Date: 06 Jul 2023 3:01 PM Title: Graduation, Fighting newborns and the Volturi
You are doing a great job writing this! I was hoping she would get Jane's gift too! She's so much more powerful than any other vamp! I'm looking forward to more chapters!
Thank you again!
Date: 06 Jul 2023 2:57 PM Title: Waking Up
I think it's a brilliant idea that she has their gifts! I haven't ever read a story where she gets other vamps gifts!
Thank you so very much! This story was one of my first ones I wrote, but have been working on it to make sure it flowed well and made sense before I published so your review means a lot!
Date: 03 Jul 2023 2:46 PM Title: Graduation, Fighting newborns and the Volturi
Thank you for the update..well done. I don't like that Bella made a deal with Aro though..until you post again
Thank you for your review. I promise there is a reason for her deal and Bella in my story is not meek and mild and sometimes we all have to go through storms to protect the ones we care about, but I promise storms wont stay around for too long