds!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2023 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
Things could've gone so much worse. I thought Felix was going to give up Caius' name for a second, but that would've been way too easy.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2023 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward and Bella got a dam bad scaring in the yard. Little Edward thought on his feet pretty well though. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2023 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
hmmm wonder how they found the kids. Should have taken those two out. Bet it will come back to bite them later :-(.
Date: 15 Jan 2023 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
ugh Really not liking Caius at all. Esme and Renee are smart to be watching him. Kids really can be trouble.
Date: 15 Jan 2023 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
ugh such naughty kids. Ugh Caius is making me shudder and I'm just reading. Eeek
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2023 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Kids can be sneaky little buggers. Thanks for writing and sharing.
(((Hugs))) to your mom to get better soon.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2023 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thank you for updating. You be there for your mum and I wish her a speedy recovery
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2023 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
Thank you for updating. You be there for your mum and I wish her a speedy recovery
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2023 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Caius is all kinds of wrong. Bella and Edward are cute little friends though. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2023 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Carlisle is trying to teach Edward in an age appropriate way. It's kind of sweet. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2023 7:52 AM Title: Prologue
He seems to be an obvious jealous hot head. hmmm.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2023 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Is it Wednesday yet? Man, I just wanna junk punch Caius. What a total dick he is. I really can't wait until he gets what's coming to him. I'm curious as to what will become of Esme and the baby once Carlisle is killed. I can't get updates quick enough.
See you Sunday.
Sherry
Date: 07 Jan 2023 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sadly e is going to have to grow up too fast soon. Aww for B being his best friend.
Date: 07 Jan 2023 9:02 PM Title: Prologue
Great start. Can't wait to see where you take it
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2023 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Another great chapter. I half expected Carlisle to be ambushed at the cabin with Edward. I'm so glad you've decided on an update schedule; I'm already looking forward to Sunday. I loved how anxious Edward is to learn how to use a gun and about how to 'rule' things as it were. His curiosity will probably get him into trouble sometime soon.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2023 2:21 AM Title: Prologue
I'm so enthralled with this first chapter. I'm ready for the next one. Carlisle is going to have to deal with Caius before Caius gets the upperhand on him. Too bad Carlisle will put it off until it's too late. I want more because I'm a greedy bitch.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2023 9:48 PM Title: Prologue
:) Looking forward to more. Happy New Year to you
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2023 8:02 PM Title: Prologue
Carlisle benevolence will be his undoing.