Date: 23 Sep 2023 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
I get a kick out of Alice and Emmett being such big eaters; especially when I imagine a tiny Alice eating like a big guy like Emmett. Love that you wrote in Dave Navarro. Gonna check out Duel Diagnosis' website. The relationship that is forming between Edward and Bella is so sweet. Seems like they could be best friends before anything more deep blooms between them. Can hardly wait to read more.
Date: 06 Sep 2023 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow! What an evil witch Tanya was. To drug Edward and tell Kate he fucked her. Whether it was true or not Kate should have talked to Edward. And then to abort his baby and put that tattoo on him as a permanent reminder of what she did. She can't have loved him if she believed her sister.
Date: 05 Sep 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
Kate and Tanya are horrible individuals. I'm surprised Edward hasn't had that tattoo removed before now. What a tragic reminder. Seems Bella and Edward are getting close enough to comfront in such an intimate manner.
Date: 17 Aug 2023 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter. Edward is fitting right into this crazy bunch. Emmett and Alice trying to out eat each other. I can't believe they ordered food in the drive thru and he went inside to get some more. And the snicker salad, did you make that up or is that a real thing? Seems Alice and Jasper have some kinky sex life.
Snicker Salad is a for real thing adn I personally love it. When I make it I do not really measure anything, so I am horrible at sharing the receipe. I peel and dice cut a bunch of apples, I typically use granny smith becasue the tartness helps cut the sweetness. I mix together a whole package of cream cheese and half a bag of powdered sugar after it is mixed well I add a full container of cool whip extra creamy, then fold in all the apples and set it aside and then I take snickers candy bars which i put into the freezer long enough to make them easier to cut but do not let them get fully frozen. i generally cut mine long ways and then dice them as best as I can. I usually also add some extra caramel. Once you have the candy cut mix it and the extra caramel into the apple mixture. let it chill in the fridge for a bit and enjoy. I like sweets, and they are not for everyone, but this is a very popular dish when going to pot lucks for sure, but pricey to make a big batch. You can find varying receipes online, but I personally do not like the ones that have marshmellow fluff in them.
Glad you are enjoying the story. xoxo
Date: 09 Aug 2023 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wonder what the story about the ink is. Too bad the apartment above the shop is used for storage and special clients. It would be ideal since it's complete. But the basement apartment should work. Edward and Bella would just have to share the kitchen.
Date: 04 Aug 2023 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
I loved your momma's come back.
Emmett does have a way with words, right? Sounds like this is going to be a great merger for them all. I'm guessing the tat he wants removed is something involving an ex. Maybe the ex will show up and cause some drama. Edwaard has divulged a lot of his personal info about being an artist and some about his military career, but he's not touched base much on his personal life. Nor, has the gang told him much about themselves. I need the next chapter.
Date: 04 Aug 2023 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward will definitely say, "Yes, to the chair." Sounds like Moonshade Quest has some type of vendetta against Bella. No doubt there will be more troubles brew with Edward joining the ranks of Etched Swan since he declined their offer. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 11 Jul 2023 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait to read more. My first guess is to say it is probably Jake entering the house. My second guess would be Rose and/or Alice. I'm ready to read the next chapter. This story has me hook, line, and sinker.